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Last Part

7 and a half months later.....

The past few months have passed very quickly in Sujal and Kashish's life...now Kashish is in her last stage of her pregnancy and was expecting her baby anyday....Heer and Prem arrived a week ago so that Heer could take care of Kashish and they were now staying at Sujal and Kashish's house......its 2.30....everyone is sound asleep when Kashish wakes up suddenly due to pain....we can see the pain she is feeling clearly on her face.....

Kashish: Su...Sujalll..

Sujal opens his eyes and sits up in bed....he instantly becomes alert as was his habit since Kashish become pregnant......he would wake up at every movement she made....Sujal looks at her......

Sujal: jaan!..kya hua!tum theek to ho?

Kashish: nahi....woh Sujal.....Sujal...muje...bahot dard ho raha hai...Heer.....Heer ko bulao ..

Sujal: iska matlab tum....jaan main Heer ko bulata hoon...tumhe pani chahiye?

Kashish: nahi muje kuch nahi chahiye....Heerrrr....pleeee....

Sujal: h..haan main Heer ko leke aata hoon...do minute jaan...

Sujal gets up from bed and rushes to the guest room and bangs on the door...

Sujal: Heer!...Prem!..darwaza kholo

Heer and Prem wake up and rush to the door...Heer opens the door and looks at Sujal in worry......

Heer; dii ,thik to hai...

Sujal: nahin Heer...woh theek nahin hai...bohat takleef me hai...tum kuch karo na Heer

Heer: main dekhti hoon dii ko...

Prem: main gaari nikalta hoon...

Sujal: theek hai main Kashish ko leke aata hoon...

Prem rushes to get the car whilst Sujal goes back to the room..he sees Heer beside Kashish holding her hand...

Sujal: Heer Kashish theek haina?

Heer: its delivary time....lekin ghabrane ki koi baat nahi....main hoon na...chaliye hume dii ko lejana hoga...

Sujal: haan chalo...

Sujal goes forward and looks at Kashish wincing in pain...

Sujal: jaan tumhe kuch nahin hoga main hoon na..

He takes her in his arms and starts walking down towards the car whilst Heer follows..

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20 minutes later.....

All of them reach the hospital....Heer takes Kashish straight to the delivery room with the help of the hospital stadd.....Sujal and Prem stand out the room waiting to hear the good news of baby's arrivial........After 3 hours of agony for both Sujal and Kashish....the suite door finally opens and Heer walks out with a big smile and excitement in her voice....

Heer: jiju!mubarak ho!aapko beta hua hai

Sujal: sach....main finally dad ban gaya......waise Kashish kaisi hai....

Heer: di bilkul theek hain..woh araam kar rahi hain..

Sujal: kya main un dono ko dekh sakta hoon....I promise main undono ko bilkul disturb nahi karunga.

Heer: chalo itna to main aapke liye kar hi sakti hoon...saali jo hoon aapki...aap jaiye

Sujal: thanks Heer.....

Sujal looks at Heer than walks towards Kashish's room.....Sujal gently opens the door and sees Kashish sleeping....her tiredness can easily be seen on her face...he walks up to her and gently bends forward....he kisses her forehead making sure not to wake her.....then he looks at the side at where a small cot is placed...he smiles and walks towards the cot...he looks down and sees his little junior fast asleep...Sujal gently bends forward and kisses him on his cheek then gently places his finger between his tiny hands...as he clutches them...........Kashish comes to her senses and remembers her the past events of her labor pains and delivery....she whispers ..."Heer mera Beta".......because she is feeling restless in her sleep.....Sujal realises and walks up to her...then holds her hand in his...

Sujal: jaan...humara beta theek hai...woh so raha hai

Kashish opens her eyes when she hears her name from his voice....

Kashish: Sujal...woh kaha hai...maine abhi tak use dekha bhi nahi..

Sujal: acha..rukko...main usse leke aata hoon...

