New ff *UNEXPECTED LOVE*[Mayur]-upd8 part 14 pg 51 - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey Jigi awwsome update loved it awww nidzy...thnxxxxx

The kiss was sooooooooo...........(no words yaar) awwww
it was too good
i was badly blushing while reading it
how did u write it
tum ne kitna blush kiya???????? oooohhhh, i was going mad blushing...i wanted to add more, but then decided that it would be a bit too much for their first kiss, that too without the confession...😆😆
u hav written it so well dear gllladddd u liked it dear....
keep up the good work sure will...😆
luv love u too...
Nidzy



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.mn

awsum update yaar thnxxxx rabi.....
nupur's concern 4 mayank........so lovely yup, i liked it 2....😃
loved it......seriously amaizing glad u liked it dear...
now i m waiting 4 twist sure, u will get 2 see it in the next part...
plz update soon sure will dear...😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

beautiful dear! thnxxxx mahak....
loved it! awww glad u liked it....
jigisha u rock! awww thnxxxx
kitna mast update hai.....thnxx once again....
and their concern was too strong yup, they they lovve each other....
when both know that they love each other......and they know it 2....
then why dont they confess??????? u will see.....
is again that frdship factor hindering their path????? kind of, in this stage....u will get ur answer later in the ff...😃
oh no!
well it was very beautiful! thnxxxxx
and the kiss was so passionate........awwww, i was blushing with butterflies in my stomach while writing it...😆
awww thnxxx for the glittery comment...😃
do continue soon.......sure will as soon as i can.....
i am waiting eagerly........

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
cont soon
thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg jiggi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so close!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg who is doing that to mayank!!!!!!!!!!!! thank god nupur saw that coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is getting amazing do continue!!!!!
Love
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tvgirl21

omg jiggi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so close!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg who is doing that to mayank!!!!!!!!!!!! thank god nupur saw that coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is getting amazing do continue!!!!!
Love
Ashna😳

thnxx sooo much ashna.....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
thnxxx dear.....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey dears....

thanxxxx 4 ur stupendous response....

sry for the late upd8...here is the next part...

hope u like it....


PART 13

There was an awkward silence in the car. Nupur stared out of the window, refusing to meet his eyes. Mayank, however, felt jubilant. He had kissed her!!! Wasn't that what he had wanted to do from day one?? The feel of her lips against his was better than he had imagined. He wanted to kiss her again and again…he loved her, so he had no qualms about kissing her, but he did not know if she loved him or not. That was a big mystery. He decided to find out how she felt about him before long.

Nupur leaned back against the soft warm comfortable leather seat, but did not feel comfortable at all. The daunting possibility of what could have happened to mayank, if she had not pushed him out of the way kept haunting her. "He is safe, nothing happened to him after all" he brain told her. But, how had that heavy poker fallen down in the first place? It couldn't have fallen by itself. Then how?? Who had thrown it?? Why?? Those were the questions in her mind.

Mayank, however, was lost in warm thoughts of her lips and hair and tracing his hands up her body and-

"What do u think mayank??" asked nupur, bursting his bubble.

Mayank, looked at nupur, who was frowning in concentration, startled. What did she mean by that question?? What did he think about the kiss?? Huh…wasn't she a girl? Wasn't she supposed to be shy?? Whatever, this was Nupur Bhushan he was dealing with, who knew how her brain worked.

So he said, " I don't think it was quite right" of course kissing her wasn't right, he dint even know if she loved him or not, "but I still loved it." Crap, what the hell was he saying? So what if nupur asked embarrassing questions?? He was not supposed to answer them.

Nupur looked at him in surprise, how could he have loved almost being hit by a 10kg iron poker thrown from the 2nd floor of a castle?? He really must be in shock or he must be out of his mind.

"What are u talking about??" she asker, confused.

Mayank looked at her, puzzled, wasn't she talking about the kiss??

"What are u talking about??" he asked back, looking as bewildered as she felt.

Nupur said, " I was talking about the fact that who would have thrown a 10kg poker from the terrace of the castle??" she paused as she saw the understanding on his face, "or do u reckon it walked off the terrace on its own?" she added sarcastically.

Oh, thought mayank, she was talking about the poker; actually he owed something to the poker…they would never have kissed if it hadn't fallen…hold on, how did it fall??

Nupur looked so stressed out that he felt like lightening up the atmosphere. He said, " I don't know why it fell, but if it was a man who threw it, it was definitely because they couldn't stand the sight of me standing next to such a beautiful girl." He grinned.

Nupur blushed and looked down at her lap. Mayank leaned towards her and said in her ear, " you look gorgeous when you blush." making her blush all the more.

Smiling, mayank drove into the richer section of the village. There was an instantaneous change in their surroundings; it felt like they had traveled in time, from the olden days to the bright 21st century.

The muddy roads were replaced with concrete; big shops with shining counters replaced the grimy hovels sandwiched between haphazard, untidy huts. The small shacks gave way to big mansions. There were no shops selling stinking, rotten fish, instead, there were many shops with colourful banners selling snorkeling gear and surfboards. Mayank was instantly taken by the posh locality. Nupur, however, was indignant and angry. Mayank glanced at her, curious and said, " What happened nupur?"

" Don't u see how much the poor fishermen in the village are suffering? These rich people look at all the pain around them without any remorse and don't even care to help them flourish. I am sure they will be able to live in the same grandeur even if they donate some money to those poor souls." She burst out.

Mayank stopped the car and took her small soft hand in his big rough hands. He said, "Nupur, not everyone is as generous as you are. I am sure that some people here have less money than they appear to have. Some people are simply so conservative, superstitious or plainly mean that they cannot bear to part with money. Actually, if you look at it this way, our parents are billionaires but I still haven't seen my dad donate a penny to any needy person. So we actually can't say anything to anyone."

Nupur looked into his tender eyes and felt her anger melt away. How could anyone remain angry after looking into those heart-warming eyes? Anyways, whatever he said made perfect sense.

Nupur nodded in agreement and said, " When we get back, I am going to force my father to donate money to the needy."

"That's like my girl" mayank said and smiled.

Suddenly, so fast that she dint see it coming, the windshield broke into a thousand pieces and something hit her head, hard.

The last thing she saw before loosing consciousness was mayank's face, lying in a pool of his own blood…

And then everything went black.



To be continued…

Ok ok..no chappals and jotas at me plzz….

I had told u guyz that there is gonna be a new twist…here it is….

Ok, I am not gonna say anything more about the twist coz I start talking on and on without stoppingand I may give away the suspense…soo stick to reading the next part of my ff to know more…

Plzzz let me know if u liked it or no…

Silent readers plzzzz press the like tab...
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Posted: 15 years ago
yayy! im first!! 😃

omg! omg! omg! wht the hell hapnd???😲
i ws all smiling at their talks n all of a sudden my eyes go like WIDE OPEN!!! 😲

awesome update n dnt worry...no chappals n jootas for u!😆
ur just toooo sweet for those!😃
continue soon!
love ya! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
mayank to poora pagal hai........
kya kya khyaal aate hain usko......
lekin yeh kya hua????????who hit them?
why did she faint?????
mayank in his pool of blood??????
someone hit him too..........
oh no!!!!!!

plzzzz update soon.........
i am dying of curiosity.............

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