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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyy anshika

sorry for the late comment
liked both the parts 17 n 18
i cant believe this is the second last part of this ff
i will miss this ff
but will be waiting for ur new ff
plzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm




it's ok Seema!!
aww...
thanx a lottt!
i will try!
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Posted: 15 years ago

really nice dear thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_awan

really nice dear thanks 4 pm




thanx a lot Maria!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
annu yaar chapal ke jarurat nahi hein tuje mahi apne itne sweet comment se he maar degi
tuje new ff start karne hogi agar tu isse and ker rahi hien
samaji
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

annu yaar chapal ke jarurat nahi hein tuje mahi apne itne sweet comment se he maar degi
tuje new ff start karne hogi agar tu isse and ker rahi hien
samaji




aww...btw Adi...maine socha toh hai ki kuch likhungi...par kya...yeh toh mujhe bhi nai pata!! =P
sum ideas???
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update...
But it was quite short...
Continue soon with a big one...

Take Care
Zoyaa
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Awesome update...
But it was quite short...
Continue soon with a big one...

Take Care
Zoyaa





thanx Zoya....
okies...nxt part will be long!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part- 19

Samrat started 'oh my parents are living in france. They left only 2 years ago. Both Gunjan and Nupur had seen them and know them. I didn't want to leave india, so I didn't go with them. Now they are not a big part of my life but still, they are not out of it. They know about me and Gunjan.' He paused. 'by the way if you don't mind shall I tell you one more thing?'

As all nodded he continued 'my parents liked Nupur more than Gunjan, but then, I had already told them to not keep any hopes from me which I couldn't accomplish. So they agreed.'

'ohh..' said Gunjan.

'anyways...now it's Mayank's turn!' said Gunjan.

'okies!' Mayank said 'I didn't see my father. He died in a car accident when my mother was pregnant with me. But she took care of me very well. I love her. But she lives in banglore and she sent me here because it was my wish to once visit Mumbai...I even got a scholarship and I used it. Woh bohot rich nai hain, par unhone mujhe kabhi koyi kami nai hone di. And yea...she's just like Nupur!' he ended!

'now chipkali's turn' said Gunjan.

'hmm...you all have already met my father. He lives in morena which is a small city. My mother died 2 and half years ago due to brain cancer which had reached her skin too. So when she died my father used to feel very bad for me and lonely too. So now he has got some PGs at home to enjoy with- good mannered and trustable ones! And then he sent me here to continue my studies.'

'hey guys...did you notice one thing? I and Mayank don't have our dad. I and Nupur don't have our mom.' Said Gunjan.

'and me...mere paas mom aur dad dono ho kar bhi koyi nai hai' Samrat said.

'hey...don't say like that...plss' said Mayank 'so chipkali madam...ab hame sab ki families ke bare mein pata hai?'

'hawww...how dare you call me chipkali? You don't have the right' she stood up. All others stood up too.

Nupur took a cushion and threw it at Mayank.

'it means I have the right?' said Gunjan modestly.

Nupur took another cushion and threw it at Gunjan. She bent and it hit Samrat.

'ouch. Mujhe kyo maar rahi ho? I didn't say a word' said Samrat and threw back the cushion at Nupur but it hit Gunjan.

She glared at Samrat as he made puppy face holding his ear. And she took another cushion to throw at nupur, and one at Samrat. Nupur took the cushion and threw it at Mayank.

'hey...why me?' asked Mayank.

'because you said me chipkali.'

'ab agar tum chipkali ho toh isme meri kya galti hai?' and he threw back the cushion.

Gunjan laughed.

Nupur threw back the cushion at Mayank and took a cushion from Samrat to hit Gunjan.

They all started hitting each other like that. They all were enjoying it!

It was fun!

'hello guys!' said someone from the door

All 4 stopped and stared at the door when Mayank immediately shockingly said 'maaa????'

'haan!' she said.

'kyaa???' said other 3.

'uffho. Maa tum yaha? Kab kyo kaise?' asked Mayank.

'kitna bolne lag gaya hai tu yaha aake mayu. Actually I got transferred to Mumbai! So I thought of giving you a surprise.' Said MM (Mayank's Mom), 'waise agar tu nai chahta toh main waapas chali jaati...' she said turning but then immediately turned back and said 'lekin I'm sorry main wapas nai jaa sakti ab.'

'namaste aunty' said Gunjan.

'namaste Gunjan' replied MM, 'Hello Nupur and Samrat.'

'uhh...hello...I mean mamaste' said Nupur.

'hey...don't worry. Main Mayank ki tarah nahi hu. you can feel comfy with me.' Said MM.

'oh hi aunty!' said Samrat excitedly, 'Mayank aunty aayi hain aur tu unka samaan bhi nai le sakta...'

'arre haan.' He said taking MM's things from her, 'par maa aap yaha kyo aayi? Aur aapko yaha address kaise pata?'

'tujhe nai samajh aaya? Yaad hai yaha aane se pehle tune mujhse baat ki thi when you told me that you're going to Nupur's house so I asked you where it was and you recited he address which I noted down and everything became easy for me, without you being suspicious!' said MM.

'aapko hamara naam kaise pata?' asked Gunjan.

'chuhiya madam, aunty ko andar toh aane do' interrupted Nupur, innocently.

Gunjan glared at her, MM smiled.

'beta Mayank ne mujhe kuch photos bheji thi through internet and he also identifies you for me. BTW usme sabse zyada...nupur ki photos thi' MM said to tease Mayank and Nupur.

Nupur looked at Mayank with a I-will-not-spare-you look, while Mayank replied with a mum's-like-that-only look.