Sujal lets go of her hand and walks towards the cot...he looks at their sleeping baby and he gently picks him up in his arms...taking him towards Kashish...he gently passes him to Kashish...

Sujal: yeh raha humara beta..

Kashish takes him in her arms holding him close then she bends down kissing his forehead...she holds him in his hands and looks at him with a smile...

Kashish: tumpe gaya hai Sujal...jaisa maine manga tha waisa hi beta paya hai...

Sujal smiles at her..

Sujal: par iski aankhein aur iske hont bilkul tumhari tarah hain...isme hum dono ki parchai nazar aati hai

Kashish: kyunki yeh hamara beta hai...waise jaan iska naam.

Sujal: iska naam...maine rocha hai ke hum iska naam Anees rakhenge...kyunki Anees ka matlab hai dosti..aur humare rishte ki shuruaat bhi to dosti se huyi thi..

Kashish: haa...yeh naam thik rahega mere bete ke liye...Anees....hum bhi Anees ke dost banke rahenge,,,'

Sujal: sahi kaha tumne jaan...kyunki jis rishte ki buniyaad dosti ki ho...woh rishta khud ba khud kamyab ban jaata hai

Kashish;Thanks jaan .....hamare bete ka itna achcha naam rakhne ke liye........

Sujal: mujko thanks kehne se manna karti ho...aur khud tum thanks bol rahi ho...not fair jaan...

Kashish:galti ho gayi..maff kar do.........

Sujal: ab tumne muje itna khoobsurat tohfa iya hai ke maaf to muje karna hi padega..tumse naraz bhi nahin rehsakta main...

Kashish: aakhir kar main tumhari ek hi dost aur patni jo hoon..

Sujal: shaadi to ek hi baar hoti haina jaan...to zaahir si baat hai ke tum meri ek lauti patni hogi...haan dost aur to hosakte hain...par tumsa dost muje duniya me kahin nahin mil sakta..aur na hi main dhoondne waala hoon...kyunki muje tum me apne saare rishte mil gaye hain..

Kashish: I love you jaan for our all the relations...

Sujal: i love you too jaan...for making my life worth living..

Kashish: Sujal....bahar se Heer aur Prem ko bula lao...muje Heer se kuch kehna hai..

Sujal: Heer se?...theek hai main abhi bulake laata hoon...

Sujal bends forward and gently kisses her forehead then goes out of the room to get Heer and Prem...After 5 minutes Heer and Prem return with Sujal...Heer goes and gently hugs Kashish from the side...

Heer: congratulations di!!!...aap ko bohat bohat mubarak ho...i'm so happy...finally main masi bangayi...

Kashish: Thank you Heer so much....tumhare bina mera yeh safar kabhi itna aasan nahi hota aur jis tarah se tumne mere bete ka khayal rakha hai us tarah tum kabhi Masi nahi ho sakti....tum aajse Anees ki Godmother ho......

Heer looks at her in surprise...

Heer: kya!!...di main godmother..ohh i love you so much di!! thank you...lekin maine aisa kuch bhi nahin kiya...yeh to mera farz banta hai...ke main aapko aur Anees ka poora khayal rakhun...waise di naam bohat khoobsoorat hai iska..kyun Prem..

Prem: haan bilkul...ab zarra muje bhi to dekhne do apne bhatije ko

Heer: nahin pehle main usse uthaungi...

Prem: Heer ab isme behas nahin please...hum dono milke utha lenge isse...

Prem walks towards Kashish and Heer while Heer takes Anees in his arms...Prem stands behind Heer and holds her while she holds Anees.....both continue to admire him and play with him..

Sujal: ab hamari bari to khatam ho gayi...ab tumhari bari hai Heer....to kab suna rahi ho hume bhi achchi khabar...kyun Kashish...

Kashish: haa aur waise bhi London aaye kitne din ho gaye...ab se tum bhi planning me lag jao taki Anees bad me akela na pad jaye...use bhi to khelne ke liye koi chahiye....

