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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

wat..nupur is nt able 2 trust mayank..omg..

kya hogaa aage....😲
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nupur is trying but who knows about god will do 4 us and donot worry ik dujay kay sath hi hon gain yeh dono😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NabeehaFS

Hi Maria aapi

finally I read all the parts and your ff is just too good

please please continue soon

waiting for it impatiently😉

hi nabeela thanks dear i am just updating in few mins
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 6

mayank is sitting just staring at nupur who is looking away from him trying not to look at him but mayank is just looking at him and thinking hwz can be so beautiful and innocent like she is ,samar is coughing again and again but no effect of it on mayank and nupur is getting irritated by this and all of sudden she stands up and says "mrs lost ap ka channel ap ko bhul raha hai "😆
"kiya"says mayank starring here and there and then he looks at nupur who is quiet nw but little smile on her face and then looks at samar and pritha what happen nw and then he remember the line she said in last 20 min "mrs lost " and he smiles at his name and samar says "bewaquf dost larki ney tumko mrs lost bola hai mrs romeo nayi "😃😃
"mrs lost mrs romeo se ziyada acha aur new hai u know mrs romeo is out of fashion nw i am in fashion"says mayank smiling to him in low voice but nupur heard and i feeling angry on him and looks away nw 😳😳😳
"oh ho par mujay channel bola hai tumara mera izat ka kya "says samar teasing him😆😆
"izat tumari haha jo pehlay hi ja chuki hai bhabi kay hathon "mayank and recives a tight elbow this and samar is looking at pritha who is showing her eyes filled with anger 😳😳😳
pritha gets up and takes nupur and gunjun with her and samar stands up to stop her and mayank stand to stop nupur but they lost the signal😆😆😆they were gone on terrace and pritha was talking to nupur but she was quiet and thinking baout her plans and gunjun was getting worried what she will be do bc she did nt told her about the plan this time as she knew mom will make gunjun to tell the truth and her plan will be spoiled ,she only said her to bring the man alone to her and she will do something to syop the relation and after mins pritha and gunjun came down and mayank gets sad nt to see nupur with them seeing this pritha goes to him and says "upar terrace par jayo nupur wahan hai tumaray liay jo baat karni hai kar lo ik hi moka hai shadi se pehlay uskay baad mrs lost mrs romeo kiya mrs majnu sab kuch ho jayin gay "😳
mayank smiles at this and goes up there and saw nupur looking at the kites flying in the sky by a kid on the other house and she is smiling looking at the kite of white colour having a heart of red colour on it and then the kite fell down on the ground and she gets sad at this and mayank saw this and comes near her and says "apko kites bohat pasand hai ya bachay "
"ap kab"says nupur but couldnt complete her sentence as she saw her mom coming iwth some fruit and cookies and snacks and she call her at a corner and tell her some thing but what ? that will be revaled in next part 😃😃😃
nupur comes back and sit next to him and made a face like a child who was about to get he wants but at the main time the shop keeper tells him that its already sold .mayank is looking at her but she is looking down .mayank is trying to speak and finally he says "ap apnay guest ko no coffee aur tea ka label dikati hain kiya"😆
"label daik lain to puchtay hain kiya"says nupur irritatingly😳
"nice joke meri tarha"says mayank and smiles at her reply
"ap mujse kuch puchna nayi chayin gi kiya meray baray mein"says mayank
"puchnay par sach boltay hain kiya ap"says nupur
"nayi waisay bhi bolta hoon"says mayank
"haan ap discovery channel jo hain "says nupur in low voice to her self😆
"mein mayank bakshi hoon aur mera ik chota bhai hai aur meray parents nayi hain mera apna business hai aur mera koi chakar wakar nayi tha ap se pehlay aur ab na koi hoga kyun kay ap kay alive ab mujay koi bhi achi nahi lagay gi chayain ap haan kahain ya na "says mayank telling all about himself in one breath
"ok "says nupur
"bas ok kuch nahi kahain gi ap"says mayank and she moves her head in yes and mayank smiles at her and her sweetness and nupur ask him whether he wanna know something about her and he says no bc he doesnt need it bc her eyes are the mirror and the mirror doesnt lies ,hearing this nupur look in his eyes and just looking at him and and smiles unknowilingly and then gunjun came there and saw both are looking into each other eyes and saw her di smiling knowing the reason of her anger on man cast and she call in a aloud voice "hello come back to this world plz warna maa ajayin gi ab "and they both look to gunjun and she smiles and takes them down and mayank says yes directly to her mom and and nupur goes inti her and room and pritha follows her thinking like she doing all this like a traditional girl who get shys on her hearing the news of her wedding but nupur goes into her room and stands infront of the mirror and picks something up to break it bc she did nt like her face who smiled 4 a man today 4 nothing and she could nt control her heart who beated first time so fast on seeing a man who is like a dream and she was about to throw something on the mirror but she saw the door opened and she sits on the chair infront of mirror and looks down and pritha came in and talk to her few min and then she came out and looks at mayank who is waiting 4 pritha reply and she smiles and say"nupur ne haan keh di hai "mayank jumps in the air and hugs samar and pritha then .but nupur mom is really happy to hear that her biggest problem is going to be solved in next few days but gunjun is shocked to hear nupur yes 4 marriage that she said she wont do in her life ever and she looks at the mayank and smiles 😊
after discussing the marriage date they left engagment was not going to happen as nupur mom was nt well and she wants to see her daughter wedding in next fews day and mayank also couldnt wait to nupur to come into her lifeand he had to leave delhi too bc his business was in mumbai and will be effected 😊
they all are leaving nw but mayank wanna see nupur once bfore leaving but couldnt see bc of the presebce of everyone and her shyness according to his thoughts and they all came out of the house and samar and pritha sits in the car and then mayank looks up at the house and saw nupur standing in the window looking down and he smiles and wished that he could have to see her in his home nw and smiles and sits in the car and say bye to her by waving her hands and then she turns around and comes and sit on the bed throwing the things on the ground and mayank and all leaves 4 their home
note:this is it 4 nw friends i know little short but hope u enjoy mrs lost 😃😃😃waiting 4 ur comments
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
plz post next part asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow nice uppdate yaar
AWESOME LOVELY
PLZ CONTINUE SOON
and thanx for the pm
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb yaar i loved it
waiting 4 their wedding
update soon plz
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
really really awsome update yaar
m just loving this ff and mayank
he is so good
plzzzzzzzz update next pART soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
very gud yar
mnayank is very sweet yaar...nupur se milne k liye kitna pareshan h...very sweet....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_awan

