Taming the wild 2- ANNOUNCEMENT pg-151

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aarora

@aarora

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Posted: 15 years ago

#801

hey very nice update sweety..loved it..seems like u have a great sense of humor..lol..really..Armaan's diary first page was AWESOME..no words for it..i better use it for my personal book..lol...i so hoped Riddhima will read some important details but that stupid Armaan had to come..Armaan-Angel bond was really cute..finally atleast one thing out..such a small issue n i thought something huge will come out..hope more mysteries will be solved in next part..like the way AR's relation is progressing but still WAITING for Vivek..continue soon..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

PS: let Abhi-Nikki in brief..not in detail plz..just a suggestion..do as its comfortable for u !!

Edited by aarora - 15 years ago

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: daring66
mansi di hi dear
2nd option bahot bardiya okies

i mean we can't get enough of them in

one part and u are delaying

one part more to reveal

their secret na na i'm not delaying yaar maine to kabka bahut saara likh bhi liya aur wo bada ho raha tha to thoda sa dusre part main shift bhi kar diya

you can't do that to me or us

no part without AR no yaar not wothout AR bas thode time ke liye AR ki jagah AN ho jaatemagar ab nahi hoga.. ab to bas passing main aayenge thode thode

and mansi di have question for you

yaar vivek kya kya character hai i mean

when are u planing

to revel his true colour

comeon

i am dying that he will take ridhima away

from poor armaan atleat yeh toh batado ki

kaunse part main update karne ka irada hai

aur hai bi ja nahi meri ma,,, hehe 😆 even i dont know yaar but i think ki shayad 50 something main aayega... dont know the exact number

and woh she said yes to vivek just because everybody like

that was relief

i mean hope is there that she does not umm may b 😉

love him its just she like him

and i still remembered that when she called him (vivek )there was a girl voice

well i read three time the whole FF again

can't get enough of it my my someone is addicted... thanks yaar 😃

well where did he ran away pata chal jayega have patience and really liked

the way the story is processing

hmmm know that ridhima is determine to

get all secret revealed yupp she is the little detective 😉

them she might fall in love with him or she

already had

there are soo masny question just waiting

for u to answer sab milenge bachhe bas thoda sa sabr rakho

welll regaArds

can't wait for the next part

hmmmmmm 😃😃

bye mansi di for now see you soon

LOVE HEAVEN love u too dear

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maanu

@maanu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#803

hey.... mansi..

111 is a gud nos......

u can upate on that page......

infact all nos r equally gud until there ur story......

u must be thinking ki kya yaar har roz pareshan karne aa jate hai ye devils.......

par kya kare......... u write soo well that i m hooked to it......

and waiting is the worst possible thing to do.........

hope u not upset when i clled u gayab jallad ......

and if so.......... then also its fine...........coz ..... u desereve that ok.......

but seriously just kidding.

bye

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zesty.me

@zesty.me

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#804

nooooo plz dnt write abt thm in detail

coz i dnt wanna read any part without ar

plzzzz

the second option is much better

little abt evry1 is much better thn the detailed ones

i really loved the parts

best was the scene between angel n ammy

continue sooooooon

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#805

hey mansi
plz yaar dont throw AR outta ur forthcoming parts :(
do include AN but not as u do with AR... coz primarily its an AR ff na plzzz
dont do this tragedy with us

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ambryn

@ambryn

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#806

2nd option is better... dont want any1 except AR....

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

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Posted: 15 years ago

#807

Hey Mansi ... regarding your AN question ... ummmm maybe you could give glimpse of what's happening in their life. Nikki was an important bit in Armaan's life and there was a time when even Riddhima thought that Armaan and Nikki's feelings are mutual. So could be from that perspective you could include. But please please please keep the story revolving around AR. Its just a suggestion though ... you could take a call as a writer and we would love to read it.

P.S. I know I haven't come back after updates for quiet some time now ... have been hell busy and work is killing me :(

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Killer

@Hello_01

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#808

hey - i have read whole story in two days... just finishd off now.... and read ur note on pg 106

i will be a regular reader .... commenter too lolz

Will be glad if u could add me in your pm list -- warna, no probs.... i can find ya ! :)

well the FF, iss something unique in it self.... u are a writer -- that has created such delightfull riter.... i liked whole FF ... nd lookng for the next part - hope that you update soon !

I soo felt bad for ARman.... as he really loved her - but she didnt - i was like in every part - Poor Arman compromised ... just to get a Riddimaa in his life for eve... he is such a sweet heart - nd i felt so bad for him - that he had no one for him own - to whom he can talk his heart out -

only if he had some own then he would have never kept a dariy.... Riddimaa surely needs to make herself trustworthy enough, so that he could tell all her 'Personal things' which he didnt told her

I felt very pity for arman - and mostly in the last few parts that muskan took him rong but thanks to Riddimaa - she actd as a perfect human beng - though once in a blue she do good deeds lol

Unexpectd - delightful FF.... different from other FFs....

Happy with the work.

Thanks........... for ritng, keep on ritng...

P:S, YOU ASKEd a question, well i hope i allowed to answer too lolz, I want Arman and Riddimaa to be focused here in this FF... please No Abhi and Nikki - the fruit of the FF will be finish off - though i know, she was a past of Arman - but that not a big deal .! he did gave an Option to which she decline - so i guess her majo part is over - as per me.... you could fall on the story once the wild man - gets change in to a sweet person - who can avoid hid enemity For niki

But its not necessary as per now the flow .... No offend... just an idea. - last Decision should be yourrs and it is yours.

Maha

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Jinalee

@Jinalee114

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Posted: 15 years ago

#809

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!! n con gratz on completing 100 pages!!!!!!!!!🥳 🤗

great update sweetie! 👏

i luved the warning on armaan's diary....lol 😆

n i especially luved the armaan-angel scene!....sooooo cute n sweet!

n i would not like 2 c abhi n nikki's part of the story only sometimes.....i mostly want 2 read abt armaan n riddhima

update soon!

tc! 😃

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Anisha Sharma

@MrsMallikGrover

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#810

Hey Mansi 😃

amazing update hun.👏👏So lengthy and i must say i love the way you write.Everything is in such detail and well you really should become an author.I loved the whole trip.and well Pam is a pain in the bum.She tryed her best to make Riddhima seem like nothing to Armaan but it didnt work..AR are soulmates and that game was simply adorable.She guessed Armaan right by seeing his dimples! How cute😉? lol.😆

ANd the apple tree..mhm her and vivek dont seem like thier in love at all..it was just that well he is popular and my dad likes him so why shouldent I?Well she will know that Armaan is meant for her one day.

And i loved her thoughts when Armaan was taking her to the cottage.Lol😆

It was really sweet of Armaan to give up his blanket to riddhima in the night and then it was sweet of riddhima to drive home and also make the food for Armaan😳..Lol she really was strict and showed her other jungli billi side.LOL

i also loved the bra part😆..Haha poor riddhima...she was yelling at him and then bam he turned out to be right..Lol

Altogethor i loved the update so much! It was filled with such cute moments of love and laughter.⭐️

*Sorry for the late comment*-Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Luv Anu😳

Edited by MrsMallikGrover - 15 years ago