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Posted: 15 years ago
OK Guys, no joota chappals!!
I know I'm quite late for an OS on V"day...
but thought i'd just post it!!
This one's for Nidzy(NidzCole_Arti) and Shinzie(Shinz)!
Hope u liked it!!



Mayur OS - My Valentine

I could have never been so happy. It was Valentine's Day. And even though we were having all those problems in our bag, Valentine's Day would always be the same romantic one day. Plus, it would be our first valentine's day as a married couple. We had planned so much to do today.But I knew, Mayank wouldn't be able to make it to home so early, now that he had to assist that new stuck-up Professor Bakshi who had only one favourite student in class- Mayank Sharma. He would not leave Mayank alone. As I knew, Mayank called up to inform.
"Nupur, I'll be late. Please…"

"Come home safely, Go to sleep, eat your food and don't wait for me to come." I finished for him." I know, Mayank. Is there anything more to add to this list?"

"Yes, wash my clothes and clean my drawers please. And make something good for me to eat. I'll be hungry when I reach home."

"Yes, I'd be obliged to do so, my dearest." I said sarcastically.

He chuckled lightly." And Yes, I'm sorry ian't be with you today, when I know how special Valentine's Day is to you. I…"

"Shhh….not a word more Mayank. I know what you're doing for me. So what you aren't here? I can still feel your presence here."

"Ok, now I can see my filmy girlfriend- oops, filmy wife coming back to form."

"Don't do it too much or I'll get angry. "

"Oooo…I am so scared!"

"Mayank! Stop this instantly!"

"OK, I am sorry."

"So how is the party going on at college?"

Mayank sounded shocked." You mean you didn't go?"

"No, I am at the toilet and I don't want to miss a second of the party that's why I am asking you for an account of everything. Does everything need an explanation Mayank? Yes, I didn't go. Are you satisfied?"

"Nupur I told you to go, didn't I? Then why are you sitting alone at home boring yourself?"

"No partner, my dear husband. Thousands of hot guys asked me out, but I can't go without you!"
"Nupur, did I ever tell you that you are such a darling?"

"No, but there is no harm in occasionally praising me like this." I smiled.

"Now no more of talking, finish your work soon and come home soon, or I swear you won't be here to see the next Valentine's Day. Bye." I turned to cut the call, when I heard his voice again.

"Nupur?"

I sighed." What is it now, Mayank?"

"Happy Valentine's day. And I love you."

I beamed. I wished I could see his face at least once." Happy Valentine's Day to you too Mayank. And I love you too. Now keep the phone. Bye!"

I heard him chuckle again." Bye Nupur."

I cut the phone and dropped myself into the cushion-filled bed. It took one cushion from my back and held it in my arms. Circumstances had changed us so much. We were now married. To each other. The 2016 plan, studies, career, everything had been turned so wildly by just one lie by me and one decision by Bauji. I still didn't have any grudge or complaint against him. In fact I was thankful to him, for giving me all the happiness of the world, for making me more mature and independent in life. But still, I wished everything would have gone according to our plan. Bauji wouldn't have been unhappy with our relationship and marriage, Mayank wouldn't have all this pressure about me and would be working peacefully, and I would be able to support him at that time. Well, now all that I knew was that at least one part of life was going smoothly. Classes, home, food, Mayank and sleep and of course the gang. Life was limited to all this. Suddenly my head felt dizzy. Why was I thinking so deep on Valentine's Day? I should be enjoying myself today with Mayank.
Mayank, I thought as I smiled to myself. I should spare some time to think about him too. He always said, "Nupur, have you found someone else? You hardly think of me nowadays?" And I would always laugh and reply, "You must try harder to stay in the race, Mr. Sharma, there are many more hotties now." well, a darling he was. No matter how tired he was, he would always plaster that cute dimples smile on his face and his innocent chocolate brown eyes would always intoxicate me. And as always, he would pull me into his strong and warm hug you couldn't pull out of, and nor could you want to do so. Then they would end up dancing the whole night and when they were completely exhausted, they would fall on the bed and Mayank would stay awake until I fell asleep, and I would be persuading him to sleep. Yes, our new life was quite beautiful, a pure and transparent relationship, just Mayank and Nupur. Happiness was all that I prayed to God for him, he deserved the best always. And today when we both wanted to be each other, here I was, thinking all about him dreamily and there he was, thinking about chemicals and reactions. Damn that Bakshi. Damn Mayank's intelligence and damn all those professors who liked him so much. I wish I could have made this day better than the others.

