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Posted: 15 years ago
hey jhanvi awesome OS.....m really dissappointed with Armaan he doesn't trust her at all....hw cn he jst break the engagement.....n moshi ma n rajbir i hate thm.....plzzzz continue with the next part soon.....n thnx alot for the PM dear....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey amazing one shot
but it seems like a FF since your not updating it soon..lol
update soon.please?
Luv Anu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey hey hey…what up guys…back with part 2……
I realize it's a one-shot…and some of u are asking why its in parts? Well the most I'll make my one-shots are 2 parts…and theres many different reasons for it which are like common sense lol….nyways…im not gonna write them cuz I wanna get this going:D
Prevoius part: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1247897&TPN=22
He opened the door to find a man standing there'
Ar- ji khahiye
Man- mein yaha kisi sain mil ne aya hoon
Ar- haan tho khahiye kisse
Man- who jo mujse hamesha college ke rooms saaf karaya karta tha..
Ar- (armaan was now confused) ji?
Man- wo jho mujhe hamesha dudu pukar tat ha'
Ar- (his eyes popped out) SAMEER!!!
Sm- hey buddy!!!! Thank good you recognized me!!!!
Ar- arre mein tuje kaise bhool sakta hoon…oh sorry andar aana
He met armaan's mom and greeted her just like his..
Sm- auntie..kasie hain app?
An- arre beta mein bilkul theek hoon aur tum…kitne patle hogaye hain tu us jaa kar//
Sm- aahh…baas yehi sun eke liye mere kaan taras rahe the(gave his cute lil smile)
An- waise beta tum there kaha hoon?
Sm- yaha par….(smiled and popped his eyes brows up)
Ar and An- ye khabhi nahin shudrega….
All laughed……
Sm- arre atul kaha hain?
Ar- bhaiya upper hain….
Sm- mein usse milke atta hoon…
Ar- hm. Theek hain…
He rushed up there to meet atul…suddenly armaan's mom's face dropped.
Ar- mom kya hua?
An- uh..beta wo aaj riddima ke family aa rahin hain..
Ar- tho?
An- beta…plz…
Ar- mom….wo log yaha par bhaiya aur anji ke shaadi ki baat ke liye aaya hain….main kyon mind karoga….
An- lekin riddhima bhi hogi na unke saath….
Ar- tho ma…maine riddhima se shaddi thod di matlab ye nahin ke hum ek dusre ke dushman hain….
An- lekin bartao tho aise hi karte hon
Ar- aise apko lagta hain mom….
An- theek hain….chaal mujhe tayarri karni hain…
Ar- ji ma…
She left armaan thinking…..how am I gonna face her? How am I supposed to behave around her? Dushmani nahin hain lekin ajnabee jaise tho hogaye hain….oh god….lekin bhayia ke liye kuch bhi…
He went up to sameer….
Ar- sameer..chal karma dikha deta hoon
Sm- theek hain chaal
They went to sameer's room where he was gonna stay…..
Ar- tho bata…kaise tha "USA"..im sure kisi ladki ko tunne chodo nahin hoga..
Sm- mr.mallik correct terminology use ki giye….kisi ladki ne mujhe nahin choda…
Ar- accha on a serious note…koi mili….
Sm- mili na…
Ar- KAUN!?!
Sm- mili lekin yaha india mein…
Ar- ooo….naam kya hain??
Sm- pata nahin…something like ri..riidh….(he tried remembering but he couldn't)
Ar- (got kinda scared he was gonna say riddhima) theek hain chod…bata mili kaha par?
Sm- parking lot mein….(smiled)
Ar- kya???
Sm- arre yaar…jab phirse miligi na..tho zarror milwau ga…
Ar- tujhe kasie pata ke wo tumme phirse mili gi…
Sm- baas pata nahin….maan kheta hain….
Ar- accha….waise aaj raat dinner hain….ek family aani wali hain…tayaar rahena…
Sm- jo apki aagiya.
Later at night………….
An- aayie na….
Anania was inviting everyone inside the house…..
Riddhima was scared to go into the house..mostly b'cuz she didn't know how to behave in front of armaan……
An- arre riddhima beta aao na…
Ri- ji auntie..
An-(anania was a lil hurt when riddhima said auntie…as she was going to be called mom by her bahu…)aao anjali…
Padma came in with all the shagun..
An- kaise hain padmaji…
Pa- bilkul theek….
An- mein apki itne shukra guzaar hu ke apne humme dosra moka diya..
Pa- arre app ye kaise baat kar rahe hain…. Wo sab beti baata thi…bhool ja eyi wonne
They both smiled and went down to go sit…..
Riddhima sat right beside anjali.
Armaan came down stairs with atul..
Riddhima almost stopped breathing….
Armaan looked down as he didn't know how to react to riddhima…
Along with armaan came sameer….
Sm- maine tujhse kya kaha tha…milege to zaroor mujhe…
Ar- kaun?
Sm- wo hi..jisi mein takraya tha…aur phir gubara phoot ne lage the…
Ar- kya?
Sm- wo dekh…wo baby blue ke salwaar wali…
Ar-(his eyes popped…he was shocked to see that riddhima was the one that sameer was in love with)
Sm- so kasie lagi teri hone wali bhabi..
Ar- ha..(gave a fake smile) acchi hain…
Riddhima looked up and saw sameer…
She suddenly screamed…TUM!?
Sameer got kinda scared by her reaction…
Sm- haan mein…koi problem…
Ri- lekin tum yaha kar kya rahe ho?
Sm- oh hello…ye mera dost ka ghar hain…aur tum yaha kya kar rahi hoon….i knoe mere charm tumpe kaam kar gaya….kyon?
Ri- oh shut up….jiske paas charm ho hi na uske charm kya kaam karege…..
Sm- whtever….apne cmnt apne pass rakho….lekin….
Ri- lekin kya….now lemme go…
Riddhima went and sat by anji again……the rest of the night went pretty hmm…hard to describe with all riddhima and sameer's cute little fights…..armaan and riddhima stealing looks at each other…..but atul and anjali;s marriage was fixed about 2 weeks later….
Now it was prep time…the wedding is only 2 weeks…..everyone was busy…in this time riddhima and sameer really got to know each other…they got really close to each other….riddhima knew much about sameer..and sameer knew about everything of riddhima….now all sameer was waiting for was that perfect moment when he would propose her…..
Tonite the two families were gonna gather up again for dinner….
Sameer knew that this was the right moment to ask riddhima…
Both the families came…riddhima and armaan were still uncomfortable with each other…so they mostly ignored each other as always….
