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Posted: 15 years ago
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~~Part 1~~

Heya guyz welcome to my new and with very little twist and turns FF. I hope you guys will like it. I plan to make this ff very short with 7 - 8 parts like a mini ff!.It will be onli on mayur maybe 1 or two characters here and there but not the main role kk.

" sachi mayu, really you really love me!", I squealed in the loudest squeak anyone might have heard in this world.He sat there still on his knees waiting for my answer, everything was perfect just like i had imagined, roses everywhere like a rain pouring down everywhere and getting everyone wet, but the roses made me feel special, a nice light tume playing at the back, it was perfect, oh yeah how do we say it was the perfect ---..perfect proposal!.After thinking alott i extended my hand, " i will marry you ...........................................",with a jerk i woke up, rubbing my sleepy eyes i saw that evil monster with a bucket in his hand, " sammy tu na pite ga", i screamed at my little brother --- well not so little anymore actually 21 year old brother!.

" maaaaa help help", samrat yelled as he grabbed savita and hid behind her, I ran into the kitchen to see him sheilding behind my mother, guessing by mom face, i felt it was better if i left i left rather than fight the situation.Samrat came out of hiding when he felt i had left the room, but when he least expected " got yaaa", i squirted him with a water gun, i didn't know why but getting revenge felt so, good it was like i was letting go of all the fear or pain i had kept inside me.Samrat looked like a little kid who had gotten beat by his elder sibling, i walked up to him and hagged him, " i'm sorry sammy" i said samrat patted my head, " naani it's okay, why are you saying sorry i did the same thing to you!", he said comfortingly, savita who was watching this scene from afar smiled at the brother sister duo, " in dono ka pyar hamesha aise hi banaye rakhna!", she prayed to god.

I shut the door and entered my room queitly, this room always haunted me, his memories in this room, him saying " will you be my firend?", smiling i picked up a photo frame from the side table, and ran my hand over it, " kash tum yahan hote, toh aaj mein itna akela na feel karti", " nupurrrrrrrrrr", i heard my mom calling me, putting down the frame i quickly grabbed a pair of jeans and a black top heading towards the washroom. I came out and quickly combed my hair, pulling them into a ponytail, but then for some odd reason i let the rubber fall to the ground leaving my long burgandy brown hair fall to my back!, grabbing my purse i walked to the living room to see my mom and samrat standing there with a their hands folded, i looked at them with a confused face, " kya hua?", i asked," phir se bhool gayi naani?", samrat chidded me, like a a 5 year old kid, after alot of thinking i couldn't come up with anything, " i'm sorry sammy chal bol kya bhooli main?", savita and samrat both looked at each other and in chorus replied, " aaj baujii ka janam din hai", i smiled and lightly smaked my forehead for forgettin such an important day.

Mandir

I climbed up the stairs feeling weird to be in such a place wearing jeans and a tank top, but i didn't know why today i felt the need to be different then my usual boring self, " what is so different about today?", i though to myself climbing up the stairs after realizing nothing was covering my head, i reched into my purse and pulled out a red scarf, placing it on my head, i entered the mandir, to see a very long line with people holding prasad and their mannat ki chunni!. I walked back down the stairs heading towards the guy selling the puja stuff, walking over i asked him to prepare the thali, and handed him note, turning my heels i headed up the same stairs, i remeber these were the stairs when we first met, he was with his elder sister and i was with sammy, we were so little and unaware of this cruel world. As i climbed the stairs a huge rush of wind flew my scarf off my head and it landed on someone elses face, " oh god ise bhi ahbi urna tha", i said annoyinly as i started to walk towards the person,who seemed to be frozen in his place, " kya adhmi hai, ahkir mera scarf apne chehre se utarta kyun nahi!", i thought as i neared him, pulling off the scarf voilently i froze in my place as i saw........................................

Yepp thats it guys, i hope you like the part, this is very different from my other ffz.soo guess guess kaun hai woh???

!!!!!! Sanam !!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

hey sanam...great part.....mayank is it??? ....anywayz i luved how sama nd nups fought....sibling fights r always a delight to read or watch or to sactually get involved..😆....plzzzz continue soon

Edited by zoya_me - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
ohk i was lurking around and saw that u updated..........it was mindblowing........a complete Mayur ff, from u will be such a treat........thanx yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

OMG !! Lovely FF yaar !!

Great update..Sam and nups siblings? awww !! 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: zoya_me

hey sanam...great part.....mayank is it??? ....anywayz i luved how sama nd nups fought....sibling fights r always a delight to read or watch or to sactually get involved..😆....plzzzz continue soon

thanxzzzz zoya and ur the first one to comment again!!!!!😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: annie07

ohk i was lurking around and saw that u updated..........it was mindblowing........a complete Mayur ff, from u will be such a treat........thanx yaar

yea all mayur!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanxz😛 for always supporting me!!!!😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht

OMG !! Lovely FF yaar !!

Great update..Sam and nups siblings? awww !! 😆

thanxzz hun!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
hey sanam..nice part..
Nupur's dream was so gud!..lol..but Sam had to destory it..lol..
She looked nice in the black top and jeans..and tat too wid her hair left open..!
so its bauji's b'day today..nice..she went to the mandir..but her scarf flew off..aww..n it fell on Mayank?!..wow..
The SaNu scenes were cute..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Babu meli shweet si sis how the heaven do you write so well?????

bolo bolo tell tell
Awesom blossom cherry blossom part sweetu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
array you were tooo good,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, add me to yur pm list plzzzzzzzz

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