I turned toward the clock. It was 9 'o' clock. 3 hours for this magical day to get over. I could still do something for Mayank before he'd get back. I just had to explore this place and see what was in the fridge, except paneer.
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Mayank should have been arriving and I was still shuffling between the Atta and the pasta. It had all been a terrible mess. I couldn't call up Gunjan as she was at the ball and so I had to do all of this single handed.

"What's that burning smell?" I said aloud as I saw smoke coming out of the pasta pan. The pasta began to give out flames. I quickly turned of the gas and emptied the jug of water into the pasta pan. All that hard work had gone to drains. Now what would I feed Mayank? In distress, I placed my Atta-smeared on my head, only to realize it later that my hand was smeared with Atta. Suddenly, I heard the sound of keys.

"Nupur, what's this burning smell? And where are you?" I heard Mayank's voice from the hall. I again placed my hand on my head, this time not caring what it did to my hair. As I thought of the various filmy plans and excuses, I noticed Mayank's arrival into the kitchen.
"Nupur?" I saw Mayank and smiled sheepishly.

"Mayank?" I asked as his expressions changed in a fraction of a second, from shocked to amuse to laughing his ass off.

Mayank stood there laughing as I took the bowl of Atta and emptied it on his head. Now it was my turn to change expressions.

Mayank looked at his sticky hair smeared with Atta. "Is this the way to welcome your husband?"

"This is 21st century, hubby. New fashion." I spoke with an air of triumph.

"So let me show you how modern guys show their affection." He shook his hair vigorously in front of me, spilling all the Atta over my face. I put my hands in front of my face to defend myself.

"Mayank, what are you doing? Aah!" I shouted, running away from him as he charged towards me. I dodged him across the sofa and the dining table, but finally he caught hold of me.

"What do you think I'm doing Nupur?" he said, tightening his grip on my wrist and bringing his face close to mine. He rested his forehead against mine, and his warm breath soothed my face. I blushed hard and my cheeks went a deep red.

Suddenly the lights went off. I clutched Mayank's shirt and shut my eyes tight. I was very afraid of the dark. My haunting dreams were always dark. I hugged Mayank tightly as he caressed my hair. "Nupur there's nothing to be afraid of, I'm there Na, come on, cheer up." He spoke lightly in my ear. I looked up, still having the same fear in my ears.
"Let me get the candles. You just wait here for two minutes, I'm here only." He spoke, breaking out of the hug and walking towards the drawer. I quickly caught his wrist.
"I'm coming with you. This place is giving me the willies." I said firmly, intertwining my fingers with his. He smiled and nodded.

"What's chattering here?" Mayank asked as we walked towards the drawer.
"My teeth?" I asked sheepishly as Mayank burst out laughing.

"Mayank stop it! I'm already scared enough!" I screamed hitting him hard on his arm.

"Okay, I'm sorry!" he muttered, rubbing his arm.

We at last reached the drawer. Mayank silently took out the candles I waited for him to light them impatiently.

"Ok, I'm done. You're still afraid Nupur?"

I saw Mayank's face lit by the candle he was holding." No, I'm fine now. Bring one more and place this on the table. This one won't be enough."

I went into the kitchen to bring the pasta.

I came out with the bowls in my hand, and after what I saw outside, I would have dropped the pasta down. The table was covered with white table cloth and the candle adorned it. the whole room glowed in candle light and the sweet smell of roses was spread everywhere. Two heart balloons bounced towards my feet, and Mayank followed them. He wore his charming white shirt, which made him look really hot. He got up and smiled at me.

