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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

hey sweetie...great one shot i know loadsa ppl are writing oneshots but i dnt mind lol its great readin em ....i loved this shot it was soo pure and cute and funny lol...even if u are leavin IF u better still eb writing one shots okai ? lol joking i understand education si wayy more important so prioritise that hehe :)

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Sammy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

damn , saz...i love your one shots....u shud post 2 per day...lol...aww this one was soo cute...i loved the cheezy lines...lol..n he is right they always do work..lol:D

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amruta04

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

hey dear

awesome one shot

really liked it

do write more and could u pl PM me when u update

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-Nuts-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

wow it was awesome!!
simple yet cute 😳
loved it from the start 😃
👏 👏 👏
meethi 😊

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princess52

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

as usuall i m the last one to comment lollzzz.....but not my fault....my stupidd lapppy....goshh neverminmd

u knoww sazzzzzzz.....ur one of the bst writer seriousllyyy

where doess all this idea come fromm maan...

they r amazing

this part ...was sooo cooll...the way he proposed lolzz made me laugh ....

aww really cute...

hey i need ssome more AR shoots coz ur best in it

love u sazyyy girlll..

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Sanaya/Madhurima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

awesome sazooo....very cute....i njoyed it missy...

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Reshma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

hey really nice

loved it

love Reshma

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Swaminathan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

hey saz sorry for the late comment ...........was busy .....anyways came across ur one shot nice once again...........write more

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@debby_11

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

seriously it was fabulous........
loved it.......d way he proposed her
n so many pick up lines.......wow😆

love
debadrita

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Jinalee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

tht was amazing yaar!

luved everything.....from his pickup lines 2 his confession!

the pickup lines were funny 😆

n wow!....u wrote this in only 30 min! tht is really inpressive!

tc!

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