Sujal: to kab mil rahi hai khabar Prem...

Prem gulps as he looks at Heer...who is blushing red...

Heer: kya aap dono bhi...jab kismat me hoga tab aapko yeh good news mil jaayegi...ab muje kya pata kab...Prem tum kuch kaho na...

Prem: main kya kahun...

Kashish: tum dono to kabhi kuch samjoge bhi nahi....

Sujal: tum kaho to main Prem ko achche se samja sakta hoon..

Kashish looks at Sujal embarassed...

Kashish: Sujal kuch to sharam karo...tum sabke saamne aise...

Sujal: Kashish ab main sabse bada hoon main nahi samjaunga to kya tum samjaogi,,,

Kashish: kissi ko kuch bhi samjane ki zaroorat nahin hai...woh khud ba khud samaj jaayenge...

Sujal: thik hai main to waise bhi sirf mazak kar raha tha..

Prem: acha theek hai...isse pehle ke kuch aisi baatein ho jo mere aur Heer ke sunne layak nahin hai...hum yahan se chalte hain...di aap araam kijiye aur hum aapse baad me milte hain...

Heer: aur haan Anees so chuka hai..main usse waapis cot me daal deti hoon...

Heer goes towards the cot and gently places Anees back into the cot...then walks back up to Kashish and hugs her...

Heer: apna khayal rakhna di...main aapse baad me milti hoon...take care bye..

Kashish: bye heer....bye Prem...

Sujal: Bye guys....take care........

Prem and Heer say bye to them then leave the room...Sujal smiles at Kashish then sits down beside her..

Sujal: ab tum theek ho na jaan?

Kashish: hmm...main bilkul thik hoon...tum jo mere pass ho...

He holds her hand into his and gently kisses it...

Sujal: main to hamesha tumhare saath hoon...ab tum bas jaldi se ghar aa jao waapis...phir hum apne bete ke saath zindagi ki ek nayi shuruaat karenge..

Kashish: main jald hi wapas aajaogi..

Sujal: aur main tumhara intezaar karunga...
Kashish: Sujal...kya main tumse kuch mang sakti hoon...
Sujal: jaan...maangne ki zaroorat nahin hai...tum jo chahe mujse keh sakti ho...main tumhe woh dene ko taiyaar hoon..kaho kya chahiye tumhe jaan?
Kashish: can I just get a hug?....ple....
Sujal looks at her with a smile...he gets up and gently climbs to the side of the bed then takes her in his arms hugging her...and holding her close to himself whilst genly running his hands in her hair...
Kashish: I love you jaan....
Sujal: i love you too jaan

Sujal moves back looking into her eyes...

Sujal: I think ab tumhe kuch dair ke liye so jana chahiye...main Anees ka khayal rakhunga.....

Kashish: hmm...theek hai...agar woh jaag gaya to muje utha dena...aur tum yahin ho na mere paas?

Sujal: main hoon naa tumhare pass...tum befikar hoke so jao...

Kashish: theek hai...tum mujhe jaga dena agar woh uth gaya tho...

Sujal bends forward and kisses her forehead making her close her eyes as she slowly falls asleep...

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Two weeks later....

Kashish is back from the hospital with Anees....both Sujal and Kashish feel that now their family is truly complete and they were enjoying every moment of being parents......its 5pm both Sujal and Kashish were going to give Anees a bath....Sujal fills the baby bath tub with some warm water and brings it out while Kashish is removing Anees's baby grow and nappy and trying to calm him down as he is crying...Sujal places the bath tub on the floor and adds some baby bath soap into the water and mixes it...then he dries his hands with a towel and goes to Kashish and Anees...

Sujal: arre Junior kya baat hai...aap ro kyun rahe ho...

Kashish: kahi pani thanda to nahi...