"All this?" I asked.

"I had time, so I thought let's make this house look like a valentine's celebration. Why, you didn't like it?

I shook my head."No it's beautiful…I'm speechless."

"Good, something does work on you. Now let's eat…" he said, taking the pasta from my hand. We sat down on adjacent chairs and began to eat.

"Hmm….it's not that bad!" Mayank said tasting it first.

I put a piece in. it tasted horrible." Yuck, it's terrible!"

Mayank put in another piece."Is it? I think it's wonderful."

I smiled. He was lying for my sake. I quickly held his hand before he could put another one."Thanks Mayank. For all this. I know I can't do anything the way you do for me, I'm not as talented as you, but I surely want to give you all the love you deserve, all the happiness you need for your entire life. But look what I did, this burnt pasta, India-shaped rotis…I can't do anything for you still you accepted me as I am. You are really very sweet Mayank to eat all this inedible food for me, when you could have got something much better on valentine's day." I sobbed lightly." You know what Mayank, I never imagined even my raj to be so romantic." I pulled my chair next to Mayank and wrapped my fingers around his arm." This candlelight dinner, pasta, you and me…it's perfect."

"Ok…you complimented me. Are my ears fine?" Mayank cheerfully said to lighten up the mood." I, you know I never even imagined of anyone loving me. But sometimes you get more than you ever expect to get. Haven't you brought out the romantic side in me?
You're the most prized possession of mine. I, I might not be a heart surgeon, but the one heart I have, I've lost to you."

I looked up and roared out in laughter."Mayank, that was too cheesy, don't you think?"

Mayank frowned." It's not mine, it's from a book."

I smiled. "I know, you can never ever say any romantic dialogues. You only show them in actions." I kissed his cheek lightly and turned her head away, blushing.

"Oh really? So I should start acting, no?" he lifted me in his arms and led me away.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Shru!
Gosh that was perfect valentine for MN!
Beautiful OS
loved it to cores!
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ah.........Shruti............wat was that?............i was so lost in dreamland..........so lost...................

if only i can have one such scene.............one scene...........

Plz can u change it from valentine's to maybe one month anniversary celeb and put in future scenes thread..........also mail to Cvs ...........plz plz plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
shru

it was simply wonder ful

the atta scene was tooooo cute

when nups was scard of the dark

the candle light dinner

and the conversations were toooooo gooooood

tis year we din get such a thing

but im just hoping nxt v day we get such a scene

thanks for the pm

love pebo

Edited by pebolovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Shruthi

Amazing OS ....loved it to bits

I could imagine the whole scene in front of me

Nothing could be more romantic than this Perfect Valentine I must say

do write more

luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shru..really romantic OS..
mayank was caught up with work..so he couldn't be with her on v-day..aww thats sad..
she tried to make it special for him..but the pasta got burnt..n her hair was ruined too..
mayank saw her state n started laughin..she poured atta on him..lol..naughty!
n he tried to clean it on her..lol..they chased around n had fun...
mayank said the pasta was good, but actually it was horrible!..she understand hw mch he loved her..n was thankful..aww..he is pretty romantic, if he wants to get!..
thnx 4 d pm
do write more
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey honey that was just amaxingggggggg, so beautifully written, do mail this to the Cvs and put in mayur future scenes thread man.

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Posted: 15 years ago
lookk at whtt the 12 yr olddd wroteee 🤣 it wuuzz superrbb shruu..🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

lookk at whtt the 12 yr olddd wroteee 🤣 it wuuzz superrbb shruu..🤗



tujhi se insire hui hun cindy!!
tera to 20 yr old dimaag hai na!!
thanks a lot for cmnting!!!
at least tune mujhe yaad to kiya!!
Edited by ShruAtIF - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Shruthi,
it was awesome, awesome and just awesome.
loved it from the core of my heart.
it was so sweet
beautiful
and amazing.
shruti u have done a grate job.
plzzzzzzzz do write more.

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