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Where is she yar???It has been ages...
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Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

Where is she yar???It has been ages...

i kno yaar...its beeb ages....but she told me that she is very very busy in her work.....i dont kno whn she is gonna return........i m also waiting for her to update the story...:(
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its been so many days apu.... wait korte korte to ami buri hoe jabo.... 😕😔 koi tumi???tomar khoj nai kano??update kobe korba??????????????????????????????????????????????
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thanks to ALLAH that i am back!

well guys, we the ppl of Bangladesh have been facing load shedding hazard for past few months...........thats one of the prime reasons behind my long interval.......i will try to update once a week from now on...once again....hope u wudnt mind if i take a bit more than that as well since the condition is kinda same still.....but INSHALLAH wont take this long!!! (pitty i have an exam this month ... so this month is gonna be real tough as well)

now, i wanna thank you each and everyone of u for ur comments and from now on i will need those even more since i wanna finish this thread and start up the next one asap (as u know i wont reply until page 150 of this current one)

special thanks to avi (lucario) who has replied to u ppl on my behalf....

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Update 20

Nupur's room in the morning time

She is getting ready while listening to the chirping birds outside the window, so engrossed in both that she misses out the soft taps on her door.

G: pari jaisi sundar dikh rahi ho di!

N (clutching her heart): tune toh mujhe dara hi diya tha gunjan!

G: kya baat hain di? Aajkaal bahat khoye khoye rehne lagi ho tum? Kisi rajkumar ki khayal me toh nahin?

N: tub hi na gunjan,,,jo muh pea aye bina soche samjhe keh deti hain,,,main toh sirf apna wazan naap rahi thi

G: aayinese?!!!

N: offo,,,nahin yaar,,,naap nahin rahi hoon,,,dekh rahi hoon ke if I have put on some weight or not

G: u are absolutely ok di,,,just like b4,,,anyway y are you letting this silly thing bug you that much?

N: silly thing? Tujhe toh pata hi nahin rajkumar mayank ne usdin phirse mujhe moti kaha!

G: kya?! Impossible di,,,mayankji aur jobhi ho andhe toh nahin hain ke aisa kuchh

N (snapping): tu use nahin janti gunjan,,,usne toh meri holi ka maza hi kirkira kar diya

G: kiu? Aisa kya kiya unhone holi pe?

N (motioning her to the bed to sit face to face):Kya huya tha? Janna chahti hain na tu? Toh phir soon

F;ashback

on a festive occasion where colors in the air n reaches for mayank who is now surrounded by some elites, from behind to greet him

n (with a warm smile on her lips): mayankji?

M (turning around): oh,,,haan nupurji kahiye?

N (getting a bit uncomfortable realizing the lil crowd): uh oh main,,,sirf ,,,aapko wo

M ; please nupurji! Us stupid sa hadsa me aapki madat ke liye phirse thanks mat kehna!

N; nahin,,,main toh sirf

M: pata hain nupur ji,,, ke aap ehsanmand feel kar rahi hain,,,par itni chhotisi baat ko lekar

N (losing her temper): baat agar itni hi chhotisi ho toh uspe itni badisi saza dilaneka niyam ko nahin badal sakte hain aap? Agar badal dete toh shayad aapko waise mujh jaisi logo ki masiha na banna parta (both mayank and his co looks a bit bewildered,,,tho there are some hints of humor in his eyes)

N (showing him her handful of color): btw,,,main aapko thanks kehne nahin aayithi main toh sirf holi ka greetings dene aayithi ,,, ab jab baat is terha se (shrugs leaving the word incomplete ,,,looks straight at mayank and creates a colorful mist blowing the powder) anyway,,,enjoy! (adds with a mysterious smile on her lips) one way or another!

She leaves the half awed half amazed mayank behind with a random comment from one of his acquaintances 'tamiz ki thodi kami hain usme!'

M (smiling): par guts ki nahin!

Nupur speeds up fuming as mayank has taken it lightly once again,,,,,why on earth he doesn't takes any of her attacks seriously,,, no matter how hard she tries he somehow manages to find it intriguing rather than attacking ,,,and that is what makes her mad

D (standing next to her): kya huya? Is rangile din me meri pyarisi saheli ki chehre ka rang kiu utre huye hain?

N (without even editing): ye tumhara bhai hain na? wo mujhe pagal banate jaraha hain!

D (with a baughty smile): fair enough!

N: kya fair enuff?

D: tumhara gussa! Agar apne aap par kisi ka kabu na rahe toh uska is terha se gussa hona bilkul jayez hain,,, par kya kaaren,,,mera bhai hi aisa ke uske aura ki samne ladkiya fida,,,

N (groans to make dia stop): oh please! Main? Aur unpe fida? Tumhara dimag bhi shayad unki terha twist kar gaya!

D: kya?!!! Mayank bhaiya aur twisted dimaag!!! Ye baat toh hajmola se bhi hazam nahin ho sakta nupur!

N: bahen ho na,,,is liye nahin dekhta,,,warna tum hi batao, usdin unhone mujhpe jo favor kiya tha uska toh koi zarurat hi nahin padta agar us stupid sa rule agar nahin hota toh,,,aur unhe dekho us rule ko omit karneki vajae hero banneme tula huya hain

D: u have got it all wrong nupur! Barso se chalta huya koi bhi rule ko badalna bhai ki akeleki opinon par depend nahin karta,,, wo toh rajsabha ki har sadasya ki raay lene ke baad maharaj ki decision pe depend karta hain,,,kiu tumhe kya lagta agar bhai ke haath me hota toh ab tak wo law reh jata kya?

N: kya pata? Unka koi bharosa nahin

D (sharply): u know nothing about him nupur,,, u have no idea how far he can go for justice ,,,u have no idea what he has done already for this,,,,,what he has given up.

N: tum kis vaare me baat kar rahi ho?

D: he has given up his crown for this,,,and he is ready to lose more

N: kya!!!!!!!!!

D: don't judge him nupur,,, because u wont be able to (dia goes away,,,and nupur keeps looking at the care-free mayank enjoying with his friends)

Present time

N: this is the first time when dia got annoyed wih me,,,

G: aur hona bhi chaihye di,,,waise hi rajkumar mayank itne acchhe insan hain upar se dia ka bhai hain,,,use bura toh lagna hi chahiye,,,

N: haan haan,,,dudh me dhule huye tulsi hain naa wo? Agar utna hi acchha hain toh jab main patch up karne gayi tab bhi usne mujhe chiraya kiu?

G: kya?! Tum aur patch up? Wo bhi khud jaakar? Yeh kaise ho sakta hain di?

N: kiu?! Kya main meri galathi man nahi leti? (gunjan raises her brows meaningfully) acchha,,,baba theek hain main hardly galathi manti hoon,,, aur isbaar un rare times ki ekbaar tha,,,lakin us mayak ne toh

G: kya kiya unhone?

N; kya kiya? Chal batati hoon

Flashback again

M (treating himself with some sort of sweets, taking a step backward seeing nupur's approaching him): nupurji agar phirse aapko patake ki terha burst karna ho toh please help urself ,,, but yaha se tohde dur jaakar,,,please?

N: wo main aapse,,,sorry kehne aayithi

M: kya?! Par kiu ?

N: aapko misjudge karneke liye,,,aur (she halts as mayank laughs)

M (pausing seeing nupur's confused expression): u never cease to surprise me nupurji,,,jab bhi main sochta hoon ke aap ye karengi toh aap wo kar dete hain,,,its becoming a cliche u know,,,par aachhiwali clich

N ( still confused,,,tho a bit assured at mayank's friendly smile,,,but still lost almost entirely): toh,,,ab main iska kya matlab samjhu? I mean,,,aapne mujhe maaf kiya,,,ya phir nahin kiya?

M: tho ye mere liye zyada maine nahin rakhta kiuke main ne koi offnse hi nahin liya ,,,par jabke ye tiny lil maafi wali issue aapko itna pareshan kar raha hain toh phir ,,,,,kiya,,,

N (sighing with relief): toh dosti pakki?

M: itna jaldi nahin! (continues with a naughty smile as nupur looks flabbergasted) remember? Aapne hi toh kaha tha? 'jab tak competition khatam na ho jaye tab tak koi dosti nahi?' hmm? Yaad aaya?

N (looking absolutely low at her forgetfulness): thanks for reminding me,,,I hope we are all clear now,,, I think I shud leave

M: hey! Main toh sirf mazak kar raha tha! Sorry! Mere ore se toh dosti pakki (throwing an inquisitive look at her) hope the offer is still open!