'Ok ok...baad mein jhagad lena tum dono...abhi mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai...andar chalein?' by MM.

'hm...kya batana hai?' said Nupur.

They all went to the living room and seated themselves.

MM started 'mayu tujhe yaad hai woh Mr. Bhushan jinke bare mein tu mujhse kehti thi ki who tere papa ke ek dost hain.'

Mayank nodded.

She continued 'beta jab tune mujhe Nupur ke papa ke bare mein bataya toh mujhe kuch laga ki maine Mr. Bhushan ko call kiya aur kaise hi mujhe yeh pata chala ki Mr. Bhushan hi Nupur ke papa hain.'

'aap unhe jaanti hain?' asked Nupur, amused.

MM nodded.

'lekin maa woh hain kaun? I mean...' said Mayank when MM interrupted.

'beta woh tere papa ke bohot ache dost hain aur jab unki death huyi thi tab Mr. Bhushan ne hamari bohot help kari thi.' Said MM.

'haan. Aur ab main yaha hasil hu!' someone was standing at the door.

'papa????' Nupur was shocked to see her dad.

She ran to him and hugged him, and so did Gunjan.

'namaste uncle' said Mayank.

'ab aur kitne surprises baki hain?' asked Samrat.

'umm...I think just 1 more...' said ND(Nupur's dad)

'kya?' asked Gunjan.

'actually...tumhe shayad pata nahi hoga...mayank tumhare parents ki, aur hamari shaadi ek hi din huyi thi. Toh hamne pehle hi decide kiya tha ki agar humari beti aur tumhare parents ka beta, ya vica-versa....toh hum tum dono ki shaadi karvaayenge. Toh iska matlab yeh hua ki tumhari shaadi to already decided thi!' said ND.

'What?' Mayank and Nupur were shocked.

'yeah! And Samrat and Gunjan, tum dono left out feel mat karna. Main toh Gunjan ke dad jaisa hu, haina? Toh tumhari shaadi bhi ham hi karvaayenge.' Said ND.

'kya? Abhi? Shaadi? Itni jaldi? Abhi toh humne padhayi bhi poori nai kari hai.' Said Nupur.

MM chuckled and said 'arre abhi nahi. Hum toh bata rahe hain bas. Taaki kahi baad mein tum logo ka plan na change ho jaaye.'

'ohh...' Nupur felt embarrassed.

'uncle, aap toh yaha 1 mahina ruk ke jaayenge na? pichli baar kitni jaldi chale gaye the.' Said Gunjan.

'1 mahina?? Nahi. Main toh 1 week ke liye rukunga. Waise agar tum chaho toh main pehle bhi jaa sakta hu.' teased ND.

'nahiii' said Nupur and Gunjan.

'ok!'

'toh ab sab apne apne ghar chalo. Bohot raat ho gayi hai. Ab kal baatein karenge.' Said MM.

'hmm...mujhe bohot neend aa rahi hai, pata nahi kyo.' Said Samrat.

Everyone went to their respective homes.

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And their lives continued with such small ups and downs, but they remained best friends forever and the best couples too. And after some years they got married.

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After 5-6 years of their marriage...

'Artiiiiiiii' called Nupur, running behind her daughter.

'Arti papa ka wallet do.' She said.

'Nahi mumma. Mujhe kuch dekhne hai.' Arti said.

She too stopped running and said 'maine suna hai ki log apne wallet mein apni girlfriends ki photo lagate hain. Mujhe dekhne hai ki aapne kiski lagayi hai.'

'thik hai. Dekh lo.' Replied Mayank.

He put a hand at Nupur's waist from behind, and kissed her cheek.

Nupur whispered to him 'Mayank Arti dekh legi.'

'koi baat nahi!'

'yeh kaun hai????' said Arti, shocking both Mayank and Nupur.

Nupur glared at Mayank. She went to Arti and took the wallet from her.

Mayank too went to them and bent down. As Nupur looked into the photo Arti said 'yeh mummy jaisi lag rahi thi.'

Mayank said 'yeh meri girlfriend hai. Kaisi hai Nupur?'

It was Nupur's pic only!

'bohot achhi hai.' Nupur commented.

Mayank pulled her by waist towards himself, forgetting that Arti was also standing there, and whispered 'main jaanta hu. yeh bohot achhi hai. Meri girlfriend jo hai'

He went forward and kissed her cheeks, when Arti tugged his shirt and said 'papa aap mummy ko kisses baad mein de dena. Abhi chalo mujhe drive pe jaana hai.'

Mayank immediately left Nupur.

Nupur whispered to him 'aaj toh tumhara koi chance nahi lag raha!' and grinned.

'chalo. Chalte hain.' Mayank said...

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Pls do read it at the next post... 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok guyzzz!!
Finally this was the last part of this FF...
and plssssss don't say to continue this FF...
and I'm really really sorry 4 this stupid ending...I couldn't think of a more stupid ending than this one...
I've now got a hectic schedule these days...so I thought today ki aaj yeh kaam bhi khatam hi karo...
just wrote it...and posted too!! :P
well...next FF will start only after I get a bit relaxed with my schedule...I'm really sorry guyzzz!!

BTW...
Pls do read and comment and click at the Like tab...
I'll be waiting for your reviews...pls encourage me through them...
And silent readers pls don't be silent...you only have to type and post what you think of the update...this is the last part...pls at least comment here...
Criticisms and suggestions are mostly welcomed...!!!


Love,
Anshika
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Posted: 15 years ago
Really mast awesome :)-
so cool and rocking

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