'The Ghost and Mrs.Khanna...epilogue/pg103,Dec.2 - Page 8

Originally posted by: janu1610

<P align="center"><FONT color="#cc6699"><FONT size="4"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Pallavi nice story dear.I think its better to concentrate on a single couple rather than .3or 4 .</FONT></FONT></FONT></P><P align="center"><FONT color="#cc6699"><FONT size="4"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">This ff totally shows ur style .love their honeymoon session.</FONT></FONT></FONT>☺️<FONT color="#cc6699"></FONT></P><P align="center"><FONT color="#cc6699"><FONT size="4"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Angad nd kRIPA ,A LEGENDARY COUPLE .i think directors r out of their wits .why don't they repeat them????</FONT></FONT></FONT></P><P align="center"><FONT color="#cc6699"><FONT size="4"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Every couple who had created magic on screen was not signed again.</FONT></FONT></FONT></P><P align="center"><FONT color="#cc6699"><FONT size="4"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Alright i'll manage with ur ff only.</FONT></FONT></FONT>😉<FONT color="#cc6699"></FONT></P><P align="center"><FONT color="#cc6699">[EM]<FONT size="4"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">love this start..Kripa has ability to visualize preternatural but how she mange to let him believe on this .long way to go.---

Thanks Ritu!
U are right, its much easier to write abt 1 couple at a time, especially my fav couple. I can devote whole attention to them. 😳
Thats the question, why are these legendary couples not repeated. Producers ke dimaag mein batti bujh gayi kya? 😆 But AK/IN case is different....they refused to act together becuz of certain reasons.

Originally posted by: AKForever

hey Pallavi another great part.. keep it up.. continue soon..<br><br>thanks for the pm..<br>

Thanks AKForever! Ur welcome! 😳

Originally posted by: vallanki

Good one. Nice beach scenes, reminded NJ life, ofcourse not those romantic ones😉!! I thot something happens in the night..but will wait for next day😉

Does kripa have same powers like in haunted??

Thanks vallu! 😃
Did u live in NJ before? The description of the beach and houses are from Long Island itself, especially where I live...ghost didnt return that night.... 😆
Kripa doesnt have psychic powers....Its a haunted house, that means others have felt the same thing Kripa is feeling or hearing....

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

<FONT color=#9900cc>hey di awesome and great part

love all AK's romance they r really cute couple i wish ekta can start another story with AK in it

poor kripa can see somebody in the house i hope she don't get attack with it

i hope somebody also comes to stay with kripa so she don't get scared

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal

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Thanks sweetie!
We all wish we could see AK again on TV but.. 😭 we have to console ourselves with Fan fics.
Will the supernatural presence in the house attack Kripa? lets see......

superb update di
d startin scene was funny...lol....
cont soon...

How scary are you going to make this, Pallavi? Given my reluctance to accept the existence of "bhoots", I'm sure that ultimately it's going to be a human in the garb of a spirit that is trying to scare Kripa and the rest of the population 😕. Even then, my hairs still stand at their ends 😔
AK ... scintillating as usual 😊

Originally posted by: Angadzgirl

Awwww di......it was soooo HOT ROMANTIC n SEXY part...😉😳👏

now kripa's gonna alone at home when Angad's gone to work....it's sooo scarey....

Angad n kripa just tooo HOT couple....n no words to describe....😳

di cant wait for next part...😳

Thanks Shweta!
Yes, Kripa will be home alone when Angad goes to work! AK on honeymoon is bound to be hot! 😳 😆

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12

lol awwww angad scared her:(<br>awwww i love shy kripa :)<br>is the beach haunted too??? i hope it is!<br>even i cant swim:(<br>this angad is sooo diff from the other ffs :P for some reason this one seems more realistic...<br>is angad gonna get posessed in this ff??? or just kripa? i want angad to be possessed :(<br>omg she saw someone:O:O<br>awwww their shower together reminded me of bhalobasha :)<br>bandit queen another name for kripa:P<br>awww they amde parathas together!!!<br>omggg kripas gonna be alone damnnn:(:( does this ghost only haunt females or something???<br>kripa is braveee:O<br>are they buying this house forever???:S<br>omg wonder what will happen at the beach partty:|<br>awesome parttt cont soon:D<br>

Thanks Hinnu! 😃
The beach is safe....I cant swim either, but I love to play in the waves... 😉
Angad is a regular guy in this story....office goer type.. 😆 Angad possessed? maybe... 😉
Bandit Queen suits Kripa, doesnt it? 😆
Haunted house haunts everyone, not just a man or woman....anyone who lives there can have those experiences.
They didnt buy the house, just leased it for 6 months with option to buy....

