AR- AJEEB RISHTEY PART 4 UPDATED 19/10/2009 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part ------2

Next day riddhima get up early in morning…. Firstly she does all house hold work… then got ready …..

" maa main jaa rahi hoon ye paper mein kuch vacancies ke bare mein nikala hai…. Wohi patta karne jaa rahi hoon… jitni jaladi aachi job mill jaaye uttana hi aacha hai…"

" theek hai beta par apna dhayann rakhna… aur jayada kiss se baat maat karna…"

Riddhima come out from house .. With all his certificates…and went in search in front of job in the bus…..

On the other side….

Armaan " kaun si gaadi lekar jaao… mercidies.. Ya tat seria… ya pejaro…. Oh god bahut confusion hai... Ummm.... Okay then sports car hi le kar jaata hoon its quite cool... And also of my favourite colour… red

Riddhima went place to place… in search of job… but can not find any job… finding job in city like mumbai is very difficult… while on the other hand. 10000 workers in the city…. Works under armaan…

At the end of the day riddhima reach home… she was very tired due to constant walking…

" riddi aa gayyi tu… kya hua koi job milli ya nahi…"

" nahi maa… itni jaladi kahaan …."

" chal fresh ho jaa … main khanna laaga deeti hoon…"

" theek hai maa…"

Today padma is not feeling good…. As there is constant coughing….

"maa kya hua… tum theek toh ho naa… kya hua kitni baar kaha hai ghar ka kaam maat kiya karo…"

" main theek hoon beta bus yu thodi khansi (coughing) ho rahi thi… main theek hoon….tu chinta maat kar….

Again padma start coughing.. And this time blood comes out from his throat… riddhima got very scare on seeing this she quickly rush to hospital with padma…

" hum ne saare test kar liye hai aap ki mother ko cancer hai aur woh bhi aakhri stage ka… unn ke baache ki umeed bahut kum hai…" said doctor ao riddhima and then left…

Listening this riddhima start weeping…. There is no one in this world without her mother.. If she also left her what would she do for whom did she will live her life…

After some time she went to her mother to meet her… " maa kuch nahi ho gaya aap ko aap jaladi theek ho jaayi gaayi… aur mere saath ghar chale gaaye… " said riddhima arranging medicines and not making eye to eye contact with her mother… but padma understand that there is some problem …

" main jaanti hoon ki main nahi baachene waali ,, beta mere jaane ke baad apne dhayaan rakhna..aur kiss baat ki chinta maat karma sub theek ho jaaye gaaya.. Tu mumbai chali jaana wahaan meri ek saheli rehti hai ratna… tu yahaan maat rukana … who teri jaroor maada kare gaayi aur tere liye naukri ka intezaam bhi kar deegi… " and then told her that her address is in his diary .. In the cupboard..

" maa kuch nahi ho gaaya aap ko.. Hum jadi ek saath ghar chale gaaye…" said riddhima while holding padma's hand and weeping.. Then padma start coughing again… riddhima ran for doctor… doctor came and check again …she start ed breathing heavily.. And then then she was declared dead by doctors… riddhima start weeping ..

Precap:- riddhima in mumbai… will now armaan and riddhima meet aur some thing wrong would happen with riddhima…

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I KNOW FRIENDS THIS IS A VERY SAMLL PART BUT I WILL TRY TO WRITE I BIG ONE AS EARLY AS POSSIBLE AND UPDATE IT SOON... TILL THEN PLS BEAR IT... I WANT ALL OF U R COMMENTS...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey
thanxs lot for the pm
loved the part
poor padma died
poor ridhima dont have anyone to handel her
i hope nothing wrong happens to her
after readding ur prcap i have felling that this lady ratna that padma mention will not help ridhima at all n wont allow her to leav at her home eather....this is just my prediction
updat soon
waiting...........
once agine thanxs a lot for the PM
lods of luv
nruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey really nice n amzing ff thanks for pm looking forward eagerly to more nice updates like this
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!!!

that was nice..

what a diffrent life for both of them ....

poor ridz yaar,,,

but now hope that they will meet,,,,,

update next one soon..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey chahat , sweety very nice , i really liked it , hmm oh soo sad padma is dead , poor riddhima , well its getting interesting now wow , riddhima going to mumbai , i m sure now ar gonna meet soon
hey sweety please doo try and update with the next part soon , and yaa i want a long update for now
will be waiting , update soon
till then take care and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part ----3

Mumbai:-

Armaan is just busy in his parties discos and to hang out with his friends and as well as girls… due to which his grandfather is very much upset… he thought armaan will ruin his life like this… so he made a decision….and call the lawyers … and make a will….

Next day…..

When armaan get up K.K ( his right hand, best friend, manager, and always help him to solve his problems) came and told him that dad ji is calling him and all lawyers are in the house… and calling armaan…

When armaan came down and saw his dada ji with lawyers he got worried…and asked to his dada ji " dada ji ye sub kya hai… ye saare lawyers ghar par kaya kar rahe hai…???

" tum mere baat sunnte nahi ho is liye main apni will tayyar kar raha hoon… aur is will mein kya likha hia ye sharma sahib tumhe bataye gaaye…."

