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Posted: 15 years ago

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my exams end 2mrw....i will upd last part 2mrw friends....bye...luv u all...jeni...

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

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so finally u r posting ur next parts
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Posted: 15 years ago

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gonna be big end i suppose....party for ending....love u all

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jeni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#175

~Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow. – Anonymous~
Last part…..so here goes my last part of this ff if not 2day I will be dragging more,I will be changing my mind often which I hate a lot…here goes a long long upd friends so waiting for ur longgggg comments….lolz…… read this final part…hope its not boring…u all bared me for long time…really it was great support , u all came with ur sweet comments which I always love…yet I will miss it like a hell for this ff….little more u were all supporting me even I was dragging like anything…nor simply scribbling…sooo I love you all forever….had nice time wrtting my ff… yet made u all wait a long…great great sorry….a brief para I hope to stop with this…else I will going on scribbling….now read and comment……

Last part

Nupur who was seated in the garden was filled with her own thoughts…it had been 2 weeks now she is in her friends house at bangalore, she was missing everybody…specially mayank…
"I NEVER WANTED THIS TO HAPPEN ONCE AGAIN IN MY LIFE TIME"….mayank I really miss you a lot,i really hate these 2 weeks..yet its going to be the reality, I don't deserve u and ur luv mayank , I should try to start my life here…better to try for a job…I cant go to mom, dad…gujan…what should I do now…….why mayank didn't say about his love? Is he sacrificed his love for her….

She still cant think how she came from ooty leaving mayank to the hell shock…..at her point of view she couldn't judge out the reason…our whom should be blamed out of what had happened out suddenly..,she wanted mayank to live with his love…the girl whom he loves…
What had happened that night after mayank left her……without willingly she scrolled back her thoughts….

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😉😉(ha ha ha flash back starts)😉😉
Continuity From Where I ended last part….

She was struggling to open her mouth….she drying her lips with her tounge she opened her mouth asking mayank "do you really love me?" asked with a deep voice not looking at him…
(If he had answered without playing nothing would have happened)
He moved away from her saying silly question nupur…
Ofcourse it should be a silly question for you mayank she said angry drooling over her voice.
He looked up confusingly seeing her angry…
Just then there came raj's voice mayank, come else I would be caught please….nupur pulled him out running to her room. Mayank was pulled back to raj's house safely.

Nupur was thinking a lot within her…..she knows mayank love her...yet something disturbing her heart….

my eyes searching only for u….
I hate myself trying to be away from u…
when I meet ur eyes…
i often ask myself , is that love…..
But why does this love gives me pain...
Is that pain….i could simply say a no….
yet
I love to say a something more special i find only for him….
But
Wanted him to realize, he is important for me
I do expect to hear something special from him…
Is that am I waiting to hear….i really wanted to move away…
From all , never would do that….
Yet I have hope my first and foremost love….
A true love…which am I waiting for so long…
Her heart beat sounds harder
single thought of him coming closer and proposing her
What if he says that he hates me…
She knows nor to say truly she believes
Only girl in mayanks life is nupur…
May be if not he says his true feeling….
Am sure I will promise to open my own thought sure
"To him that my heart only desire for him…only him always…"
Is that meant to be a game played by both of them…
She had heard him say his love he had for her…
Wanted him loving her always….
wanted to say the love she had for him…
only one true love for him hidden….
The feeling of her seeing him with some other girl dancing around happily made her go mad…the one reason which made her go mad is that,he didn't inform her about that girl….now totally had no opinion else never wanted to start asking about the girl…..only that wanted to say that she believe in mayank…and she loves him a lot…..

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(Short end with the flash back,not an end for sure…more flash backs coming) back to nupur…..

Whats all these had happened she couldn't accept, what the Olivia had said her made realize,she Is wrong on her thought…. what is all these she is suffering for? That night after mayank went on the night, she was really happy yet wanted her feeling to come out in front of mayank…what changed her mind out…In extend of coming running out after the raj and priyas marriage…she haven't informed mayank….whats that she came as that much serious of running after leaving mayank ahead

