Armaan-Jassy in the Gr8est luv story

I really want Armaan-Jassy 2 b in the gr8est luv story
'Devdas' as the gr8est pair Devdas & Pavathi.Bcoz Arman is like Devdas.This fanfic
is my version of DEvdaS. PART-1.....Armaan is
returning 2 his native place after 14yrs.after getting
used 2 the lifestyle in USA,he did'nt feel like going
backbut its bcoz of his parents' force,he's going
back.since a few months Armaan is in bombay.he was packing
everything 2 return.his only friend Raj cumes:why r u
in hurry 2 go back? Armaan does'nt say anything. he helps
him 2 pack.Raj gets a letter from a book. R:whose
letter is this? Armaan takes it & looks:thisis Jassy's
letter . R:who is jassy?ur kitten? A gets irritated:its
a girl. R:o i see.u did'nt tell that u've a gf in ur
place.so this is the reason behind ur sudden return 2 ur
land. A:what rubbish!how many glamorous girls r here
near me.i did'nt feel anykind of attraction 2wards
them.then how can i feel that 2 this simple village
girl?i'vent seen jassy since a long period.shewas my
childhood friend.1st & all we used 2 send letters.later
it was stopped. R:but i realy feel that ur
relationship with raj is not sumthing that shud be
broken.i think the destiny is 2 bring u both
2gether.that may be the reason u r 2 b back. A:u r
mad.by the way a bad smell is coming from u.u've drunk?
R:ya. A:don't u feel shame 2 tell it openly? R:i don't
feel shame 2 tell the truth like u.u feel shame 2 admit
that u liv jassy. A:u r ctalking rubbish after
drinking. raj smiles. armaan cud'nt sleep thinking
about raj's words. he takes & reads the old letter
sent by jassy:armaan,did'nt u tease me when i said that a
flower is cuming the the plant?tho its late,a yellow
flower has cum.when u cum here,i'll giv 2 u. armaan
thinks:yellow...luv's color. armaan was carried away by
nostalgia...the days spent with jassy.

that was so cool jasmin!! plz continue sweetie!

luv ya,

Abs 😊

Thats a good idea! nice going, please cont sooon 😊

Part-2....Armaan remembers how naughty he was & how sweet jassy was.jassy was brilliant in maths,but armaan was just the opposite.he remembers their painful departure when he went away from their place.jassy stood near him when was going.they both cried a lot.due 2 laziness armaan stopped writing letters,but jassy continued. armaan thinks that mayb bcoz he was not replying later she also stopped sending letters. armaan thinks:why am i thinking this much about jassy?she was only a friend.i remember the little jassy clearly.how does she look like now? he becomes restles.Immediatly he goes,paints jassy with a guess. A:wil jassy look like the same? armaan feels like seeing jassy like anything.Raj's words r still in his mind. jassy was very much trilled 2 no that armaan is cuming back. she goes 2 the temple:God,armaan is cuming back after many yrs.thanku so much god 4 bringing him back. she takes vrith 4 armaan.then dances with lamps:silsila....armaan comes back,gets grand welcome. armaan goes 2 jassy's house.Mr.walia -his wife did'nt recognise him. A:don't u recognise me?i'm armaan. they were surprised. jassy's mom:Armaan!wow! dad:i can't believe ur change. they chat. M:armaan,don't u want 2 see jassy? he wants 2 see her very badly.but he does'nt say that. M:she was always enquiring whether u r back. armaan becomes happy 2 hear it. M:jassy...cum here.see who has cum. jassy cumes.she was really happy 2 see armaan.he cud'nt believe his eyes.bcoz jassy was exactly the same person in his painting. he thinks:without seeing jassy's present look,i painted.it was right.its a gud omen.but jassy looks more beautiful than in my painting. M:jassy,did u recognise him? J:yes,armaan. jassy-armaan look at each other. he cud'nt sleep thinking about jassy.he was impressed by her beauty.he sings dreaming about her:woh chand jaisi ladki {Devdas}.

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great job jasminerahul your ff is better than devdas the movie
please write soon

wow great... 👏
plz continue...

Part-3....Armaan-jassy meet in the temple.they walk 2gether silently.losing patience armaan decides 2 talk 1st:how did u recognise me? jassy smiles:why did'nt u cum here all these yrs? A:i did'nt feel like cuming here.did'nt want 2 see any1. jassy wants 2 ask like this:u did'nt want 2 see me? J:now also u r not interested in this place? A:slightly interest started cuming. jassy smiles. J:why did;nt u send letters? A:i did'nt feel like sending. jassy becomes sad.she thinks:how cool armaan is.not at all bothered about anything. A:why did'nt u stop sending letters? J:i thot u 4got me.so i did'nt want 2 desturb u. Armaan cud'nt speak. J:u 4got me? Armaan was speechless. J:u did'nt think about me even 4 once? A:where is time 4 that? jassy becomes sad,bcoz she expected a positive answer from him. J:but i can't count how many times i used 2 think about u each day. it touched armaan's heart. A:ok,how is ur studies? J:what studies?it got stopped early. Armaan was shocked,bcoz jassy was the brightest student in the school who was the pet of the teachers. A:why?u lost interest in ur studies?shocking.. J:no,i was 1st.but its really expensive 2 continue studies.we r not so rich like u no. jassy's eyes filled up with tears. Armaan smokes. J:u r smoking b4 god?its a poison. Armaan throws away the cigerrette. jassy smiles.

that was really really sweet jasmine! yaar...udas math ho...it takes a lil bit of time for a fan-fic to pick up with it's readers! 😉

Cheer up! 😃

Abs 😊

Jasmine, so sorry i missed these 2 parts...they were awesome 😛 😉 And yes like aabha di said, people will read it, no worries! please cont sooon!

Mallika 😛

Part-4...Jassy:armaan,we'll play cards like we used 2 when we were kids. armaan laughs:ok. they play. song:Bairi piya...Jassy-arman play .Jassy runs 2 her friend Simran. J:there is a happy news. S:what? J:Armaan came 2 my house 2 see me.i can't still believe this. S:armaan might've cum 2 ur house.but its only a dream that its 2 see u. jassy's face becomes dull. S:whats in ur mind?u r shy 2 say? J:no,i'm prowd 2 say that i luv armaan.ppl maynot swallow it.but i'll tell this truth. Simran was shocked 2 see her frankness. S:u've the guts 2 tell that u luv armaan? J:when we r in luv we'll hav the courage 2 say that.if u'd guts u will not hav agreed 2 marry a man whom u r not in luv. simran was speechless. J:i'll soon tell armaan that i luv him.why shud i hide my luv 2wards the person whom i'm in luv with? S:what if armaan does'nt accept u? J:i'm sure that he'll ccept me. S:how can u b sure about it? he might've seen mANY BEAUTIES BETTER than u IN aMERICA,BOMBAY...J:maybe.but he cannot see any char in them.only i'm beautiful in his eyes.thats the magic of luv. Jassy imagins romamce with armaan.Song:morey piya.... Jassy's mom cumes 2 see armaan's mom. J's mom:shud we delay it? A's mom:what r u taliking about? J's mom:about conducting the wedding of aRmaan & jassy. A's mom stares at her.