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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
hi nandini
Nice shot..But Arjun ki jagah kya Raj nahin ho sakta tha???
Tum samajh hi gayi hogi kyun...Anyways it was gud..
Bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

hi nandini hii suhana..😃

Nice shot..thanks dear😊But Arjun ki jagah kya Raj nahin ho sakta tha??? nahi ho skata tha yaar coz i promised vertika that i'll write afic on vertika and arjun😊
Tum samajh hi gayi hogi kyun...ofcourse yaar..😉Anyways it was gud.. thanks😊
Bye bye bye..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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u know sabse achi baat kya hai?? jinhone bhi reply kiya wo sabb rajeev fans hai par phir bhi u all replied.. this shows u all are our(me and mahak) true friends😊 love ya all😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey di..........
awwwwwwwwww tht was so cute on ur behalf.......... u fulfilled ur promise.......... ghosh tht was so cute..........
actually the whole shot was so cute..........
each & every word was so adorable............
ghosh god made vertika & arjun one........ actually not god the lovely small packages of god da cute little children...........
awwwwwwwww i too love sweet little children......... they r so adorable & cute...........
ohhhhhhh one meeting made them seperate & just a single meeting made them one.............ha ha ha
i juss loved da proposal tht was so cute..........
"aur aisa kya galat kar diya tha maine late hi to ayi thi na halaki meeting subah 11 baje ki thi aur main raat ko 11 baje ayi thi par ayi to thi na main.. (she said cutely..)"
aww tht was so cute................
i juzz loved it .............was adorable & so childlike........... lovely
hatts off to u di.............
love
sanna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: REDnBLACK

hey di.......... hii cutu😃

awwwwwwwwww tht was so cute on ur behalf.......... u fulfilled ur promise.......... ghosh tht was so cute.......... yup i fullfilled my promise.. mujhe bhi yakeen nai ho raha..😆 kabhi bhi main promise pura kar hi nahi pati yaar par iss barr i did😊
actually the whole shot was so cute.......... thanks😃
each & every word was so adorable............
ghosh god made vertika & arjun one........ actually not god the lovely small packages of god da cute little children........... very well said sweetie😊
awwwwwwwww i too love sweet little children......... they r so adorable & cute........... yeah children are very cute and innocent😊
ohhhhhhh one meeting made them seperate & just a single meeting made them one.............ha ha ha one shot main to sabkuch ek hi baar ho sakta hai na.. lolzzzzzz...
i juss loved da proposal tht was so cute..........
"aur aisa kya galat kar diya tha maine late hi to ayi thi na halaki meeting subah 11 baje ki thi aur main raat ko 11 baje ayi thi par ayi to thi na main.. (she said cutely..)"
aww tht was so cute................ cute is ur favourite word ya phir mujhe yeh word kafi suit karta hai ??😆😆
i juzz loved it .............was adorable & so childlike........... lovely
hatts off to u di............. awwww thanksssss sweetieeeeee😭 thanks for reading and commenting😊
love
sanna

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi dear
grt story
i wish ki tum ese hi koi story mere sujal(rajeev)aur kashish(aamna)ke liye bhi likhho kabhi as mein sirf unhke bare mein hi padna chahti hoon
well ye story bhi grt hai aur isme koi shak nahi dat
u r really a grt writer.
keep up d the grt work dear
bi tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky901

hi dear hii pinky

grt story thanks sweetie😊
i wish ki tum ese hi koi story mere sujal(rajeev)aur kashish(aamna)ke liye bhi likhho kabhi as mein sirf unhke bare mein hi padna chahti hoon i cant promise u par puri koshish karungi sweetie.. mere liye yeh bahot badi baat hai ki sujal-kashish fan hone ke bawajud u read this fic and gave lovely comments.. i'll definately write fic for u sweetie..😭
well ye story bhi grt hai aur isme koi shak nahi dat
u r really a grt writer. thanks dear 😭
keep up d the grt work dear
bi tc bye and thanks a lot for reading this fic😭

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice fic!!

loved it!

aur vertika madam....IF pe itne fics likhne ke baad aur itne friends banane ke baad....u deserve this!!😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey tum ne Vertika k liye likha, vow yaar i am happy.
Mujhe lagta hai Verti k liye is se accha gift IF par ho hi nahi sakta hai. Vaise maana padega Vertika ne itne acche dost bana hi liye hain jo us k liye itna kuch kar rahe hain.
Well done keep it up.
Mujhe pata hai ki she likes Arjun so much tabhi tum ne likha. Arjun is really just like Arjun Punj n Vertika is so cute n sweet.
Dono ko milna to tha hi humesha k liye.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Are ye kab likha? 😕 😕 😕
Mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki meri sweety k uper ab fics bhi likhe jaane lage hain? 😲 😲 😲
Is ko kehte hain Best k liye The Best. 👏 👏 👏
Well done yaar. 👏 👏 👏
Mujhe lagta hai filhaal Arjun k yahan na rehne pe jab Vertika udaas hogi to ye fic humesha us k hoton pe ek badi se smile le k aayega.😃 😃 😃
U wrote it wonderfully, good comic n romantic sense yaar. 😊 😊 😊

Edited by varshita - 15 years ago

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