……Present……

she looked up as it was lightnening heavily turned to see her friend damini calling her loudly holding her baby on the hands making nupur to come to the reality…
nupur to herself thank god damini doesn't know anything, she closed her eyes tightly making sure nothing is shown on her face….
she went near damini asking why are you shouting like this ?
Nupur! Get inside…am just moving out right now….
Moving out but were dami, leave yalini(2 yr old baby of damini & prithvi) to me and go…
No nupur…just now pritvi called me, his papa wanted to see yalini, so we 3 are moving u like to join us ah…
No damini am not feeling well…you guys move and have fun…nupur tried saying smilingly.
But nupur…damini was struggling out with her words…
No but nothing..just move…bye…
Ok nupur u be safe here , better to lock the door…
Okay dear I will lock….dont worry I will be safe…
She stood as her friend moved with her baby, damini is really very caring friend of her…but to her surprise she believed her…saying that it was surprise that she had been there to meet her….
But why is that she is giving some evil smile when she is moving out ….better nothing special there…..nupur went inside locking the door….yet she warned herself to be careful In front of her friend…. Damini was not that much easy to handle…she too asked once

whats that troubling you nupur…
dami plz nothing like that just came to see u and prithvi…
be free to disuss anything to me nupur
oh common dami if anything troubled me I will inform u for sure….
Just that damini had left with that….nupur made her mind to be careful for sure…..
will mayank think of me murmuring louder she entered her room …nupur just stop thinking about him,she warned herself…suddenly she was pulled to a tight hug saying…
nupur do you think, I will forget you……nor stop thinking of u...

more coming soon....

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago

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jeni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#176

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Mayank who had left her that night, for sure know something is troubling her…what was that? yet he felt bad
Why is she affecting me a lot …
Why cant she believe my love…
Is that hard for her to love me
Or am I
Wrong anywhere not proving my love for her…
I know for sure that she loves me..
Why is she still holding on to say…
Is that much harder to accept her feeling…
Nupur your really a big surprise for me in this world…
Really sweet surprise, do I want to accept my love for u..
Why cant you see the love for you in my eyes..

Mayank slept with his thoughts that night having more of nupur's dreams..That whole week went with fun not leaving a time for both of them to talk alone…both waited for perfect time for them to talk in alone…both felt comfortable with each other…

raj & priya marriage happened in a grand manner...all were filled with total fun…and the situation was fine till nupur saw the girl…same girl whom she saw that night dancing with mayank on the club, was now tightly holding on his hands were standing very close to him…he too was very comfortable with her laughing all over.

Nupur just a second paniced , after few seconds she changed her mind more hardly trying to think positively
Nupur she may be her friend,she consoled herself…you na always spot over fault…she smiled and turned to do some other work…was stopped by Olivia …

Nupur your not angry seeing varshu…

Angry, but y should i be angry...by the way…who is varshu?…olivia asked nupur

Oh just you never knew that matter na…am sorry…be careful with that girl…
Nupur too kept her face seriously and asked which girl dear….why she will kill us huh…she laughed..
Mmmh more than that,she will do anything be careful…don't allow her near mayank.
Just then nupur caught with a girl whom Olivia talking was none other than that unkown girl..
She made a face and asked whats her name?
She is varsha, nupur…from college days, she too was one among our gang…moreover she and mayank were caught up with some fire…

Fire did they both got injured ah, nupur was serious enough….
Arey nupur…not that fire…I mean love…there were some problems and so they both got separated.
What?what are you saying?nupur couldnt ask more....yet listened to olivia

Haan baba I thought mayank would have told you this before …Olivia thought she would take that much serious on this issue…she continued…one more varsha told they both recently met on a club and she had asked him sorry for the problems and they had solved their problems…hope nothing would spoil your lovely pair…yet you should be careful around her….

Nupur could no long hear more..started moving was stopped by that varsha, near by mayank was standing,
Hai nupur so she is your wife the girl whom you rejected my proposal huh….sorry not rejected…sacrificed huh…
Varsha please not now….mayank smilingly warning…

mayank really ur good sacrificer...

Nupur looked at both as she saw him smiling with her…how dare he smile for this….mayank you had missed out such beautiful girl in your life…
Mayank who was in mood off pulling over nupur said, actually I missed her…this I love this sacrifice nupur he smiled at her not knowing that she is burning enough…

Sacrifice, in what type mayank…nupur really tried hard sounding normal…

Varsha inteferred saying love….what else you what name….haa nupur….
Nupur who left them both were no where available anywhere….just reached daminis house..sacrification not needed anymore was her words written on a chit before she left from ooty....

