Armaan-Jassy in the Gr8est luv story - Page 4

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Part-15......Ganga invited Armaan-raj inside.A
notices many young men there.
He feels wierd,bcoz they
were drunk.A:raj,these men
look like criminals.
R:cool down armaan. Many
beautiful dancers cum.As their
leader ganga cumes &
dances:Kaahe chhed
mohe...{DevdAS}. A:NOW I
UNDERstand how shabby this
place is. A becomes fed up &
begins 2 go.R holds
his hand.but A goes away from
raj. R:no wonder.i
expected this. G follows A.
A compares
G with jassy:jassy can luv
only me.thats sure.but
Ganga is trying 2 attract so
many ppl.tHere is
innocence in G's smile &
eyes.but in G's eyes
& smile,only the feeling like
how 2 attract men r
found.J is a pure
girl.her dance steps had
spirituality.but G's dance
steps lack thAT.its
disgusting.G calls A by her
touching him with
her hair. A:how dare u? G
smiles:why did u start
moving away? A:bcoz i can't
breath here peacefully. G:my
dance...A:u made that art
dirty.Dance is spiritual.u
shud've used it 4 a dirty
purpose. G gets
embarassed. A:u've dressed
carefully,but u look ugly.
G was embarassed.but she
did'nt want 2 fail.she
smiles 2 attract A:cum
inside.i've seen such a lovely
face b4.2day i'l b my fav
guest. A:by pleasing me if u
make me enter this dirty
place,u'l gain money.right?
A takes out his purse from the
pocket & throws it on
her face. G was shocked.

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Part-16..Armaan:u can share this money with ur
co-workers.or else u greedy person...u can tAKE IT
FULLY.I'M HAPPY THAT I ESCAPED FROM this jail run by
stupid ladies.The money thats earned thru wrong way is
not eternal.it'll b destroyed. Ganga was stunned. A:u
got the money u needed.now lewt me go.u were doing this
drama 4 money no. A begins 2 walk.suddenly he turns
back.he moves 2wards G. she becomes happy:the person who gave a long lecture is comingback.thats ganga's talent.
she smiles. A:A woman is a
daughter,sister,wife,granddaughter,s isterinlaw & a
mother.r u sum1 among them?if not ask urself whether u r
a woman? That touched G's heart. A goes.she was
wondered. G:1st time i'm seeing a man like this. she
smiles. Raj cumes. G:ur friend armaan is a saint.i can't
believe that there r men like this. R:1st time u r
praising a man.did u like him that much? G:yes.i am
fond of him now.i'd tried 2 attract many men.but 1st
time a man attracted me with his mind. R laughs.he
teases:r u loving A? G:if u feel so,i'm
disagreeing. R:a woman like u in luv? G:whatever..i'm
also a woman.even i've feelings & emotions. R:ok.but
don't expect anything from him.bcoz he's already upset
with his luv failure.his beloved jassy married sum1
else. G felt pity,later relief. G:thats ok.i'm there
in the place of Jassy.R laughs.

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Part-17...Raj:it'll never happen.how can a lady like u
can capture the heart of
Armaan?1st Armaan respected u.but
when he came 2 no who u r he
hated u.thats A.
Ganga:anyway,i'l b able 2 get
a gud place in A's
mind.4 that i'm willing 2 wait
till my death.raj,plz
bring A 2morrow. R:i don't
think its possible. G:then
anyday in this week?
R:never.but i'll try 4 u.but don't
expect anything. G:anyway u'l
talk 2 A 4 me no.thats
a gr8 deed. They hear a loud
noise from the back:he
won't cum. they turn back.it
was Aryan.G becomes
angry:who r u 2 decide that?
A:u no who i'm.i'm sure
that armaan won't cum.how can a a
guy like him who was not
impressed by ur beauty cum?
G:armaan will cum.i'l stop my
profession that day.every
woman will long 2 escape from
this hell.they wait 4 a person
who cums 2 save them.4 me
thT PERSON is armaan. A:don't
take such tuff decisions
ganga.u cum inside.i'l giv u
precious gifts. G
looks at A like a ghost:who
wants ur gifts?i need
only armaan's innocent mind. A:it'l
remain as a dream.lets
see whether he'l cum or not.
G:lets see.if he cumes,i'l
throw my anklet on ur face.its
a challenge.then u can't
cum here anymore. A:ok.if
not,i'l buy u. A goes.
R:what did u tell
him?blunder.did'nt u hear what he
said? G:it won't b a blunder.K
will cum.i'l win.thays
sure.god wil hear my prayer.
The next day. Raj:if i ask u
sumthing wil u do that 4 me?
Armaan:what do u want me 2 do?
R:2day nite wil u plz go 2
ganga's place? A
shouts:r'nt u ashamed 2 ask me
like this?