<FONT face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#990000 size=5>Part 6


<FONT size=4>mayank is sitting just staring at nupur who is looking away from him trying not to look at him but mayank is just looking at him and thinking hwz can be so beautiful and innocent like she is ,samar is coughing again and again but no effect of it on mayank and nupur is getting irritated by this and all of sudden she stands up and says "mrs lost ap ka channel ap ko bhul raha hai "😆</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"kiya"says mayank starring here and there and then he looks at nupur who is quiet nw but little smile on her face and then looks at samar and pritha what happen nw and then he remember the line she said in last 20 min "mrs lost " and he smiles at his name and samar says "bewaquf dost larki ney tumko mrs lost bola hai mrs romeo nayi "😃😃</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"mrs lost mrs romeo se ziyada acha aur new hai u know mrs romeo is out of fashion nw i am in fashion"says mayank smiling to him in low voice but nupur heard and i feeling angry on him and looks away nw 😳😳😳</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"oh ho par mujay channel bola hai tumara mera izat ka kya "says samar teasing him😆😆</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"izat tumari haha jo pehlay hi ja chuki hai bhabi kay hathon "mayank and recives a tight elbow this and samar is looking at pritha who is showing her eyes filled with anger 😳😳😳</FONT>

<FONT size=4>pritha gets up and takes nupur and gunjun with her and samar stands up to stop her and mayank stand to stop nupur but they lost the signal😆😆😆they were gone on terrace and pritha was talking to nupur but she was quiet and thinking baout her plans and gunjun was getting worried what she will be do bc she did nt told her about the plan this time as she knew mom will make gunjun to tell the truth and her plan will be spoiled ,she only said her to bring the man alone to her and she will do something to syop the relation and after mins pritha and gunjun came down and mayank gets sadnt to see nupur with them seeing this pritha goes to him and says "upar terrace par jayo nupur wahan hai tumaray liayjo baat karni hai kar lo ik hi moka hai shadi se pehlayuskay baad mrs lost mrs romeo kiya mrs majnu sab kuch ho jayin gay"😳</FONT>


