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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#751

Introduction was awesome...

Part One and Two... where great

Part Three and Four... was great as well but Rohit's character looks confusion for me at the moment...

Part five - Everything is going smoothly nice... enjoyed the convo between Sajan and Samrat-Benji... bloody Rohit created bad image of Samrat just to marry poor Gunjan... Samrat teach him a lesson... Mayank's entry rocked... Yip, Samrat and Gunjan are married.

Part Six - Samrat 😆 was funny explaining Mayank and Benji what to do and not... loved mini convo between Nupur and Mayank... superb.

Part Seven - I liked Gunjan saying about relationships... glad they decided to share the bed... simply awesome....

Part Eight - Samrat's attitude toward the waiter was reasonable... Glad you focused on Samrat's feeling for Gunjan in your ff...

Part Nine - Every girl is happy to be at their Maayka but Gunjan wants to go Samrat's home.. so sweet.... I liked how Samrat handle the situation when they entered their college.

Part Ten - By god! RanVijay after married girl... I hope Sammy doesn't misunderstand Hamari Gunjan

To be continued

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Ritika

@Sajan4Ever

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#752

GOD SANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY??????????????????? now i won't be able to wait for your next update! why the cliffhanger?🥺 Anyways LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👍🏼 Update soon! and i mean SOON! I mean ASAP. I mean NOW! (just kiddin!) but please update ASAHP( as soon as humanely possible)!

Luv-

Ritz

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#753

OK GUYS DONT GET BORE WHILE READING THIS THIS R MY FEELING SO IF U WANT TO KNOW ABOUT MY FEELING PLZ READ IT

WAO YAAR AAP SAB NA MERA DIL JEET LIYA I KNOW U ALL THINKING HOW ACTUALLY WHEN I STARTED WRITTING I NEVER EVER THOUGHT THAT U ALL WILL LIKE MY FF THIS MUCH BUT NOW AFTER SEEING UR COMMENTS I M FEELING SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY TODAY REALLY GUYS EVERY TIME I LIKED ALL OF UR'S COMMENT BUT NEVER SAID NOE IM SDAYING GUYS U ALL R MY STRENGTH AND AAP LOG KI WAJAH SA HI MAI ITNA ACCHA LIKH PATTI HOON WELL GUYS AS U ALL CAN SEE SHURU MAIN MAI BHAUT SARE GALTIYAN KARTI THI PAR AB THODE KAM KARTI HOON LOL PAR KARTI ZARUR HOON BUT U ALL NEVER COMPLAINED THANKS FOR THAT GUYS U ALL R STRENGTH OF ME GUYS PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ KEEP COMMENTING AND IF ANY MISTAKE IS THERE LET ME KNOW GUYS FEEL FREE TO ASK ANYTHING I NEVER SAID NO T ANYONE OF U, U GUYS KNOW BETTER ANYWAYS U ALL R THINKING THAT KI KAB SE BAKWAAS KIYEJA RAHI HAI LOL SO I STOP IT HERE AUR KUCH YAAD ATA HAI TOH AAP LOGON KO KEHNA KA LIYA SO I WILL TELL U GUYS LATER AFTER MY NEXT UPDATE LOL DONT WORRY JADA KUCH NAHI BOLUNGI GUYS AAP SAB KI DUA SA HI AAJ MAI APNA RIGHT HAND SA TYPE KAR PA RAHI HOON WARNA DOCTOR SAID IT WILL BE OK IN TWO MONTHS PAR MAI JAB YAHA ONLINE HO KAR SAB KO BATAYI AAP LOGON NA MERA LIYE DUA KIYA AND SEE NOW I M ALRIGHT IN A MONTH THANKS THAT TOO U ALL GUYS LOL AB KUCH ZYADA HI CENTI BATE HO GAYI ANYWAYS BE WE ME GUYS FOREVER AND IM TELLING TO EACH AND EVERY OF U

I LOVE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU GUYSSSSSSSSSS

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ BE WITH ME FOREVER IN TOUCH

P.S:GUYS I WILL UPDATE MY NEXT PART SOON THINK SO ANYWAYS I WILL TRY MY BEST TO UPDATE THE TWO FF'S AS SOON AS POSSIBLE TILL THAN TC ALVIDA, SHABAKHAIR,ALLAH HAFIZ, KHUDA HAFIZ,NAMASTE.

guys guys guys plz ek min dont get anger with me actually i want to say about this ff guys there r goen come many twist which is goen make u all like awwwwwwwww and WHAT THE HELL AND MANY THINGS cant explain right now but really GUYS i HAVE MANY gr8 twistS WHICH R COMMING UP SOON YEH TWIST TOH UN TWIST KE SAMNE KUCH BHI NAHI HAI LOL KUCH ZYADA HO GAYA PATA NAHI AAP SAB KO PASAND AYENGA BHI YA NAHI so PLZ bear with me i hope u all will like it.

LOVE

SANA

Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

@PrInCeSs_dIVa

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#754

lovely ff dear..waitin for the next part.................

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sneha jose

@snehajose17

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#755

I am dying here for ur next part

hope u get well soon

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#756

👏Part 11 - Diya deserved mini lecture from Samrat because she insulted his wife. Gift scene between them was awesome I hope Gunjan gives left right to RanVijay.

Part 12 - Samrat, its not nice to keep things hidden from your better half. Wow, what a twist to make Samrat realizes his feelings for Gunjan.

Part 13 - Enjoyed each minute where Samrat beat the ights out of RanVijay...

Part 14 - Cute sister sister teasing but I want to see Nupur teasing Samrat like the show. Nupur is so dead. Once Gunjan return back she is going to kill her.

Part 15 - Awesome conov between Nupur and Gunjan over the phone. Loved Samrat's reaction to Gunjan in western clothing.

Part 16 - Samrat Baba you are in love realizes it before its too late. Awesome realization of Samrat's love for Gunjan....

Part 17 - Roshini you aimed the right angle to make Gunjan realizes she loves Samrat. Well done Sana! 👏 Indeed the song suited Samrat the most. I hope he says I Love You to Gunjan soon before something goes wrong between them.

To Be Continued...

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