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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome update....

dont forget to pm me..

update soon

Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey, Lina

I read all parts..

Plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

continue soon, dear

I am waiting for update

And thanks for PM, dear

Love,
$hrey@
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey!
cool FF
plzz do PM me when u update
-Jassi
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh it wasmindblowing
conti...soon
and me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
Omg omg omg dis is really scary ff man da starting was so funny Sammy scared of sheena lol haha n den omg omg gunji had dream abt Sammy proposing her awww n den mayu lol he was laughing of Sammy lol n den der journey da accident da white woman so creepy n den da havallli damn creepy n da servant omg da way he was staring at the gang omg omg n den gunji seeing dead body in tub n sayank n gunji seeing hands n all in refregerator omg omg n den nups reading da book n dats wat happening to mjht gang also omg btw dis kinda remind me of Krishna cottage anyways u r really gr8 in writing scary parts lol superb continue soon n plz add me in ur pm list plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 1
It is the last day of collage. Everyone seems to enjoy, except the four of them; Mayank, Nupur, Samrat, and Gunjan. They are sitting, watching everyone have fun in the last prom.
Gunjan- Guys, I can't believe today is the last day of collage.
Nupur- I know.
Samrat- So whta? HWe will always be together, right?
Nupur- Exactly !!
Gunjan- We will miss you both.
Samrat- Kyun chashmish, you two going anywhere?
Mayank- Haan, humare purane ghar mein, in Goa.
SaNu- What??????!!!
Nupur- You shouldn't go there!
Samrat- Yeah, after that accident-
Mayank- Guys jusr relax, woh poorani baat hai.
SaNu glance at each other.
Mayank- Waise bhi, humko wahan jaane ka shock nahi hai, just that mom dad business trip mein kal London jaa rahein hai, and we have to go there, dadimom ke paas.
Nupur- I am telling you, yeh acha idea nahi hai.
Gunjan- We have to.
Nupur- Par-
Samrat- We will go qith you !!
Nupur"What???!!" & Mayank"Really???!!"
Samrat- Yeah sure, if there is no problem !!!
Gunjan - Are you kidding, of corse not !!! Just imagine kitna mazza ayye ga, us four again in Goa.
SaNu smiles, but they know this is not good. They shouldn't go there again.
Samrat- Ok now, lets enjoy guys, it's our last day in collage.
They all have fun in the prom, and later they go home.
In Nupur's house
Nupur reading a book, in her night gown. Her phone rings, and she puts the phone down,wondering who is calling her this late. It is Samrat.
Nupur- Haan bolo.
Samrat- Nupur woh-
Nupur- Sam, have you lost it?? How can we go there?? You know what happened?? Right?
Samrat- Yeah, but did u see, they have to go , and we just can't leave them alone there, right? Aur waise bhi, you don't believe in any ghost?
Nupur- Well of corse not. I guess it's not that bad.
Samrat - That's like my Nupur.
Nupur- Acha bye, have to go to sleep soon .
Samrat- Goodnight.
She closed her cell phone, and then lye down, closing the lamps, going into deep sleep.
In Mayank's house
The tv is on, Mayank lying on the sofa in their living room all wrapped up in his blanket.
Gunjan going in the kitchen to drink water, and she sees him there. She goes up to him.
Gunjan- Bhaii??Yahan living room mein???
Shr realizes he is sleeping, and smiling in his dreams. He holds her hand, still dreaming.
Mayank- Nupur....you look beautiful.... I really love you.....
Gunjan thinking- I wish you can tell her that bro, what would be better than having Nupur as my bhabhi?? Dekhna I will deffi help you get my bhabhi.
Gunjan covers him with a blanket, turns of the tv, and leaves.
Nupur- By god Samrat, you and your lame jokes.
All three of us starts laughing again. Samrat and Gunjan standing together, still laughing, as my laugh dissapeared, after I saw a shadow.
Nupur- Guys wait, mein abhi aayi.
I start to go after it, Outside it is very dark. The full moon moving across the sky, one could trace if the eyes were patient enough to follow. I tied to keep up with the shadow, following it to a place I have never been before. A mansion. Why do I keep thinking I have been here before?? Why? Memories keeps flashing into my head.
~Flashbacks~
I could see Mayank in his frontyard with Samrat and Gunjan. They all seemed so happy, after all today it is Mayank's birthday. He just turned 13. I continued staring at them. As soon as he sees me, he smiles, and starts coming towards me, crossing the street. I just stood there, all dumbstruck. He joins me on my front steps. He askes me why I'm so scared of that mansion, and I tell him that he wouldn't believe me.
Mayank- Try me *His deep eyes looking into hers*
He leans closer to me. I hesitate. Oh how much I want to tell someone what I had seen in that stupid mansion. But grown-up's will think I had great imaganation and laugh at me, and so would the other. But I am sure Mayank would understand.
Nupur- Mayank, there is something-
~Flashback ends~
The words echoeing in the air.
- somthing in that mansion.
Here I am standing in front of it again. Theplace is very dark, only light seem to be coming from that mansion. I continued staring at it, the huge trees by it, casting huge shadows. The door opens. A feeling insdie me saying :Foolish girl, why did you return here?" but I put that feeling aside, and headed towards it.
I was wrong when I thought that the only light seemed to be coming from this place, because inside here was even more darker than outside.
"Rati???"
I start looking around. I could barely see anything. But this voice, I have heard it before. Dunno when, but I have. Sounds like some little girl.
:Oh Rati, I knew you would come back for me."
I see a light all of the sudden, a bright light. I put my hands over to cover my eyes.
Her mom shakes her. She still putting her hands over to cover her eyes.
NM- Nupur???
Nupur- Haan???? Woh...woh.....awaaz???
NM- Nupur you were just dreaming, Bas ek sapna tha. Now get up, Mayu, Gunjan, and Samrat is waiting outside in the living room.
She sits down on her bed.
Nupur thinking-Woh sapna phir se???!!!
She gets up, gets ready, and then goes outside. Sajan sits in the car, and Mayank goes in the back, to help Nupur put her bag in the trunk, and then they too sit inside, and Mayank drives off.
hey everyone.... I know everyone mad at me, for not continueing this FF for a long time.
But do forgive me na !!
I am really sorry for that !!!
anywayzz do comment !!
n haan do welcome Thanu, she will be my partner in this FF
she will also update part 2!
do comment na !!!
will cont soon
if u all want to
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow lina
this surprise was aazing
i am so glad that i got your update
and i love it like anything
i can't tell how amazing it is
i got scraed too
but i know darna marna hai
aur agar daar gayi toh nupur ka nuska apply kar lungi
jai hunuman gyan gun sagar
sorry par aage ki lines mujhe nahi aati
update soon
luv
mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
i totally loved this part
just awesome
the interactions, amazing
thanks for the pm

love
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey amazing sis
loved it
i will do the next part soon
thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
linu u really updated 😲
it was really a surprise šŸ˜†
it was amazing...phir bhul math jaana...
will be waiting for ur next update šŸ˜‰

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