N nods with a smile

M (offering her a mithai): toh muh mitha ho jaaye?

N spreads her hand but mayank jestures to feed her with his own hand,,,nupur agrees with a bit of hesitation,,,at the very last moment he easy it himself sayin ' its lot healthier if u avoid sweets' with his usual naughty smile,,,waiting for nupur to burst up soon

Present time

G: bas? Itnisi baat? Aur tumne unse dosti tod di?

N: toh kya karu? Ye dusri baar hain jab usne mujhe indirectly moti kaha,,,tujhe kya laga iske baad bhi main use chipakke rahungi? Dosti ka dhindora pit te huye?

G: usne toh sirf tumhari tung khinch raha tha di,,, in a frndly way!

N: haah haah! Jab dosti hi theek terha se nahuyi tabhi se? itna irritating dost mujhe nahin chahiye! Jo hamesha mujhe chiraate rahe!

G: tum chirtihi kiu ho di?

N: kiuke wo chiraate hain stupid! Aare!,,,kitna late ho raha hain mujhe,,,main ab chalti hoon gunjan,,,apna khayal rakhna,,,

G (staring at the departing nupur mutters): itne aachhi holi milte huye bhi tum khush nahin ho di,,,ye holi toh mujhe puri terha se yaad bhi nahin hain!

Flashback 3 (sajan's one)

Gunjan is staring at her ride with bulging eyes,,,never in her wildest dreams she has thought she wud have to ride a horse in her lifetime

S: kya huya? Aise ankhe phadke kya dikh rahi ho?chalo na?

G: ghode pe?

S: haan! Isme itna (suddenly it hits him) aare haan,,,tumhe toh ghode se darr lagte hain na? shit,,,mujhe toh bilkul yaad hi

G (interrupting): hum paidal chale?

S: aur sham ko jaake pauhche? Sabhi programs khatam ho jaaneke baad? (impatiently) marwaogi kya mujhe tum gunjan?

G: mar toh shayad main jaanewali hoon (gulps) darr ke mare!

S : dekho gunjan

G (still looking at the horse): dekh hi toh rahi hoon,,,sssamrat!

S: aare us ghode ki ore nahin mere ore dekho! (gunjan looks at him,,,looking way beyond shaky) tumhe mujhpe yaakin hain na? (gunjan looks at him for a while,,,then nods) toh phir give it a try ok? Ye bahat hi shant ghode hain,,,ekdum susheel bilkul tumhari terha,,,come on,,,give it a try buddy!

G: pppar ssamrat

S (lightly): aare is par-war pe kar do vaar aur ho jao is ghode pe sawar!

G: mujhse nahin hoga samrat,,,tum chale jao main

S (intercepting): come on yaar,,, ek baar toh koshish karlo,,,please? (Recognizing the hesitation in her, samrat grabs the opportunity to make her mind in his favor) chalo main tumhari madat kar deta hoon

He holds her trembling wrist and leads her to the horse and aids her to ride it and tells her to kick it slightly to make it move, but she falters,,,must have been kicked it too hard than necessary outta her fear, as a result it kinda flinches which makes gunjan hide her face in her hands letting go off its leash. Samrat shakes his head in disappointment and hops up on the horseback behind her.

S (holding the bridle from either side of her making her jump on her saddle and turning her head towards him): agar yehi chhod dogi toh control kaise karogi? Thoda aage jaake baithogi?chalane me asani hogi.

Gunjan does as she has been told still not blinking looking absolutely awed,,,her awedness breaks when samrat gears up and leads the horse to the destination (I so want to say the moon word instead of destination,,,lols)

So they ride and ride reaching for their utsav venue gradually,,, gunjan's fear of horse has long been worn off but something new has already gripped her since then,,,its his constant proximity to herself,,,riding in da same horse has been already allowing her shoulder to brush samrat's chest time to time but,,,the occasional speeding or breaking of the horse is compelling her to bump onto his chest frequently,,,which is making her extremely uneasy and shy. On the other hand samrat seems almost quite oblivious to it as he noticed her discomfort in da beginning but dint payu it much of his attention as he knows 'this is so gunjanish to pay extra attention' but when they are really close to gunjan's school building (the venue where benrim along with school kids and their family's are having their private lil celebration) a strong breeze blows gunjan's hair behind to brush his face with those dark silk,,,,,for a while,,,he forgets everything else,,,loses his focus on not focusing on gunjan,,,he looks absolutely mesmerized,,,until gunjan yells.

