PEHCHAN (AK) 2 END&EPILOGUE pg 71, 12/21/09 - Page 23

Originally posted by: -simi-

Just caught up with the 2 parts di.. I liked the first one when i read it.. but after reading the second one, it felt more yours... if that makes sense.. lol

I liked the idea of a confrontation before the union....

i couldnt help laughing at how the first version contained.. "i have failed you.. no i have failed you" and in the second one there was.. "you have failed me NO U have failed me" 😆😆

and the whole.. pink kurta and colourful towel 🤣 no matter how hard i try, i cant imagine IQ like that 😆😆

but needless to say, i loved the second one a lott .. angad needs to know the truth about his father... and im really waiting for the final twist 😃 i wonder how AK are going to end up.. living with his family? i dont think they'll be able to tolerate suryabhan and prithvi 😆 unless those 2 are kicked out 😆

Originally posted by: humrahi2

hey bheegi ths part iz awesome much bettr than d previous 1 luvly reunion both r lil egoistic u wrote it vry nicelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy its ur speciality pyar bhi hai milna bhi hai bt thn jhukna bhi nhi hai .....u portrayd these emotions so wellllllll .................super updts totaly luvd it bheegi u got my last PM rply

takecare

luv u

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks sheetal...this ff still has quite a bit of masala left so don't worry. I will write an AK version of "It had to be you' when i start it. It's hard for me to write 2 parallel stories at the same time but i can write 1 story in 2 versions😃

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12

part 36
awwww she didnt talk to him:(
her ego and insecurities came in between
true love is emant to make u stronger :D
wats inferno??

inferno is fire
uffff men and their egos!!!
awwww theyre locked inside:P hum tum ek kamre mein bandh ho hehehe:P
hes obeying her:D
of course he really wants to be with her😳
awww angad getting senti <3 i missed this soft angad :)
awwww once again dilip mama will bring them closer even after he is nt here:(
yes, he has always done that
angad trusts his dad more than her??:@
at this moment he does because she deserted him while suryabhan suppported him when angad was all alone after dilip mama's death
true love never divorces awwww n when u hurt eachother it hurts u aswell :(
yeah....that's the whole point of the story....u can't divorce in true love but in marriages u can😕
yes angad go find out the truth:@
hahaha angad flirting:P
they shud drink coffee:(
wow sometimes the most random things cn get u emotional lol
aww the first time he fell for her smile n now he fell for her tears :)
good point😆
awwww first they blamed eachother for failing...now they blaming themselves...so sweet...these 2 will never agree:P
yeah..they will always agree to disagree but love each other like crazy
awww angad finally let go of his ego n admitted men r stupid🤣
he he..after all a woman is writing this story
they were both wrong:)
awww rebound lover hehe:P
awww the ending was so romantic:D
awwww first love making seperated them n now it brought them together:P
good observation hinnu
i loved this part coz it was more realistic n romantic, n more passionate obviously coz there was more fighting:D and loveeee
thanks....
but both the parts were amazing!!!
ur writing rocks! i am honored

Originally posted by: akrock

nice part di
loved AK's milan 😳
i hope dey r not separated again
continue soon

Originally posted by: sheetal00

ohhh....im sorryyy 😳 😭........i hope i wasnt demandin too much when i kno how much time it takes for u to write theses ff.........but what i can do ur ff r simply delicious 😉 n i cant seem to get enugh 😃