Sujal: nahin jaan maine abhi check kiya hai...paani bilkul theek hai...shayad tumne iske kapde utaar diye isliye yeh ro raha hai..kyunki isse acha nahin lagta

Kashish: tab to yeh mere pe gaya hai.....ise thand lag rahi hogi...jaldi karo...

Sujal: haan woh to hai...bilkul tumpe gaya hai...tumhe bhi achcha nahin lagta na isliye muje hi tumhari madad karni padti hai...

Sujal winks at her then picks up Anees taking him to the bath as he places him inside the water while supporting Anees' head with one hand...with his other hand he washes....Kashish takes some soap in her hand and starts to rub on his hands and legs....she takes some water and wipes the soap...Anees stopps crying once he gets in the bath and gently splashes in the water...both Sujal and Kashish let him play for sometime then Kashish takes him out...Sujal places a towel on the changing mat and Kashish takes Anees out and places him on the mat and wraps him in the towel..

Kashish: Sujal....tum jake please iske kapde taiyaar karo....main ise leke aati hoon...

Sujal: theek hai jaan...main nikalta hoon...

Sujal goes to the cabinet and opens it...he takes out a baby grow and a vest for him then gets out his nappy bringing it to bed...whilst Kashish rubs some baby powder on Anees..then picks him up and brings him to bed...she starts to dress him...Anees starts crying again...

Sujal: jaan lagta hai isse neend aayi hai...tum ek kaam karo...tum isse taiyaar kardo aur main iska dudh bana ke laata hoon..iske sone ka time horaha hai..

Kashish: sahi keh rahe ho....main ise leke bahar zule pe jati hoon tum wahi aa jana...shayad waha so jayega...

Sujal: theek hai jaan...main bas abhi aaya...

Sujal leaves the room to get milk whilst Kashish finishes dressing Anees...then places mittens on his hands and a small hat on his head..she wraps him up in a shawl..then takes him to the swing...10 minutes later Sujal comes out and passes the milk to Kashish...

Sujal: yeh lo jaan..

Kashish: thanks jaan....betho tum bhi.....

Kashish moves on side making space for Sujal.....Sujal comes and sits down beside her as she feds Anees milk...within minutes Anees falls asleep...Sujal smiles...

Sujal: isse sach me neend hi aayi thi...dekho kitni jaldi so gaya..

Kashish: iski neend tumpe gayi hai...tum bhi to aise hi so jate ho...

Sujal: haan woh to hai...par tumhara meri baahon me hona zaroori hai...warna muje bhi neend nahin aati...

Kashish: janti hoon....ab inhe andar sula dona ....main yaha tumhara intzaar karti hoon...

Sujal: kyun...tumhe andar nahin jaana kya?

Kashish: kuch dair yaha bathna chahti hoon...waise bhi kal raat Anees ne sone nahi diya...

Sujal: jaan to tum andar jaake thori dair ke liye so jaao na...Anees waise bhi so chuka hai...ab woh kamsekam 2 ghanton tak nahin jaagega..

Kashish: nahi main yahi thik hoon....khuli hawa me..

Sujal: theek hai jaan...jaise tum chaho...

Sujal gets up then gently takes Anees in his arms...he walks inside then places him in his cot and wraps Anees up properly...he leaves the room and walks back out...

Kashish: thik se so gaya...

Sujal: haan maine usse sula diya hai aur usse cover bhi kardiya...ab itni jaldi nahin jaage ga woh

Kashish: hmm...betho to sahi yaha...

Sujal: beth ta hoon jaan...pehle yeh batao tumhe kuch chahiye to nahin...coffee wagaira..

Kashish: nahi main thik hoon...tum sirf betho na...

Sujal smiles at her then sits beside her...

Sujal: kya baat hai jaan?..aaj tum baar baar muje apne paas bethne ke liye keh rahi ho...koi khaas wajah?

Kashish: pata nahi....aaj main bahot akela mehsoos kar rahi hoon,,,,

Sujal looks at her worried...he moves close to her placing his hand on her shoulder..