<FONT size=4>mayank smiles at this and goes up there and saw nupur looking at the kites flying in the sky by a kid on the other house and she is smiling looking at the kite ofwhite colour having a heart of red colour on it and then the kite fell down on the ground and she gets sad at this and mayank saw this and comes near her and says "apko kites bohat pasand hai ya bachay "</FONT>


<FONT size=4>"ap kab"says nupur but couldnt complete her sentence as she saw her mom coming iwth some fruit and cookies and snacks and she call her at a corner and tell her some thing but what ? that will be revaled in next part 😃😃😃</FONT>

<FONT size=4>nupur comes back and sit next to him and made a face like a child who was about to get he wants but at the main time the shop keeper tells him that its already sold .mayank is looking at her but she is looking down .mayank is trying to speak and finally he says "ap apnay guest ko no coffee aur tea ka label dikati hain kiya"😆</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"label daik lain to puchtay hain kiya"says nupur irritatingly😳</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"nice joke meri tarha"says mayank and smiles at her reply</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"ap mujse kuch puchna nayi chayin gi kiya meray baray mein"says mayank</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"puchnay par sach boltay hain kiya ap"saysnupur</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"nayi waisay bhi bolta hoon"says mayank</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"haan apdiscovery channel jo hain "saysnupur in low voice to her self😆</FONT>

<FONT size=4>"mein mayank bakshi hoonaur mera ikchota bhai hai aur meray parents nayi hainmera apna business hai aur mera koi chakar wakar nayi thaap se pehlay aur ab na koi hoga kyun kay ap kay alive ab mujay koi bhi achi nahi lagaygi chayain ap haan kahain ya na "says mayank telling all about himself in one breath </FONT>

<FONT size=4>"ok "says nupur </FONT>

<FONT size=4>"bas okkuch nahi kahain gi ap"saysmayank and she moves her head in yes and mayank smiles at her and her sweetness andnupur ask him whether he wanna know something about her and he says no bc he doesnt need it bc her eyes are the mirror and the mirror doesntlies,hearing this nupur look in his eyes and just looking at him and and smiles unknowilingly and then gunjun came there and saw both are looking into each other eyes and saw her di smilingknowing the reason of her angeron man cast and she call in a aloud voice "hello come back to thisworldplz warna maa ajayin gi ab "and they both lookto gunjun and she smiles and takes them down and mayank says yes directly to her mom andand nupur goes inti her and room andpritha followsherthinking like she doing all this like a traditional girl who get shys on herhearing the news of her wedding but nupur goes into her room andstands infront of the mirror andpicks something up to break it bc she did nt like her face who smiled 4 a man today 4 nothing and she could nt control her heart who beated first time so fast on seeing a man who is like a dream and she was about to throw something on the mirror but she saw the door opened and she sits on the chair infront of mirror and looks down and pritha came in and talk to her few min and then she came out and looks at mayank who is waiting 4 pritha reply and she smiles and say"nupur ne haan keh di hai "mayank jumps in the air and hugs samar and pritha then .but nupur mom is really happy to hear that her biggest problem is going to be solved in next few days but gunjun is shocked to hear nupur yes 4 marriage that she said she wont do in her life ever and she looks at the mayank and smiles 😊</FONT>

<FONT size=4>after discussing the marriage date they left engagment was not going to happen as nupur mom was nt well and she wants to see her daughter wedding in next fews day and mayank also couldnt wait to nupur to come into her lifeand he had to leave delhi too bc his business was in mumbai and will be effected 😊</FONT>

<FONT size=4>they all are leaving nw but mayank wanna see nupur once bfore leaving but couldnt see bc of the presebce of everyone and her shyness according to his thoughts and they all came out of the house and samar and pritha sits in the car and then mayank looks up at the house and saw nupur standing in the window looking down and he smiles and wished that he could have to see her in his home nw and smiles and sits in the car and say bye to her by waving her hands and then she turns around and comes and sit on the bed throwing the things on the ground and mayank and all leaves 4 their home </FONT>



<FONT size=4>note:this is it 4 nw friends i know little short but hope u enjoy mrs lost 😃😃😃waiting 4 ur comments </FONT>
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it is awesome......loved the update....
continue soon plzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi maria,
nice part.
loved mayur very much.
Mayank totally fida on nups.
And nups also feel for him.
great job.
Waiting 4 the weeding part.
Update soon.

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