Jiya Na Jaye part 19 page 92 (7 july/12) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Asmi2009

nice start dear.........thankuuuuuu

excited to know milind's gift......😍sochte raho😍..pl. conti.....soon i'll see

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

thanks prachi for the update .....itsss alright. plz post recap also so that we could know what had written in last update, as you update so late😆 ........ yup, it's a complaint hmmm i think u r right from next time i'll do this and thank you for your valueable advice

so there was a happy family in past ....... simple & sweet family ........ prachi had so much ppl who love her ....... prachi used to be a chirpy girl & milsi used to be a serious kind of guy ...... there are so many characters here - lalit, gayatri, neev, ayesha, varun, payal, ranveer & their family ...... prachi was in love for sure ....... neev-ayesha was also in love & they too know about michi love ....... milsi was the confused one ...... lalit love prachi & inder love milsi ....... prachi was surprised by milsi gift, what was so surprising ? ...... we also want to know ...... it was all going smooth than what happened so terrible ? yahi to surprise hai na. i'll try to update one more part of this and twisted love story before my exams.

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

suspense and suspense in the ned ...that too updated after so many months.yaar i am a student pls bear with me

i think all the FF writiers should shif the FF back to our fourum.my both ff are here only..so that we can all have our friends back. i am here😆😆

RECAP

Prachi's birthday, a sweet and small celebration in shah house.

Ranveer's entry and Milind's gift.

Part 4

Prachi was surprised to see what was in it. There was Prachi's personal diary which was lost 2 months back.

Prachi's diary was covered with pink paper and had princess stickers on it. Her diary was the most confidential property. She had written her every thought, every emotion everything. It was her best friend after Ranveer, Neev and Ayesha.

That diary was also precious because Prachi had written her fantasies about Milind. She had admitted I that she loved Milind since class tenth in that diary.

She was surprised at the same time blushing thinking about "he might have read".

Prachi was worried also if he didn't love her or he gets angry. Thousands of questions and thoughts crossed her mind. She started flipping the pages and suddenly one sheet came out of the diary. It looked like a letter, indeed it was a letter.

She read the contents of the letter.

"To the birthday girl,

You might be surprised after seeing your diary and after knowing this that I had kept it for 2 months with me and read it, you might be blushing. I know you very well.

It is very difficult to suppress your feelings. The most wonderful thing in this whole world is love.

Yes Prachi I have read your diary and your fantasies. I must say you can become a good writer. You are very good at writing. Now I know I am blabbering. Coming back to the point. I couldn't believe my luck that one whom I love also loves me. I love you! Just writing this brings smile to my face.

I don't know exactly when I fell for you. But I was scared to tell my feelings to anyone. I thought it might disturb our parents' friendship or dad and your relationship. But now when I know about your feelings I confess that I also love you.

I could have returned your diary but I couldn't muster up the courage to return it to you. Now it was your birthday so I wrapped it and then gave it to you.

If you agree then please come at temple tomorrow 5:30 am. I will be waiting for you.

And happy birthday.

From Milind"

After reading this Prachi was on cloud nine. " o my god! Is it true? Am I sleeping or just woke up after a sweet dream o god please help" thought Prachi.

It was very late in night and then tomorrow she had to wake up early, so she slept imagining what will happen tomorrow.

NEXT MORNING

Prachi hurriedly went to temple on the outskirts of chawl. Milind was already standing their in front of god, eyes shut and hands joined, praying to God. Prachi silently came and stood near him and prayed to god.

As Milind opened his eyes, after God he saw Prachi clad in yellow salwar suit. After taking the Prasad they came out of temple and began to walk in the nearby park. Both were silent and each second looked like a year to both of them "I wan'." They both started together. There was a wave of laughter. Milind started "did u read the letter?"

Prachi- silly that's why I am here

Milind- oh yes (he smiled and blushed a bit)

Prachi- Milind you look cute when you smile but you look cutest when you blush. (This made Milind more blushing)

Milind- as you know I love you and I know you love me, so what do you think of our relationship?

Prachi- what is there to think? I '

Milind ' speak up'''..

Prachi- I lo'''''''''

And she ran away.

Milind thought to himself "this girl will someday make me dead. She looks so cute when she blushes. And also those dimples when she smile."

It was 6:30 in morning and all the household chores had begun in both the houses. Premlatha was cooking lunch for Prachi and Inder as Prachi had to go to the college and Inder to school.

And in Mishra house gayatri had to prepare three lunches for neev, Milind and Lalit.

Neev- ma jaldi karo aaj Mr. Khadoos sir ka pehla lecture hai. Do minute bhi late ho gaya to class attend nahi karne denge.

Gayatri- jaldi hi to kar rahi hun. Abhi 15 minute hai.

Neev- maa jaane mein bhi time lagta hai.

Prachi- aunty aap chodo na ek din neev bhooka reh le ga

Neev- lo aa gayi maa ki chamchi.

Gayatri ' Neev lo tumhara lunch aura b jaldi jao nahi to bus nikal jayegi.

Both neev and Prachi were waiting for the bus at the bus stop. Suddenly a bus halted. And a girl carrying 2 suitcases came out. And the girl was none other than Ayesha.

Prachi screamed ' Ayesha wow you are finally back. How was the trip? Where is aunty?

Ayesha- Prachi shhhhh. Let me speak.

Prachi- ok you speak

Ayesha- It was very enjoyable holiday and mom will be back 2 days later. Where is neev?

Neev ' apni saheli ke peeche dekhogi to main dikhunga na

Prachi ' tum mujhe taane kyun marte rehte ho?

Neev ' I am not talking to you so you better br quiet. I am talking to Ayesha.

Prachi ' ok fine talk to her not to me. I'll see you in college.

Neev ' ok fine now leave us both alone.

Ayesha- neev that is very rude.

Prachi- no Ayesha let him be like this. I'll see him. You don't worry about me. Ok bye I am getting late and it seems that bus will also not come today.

Prachi started her journey on foot. She thought she will take an auto as soon as she sees it, but she couldn't get it.

She was walking and suddenly a bike stopped near Prachi. It was Milind's bike.

Milind- I didn't know that you love to walk.

Prachi- no actually I couldn't get an auto or bus. So I started my journey on foot.

Milind ' where is neev?

Prachi ' with Ayesha.

Milind ' is Ayesha back?

Prachi ' yes. Milind aren't you getting late for your work?

Milind ' oh yes come I'll drop you to your college.

Prachi hesitated a bit and then finally sat.

Milind ' Prachi old on to me or you will fell.

Prachi ' hmm

She slightly kept her hand on his shoulder. Milind started the bike. Prachi's hair were flowing and covered her face.

In no time Prachi was at her college gate. And still she was disturbed by her hair as now wind was blowing. Her one hand held the bag and other hand was continuously trying to keep her tendrils behind her ears.

Milind was watching all this and then he volunteered to help her. His fingers touched her angelic face. Prachi was shivering and then Milind put her tendrils below her ears.

Someone's car's horn brought the love birds back to the earth and Milind withdrawed his hand.

Prachi- Milind why neev is sulking these days?

Milind ' he is tensed about the results. They are coming out tomorrow.

Prachi ' o my god! I just forgot. I am going to fail this time.

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Originally posted by: gurlee

fab part

plz cont soon