ArTi / Mayur OS Gallery - updates on pg48,50,52 - Page 25

i wud comment later in detail......i have sneaked out!

for now i can only say that its a very very very beautiful oneshot!

i loved it completely!

love,
Mahak

May be it is real, atleast for me it is..and for him it always is

what a line yaar...and so true..!! hehe
Beautiful OS Divya..!
After so loooong you wrote one on ArTi..!
When Rati mentioned in her interview that he takes his rights as husband very seriously on the sets...i was like ROLFing hard because that is SO AB..! LOL
I wonder what happens on the sets...usually she doesn't like to talk about him that much except for saying the fact that he's a great actor to work with...hehe
But the way you showed her thoughts in this OS felt so realistic..!! especially after hearing that interview of hers...and now seeing that cute Mayur moment yesterday...!! It so fits in the situation...lol

Wonderfully written..!! But it ended so soon...i was wanting to read more of it..!
dooo write more soon..!!
xoxo

Nidhi

hey Divdi!!

u wrote...aww.....thankyou!
its like a gift u knoe...to see u write on arti.....and be able to read it.......precisely what we think that they think!
u showed it so well...such a long gap of nothingness......and then finally a romantic scene..and the frenzy of it! *sigh*
and the goofy grin...awww *blushes*...it isnt only her........but me also....my heart skips a thousand beats LOL!

and now.......rati's dilemma was portrayed so well.....and waise bhi things are becoming more evident...the girl who thot of him only as a good costar.....now considers him to be a bully prankster who misses her and she admits it...aww plus rites onscreen offscreen...!!
hmmm! *winks*
me likes it!
and u write fably......ekdum straight from the heart!!!

do keep on writing...arti are enough to make anyone crazy!!! and ahem...sane!! LOL!

I love Newton's third law.... every action has an equal reaction.... and I love to see that law getting implemented in ArTi friendship.... LOL....

awesome yr.......

now plz do update ye dooriyan too...!
can u do it today?

Divya 😲😲😲😲😲 I did not know u write One Shots too.

What an OS DIvya Di 😳

Awesum Os

Liked Nups point of view

Loved it