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Part-18.....Raj:u just go & see.thats enuff.if
not,it'l lead 2 dangerous
incidents. Armaan:dangerous 2
Ganga?she deserves it. R:but i
promised that i'l take
u there.plz don't make me
embarassed. A:don't talk about
it anymore. R becomes upset. Ganga
expects gar.but
R came alone.G was
shattered.Aryan laughs
loudly:the whole nite u've 2
dance.2morrow morning i'l
go with u. G:2day nite itself
armaan'l cum.i'm sure.bcoz
my luv is strong.if so,i'm not
ur slave Aryan.
A laughs. G dances without no
music with
tears.suddenly there happened
a wonder.unexpectedly Armaan
cumes.G cries due 2 happiness.
G:thanks armaan.
Aryan was embarassed.he goes out.G
goes behind
him.she slaps his cheecks. A
runs away like a
tensed guy.G goes inside with
a smile.her eyes
were on Arman.She dances by
singing:mardala...A did'nt
even look at her dance. G goes
near A:i new
that u'l cum.i new that u'l
look at me & talk. A:i
did'nt cum here 2 see u.i came
here ,bcoz i don't want
my friend 2 b insulted. G
becomes sad:anyway u came here
no.u r gr8. A:however u praise
me,i won't fall in ur
trap. G's eyes rose:this is
not a trap.really i
luv u.my luv is innocent. her
words did'nt fall on his
ears. his eyes fall on a
licker bottle.he goes near
it.he takes & opens the
bottle. R:what r u doing K?
A:whats the problem?u only
said that licker can wipe out
my worries. R:but u don't
drink armaan. A:get lost. A
drank the whole bottle by
tolerating its bitter taste.
tears flow from his eyes. R &
G were helpless.
A:we'l go raj. when they went
out,G's eyes rose.
suddenly a turns back & moves
2wards
ganga:ganga,now onwards everyday
almost all the time
i'l b there with u in this
house. G was surprised
that she cud'nt believe
whether its a dream or not.she
looks at A deeply.

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Part-19...Raj was shocked 2 see Armaan's sudden change.
A:i won't get a better place 2
drink peacefully.here
only Ganga & her co-workers r
there.its not a new
sight 4 u ppl 2 see drunk
men.only u ppl wil b able 2
tolerate it. G becomes upset.
A walks away.
Raj goes near G:ganga...don't b
sad. G:no.if
Armaan had suddenly fallen 4
me,my impression about him
wud've changed.now i've a
better impression about him.
R:now i understand that ur luv
4 Armaan is true.1 day Armaan
will realise that.armaan wil
luv u back. G:i liv with that
hope. Next day A goes 2 G's
house with a licker
bottle.A was shocked 2 see G
who came 2 ricieve
him.she was very simple.she
has worn only an ordinary
sari.but looks pretty.she has
worn only a few ordinary
ornaments.but her nose ring is
the same. A starts
drinking:whats the reason 4 ur
change? G:why shud i
attract men?i stopped thT
JOB.i put everyelse out with
gold & money.let them do a gud
job 2 liv.or else let
them suicide.its better 2 opt
that than 2 liv like this.
A:How wil u live? G:i've
earned a lot.i hate 2 touch
it now sice its not earned
thru a gud way.but I 'v 2 use
2 liv.when it gets over..i
dunno. A:can't u dance?
G: is it armaan himself telling
this? A:u fool.in ur
eyes dance has only 1 meaning
ie a method 2 attract
guys.but dance is a spiritual
art too.there r many
dancers who dance in temples 2
liv. G:wi it b able 4
me?they wil push me out of the
temple. A:thats in this
place no.u can go 2 other
places.no 1 wil no.u've money
2 travel no.if no,i'l giv u.
G becomes happy:u r
willing 2 help me.that means
ur hatred 2wards me has
gone.right? A becomes
unconscious due 2
overdrinking.so G cud'nt hear
what she wanted 2
hear from him. Raj cumes:i'm not
wondered at ur
change.bcoz u luv armaan
sincerely. R becomes sad seeing
A's condition. He goes near
A:ganga,u plz go.let
we friends hav a personal
chat. G goes out.