Life in a movie - mayur ff - NTL on first page - Page 79

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

ok and anyways that loser who's copying you is just a big idiot. but thanks for using my idea.

thanks to u.....now i do update here and there both.......ok.....

first of all let me tell you that this part is not passionate......this act is merely meant to show how pure love can be....i wont include any dirty thing before their marriage.....cause i think it is a sin...so i wont make mayur do anything which they shouldn't before their marriage...cause i am a typical indian girl who doesn't like to watch any dirty thing....so i hadnt made it dirty even.....i have written it to show how pure....how serene.....their relationship was......

so here i go......

and this part is dedicated to anshika....swati.....sonal.....zoah.....sanam.....nabeeha.....surbhi....



mayank and nupur go out for a date.....their mayank confesses his love to nupur again.....they share quiet a romantic moments.......both r now happy....mayank talks to her in poetic lines......and nupur askes him the occasion......he replies that he loves her.....nupur asks mayank if mayank loves her......he replies her in a shayari yet again.....and before going when mayank asks her to tell him how much does she love her.......so she replies him in a poetic manner and run away to the house.....and mayank thinks that he is not the only one affected......



Scene-

They had to kiss each other on their lips......

they were both very nervous as how to do this scene....

if they did this scene, then this would be the first ever serious kiss in their relationship.....

but they both couldn't refuse.....

beside....

they loved each other....

and one or the other day......

they had to do this......

but they never thought that they would have to do this in public......

Mayank- Nupur tum is kiss scene ke liye tyaa ho?

Nupur couldn't say anything......

how stupid of mayank to ask this question to a girl.....

doesn't he know that a girl can't answer all this.....

huh......mayank was mayank....

Nupur- pata nahi

Mayank- kya matlab hai pata nahi?

Nupur- tum bhi na mayank......main kaise keh doon haan?

Mayank realized what he had asked and what she had said.......

he was happy that Nupur had no objections in doing this scene.....

as well as she had no objection in their closeness......

Nupur too realized what she had said just now and she blushed.....

Mayank- ab kyun blush kar rahi ho?

Nupur- mayank tum bhi na

Mayank- acha baba, chalo angel varna der ho jayegi.....

And they go......to do the scene.......or perhaps.....to sparkle their love......



On the spot-

They felt that they were on the top of the world........

they were going to kiss each other for the very first time on the lips........

Oh god!

They were so nervous.........

They came very close to each other........

nupur closed her eyes........

she wanted to stoe it in her memory like a dream......

like a fairytale......

she was going to kiss to someone whom she loved very dearly..........

who loved her dearly.........

Without wasting the time, mayank came forward......

he narrowed their closeness.....

he shortened the distance between their lips........

he then bowed down........

and he.....

he kissed her.......

but very gently....... he kissed her only for a small second and then removed his lips from her.......

even before Nupur could feel anything....

They kissed each other......they did......and for the very first time indeed.......


After the scene, Nupur and mayank meet.......

Both felt awkward to talk to each other......

they couldn't start off with a conversation......they couldn't......

Director- aapka kiss bahut short tha...

Mayank- pata hai......par aap isi se kaam chala lijiyega.....

Director- par aapne aisa kyun kiya?

Mayank- meri marzi....

Then the director goes away

and mayank sees the same question in nupur's eyes......

Mayank- don't worry main hamari shaadi ke baad tumhe isse long kisses karonga....par abhi hum unmarried hain.......aur main apni maryaada nahi tod sakta hoon.......nahi main tumhe sharminda kar sakta hoon.......

Nupur was overwhelmed by his answer.......

she didn't knew that she could love anyone more than mayank.......

he was perfect....he was simply adorable.......he was his fianc.....oh wow........kitne punya kiye honge maine jo mujhe mayank jaisa pyaar karne waala insaan mila......

They continued to meet........infact they met.......and met and met........

the only time when they were not together was during the night time........

They could not meet each other during night time........it was a sin........

As the days passed, their love for each other only and only grew........they were waiting for the day when their movie would be complete......

And after few days......their dreams came true........the movie was complete......

After the completition of their movie, mayank decided to marry Nupur......

infact they both had desparately waited for this day when they would be together......and no one could stop them from meeting.......

after all they loved each other.......and marriage is the door to love.......they both believed that marriage is the only way by which two loving hearts can make their relationship pavitra in front of others and in their minds......

shaadi se hi pyaar sampo*na hota hai........shaadi se hi do log ek hote hain....... So they decided that they would marry........

they told everyone about their this decision.......and everyone was glad about it.......

