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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey Ashna

I'm waiting for ur update dear
Ab aur intezaar mat kara
jaldi se update karde
LUv
Nidzy




Hey nidzy
so srry testing is over so i promise to upload a bigger part for u all
love
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
hey weekend is over waiting for next part 🥺 please continue soon 😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
nice ff!!!!!!! plzz pm me whn u update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
hi ! i just read ur fff its realyyyyyyyyy gr888
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharma.nat

hey weekend is over waiting for next part 🥺 please continue soon 😭


so srry!!
iwas on vaca i just updated so do read!!
love
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: tshq2623

nice ff!!!!!!! plzz pm me whn u update...


thnx!
i sent u a buddy request
Love
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

hi ! i just read ur fff its realyyyyyyyyy gr888

update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me


thnx a lot!!!
i just updated so do read!!
love
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Part 2 Subconscious Journey through Time

S- Look Mayank there is a problem😕😕 (Samrat starts with hesitation)

Mayank's smile slowly turns into a frown then his eyebrows fury, his eyes narrow and he is scowling.

😡
😊

Mayank can't believe what he just heard...

Mayank cant understand what he feels because many emotions overtake him at the same time so he is unable to explain.😲

M(thinking)- ye mujhe kya ho raha hai??!!😲😲 Ranvijay pe jo gussa ah raha hai wo to samajh mein bhi ata hai, par wo uss ladki 😕...kya naam hai...haan Nupur- ke liya jo dard aur gussa mesoos ho raha hai wo kyu? Mein to usse jaanta bhi nahi, na aaj takh uss ki photo hi nahi dekhi, par firbhi itna lagav kyu?😕😲😲

Samrat looks at Gunjan and they share a "what to do😕😕 now?" look and because they can not really do anything they end up waiting for Mayank's answer. After a while Samrat looks up to find Mayank in deep thought. At first he didn't want to say anything then just decided to ask him because they had less time left.

S(worried and tensed)M-Mayank?? Dude aab hum kya karenge??!! Nupur ka kya hoga??!! Usse hum kya kahenge?? Wo-

M (stopping Samrat midway)- relax Sam hum khuch sochte hai tikhe??😕

Samrat nods and takes Gunjan's hand who was standing there looking at the room where Nupur is. She stares at it with a blank look on her face and tears streaming down😭😭. Seeing this Samrat pulls her and makes her sit on the sofa and goes on his knees in front of her and cups her face in his hands.

S (looking her in her eyes) - chashmish tum thik ho?? Dekho chashmish mein hoon na! kuch nahin hoga I promise!(looking at Mayank quickly while saying) Mayank aur mein hain na? hum sab thik kar denghe, tum chinta mat karo! Tikhe? 😕😭😭

Gunjan just nods her head and hugs him and mummers

G- I love you Samrat😳😭

S- I love you too chasmish don't worry mein hamesha tumhare saath ho.😳😭

M- Samrat sorry to interrupt par wo tumhe aur mujhe jaana hai plan ko anjam dehne ke liye.😉😕

S (embarrassed) haan chalo par tum sure to ho na ki sab tikh hojayega.😳😕

M (thinking) mein isse kya bolo jab mein khud hi nahi jaanta ki jo mein karaha hun wo sahi hai ya galat??!! Bas jaanta hun to itna ki isse ek masoom ladki ki zindagi bach jayi gi.😕😕😊

S(noticing Mayank getting lost he asks tensely) Mayank tu thik to hai na? tu jawab kyi nahi de raha??!!😕

Mayank was about to say something just then he noticed a beautiful girl coming down.😳😳😆 Her hair a beautiful black flowing slowly around her face by the wind coming in from the many windows in the house. He wanted to reach out and tuck her hair behind her ears. Her eyes big and brown looking at everyone gently showing confusion. Mayank felt as if he could stare at them all day long😲😳. She walked down with a delicate hand on the staircase. Mayank couldn't help noticing her creamy brown skin. A shy smile😳😳 playing on her beautiful red lips. Dressed in a beautiful pink lengha with sparkles and a diamond set.

Mayank couldn't believe that such a beautiful girl even existed. She was like an Angel from heaven.

M(thinking)- ye mujhe kya ho raha hai??😲😲 Mere saath aisa to kabhi bhi nahi hua. Mayank Sharma tu thik to hai na??!! 😲😲😆tu THE Mayank Sharma aaj ek ladki ko dekh raha hai!! Par ye doosri ladkiyon sai alag hai uske chehre se dikta. Usski masoomiath...usski ankhe... kya ye pyaar hai ya in factuation??!!😳😳😳

Gunjan looks up to find Mayank's gaze so intensely on something.😕Mayank has never had a look like that she thought. Curiously she turns to see what that something is and finds Nupur standing there! Gunjan's eyes get big😲😲 and helplessly she glances at Samrat who is somehow calmly standing there smiling at Nupur. 😊😊

Samrat sees Nupur coming down and notices the way that Mayank looks at her. Samrat knew that Mayank is in love. At that moment he was assured this would work. Just then he noticed Gunjan looking at him and he smiled at her and held her hand tight as if to reassure her all was well. 😊

S (smiling with confidence) - arre Nupur! U look stunning.😃😃

Nupur was bored waiting for Gunjan and so she decided to get ready. Then she came out to find Gunjan. What Nupur saw next stunned her beyond belief😲😲😲. She saw an amazingly good looking guy smiling at her with his cute dimple smile.😳😳 His eyes were this beautiful brown and she doesn't know why but she suddenly looked into his eyes and had a felling of longing that she had never felt. To her it actually felt right. Then Samrat spoke up and she smiled at him, though she didn't really hear what he said. Something about her dress. Nupur was too busy looking at that guy he was like an guardian Angel stamding there for her is what she felt. 😳😳😳

N(thinking)- Nupur tu pagal ho rahi hai kya?? Tere aaj saagahi hai!! Aur tu kishi aur ke bare mein soch rahi hai!! Par uske aankhe.... Wo smile... wo naazar... Mujhe kya ho raha hai??!! Kyu mujhe ek complete hone ki feeling ho rahi hai!!😳

Both of them are lost at looking at each other!!! Both cant really understand what they feel for each other and why does it feel so right!! They have no clue!!😳

~bina ehsaas ki iqrar kya

Bina mohabat ke pyaar kya

Uss hi ke saath hai zindagi

Uss ke bina kuch bhi nahi

Saare jo lamhe hai

Humhe saath mein rakthe hai

Inhe kathe hai pyaar ke lamhe~

Made by me personally

Hope u like the update I tried to make it long!!

Srry for being late!! Plz don't hate me I was on vaca so I couldn't post it!!

Love u all

Ashna😳

Edited by tvgirl21 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
yippie....😃........ first one to comment,,,😉,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, the update was awesome,,👏,,,,,,👏,,, mayur are in luv....😳........ yeah.,,,😛,,,,,,,, luv at first sight,,,,,,,,😃,,😳,,, hope they realize it soon..😉....... sammy now know ki mayyu is in luv,,👏, wow wat an eyeight!!!!!!!!!!!👏!!!!!👏!!!!👏!👏!!👏mayank ko pata chale usse pehle to sam ko pata chal gya ki mayyu is in luv 😆,😆,😆,, wow this is called a frnd.👏..👏....👏. hate rv.😡..😡..😡.... anyways it was great..👏.👏.........
Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
Aww Ashna,
what an update!!!👏👏
Loved it so much.
So love at first sight.😉
The way u express their feeling 4 each other-specially maynaks feelings was really awesome.
Great update.
continue it.
Update soon.



Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago

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