"Sharma sahib armaan ko will parah kar batiye…" said armaan's grand father…

Sharam sahib " is will ke mutabik… agar aane waale 1 mahine ke aandar aandar aap ne shaadi nahi ki toh.... Mallik empire aur saari property trust ko de de jaayi gaayi aur aap ka uss property se ko leena deena nahiho gaaya…. Aap ko apne kharche khud hi poore karne ho gaaye… kuch bhi nahi mille gaaya yahaan tak ki mallik mansion se bhi nikkal diya jaaye gaaya…"

" what sh---aaa---ddi… main koi shaadi vaadi nahi karo gaaya… mujhe nahi karni shaadi… aur ye galat hai aap mujhe property se be dakhaal nahi kar saakte… " said armaan in a shocked and irritating tone….

" who main kuch nahi jaanta… will bann chuki ab is ko koi nahi badal saakta sivaye mere… agar tumhe property chaayiye… toh shaadi toh karni para gaayi… warna jaao yahaan se…" said jai in a strict tone…

" BIG D BIG D aap hi dada ji ko samjiye naa… main shaadi nahi kar saakta.. Mujhe shaadi nahi karni ye kaise sharat hai… pls help me…" said armaan pointing toward her grand mother…

" main kahe rahi thi ki…."


" tum toh chup hi raho tumhare laad pyarki wajaa se hi aaj ye itna bigar gaaya hai. Ki kiss ki nahi sunnta… shaadi toh karni hi para gaayi warna kuch nahi mille gaaya… samjhe.."

Now armaan was angry and irretatied… he does not want to loss his property as well as his freedom by getting married… he rudely left from there….

Armaan " sunna tum ne K.K dada ji ne kya kaha shaadi aur main…. Mujhe toh aaj taksamajh nahi aaya ki koi insaan apni poori zindagi kiss ek ladaki ke saath kaise bita leete hai… at least main toh aisa nahi kar saakta.. You know me naa.."

K.K " do not worry sir aap dad ji ko toh jaante hi hai naa…unnka gussa toh bus kuch derr ka hi hai… kuch derr main sub theek ho jaaye gaaya aur phir aap waise hi masti kijye gaaya…jaise aap karte hai…"

" I think you are right… dada ji kuch derr main sub bhool jaaye gayye… "

Next day….

On break fast table " tum ne kuch socha shaadi ke bare mein…" asked dad ji while having his break fast with armaan…

Armaan thought till that day he forget about marriage and blah blah.. But he was wrong… now again dad ji start asking from him about his marriage…..

" main kuch ladakiyaan tumhare liye pasand ki hai…. Tum unn se mil leena aachi hai parahe likhi hai aache parivaar se hai… ye rahi unn ki photos… dekh lo…." Said dada ji showing him some photographs…

" no dada ji not again aap phir se shrumaat ho jaayi main kaha naa main shaadi nahi kar saakta…. Toh bus nahi kar saakta… and that's final…"

" kyun kar saakta shaadi,… I want the reason…."

" kyun ki…. Kyun ki ….." Armaan was fumbling with words…

" kyun ki sir shaadi kar chukke hai..is liye who shaadi nahi kar saakte…" said k.k. While enterning… both armaan and dada ji become shocked…

" kya armaan shaadi kar chukka hai… par kab kyun kaise bataya kyun nahi… aur us ski biwi kahaan hai…???? " dada ji asked all questions in a one tone….

" who kya hai naa dada ji sir aap ko bata nahi paa darr rahe the… aur shaadi abhi hi hui hai… kuch dinno pehle aur… madam yanni ki in ki biwi London gaayi hai kyun ki unnke maa ki tabiet theek nahi thi unnhe heart attack hua tha… aur unnke aate hi aap ko sub batene waale the…"

" theek hai…. Par tum bahu ko phone karo aur kaho ki main uss se milna chhata hoon…. Jalad se jalad…" said dadaji in angry tone and left…

While armaan remain shocked all the time…

"How dare you k.k tum aise kaise kahe diya ki main shaadi kar li hai… ab main dada ji se kya kaho gaaya… aur meri saari girl friends unn ka kya ho gaaya…"

" do not worry sir kuch nahi ho gaaya ye main is liye kiya kyun ki dada ji aap ko roj roj pooch pooch kar tang kar rahe the… ab aap kahe dijye ki aap ki biwi London gaayi hai kuch dinno bad aayi gaayi , phir dekhe gaaye ki kya karma hai…"

" theek hai… thank you k.k hope so ki ab koi problem nahi ho gaayi…" and took a breath of relif…

On the other side:-

It has been two days that riddhima has lost her mother…..she was very upset as she has no one in this whole world.. She does not like her step father…. In night when she was trying to sleep… she heard her father ( ravi) talking to some one.. " tum chintaa maat karo… riddhima ko le jaao mere sivaye usska hai hi kaun… ek maa thi jo marr gaayi… ab riddhima tumhari hai…. Par mujhe mere paise chhiyee… samjhe aur who bhi poore 50,000… " on listening this riddhima get utter shock she knew her father is a wrong person.. But can not imagin that he is solding her just sake for money to bought alcohol…she quickly pack her important stuff and also take address from her mother's diary and ran away from back door … so that no one can see her….

On reaching station she took ticket of Mumbai.. To her luck train had just arrived for Mumbai and will leave the palce in 10 minutes.. She sat in it and left her small town…

Precap:- ar meet and many more…….

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Posted: 15 years ago
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guys there is the next part....
as comments are very low so i hope to close this thread.... guys comment whether you want to read this or should i close it......

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey chahat.....
it's really interesting...............plz continue............
prinnia😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part
now it will get intrersting
plz update sooooooonnnnnnnnnnn

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