Sujal: jaan...tum mere hote huye akela kaise mehsoos karsakti ho...koi baat tumhe sata rahi hai kya?

Kashish: nahi aisi to koi baat nahi...bas aise hi main kuch thik mehsoos nahi kar rahi....

Sujal: kyun jaan...kya baat hai...tum muje batao main tumhari har pareshani ko durr kardunga...

Kashish: aise pareshan honewali koi baat nahi...meri kal raat ko heer se baat ho gayi hai aur usne kaha ki aisa hota hai kabhi kabhi delivary ke bad...usne muje medicine lene ko kaha tha lekin phir bhi muje kuch dard ho raha hai....aur upper se kal puri raat me Anees ke saath thi...

Sujal: kya!..tumhe dard horaha hai aur tumne muje bataya tak nahin

Kashish: kaha na normal hai main thik ho jaungi do din me...

Sujal: lekin jaan tumhe muje batana chahiye tha na...ab tum poora rest logi aur raat ko main Anees ko sambhalunga...tum sirf aur sirf araam karogi

Kashish: thik hai...jaisa tum kaho.....

Sujal: ab batao tumne dawai li ke nahin?

Kashish: subaah hi le li maine...

Sujal: good...aur abhi dard to nahin horaha na tumhe?

Kashish: thoda hai...lekin phir bhi main thik hoon...

Sujal: to jaan tum yahan kya kar rahi ho...tumhe araam karna chahiye...aur ab main kuch nahin sunne waala...tum andar chal rahi ho bas...

Sujal lets go of her then stands up...he takes her in his arms and starts walking back inside..

Kashish: kaha leke ja rahe ho....

Sujal: humare kamre me...ab tum sirf bed rest karogi aur kuch nahin..

Kashish: thik hai lekin muje neend nahi aayegi...

Sujal: kyun nahin ayegi?..ek baar tum letogi to neend ajayegi...waise bhi tum raat ko theek se nahin soyi...

Sujal reaches their room and walks in...he gently makes her lie in the bed then picks up the bedsheet and covers...finally he sits down beside her while running his hand in her hair..

Kashish: ab tum is tarah se mera khayal rakhoge to neend to aayegi na..

Sujal: main to hamesha tumhare paas hoon tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye...tum main meri jaan basti hai...tumhe takleef me kaise dekh sakta hoon main...

Kashish; janti hoon....tum to muje kabhi nahi dekh sakte.....I love you jaan..

Sujal: i love you too jaan...

He bends his head down and gently kisses her forehead...then her cheeks one by one...

Kashish: kya kar rahe ho din me....raat to hone do..

Sujal: kyun?...din me kya problem hai?...raat ko to mauka hi nahin milta...Anees jo baar baar uth jaata hai..

Kashish: neeche sab maids hai.....

Sujal: woh to neeche haina jaan...aur hum apne kamre me...

He gently moves his lips towards her nose as he kisses the tip of her nose...he moves down a little and kisses her chin...his lips run down from her chin as he kisses her along her neck..

Kashish: Sujal darwaza bhi lock nahi hai..

Sujal places his finger on her lips as he gently whispers against her neck...

Sujal: shhh...koi nahin ayega..

Kashish: Sujal...tumhe jo karna hai woh raat ko ya atleast darwaza to puri tarah se bandh karo..

Sujal moves back and gets up then goes and closes the door while locking it...then comes back towards her and lies down beside her...he looks deeply in her eyes...

Sujal: ab aur koi problem hai to batado?

Kashish: hmm...ab koi problem nahi...

Sujal smiles at her then bends forward placing his lips on hers as he kisses her passionately...his hands caresses her arms...she moves her hands on his back holding him close to her...........she runs her hands on his arms holding them in hers.. He tightens his hold on her hand as he kisses her deeply...he pulls her closer to him with his other hand as he draws closer and closer to her...completely lost in her love...She is trying to catch her breath when she pushes him with her hand ....while wiping her mouth with her other hand..Sujal looked at her with a smile as he catches his breath...he held her hand in his and kisses it..