G: kya kar rahe ho samrat? Aage kiu bar rahe ho? Hum toh pahauch chuke hain!

S (coming out of the trance): haan? (looking at the surrounding he halts the horse) haan,,, (jumping down he spreads his hand) kya huya? Utro gunjan! (looking at her hesitation he gets hold of himself fast) kamal karti ho tum yaar pehle toh chad nahi rahi thi ab utar nahi rahe ho? Pure din uspar hi bitaaneka irada hain kya?

looking appalled by the idea she shakes her head grabs his hand and jumps closing her eyes tight,,,and feels something has gone terribly worng when her mr. right makes it right steadying her by holding her by her arms neatly and strongly. Gunjan opens her eyes thinking of facing his eyes full of anger but gets startled to see those full of concern

S: tum theek toh ho na gunjan? Kahi lagi toh nahi tumhe?

G: nnnahin,,,,,main bilkul theek hoon,,,thanks

S (letting go of her): aise aankhe bandh karke jump karogi toh aisa hi hoga na gunjan?

G (growing pink getting caught at her stupid act): tumne dekh liya?

S (laughing at her expression): ankhen tumne bandh kiye the maine nahin!

later that day

Samrat is throwing colors at gunjan each time he passes her making her worried sick of it....when he throws the purple powder at her which misses her by an inch or so she decides to take the revenge and chases him off with a pichkari, rimjhim smiles at this.

B (coming in, with jug full of orangede/ or other non-nasheli drink that suits): want some drink?

Rimjhim (showing the half emptied glass kept on the table next to her): abhi nahi ' baad me

B (filling up a glass with the drink he brought): peelena'ready hain

R (throwing him a inquisitive looks'shrugs): sure,,,tum piyo?

B: mmain?

R: haan tum

B: mmmera matlab hain,,,,,mmain kiu (gunjan rushes in making benji stop)

G: nehla diya use rango se (breathing heavily) uff kitna thak gayi main! (she sees the glass on the table and drinks up the whole of it in a sip making rim and benji startle, to their surprise she even pours the glass once more and finshes that one to) bahat pyas lagi thi ( she adds with a smile) tera tha kya?

R (smiling back): koi baat nahi' abhi bhi dher saare hain' jug me '.(giggling, she adds) benji special'

B : dekho rimjhim, tum ye (gets interrupted once again samrat pulls away gunjan like an eagle to the color table and showers her with bright yellow powder taking directly from the powder platter)

G (trying to adjust her sight to the sudden dustiness) samrat,,,ye kya kar rahe ho? Ruko!

S ( as if some kind of spirit attacked and possessed him now coloring the top of her head green): jabtak saat rangi naa bana diya na tab tak main ruknewala nahin (he reaches for the vivid red powder and takes handful of them,,, gunjan sees the color as he comes closer to her,,,seeing where he is heading ( he cant possibly put it on her parting but since he is putting every color on her head since her head and face was the only clean portion remained after such a long holi day,,,he has taken it personally to attack those two as well ,,,,she shrieks at the thought of her parting being colored red by him and tries to run away but samrat holds her right on her head to make her steady and brings his hand over her head, gunjan looks at him horror struck)

*** i know it is too late for the previous holi and too dvanced for the next ... but it kinda needed for the story so i added*****
Edited by amsjms - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
omigosh!u updated!
res.

*edit*
aww Meela...of course, itz been ages since u updated...but we can wait yaar...coz the problem is understandable...there r many other friends who complain the same thing!
coming 2 the update....superb part yaar! Mayank i kinda mysterious...even tho he feels Nupur's the most unpredictable, he himself has a mysterious aura 2 him....agree with Diya!😃
the Holi part was so cute! poor Mayank n his companions were left shell-shocked by Nupur's actions!😆
poor Gunjan n her horse-riding-scare! but the diff. kinda feeling which came amidst the ride was understandable!😉
anyways, cont. soon....
Edited by bhavana92 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

amazing part dear

thnx 4 d pm

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