Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sorry for being so much late mana dear. It's okay Vertika ji !!! 😊

Maine abhi padha first part of ur fic, that was really nice. Thanks ! 😊

Ek shikayat to khatam ho gayi Raj k na hone ki aur first update me Raj bhi mil gaya par as a 8 year old school kid. he he he 😆 I made it a point ki woh pehle line se ho ! 😉

Ye Huda aur Shantanu bachpan se hi kameene the kya? Batao ek chote se bacche se badla le rahe hain aur us ne aisa bhi kya kar diya? Haan...woh kehte hai na bachcho ke paav paalne mein hi dikh jaate hai ...toh woh dono bachpan se hi waise hain ! 😆

Jo accha hoga vo to kaha hi jaayega na to is me jalan kyoun ho rahi hai un dono ko? Is tarah se badla le sakte hain dono itne cute se bacche se? Ab nahi samajhte na woh itni chotisi baat ko ! 😛

I hate them and wanted to kill them right then. ooooh !!! Vertika madam is soooo angry !! 😛

Vo ladki pakka Naina hogi i am sure tabhi bachpan se us ka saath degi na. Poor Raj karta bhi kya jaan bacha k bhaag gaya vahan se apni. Bilkul sahi...woh Naina hi hai !

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Hiiii Mana......... 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Helo Pri ! 😃 sab se pahle...apna fav line bolti hun.........'yeh UD itna chota kyoun tha...???'.........!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Tu nahi sudhregi na??? 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 yaar...concept toh tune bada mast chuna hai...!!! JC ki toh baat hi kuch aur hai...maza aa gaya sach me...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 Thank you !!! 😊 aur ud k bare meeeeeeeeeeeeeee....AWESOME...aur koi word suit nahi karta...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Loads of thanks !!!😃 yaar raj yeh toh galat karta hai ki har baar naina ko is tarah se chot deta hai...lekin us k baad chot lagi hai ki nahi is bare me bhi parwaah karta hai...haiiii...dekha kitna achha ladka hai...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Haan !!! Badaaaaaaaaaaaa achcha ladka hai !! 😆 😆 😆 Kisiko bechari NAina ka dukh dikhayi nahi deta ! 😛 Aur sab bade khushi se Raj ki buri harkaton ko ignore karke sirf uska concern dekh rahe hai ! 😆 😆 😆 😆 Well...main bhi toh yahi chahti thi !😉 vaise abhi aur naveen ka use bhabiji bolna achha tha...hun...kyoun ki bichare abhi se practice kar rahe hain...aage toh...matlab 10 -12 saal baad....SHAADI toh pakki hai na...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Bilkul !!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 Par kya itnaaaaaaaaa intezaar karna padega???? 😉 ab raj naina ko pareshaan bhi karta hai aur us k late aane par worried bhi hota hai...ab yeh is ud me jyada interesting tha...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 Hmmmm.....sahi kaha Priya ji !!! aur alekh ki entry...👏!!! Thanks for liking it ! 😛 tere fic me yahi uniq hai...hero heroine pahli mulakaat se mukka-laat kar rahe hain aur har baar hero heroine takrate hain...tune toh bhai behan me takkar karwa diya...!!! matlab naina toh alekh ko bhai hi maanti hai na...!!! 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 He he he ! 😆 😆 😆 😆 Sab tumlogoke saath ka asar hai ! Tumhare dimaag ka ilaaz karte karte mera khudka bigad gaya ! 😆 😆 😆 Par yaar chalta hai! Aisa kisi rulebook mein nahi likha ki bhaai behen nahi takra sakte...infact main toh bahot baar apne bhaai se takraati hoon aur phir apne clumsiness ke liye daant khaati hoon! 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 alekh ne sahi kaha ki 'raj me baat toh hai...JC me hi GS hai...😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉!!! vaise tujhe yaad toh hai na...tu bhi toh GS hai... kahaan...??? yaad hai ya batayun...???😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 nahi maate !!! Yaad hai ! 😉 😆 😆 😆 ek baat aur raj roz naina k sath hi baithta hai...aur naina ko is baat par aitraaz hai...??? yaar is ladki ki sach me khishak gayi hai...!!! kyoun ki mujhe nahi lagta ki koi bhi jo is fic ka reader hai...voh raj k paas baith kar aisa soch bhi sakta hai...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Woh issliye, kyunki woh fic ki readers ko Naina ke jitna pareshaan nahi karta na! ab raj ne kah toh diya hai ki alekh jyada tym tak naina k paas nahi baithega...lekin voh karega kya...??? 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 Jaani...kuch log aise hote hai, jinhe kabhi kuch karne ki jaroorat hi nahi padti ! 😉 yaar maine ek kaam kiya tha...mere paas ek ladka school me hamesha baithta tha...jis ki wajah se main apne best frnd k sath nahi baith pati thi...!!! aur school me main baht hi masum bachhi thi...matlab aaj bhi baht se logon ko yeh galat-faihmi hai...!!! us ladke ko bhi thi...maine ek din us k baithne k 4 sec pahle vahan chewing gum laga diya tha...jis ki wajah se use teacher se use baht galiyaan sun ni padi aur baad me mere piche k ek ladke se us ka jhagda ho gaya...kyoun ki use laga tha ki yeh shararat us ne ki thi...aur us ka seat finally change ho gaya tha...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Le !! Kaash ki NAina ke paas itna dimaag hota !!! PAr kya kare ? Priya ka dimaag toh unique hai na !😆 😆 😆 But the incident was very hilarious !! 😆 😆 😆 Sachmein tum ek unique piece ho yaar ! 😆 😆 😆 le tere fic me maine apni raam-katha suna di...!!! koi baat nahi adjust kar lena...!!! ab itne chote se ud par long comment kaise karti...isiliye apni raam-kahani suna di...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Teri toh ! 😡 😆 😆 😆 😆 arre haan ek baat toh kahna hi bhul gayi...tune jis tarah se alekh k charachter ka intro kiya hai na...us se mujhe pura pata chal hi gaya ki tujhe LAXMAN aur KARAN pasand kyoun hain...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Samajh gayi na??? 😉 good !!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 ab dushre RN fic writer ki tarah late mat kar aur jaldi se ud kar...!!!😃Main dusre kisiko nahi , iss maamle mein tujhe aur Vertika ko apna aadarsh maanti hoon ! 😛 😛😛