She the only reason and problem for mayank in his life.she was the only disturbance mayank and varsha had…she could no more think of anything just left from there….crying is the only solution she found for these 2 weeks till now…now mayank can enjoy his life with varsha his love…

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😃😃Flashback ends…😃😃

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago

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jeni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#177

................................................back to present…..................................................

nupur do you think, I will forget you……

mayank you…shedding tears he asked, what are you doing here?she tried to act as if she is normal…
so nupur do you think ur smart enough…
what? Whats that for mayank….
Then you thought I cant search you…
Mayank , how do you know this place….
Well prithvi was there for information, what else…
Prithvi oh that's what damini was smiling off huh…she doent know fully na….mayank sorry for disturbing you.
Stop it there nupur,stop your stupid talk….it shows how fool ur............... making fool of urself is not that much good.
Mayank am not a fool ok…..just leave me alone and move from this place right now mayank…I don't deserve you…you better marry varsha….no need to sacrifice anything...
Nupur you think I will leave u that much easier….your my life, I will not leave you soon….until I die..u put this right inside ur mind
She closed his mouth with her soft hands not leaving him to continue…I thought you love varsha…….

Varsha…ohhh varsha Is playing a big role in your mind huh?mayank who was struggling without reason was left with no words that night when nupur was missing out…he was like nothing…yet these 2 weeks were more enough….he was searching for more reasons of nupur leaving him all alone without any details….with that small chit....
Before nupur continued with mayank closed her mouth with his hands and said you now listen to me fully…

I had fallen in love when I saw u for the first time
Mayank….tears rolling down nupurs cheeks hearing him …
Ssssh let me continue nupur plz….It would be difficult enough for u to accept that for you….you may not even believe this….I the one insited uncle for our marriage…Only reason behind never wanted to miss you in my life anywhere..Nor for anyone…
I love you nupur he was more emotional
Nupur hugged him saying mayank I too love you….
I know nupur you love me…listen…only you…only girl special to be in my life is you nupur….i like to share my whole life time with you…first promise me you will not leave me once again…

I will there in your whole life time mayank, will never ever leave you once….will never do this stupidity….i will pull you even if your trying hard to bare me….i love you mayank…

Both hugged each other tightly…nupur wanted him to finish what ever he wanted to say….

You know onething nupur….i thanked god for the marriage that had happened suddenly …..it made me change lot…I enjoyed your presence…only the love I had for you opened my heart to me…I roamed all over freely…happily…as a different person…I wanted to say thanks to you in special way…I waited for you to forget that bitch rahul…I know you had nothing for rahul…I saw you smile in relief when I stopped the marriage…that gave me hope for marrying you….i talked to uncle….no one knows that…
Rahul….hoye oye you were jealous…mr. mayank Sharma being jealous…she smiled with a relief.
Ya why not more over like my sweet wife being jealous of varsh..
Just nupur started mmmh varsha…sorry mayank
Nupur nothing bigger it showed how u love me, and me jealous of rahul showed you my love for u..…..
Mayank now I hate myself for not believing you…
I too hate you left me all alone there…
Sorry mayank…olivia said you both were fallen in love on college days…
Oh hoo Olivia na just laughed…she may be kidding or lying…yet full story is that…yes varsha loved me…but I don't her…you got it….oli na she will build the extensive story...
Nothing more to explain mayank…I understand…listen…
I will finish..no more days I wanted to spend on talking and wasting time with my lovely wife…I have a lot off work to do said winking at her…seeing her blushing badly…nupur you look so cute when you blush…
Mayank stop it finish your explanation…
Mmmmh mayank took a deep breath and said…after a long time I met varsha on that night club….she said…she had been encaged…throwing on party…that's were I had went for the meeting…so she throwed me party too
Ohhh so that's what you were dancing with her leting your feeling flowing on the floor huh…said more with expression…
Nupur how did you know that…
Well I was there in the party with Sammy…in search of gunjan….
Gunjan ,Sammy he dragged…
Both love each other mayank..t

hat sounds great…great couple just like both of us....he continued

Mmmh yet on that wedding night…varsha was just teasing you for what I had made lot of list on your beauty to her…she was surprised to see me like that describing a girl..
I too was playing with her without knowing you were burning..she loved you a lot dear...

Mayank that's enough….plz am feeling sleepy…lets talk in the morning…

Sleep so soon he stopped her who moved in front of him crossing over…he picked her up saying…your punishment is on pending honey…don't think off ur sleep anymore…he winked at her…

Note – I tried up for some poem but lolz not succeded ha ha ha ha better say ur reviews about those green colored lines….specially waiting for ur scoldings.…..great I love criticism yet some appreciation too if I am the one who deserves…lolz….going more crazy on ending it I guess…its very very long na….i will typing more and more so I have taken my hand out of my keyboard….

hold not an perfect ending u have got on..................
One more surprise is there I will end this with a romantic epilogue….now comment really a long part na...no pmz now....pmz will come later....sorry for that...am feeling sleepy right now....u all liked this ending huh...bit more romance on stack for you all on epilog....i will post that 2mrw itself...thx for spending ur time reading my ff......luv u all jeni...

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago