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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preethis

this part was very nice:-). I enjoyed it but promise next time you should give a big update:-)

nextt partt iss lambaa deedss!!!!
writtennnn it juss noww!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_nikki

nice one sindy!! very nicely written!!

add me to the PM list. Sorry i couldnt comment on the last update.

heyyyy thnkssssss avnii...
choooooooo gladddddd u lykdddd itt jaaannuuuuuu!!
i luvvvvv u!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: myownarea

loved it 😊
uffff...rati aur arjun... 😍

hehee divya di... nooo trancee plzzz..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hi!!!!
amazing!!!! now what is the problem of that tariq??
anyways, awesome part. update soon.

heyyyy nishhhh.... awwwwiieessssss thnkuuuuu jaaaaannn!!!
tariqq.... ummmmm jusss a lil protective of hiss lil siss!!
all brotherss are!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 3-

Rati walked into the mba class room right into the drama queens spilling coffee all over their shirts, smiling to herself. They were so dramalicious, she thought. A drop of coffee on their clothes is enough to creep into their denial senses.

As soon as the first drop of coffee fell on their shirt they could be heard jumping around like baboons, only good looking ones, she thought.

***

Arjun slowly put on his white sweats, and faded blue jeans and rushed out of the building.

Your so crazy dude, birthday ke chakkar mein mba ke liye late ho gaya na dude! Ab rati ke saath wo rahul baith gaya to.... TO... TU TO AAJ GAYA BETA! AAJ TO TERA RAM RAM SATYA KARKE HI CHODEGI RATS!

***

Rati evaded her eyes towards her watch for the umpteenth time in the last 4 minutes.

Aaj to arjun gaya. How dare he! Usko pata ha ii hate it when people come late, and hes late by 240 seconds ALREADY!

She sat on her desk fuming in her own despaired dreamworld when she felt her cell beep.

She pulled it out and started typing at her own leisure.

***

Arjun sat in the auto beside mohit when he felt his cell beep.

Hey bb, wats happening?

-ps

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Sent by prettysecrets@yahoo.com

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He smiled flashing his dimples at his new Samsung express music, which blushed and turned its own lights off, inviting arjun.

Hey ps, nothing really, rushing around in sweats and jeans. Tired still having a big day today!

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Sent by bbbadyboy_jb007@yahoo.com

What on earth for? Is my boy turning old?

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Sent by prettysecrets@yahoo.com

His eyes glowered at the message. Was that a guess? Or did she know?

Oh cmon dude be sensible, youve never met her ever in your life. How can she know?

How do you know ps?

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Sent by bbbadyboy_jb007@yahoo.com

***

Arjun rushed into the mba class with mohit beside him scanning the entire room for a flicker of recognization when finally he found those beautiful brown eyes which seemed to be sealed to something below the desk.

'RATTSSS!!'

He quickly called out only to find tanvi from the drama queens club, violet approach him with a wicked smile.

Tanvi- hey arjun. Looking good.

She said slowly circling her hand along his broad shoulders.

Arjun who never missed a chance gave her his killing smile as he said- hey tanvi, you never looked better!

Tanvi- oh really?

Arjun- really.

Tanvi who was inching closer to him asked again- really arjun?

Arjun- of course tanvi. Your looking like a princess.

He said winking at tanvi who turned deep scarlet.

He was about to say something more when he heard someone clearing their throats beside him. He quickly turned to see rati standing there with a do-whatever-you-want-im-not-bothered look.

Rati- awwww tanvi shirt kitni cute hai! But lagta hai tumhaare kismet mein ye likhi hi nahi hai. Tabhi first time pehenne par hi ispe itna baddaaa daag lag gaya.

She said pointing at the coffee marks on her sleeves.

Arjun stiffened a laugh as he saw rati pouncing on tanvi, her long lost prey.

Rati, who didn't miss a thing snarled at arjun.

Arjun- s..s.srorryy rats!

Rati gave him one last look before she deliberately went and took a seat beside rahul.

Arjun couldn't believe his eyes. What the hell did rats think she was doing acting so friendly with a womanizer like him, he thought when suddenly professor shukla rummaged in patting his well oiled hair with his left hand forcing arjun into the only empty seat beside vedant, who was known to all the girls as vedu.

Vedant was one nerd of a guy, who wouldn't stop reading even if his house collapsed into the shit hole. Infact sometimes he and mohit would joke about how they will have to burry his books alongside his grave someday, or be haunted by his spirit forever.

***

The next 4 hours turned out to be the most depressing hours of his life. Twice shukla caught him winking at samrat, when vedu would ask his non sensical questions, and thrice he was caught muffling a laugh when shukla was asking a question. Apart from that there was nothing new, except suddenly rati and rahul were sitting nicely and rats was helping rahul with some problems. When did they become like chaddi buddies? He wondered.

But hell with it, when did rats ever bother telling him anything, let the fact that they were best friends be set aside for now.

He grimaced, and then looked up wondering whether he had said that aloud, since everyone around him was suddenly staring at him with an amused expression, except rats who was mouthing something which he couldn't make out.

Arjun stuttered in vain to know what they were all staring at- t.tum sa-sab uh...-

But before he could proceed a nauseatic killing disgusting oil smell filled through his nostrils. He looked up to see where it was coming from only to find shukla sir standing there with arjuns register in his hand.

shukla- to mahodaya jab aapko kaksha main padhaye gaye cheezon par dhyan dena chahiye, aap yahaan baithe apni chitrakala ki pariksha le rahe the?

He said showing the register page where he had been sketching tanvi and rati fighting to everyone. Arjun ducked his head under his desk to avoid the disgusting look tanvi was giving him, and the amused look that rati was giving him.

Shukla- pata nahi aap jaise bachhe yahaan aate hi kyu hai? Apne mata pita ke paiso ka nasht karne ke liye hi aap log paida hue hai!

He said throwing the notebook at arjuns face before leaving.

***

Arjun slowly walked down the road disgusted at shuklas words.

Bloody loser, khud ko to padhana aata nai hai, aur mere ko bolta hai!

He thought when suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder. He quickly turned to see rats standing there with an assuring look on her face.

Rati- arjun relax. Itll be fine. Take care. And umm enjoy. Its your birthday dude!

She said smiling at him sweetly making him forget all the disgust that was dwelling in his heart at that moment.

Instead he pounced over a new focus, how can some one smile so sweetly?

He thought as he walked along the empty road, fantacizing about him and rati, together in the night, under the same blanket, comfortably cuddled together smiling up at each other till he reached his place.

It wasn't the first time he was fantacizing this way about her. This mostly happened in mba classes when they would sit together.

She would sit and make a real effort to brush up all the notes, with her hair falling all over her face blocking his view of her face, giving a ticklish feel on his hand as they brushed across, while he fantacized the most sensuous feelings, which made him go slightly red, wondering there were any Edward Cullen in his class.

***

Lol finally a longer part...

Hehe, do enjoy guys!

Love

Sindhya

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Posted: 15 years ago
Omg superb sindya you are so talented awesome
👏👏👏
Edited by Rozain - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozain

Omg superb sindya you are so talented awesome

👏👏👏

awwwwwiiiiiieeeeeeee sadddiiiii thnkuuuuuuuuuu!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sindhya i hope i am the first one to comment but i am not me sad. oh my gosh this part was long as per you but i wanted to read ahead as well hehe.
Sindhya this was such a beautifully written part, i love how you so effortlessly as it seems use the words to describe everyone's feelings, movements and whatever is happening aroound. I totally adore our rats dear who is soo on time, i try so hard to be punctual but usually end up being late, i should better pull up my socks man.
Wow arjun is no not like mayank, totally opposite, he is sooo late and so not into studies. The studying streak and maddness is to be found in vedu and rats up to a certain extent.
Arjun, he was flirting with tanvi, whoaaaaaaaa rats did an amaxing job with the retorts man, hehe poor tanvi.
arjun was getting so jealous when rati was with rahul. I lovedddddddd the arjun and shukla interactions and rats is such a doll who came to arjun later on. arjun is sooo naughty and his wild imagination. sooo mba classes are really special arjun foe some ahem ahem reason hehe.
Excellent work keep it up!
Edited by Senny - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
well cindy as usual ur rocking...pretty...well...secrets...going on its own and inteligent track as its u make it wonderfull....hugs from me sweety...
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Posted: 15 years ago
oooooooo!! hahah
loved it sindhooo:)
it was awesomeeee!!! hahah arjun's getting sensual feelings wenever he is with rati!! haha oo la la.....cuddled up and stuff..huh??
lol
wow 4hours wud definately get me killed in a class! lol i wonder how he coped with it on his birthday!!lol
cant wait to see wat happens next...wonderin wen they'll find out that they talk to each other on chat too!LOL

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