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Sanjana

@sanjana38

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

@Honey

😍 Honey kya dreamworld wala scene likha hai tumhne maja agaya padne mein maine 2times already pad liya ab din bhar mein pata nahi aur kitne bar padungi.....AN happily married wow ....mai to scene padte padte blush kar rahi thi 😳.

love u dear u r best 🤗

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ANfan

@ANfan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

@Honey,This Bonanza is really awesome !☺️n does he get to his wife back?wt plot will he make?😉write more na,I want more cont it😛

Edited by ANfan - 15 years ago

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ANfan

@ANfan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

@Ivy, its really good n very hillarious too!👏poor Nikki cant help frm getting distracted hw can she when I cant 😉 Its all Abhi's fault😆

Sorry fr late comment on ur scene,I read nw!

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Bonanza 🥳
Nice one Honey... I miss this happy couple now..... Jia go back.. and let us have some scenes like this :)

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Annu

@Annu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Honey i forgot to thank u since u used "Tia "😳name for abhi's daughter .I like the name very much😳

I liked the scene but then again u left us in suspense now what did niki read in file ? 😲
Is she abhi's sister's daughter or any friends daughter ?😕
I like the way niki is murming about tia and her mother and taunting abhi about it .😆

Hope to read the next part soon.😳
Bonanza scene:
Honey your bonanza scene was so awesome😳 😍 I want AN in such scenes 😳
Married couples 😳 I like the whole scene 😳 Pati seva and patni seva was good 😆

Thanks honey for such a short and lovely scene ⭐️

Edited by Annu13 - 15 years ago

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Ditto100

@Ditto100

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

@ Honey - thank you for updating!!!! 😊 I have been eagerly awaiting the continuation to your scene - but now you have left another cliffhanger! 😲

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

"How does my having a daughter change how you feel about me Dr. Nikita? You never felt anything for me then...... Nor do you now....so nothing's changed." He fights back

Abhi reasons well here; I mean Nikki should (and I am sure does) love Abhi irrespective of his past. Looking at the situation from Nikki's persepective though I feel her reaction was justified as she feels betrayed.

*Sigh* Abhi, if only you knew how Nikki really feels about you. But that's half the fun 😉

"Am sorry.....I didn't mean to hurt you" apologizes Nikki coldly.

"Do you ever?" he gasps and she looks away in anger.

Wow, got to admit, Abhi's retorts are so fitting - I can actually imagine Abhi in DMG saying it!

She could not believe what had happened today, the man she had fallen in love with did not exist.

I like your choice of words here; did not exist - really captures how Nikki believes she has been deceived, everything has been a complete fallacy.

Really liked how you worked in the piece of Nikki's jewellery. Looking forward to more. 😃

Edited by Ditto100 - 15 years ago

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Ditto100

@Ditto100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

@ Honey - what a treat - 2 scenes!

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

He stirs a little, breathing a soft "Nikki" and feels for her next to him.

LOVED this line. 😳 😳 😳

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clarita

@clars

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Oh god i so want AN married now 😍nice part honey

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Shanti

@shanti05

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Wow Honey These two married so sweet !! I liked the way he traps her under him and says Good Morning and then this scene !!

Happily Abhi closes his eyes. Nikki frees her hand from his grip and starts tickling him. "Nikki" Abhi shouts jumping off her not being able to take the tickling. Nikki gets off from the bed and Abhi looking hurt tells her "Not fair Nikki". 😉

"Awww pati dev.....kya hua.....uthiye and aaj Sunday ko aap apni patni ki seva kijeye...you can start with making breakfast for your queen" she blows a kiss at him and walks out of the bedroom leaving a gaping Abhi, plotting on how to get back at his biwi.

Please continue !!! Its soo romantic !!!!😍

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Lovely scene Honey!!! It was really cute with Prida and even cuter with AN! Honestly I think it suits AN more though!!! Loved the changes u made up! My favorite part was when abhi wakes up and pins her to the bed and the part where they're arguing about Niki's "boss." Keep it up!!!!

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