Originally posted by: bhavana2692

so the haunting begins!😉<br>btw, r there more than one ghosts in this story di?<br>the kitchen scene was so cute!kripa the bandit queen!😆angad ko toh drama king ka award milna chahiye!<br>wow!that part abt angad feeling kripa's anxiety even in his sleep was so touching😳 .....<br>fab part again👏.....eagerly waiting 4 the new characters 2 arrive.....<br>

Thanks bhavana!
Cant tell right now how many spirits there are or if there are any, dont want to spoil the suspense.. 😉 😆 Angad loves to tease her and see her turn red....hes a great hubby to start with... very in tune with her feelings and needs. 😳

pallavi

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

I think you'll like "A Haunted House" by Virginia Woolf :P. Reminds me of your story...<br>

Thanks veiledbeauty! I havent read any Virginia Woolf but if u say its like that one, I must try it.
actually all ghost stories have similar content because hauntings dont have that much variety. 😆

Originally posted by: -simi-

great part! so cute 😆 bandit queen? 😆😆 u have sketched their characters so well! cute and very realistic!

the part where she saw someone in on the window was scaryyy! it was late night in my house when i read this.. and i got scared.. ahahaha now i know not to read this FF at night 😆

she will be alone the next day.. im sure she'll see something 😲

cant wait till next part!

Thanks simi!
I have a passion for realism! 😆 Bandit Queen name suits Kripa, doesnt it? 😆
This story will get progressively scarier...so brace urself for some really ghastly stuff....and dont read this at night. 😆
Inactive kyun? Exams are going on? 😳

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

fab part di

angad always leaves kripa blushing

m already feelin scared thinkin hw kripa will live all alone in that house

Thanks meghasharma!
Yes, poor Kripa is in a bad fix....she cant leave the house nor stay there alone....but she will find a way ....

pallavi

Originally posted by: Nehaa12

Ohh...i didnt know uhad started this fanfic until now....:P

Anyway i cant wait to read it.....i loved the lats year halloween special ff:D.. this one will be really good too:)

Thanks Nehaa! Yeah I got requests for more spooky stories after Haunting so started this one... 😃

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

awesome part di...poor kripa is scared out of her skin...anybody would be..i hope angad believes her soon..and comes up with some kind of defensive mechanism or so to say a rescue mission..looking forward to the next part, the beach party ..:)

Thanks shagun! 😳
Yes, poor Kripa cant leave, cant live in that house all by herself.
You bet, I would run away from a house like that too.. 😆 Beach party will be delayed by 2 more parts...more scary stuff coming up....before other characters are brought in!

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

<FONT color=#ff0000>That was really good Pallavi di!! I loved it. Angad is a such a sweety. I totally love him. Kripa is so innocent and i feel bad for her.
Angad will be gone in the morning and she'll be left alone in the creepy haunted house.
This part was sort of scary. The window scene and the shutters banging.
Really good and i could continue on praising you but i dont want to bore you.
Update soon and PLease Pm me! I suck at keeping track of FFs.
Thanks!

With luv,

~JOT~

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Thanks a lot, Jot! 😃
Angad is practical guy, but hes a sweet hubby. Kripa is in a bad fix....I would have run away too...
I will pm u of course! 😳

hey finally i get to read a fic of yours... i've read ur FFs half always coz i start so late then there gone toooo far for me to catch up but this one im gonna make sure i read it till the end... you are an awesum writer dear i love your writing! will comment on the parts just now!

thanx alot for this!

nadz

Originally posted by: -simi-

What happened to you updating this one every 3 days? 😔 😆

Sorry yaar, a lot going on right now, wil tell u all abt it next week! 😃

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

awwww another ghosty story!! yipeee!! continue soon dii and add me the PM list :D<br>

Thanks Arohangel! I wil pm u of course! 😃

Originally posted by: akrock

superb update di
d startin scene was funny...lol....
cont soon...

Thanks akrock! 😃
Im glad u liked it!

Originally posted by: namelesssr

How scary are you going to make this, Pallavi? Given my reluctance to accept the existence of "bhoots", I'm sure that ultimately it's going to be a human in the garb of a spirit that is trying to scare Kripa and the rest of the population 😕. Even then, my hairs still stand at their ends 😔 <br>AK ... scintillating as usual 😊<br>

Thanks nameless!
Hahaha *evil laughter* 😆 Im pulling out all the stops, this story will have more chills and scares than Haunting! Be prepared....Muaahhahaha... 😆
Jokes aside, why dont u believe in ghosts? 😳 I mean so many ppl who have seen them all cant be lying? Many of the scenes in this story wil be taken from real life accounts of ppl I know.... 😉

pallavi

Originally posted by: nadz_J

hey finally i get to read a fic of yours... i've read ur FFs half always coz i start so late then there gone toooo far for me to catch up but this one im gonna make sure i read it till the end... you are an awesum writer dear i love your writing! will comment on the parts just now!<br><br>thanx alot for this!<br><br>nadz<br>

Thanks nadz! I know ur a wonderful writer urself so its a great compliment coming from you! I really appreciate ur comment! 😳

pallavi

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Thanks nadz! I know ur a wonderful writer urself so its a great compliment coming from you! I really appreciate ur comment! 😳

pallavi

No way im nothing close to u man, love the way you explain situaions etc its sooo good... i read few parts of the haunting of kripa but then couldnt complete i need get back to it, i really wanna knw what happened next, btw is it completed??