With passing time.......their life also started becoming fast.......

they were performing all the rituals........

haldi..........

mehendi..........

sangeet........

each day brought them close to each other........

very close.......

they were on a roller coaster ride which would end as soon as their shaadi was done.........they would enter into a new life........they would become husband and wife..........they would become one from two......they would enter into a new pure ans serene relationship.......

They used to talk to each other on phone........

but they couldn't meet each other openly........it was not allowed.......no not at all.......and why would it be??? A girl and a guy cannot meet before their marriage.......

they used to meet each other during rituals.......but they were surrounded by so many people that they couldn't see each other.......they were eagerly waiting for the day when no one could stop them from meeting.......

They were the two people who were completely opposite to each other yet they loved each other like hell.......they were dying to meet each other........

where on the other hand.......someone was trying to make their life hell........someone was planning to separate them.....someone was trying to make them hate each other.......someone ill wisher of them was wanting to differentiate them........

mayank and Nupur wanted to narrow the gap between them...........

while someone was planning to increase their distances.......

neither mayank nor Nupur knew that they were getting their happiness for only sometime......for some time........

but we would only talk about their happy times only......because it's a suspense that who were they and what they wanted and why they wanted to separate mayank and Nupur.........

At last the day came of their marriage.......they were very excited about it.......they had dreamt all about it.......they had planned so many thing about it......they were pretty excited, happy and nervous............



to be continued.......



plzzzzzzz comment......cause this is the first time when i have shown anyone kiss.....i don't know whether it was good or bad....i just know this that i had to write this...so if u think that i can write any romantic scenes then tell me......i will write......but if u think this was a bekaar part......then too tell me coz i will improve next time.....but do comment........

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m d 1st to coment?!?!?!
yipee!!
haan...to m editing as m reading it...
-thanx 4 dedicating it to me also!!
thanx a lot!!
-oho!! mayank ne bhi kya pooch liya nups se!!
aur nups ka ans!!! hehe 'main haan kaise bol du!!!'
-itna chota kiss...but fits d scene!! really!!
-wot an asnwer mayu gave to nups!!
i luv it!!
-hehe! dey wer not together at night!!! obvious!!
-haawwwww!!! OMG!!!
sum1 trying to make der life 'hell'???
hu is that damn idiot???
pls do tell...
-huh!!! ab to aapko jaldi se upd8 karna hi padega...
or else i'd die of suspense!!!
pls pls pls cont ASAP!!!!
thanx 4 d pm... !

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

nahi yaar.....lines copy ho rahi thi isiliye hataya tha.....aur ab main koi bhi poetic line include nahi karoongi....except few times.....

ooooohhhh!!!
mujh mein shayad akal ki kami pad rahi hai!!!
=( oh god!! help me!!
anyways...i'll miss it...hmmmmm...

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

haan aur main tera bharosa todungi bhi nahi.....main abhi update kar rahi hoon......

yea...dekha!!...aaj hi kar dena...m w8ing!!!

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">res<br>dekhti hu peeche kya post karogi...😃😉😆<br></font>

dekh lena.....aur phir dekh kar shock ho jaana.......

aur dekh le....is baar maine tujhe bhi yeh update dedicate kiya hai......

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

<br><br><br><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">yea...dekha!!...aaj hi kar dena...m w8ing!!!</font><br>

kar diya maine update.....ab to tujhe bas comment karna hai........

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

dekh lena.....aur phir dekh kar shock ho jaana.......

aur dekh le....is baar maine tujhe bhi yeh update dedicate kiya hai......

yeah di...maine dekha...aur shock ho gayi!!!
omg...pehle to ye kaun hai hu wanna increase distances b'w mayur???
ng den d kiss!! nd mayu's ans to nups after d kiss!!!- a short one!!!
nd thanx a tonn 4 dedicating it to me also!!!

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

<br><br><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><br>ooooohhhh!!!<br>mujh mein shayad akal ki kami pad rahi hai!!!<br>=( oh god!! help me!!<br>anyways...i'll miss it...hmmmmm...</font><br>

to tu unhe meri site par padh lena......

hey mahak....awesome update....simply amazing...loved it ......i dnt have anyhting else to say oher than awesome...plzzzzzzzzz continue soon