Riddhima was sitting on the couch alone…
Sm- hye…kya kar rahi hain mem shahab?
Ri- kuch nahin baas magazine phad rahi hoon
Sm- hey riddhima tumse kuch poochna tha
Ri- hmm tho pooch na(still lost in the magazine)
Sm- ase nahin…(takes away the magazine and makes her stand and leaves to get something)
Ri- sameer..sa..(he interrupted her by putting his index finger on her lips)
Her bent down on his knees….
Sm- RIDDHIMA WILL U MARRY ME?
Riddhima was shocked! She did not know how to react…she was getting proposed at her ex-finacee's house…and she had no clue what the hell she was supposed to SAY!
Ri- sameer…
Sm- riddhima haan ya na…
Ri-(thinking)
Sm- riddhima plz jawab dena….mein iss din ke liye tadap raha tha aur tum….
Ri- HAAN!(she replied interrupting between sameer)
Sameer's face glowed…armaan was shocked by what riddhima said… everyone else was as well as in shock…but then later everyone celebrated………….
Now that riddhima's marriage was also fixed…all decided that anjy and riddhima wud get married on the same day…..
GUPTA MANSION
Pa-riddhima anjali beta jaldi karo…gadi bahar tumarawait kar rahi hain
All the youngsters were going to visit the mandir in Panvel for blessing which included riddhima…sameer…armaan…atul..anjy nikki and abhi…
They all left for panvel…in sameer's jeep
On the way to there as it was really chilly out they decicded to stop for some tea…which was on a hill
Sm- come on guys its tea time
Ri- umm..sameer mein gadi mein baethi hoon…tum log jake pilo..
Sm- lekin riddhima chalo na…
Ri- nahin sameer…
Sm- theek hain…hum abhi atte hain..
Ri-(smiled as a gesture to say yes)
While everyone was drinking tea..riddhima fell asleep in the jeep…she was deep sleep when she accidentally emergency break to unlock it…now the jeep was slowly moved toward the end of the hill…riddhima woke up to find herself slowy going towards to a BIG ditch…the first name that came to her mind was armaan..
Ri-armaan…armaan
Armaan heard and he saw riddhima was about to fall into BIG ditch…he quickly ran towards her
He jumped onto the car trying to get riddhima out of their
Ar- riddhima tumme kuch nahin hoga…
Ri- armaan(she was crying really badly)
And to their bad luck they both fell in..and no-one was able to save them….
Riddhima and armaan woke up to find themselves in a jungle….
Ar- riddhima riddhima tum theek tho hoon..
Ri- armaan mein theek hoon..tum
Ar- mein theek hoon…chalo yaha se rasta dhoond te hain
Ri- hm…
Armaan kept leading most of the way..and riddhima was annoyed by that…
Ri- uggh…
Ar- kya hua(asked annoyedly)
Ri-arre bartoa to aise kar rahe hoon jaise ke tum annoyed hoon….tum hi kyon lead kar rahe hoon….tum kasie pata ke tum he sahi hoon…
Ar- kyunki mein armaan hoon…samjhi…aur mer raste janna hain to jao…warna jao apne raste…mujhe koi problem nahin hain…..
Ri-(whispered to herself) tumme tho bohot sari problems hain…bas tume khud nahin pata(screamed the last 2 words while she went away)you psychopath!
While saying that she'll fell into a tiny ditch….
Ri- ahhhhhhh!!!!!!ugghh…
Ar- (apperead from the top) kya kaha tha tumne…hamesha main sahi nahin hota…
Ri- shut-up aur mujhe yaha se nikalo…
Armaan held up a branch in there…riddhima took it from him
Ri- wo nahin…apna haath do aur mujhe yaha se nikalo….aur jaldi karo…
He got her out and they both continued on to get out of the jungle…
Ri-armaan
Ar- hmm…
Ri- mujhe bhook lagi hain(said like a little kid)
Ar- haan kyonki mcdonalds to paas mein hain na..
Ri- armaan!!!! Mujhe bhook lagi hain….plz kuch doondho na…
Ar- riddhima ye ek jungle hain…hope tumme yaad hain
Ri- armaan..
Ar- riddhima…
Ri- armaan…
Ar- riddhima
Ri- armaan…
Ar- BASKET!
Riddhima and armaan both froze…and then suddenly she heard an animal…she took armaan into a big hug in a jiffy….ri-armaan!
Armaan cudn't resist…and he put his strong muscular arms around her petite body…..riddhima started bawling all of a sudden…as she backed out of the hug…
Ri- armaan kyon!? Kyon kia tumne aise…kitni kush thi main….tumne sab kuch barbad kar diya…kyon!?
Ar-(he tightly grasped her by one of her arms) aur meri khushi…maine sab kuch barbad kar diya…riddhima dil tho tumne thoda tha…mere aur rajbir ka…riddhima main samjah ta tha ke tum ek masoom si ladki hoon ek ladki jo dusre ki feeling samjah sakoh…lekin nahin….jaise tumne rajbir ke saath sulookh kiya tha…wo ghamand…wo goroor….
Riddhima suddenly slapped him…
Ar- riddhima…
Ri- haan….ye maine jaan booch ke kiya….armaan wo sab ek nataak tha….(she explained to him that she did all this according to the saying of moshi-ma)
Ar- kya!?riddima im so sorry…riddihma plz mujhe maaf kardo…
Ri-(crying)im sorry armaan ke tum apni ye purani addadt nahin bhoole…ab bohot der ho chuki hain….tumne phirse wo hi galti dhorai…..khud pe overconfident…armaan hamesha jo hum sunte haina wo saach nahin hota!
She started walking away from him..
Ar- riddhima plz ruko meri baat suno…riddhima tumse both pyaar karta hoon…nahi jee sakta tumare bina…riddhima plz…riddhima mar jaoga…
Riddima ran back to him when he said "mar jaoga"…
They both came into a big hug…..ISHQ LETA PLAYED IN THE BACKGROUND……………ri- I love you armaan….aur aisa khabhi maat khena….
Ar- I love you too………
Looking for them came along sameer in the deep jungle..he found them both hugging each other……something was stopping him from going to riddhima and asking her what was going on…deep inside he knew that these two were meant for each other…
Ok guys this was it…..plz plz cmnt….
Aur last time bohot logo ne badi cmnts nahin chodi thi
Iss bar plzzzz….badi cmnt likhna……PLZZZ:D
Peace:)
Luv,
Janhvi<3
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Posted: 15 years ago
janhvi bahut accha part tha
mujhe lambi comment likhna nahi aata isliye keh rahi it was excellent loved it.
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi janhvi...............