Sujal: i love you

Kashish; I love you too Sujal..

Sujal: really?muje to nahin pata tha

Kashish: lekin ab to pata lag gaya na...aur waise bhi Anees gawah hai is baat ka..

Sujal: haan woh bhi hai...par Anees mere pyar ka bhi gawah hai...after all mera bhi barabar ka haath tha isme..

Kashish: lekin woh mera beta pehle hai..

Sujal: nahin..humara hai

Kashish: nahi mera hai Anees..

Sujal: jaan hamara hai...mehnat to maine bhi ki thi

Kashish: lekin use janam maine diya tha..

Sujal: theek hai jaan...tum jeeti main haara...wake me...bache ko janam dena bohat hi badi baat hai...jitni takleef tab tumne sahi...us takleef se main to nahin guzra tha..

Kashish: main to aise hi keh rahi thi...hum dono ka pura hakk hai us per...main akeli kuch nahi kar pati tumhare bina..

Sujal: par woh sach me pehle tumhara beta hai...tum uska dhyaan pichle 9 mahine se rakh rahi ho..woh tumhare hisse ka ek hissa tha...isliye tumhara uspe zyada haq banta hai

Kashish: lekin kya tumhare bina yeh mumkin tha...

Sujal: yeh hum dono ke binna mumkin nahin tha

Kashish: hmm..sahi kaha...ab hum kuch dair ke liye so jaye...

Sujal: haan...main to bhool gaya tha ke tumhe araam karna tha...chalo so jaao jaan

Kashish: kya main aaj se pehle akeli soyi hoon jo aaj muje akele neend aayegi..

Sujal: to main hoon na tumhare saath...hamesha ki tarah tumhe main apni baahon me sulane waala hoon

Kashish closes her eyes....Sujal puts his arms around her shoulder while placing his head on her neck........ After sometime both fall asleep peacefully in each others arms..

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6 beautiful months later...

Anees is now 6 and a half months old and starts crawling a little..it is 11 pm at Night when Sujal comes home from the office after finishing an important meeting...he unlocks the door and walks inside holding a bunch of red and white roses for Kashish...

Sujal: Kashish!...Kashish kahan ho tum jaan

Kashish runs down from upstairs....

Kashish: aawaz dheere se bolo...abhi sulaya hai maine use...

Sujal: oops...sorry jaan..woh aadat haina muje to

Kashish: its ok....tum upper jao main tumhari coffee leke aati hoon..kyunki dinner to tum karke aaye honge...

Sujal: haa woh dinner aaj sabka meeting me hi tha.....theek hai jaan tum coffee leke upper aao ...aaj main bahot thak gaya hoon....by the way...roses for you...

He passes her the roses then bends forward kissing her cheek..

Kashish: bahot hi khubsurat hai..

Sujal: hain to...par tumse thoda kam

Kashish: hmm...ab tum upper jao...main aati hoon....aur jyada aawaz mat karna..woh so raha hai....

Sujal: theek hai nahin karunga...

Sujal smiles at her then walks up the stairs.....In their room he sees Anees asleep on the bed...Anees looks absolutely adorable wearing only a nappy..Sujal takes of his tie and puts it on dresser....he opens the closet looking for his night clothes while removing his shirt...when Anees gently stirs in his sleep...Sujal throws the shirt on the floor and rushes to him and lies beside him...gently tapping him so he falls asleep,,...Sujal takes him in his hand and puts his head on his shoulder while he laying back on the bed....slowly Anees falls asleep ..Sujal gently taps his back...ten minutes have passed and Kashish returns with a mug of coffee to the room...she is surprised to see Sujal fast asleep with Anees,,,Kashish puts the mug down on the table...and slowly opens the door of her closet....she takes out her camera and starts to take snaps of father and son....Kashish admires them as they sleep cutely...she smiles feeling content and happy because her family is complete...she puts the camara down and sits beside them...she looks at them for a moment when she bends down and kiss Anees..Sujal feels Kashish's arm touch him and opens his eyes as he looks at her...