Hiii Mana 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Kya part 2 tha, haan vertika....woh part 2 tha!😆 😆 seems like u r still in shock !😆

i mean mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki Raj jaisa ladka itna harsh kaise ho sakta hai Naina jaise sweet n cute bacchi pe. well this is because, he is just Raj and not the oh so good Captain Rajveer 😉 And Naina being cute and sweet itself is the reason for his behaviour...😛

I know us ko gals se problem hai but Naina is not that much ugly. yeh kya kehrahi ho tum Vertika!!! 😲 Usse girls se koi problem nahi hai ! 😆 And he also know that she isnt ugly 😉 Woh thoda uska sar ghuma hua hai filhaal...isliye Naina pe sab nikaal raha hai...😛

Us ne Naina ko gira diya na that was not a good thing. Uper se rondu keh raha hai us ko. Naina ne bhi soch liya hai ki ab us ko maza chakha k hi rahegi.

Raj ki mom single rehti hain kya? I mean Raj k ghar me aur koi nahi hai. Us ne apni mom ko kuch bataya bhi nahi Shantanu n Huda k baare me. No she isnt single....Raj's dad is always out for their business....not an imp character here....and Raj did what most boys do, even as kids....They wont ever tell mom if hurt or bullied by their friends...😊

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Vertika ! 😊

Third part is really the cute test one yaar. Naina ko sab k sab bhabhi keh kar chida rahe hain.

Thanks yaar ! yeah...abhi and naveen call her Bhabhi...😛

Ye Raj bhi na kitna tung karta hai Naina ko jaise sach me vo us ki biwi hai. Naveen aur Abhi se acchi dosti ho gayi hai sab ki i think. Ab vo dono bhi Rajveer k saath Naina ki leg pulling karte rehte hain. Raj thinks yeh USka aur sirf USSIKA haq hai😉 but he lets his friends "Assist " him in this...😛

Raj se galti se Naina ki nose hit ho gayi. GALATISE NAHIIIIIIII !!!! he did it INTENTIONALLY !!! He hit her forehead purposely to trouble her....

Raj Naina ko Nain kehta hai how sweet. Naina gussa hoti hai itna Raj se, aur Raj jaanta hai ki vo us se hate nahi karti. Kitna confidence hai janab ko apne uper. Confidence toh janab ka gazab ka hai hi ! 😉

Naveen aur Abhi kaise-2 gaane bhi gaate hain Raj k liye. They know him well you see...😛

Jahan tak baat hai Alekh ki to Naina ko bada confidence hai ki vo Raj ko sabak sikha sakta hai tabhi us ne saari ram kahani kahi thi us k saamne. Let's see kya hota hai abhi tak to Raj k kuch bhi hone ka fark nahi pada hai Raj ko.hmmm....

Mujhe lagta hai jaldi hi vo Alekh ko bhi apna dost bana lega. Full confidence hai Raj pe...kyun?? 😉 😆 😆

continue soon. yup...

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Mana, Hey Guglu ! 😃

Beautiful update dear. Thanks...😊

Aisa nahi hai ki Raj sau galti kare toh bhi usse maaf kar dun. But I didn't expect him to turn this nasty. Wo Naina ko torture kar raha hai aur Naina chup chap bardaash kar rahi hai. Kyun??? This is too much.ohk....Yeah.... it is VERY unexpected behaviour of him...but we cant really PREDICT, as far as Raj is concerned, ryt?? 😉 Naina khushi khushi bardaasht nahi kar rahi hai...It's bcoz she doesnt have any option....Raj sabke saamne achcha bachcha ban jaata hai...😛 Come to think....woh sirf USSIKE saath aisa behave karta hai....And plus he is the most popular guy even in school ,having good reputation in front of his teachers also...so poor Naina is left helpless.....

So they are in junior college now. And Navin and Abhi Raj ke saath milke Naina ko tang kar rahe hain. Raj ne usse jan bhujh kar ball maara tha. Ab toh mai wakai me soch rahi hun ki Aalekh Raj ko martial arts me hara de. I'm glad Naina has got a friend in Aalekh. Tere aur mere sochnese kya hota hai Guglu ? Raj ko harana aasaan hai kya? 😛

Waitig to see what form this war will take. Update soon. yeah sure sweets...

Love
Guglu

Love ya too...

mana.😊

Originally posted by: preet09

hii...i just read ur ff
it is a new and different story and i like it alot
plz continue soon
can u plz send me a pm once u update?
thanks
preet