very very nice update..........

u r really very very filmy................. i guess u see lots of television and movis so.........

coming back to he part............

i felt ars emotions cud have been said which wud enhance the part.........

te dialoges were good............. the emotios right but werent expressed.......

other then that nice story.........

do continue soon.......

thanks for the pm

bye

Edited by maanu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank You Very Much Dear For Pm & This Part .. Awesome Update . You write very well dear keep it up and send pm .
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part just loved it... Hope no more probs b/w them... Must say u r mindblowing.... Armaan saying "main mar jauga" oh i just simply luved it 👏 😊 👏 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Wowie hun! 😃 it was splendid 😊 😊 loved the dialouges! bilkul mast yaar! 😉 😉 super filmy! 😆 😆 he he...thanks a ton for the pm...lovely update jhanvi..muah 😳 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
HEY LOVELY PART............LOVED IT...........YIPEEEEEEEEEEEE MY AR ARE 2GETHER AGAIN.......I HOPE THT SAMEER DOES NOT SEPARATE THM............

OR WAS THIS THE END..........

COULD U PLZZZZZ ADD ME IN THE PM LIST OF URS...........I LOVED UR WRITING PIECES AND M A FAM OF THM

CONTD. SOON
LOADS OF LOVE
KSHMA
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow it was awesome.i loved it.u have great imagination dear.aur haan kisi din ridz ko saus wali saree mein dikhana.
love you.😉
Edited by cute_ridhima - 15 years ago

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