Sujal: jaan tum kab aayi?

Kashish: bas abhi....tum dono bahot achche lagte ho aise....

Kashish kisses his forehead and lays down beside him putting her one arm on Anees while putting her head on his shoulder...Sujal smiles at her and wraps his arm around her holding her close...

Sujal: ab hum ache lag rahe hain...hum theeno saath me hi ache lagte hain...

Kashish: hmm..I love you both so much..

Sujal: and i love my family too...

He smiles at her and gently kisses her forehead..they both close their eyes while holding on to Aneer and drift of to sleep....

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kehte hai ki dosti her kisi rishte me zarooriyat hoti hai....dosti rishto me meethas lati hai...to dosti aage jake pyaar me bhi badal sakti hai....ek dost hi hota hai jo aapko andar se leke bahar tak samajta hai...ek dost se jab aap pyaar karte hai to wahi khushi aapki zindagi ko dugni kar jata hai...dosti pyaar me...pyaar shaadi me...shaadi ek atoot rishte me...lekin kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hai ki puri duniya aapko galat samje lekin aapka dost kabhi aapka saath nahi chod pata....waise hi Kashish aur Sujal dono hi khusnaseeb insaan hai ki un dono ko unka pyaar unki dosti me mila...kyunki woh dono ek dusre ke saath khul ke baat kar sakte hai bina kisi darr aur hichkichahat ke....so yahi thi ek choti si kahani jo dosti se shuru hoke khatam huyi ek prem kahani me...

The End

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Posted: 15 years ago

great ending dear

eagerly waiting for next fic of urs
u two r jus awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow what a part.. I am fully in love with it.. Waise kabi kabi mai sochte hu k ladke q pregnent ho sakte hai.. Par phir mai sochte hu k agar aisa hota toh "Maa ke kadmo ke neche jannat hai" yeh line kabi nahi banti..

Hmm.. SK ke pyar ke nishani Anees kaash mai usse dekh pate..
Loved each and every dailouge in this part And that kiss how can i miss, it was like hollywood movie kiss.. Oh god waise mai itna smile q kar rahe hu..
So what else can i say, what i can do is just to pyar.. Ke aap dono issi tarah story likhte rahe aur usse hum tak pohcha te rahe.. Aap dono suspence create karte rahe aur hum log excieted hote rahe..
Ok bye warna agar mere mom ne mujhe itna haste hue dekh liye toh woh galat samjhe ge.. Hehe..
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Posted: 15 years ago
this was just awesome. loved the whole fic. It was too sweet just too good. Anees such a sweet name. Loved the scene whr sujal makes him sleep and sleeps with him. Everything in the fic is too good

will be eagerly waiting for the next fic.

Love reading ur fics Ur fics are always so sweet so waiting for more.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very sweet story !
Lovely ending....!
Do add me to the PM list of your next story !
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
As ususal dii an Awesome part............ missed a few though but this FF made me believe in love.......... it is magical .... Hat's off to u!!!!!!!!1
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow very excellent ending dears..........................very nice name anees............they truely are lucky to have their love in their wonderful friendship..................they understood each other very well as friends and also as lovers....................will surely miss them a lot.....................every scene was very beautifully and lovely described from the beginning dears................👏

congrats for successfully finishing this ff and hope u both start another new sk ff soon............................
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Posted: 15 years ago
👏Awesome , Dear Great & Perfect Ending , Each & Every Word Filled with Love & Emotions , Perfect Lovely Family ,👏 I am glad to read this ff and rest of all yours . thank you so much for this ff and all your pm . you guys are fantastc writers Love you ⭐️Please write some more ff i am going to miss your writing .😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great ending!!
Thanks for the PM..

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