Aarzii.....SujalnKashish.....Last Part..12/03

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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

hey i am soo sorry my comp has not been working so couldnt comment just read the whole thing it is wow just loved it loved heers craze kashishs changing feel just everythin

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sania_58

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

wow

awsome update

mindblowing

too good

great going

plz continue soon

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jyothi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

wow guys gr8 part cont soon

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

great part

i really liked the way u showed how slowly kashsish has started thinking about sujal even when she didnt want to look at the pictures she still tried to get a glimpse of them.Heer and kashish scene was really nice i really hope heer starts to think about prem and cant wait till kashish talks to prem about heer.Sujal and Ali scene was amazingly potrayed i really liked the way u described how sujal was feeling at that time,it seems he is very lonely.Im glad kashish accepted sujals offer cant wait till they work together.

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 16 years ago

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Radhika Shah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

Great part!!!

Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon!!!!

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Daebak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

Nice part !

Gr8 that Kashish signed the contract ...

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Deepa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

very sweet part..............so kashish knows abt prem's feelings for heer.................and heer is as always in her SG dreams........i imagined the photos n how hot he would have been..............kaash woh photos were here..........but anyways................imagination will do...............kashish is starting to like sujal...............that anixha part was very disgusting..............i hate that gal...............n the sujal ali convo was touching....................sujal wants some1 in his life who should be understanding, loving, caring................and its good that kashish signed the contract n now there r good chances they will come to know at each other in a better way..................cont soon dears................

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sheela

@Aamnakideewani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#168

such a nice ff iam sooooooo sorry guys 4 replying so late per i was really busy k main IF pe kafi din se nahi ayi mere pc mein bhi kuch pb thi the ff is so nice concept kitna acha hai yaar so soft😊luved it pura😊 sk k characters kitne sweet haina 😳 aur yeh heer bhi na tipical fan hai i wish sirf fan he ho bas😉kahin serious na ho jaye😆😆per nahi prem jo hai uske liye😉 nice setting guyz😊 and plzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooon😊

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crystal fantasy

@crystal fantasy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#169

Hi! Kashish ,Summi iam really very sorry for not commenting on your new ff as iam very busy with work.First of all promo was superb,Mujhe is ka music bhi bohot pasand aaya infact ye mera favourite music hai main isse sun ke liye woh toothpaste ka ad hamesha dekte hoon.Aur woh barish wow lagta hai iss ff mein bhi baarish ka bohot importance hoga.

Jahan tak introduction ka sawal hai iam glad tum dono ne characters ka naam sujal kashish hi rakha mujhe to ye naam unke asli naam se zyada acche lagte hai. Is mein to sujal actor hai waise woh businessman ke role mein hi zyada accha lagta hai magar ab tum dono ne likha ho to bohot accha hi hoga.Mujhe sab ke introductions boohot hi acche lage aur introduction mein hi baarish ye to aur bhi accha hai.

Part 1- Ye part to bohot hi accha tha khaas kar starting mein jab kashish white shalwar suit aur red dupatta pehenke park mein gaa rahi hoti hai aur sujal usse dekhta hai ye to perfect hai.Prem,heer aur kashish ke relation ship bhi bohot hi accha hai.

Part 2- Photo shoot to bohot hi accha tha aur kashish kaafi proffesional thi. chalo pehli mulaqat mein sujal impress to hua aur heer kuch zyad hi pagal hai sg ke peeche aur woh fortune cookies wala scene bohot hi accha tha aur iss mein mujhe last scene accha laga jab sujal ko red dupatta us ke chehre ko chune ka ehsaas hota hai aur tabhi kashish ka scarf bhi udta hai.

Part 3 - accha hai ke sujal ke tasveerein dekh kar kashish kuch feelings to aaye hai. Aur woh anisha woh to bohot hi cheap aur disgusting thi i hope ke dobara aap woh character na laaye story mein.Heer ne bohot acchi baat kahi ke kashish hi sujal se shaadi karle.Sujal aur ali ke beech ka conversation kaafi emotional tha.Sujal kashish ki mulaqat sujal ke ghar par bohot acchi rahi magar mujhe ye samaj nahi aaya agar kashish skirt mein itni uncomfortable thi to usne woh pehna hi kyun shalwar suit pehen leti to sujal aur bhi impress hojata. Sujal to bohot hi sweet hai kashish ki uneasyness dekhkar woh maria ko room saaf karne ko kehta hai.Ab to kashish sujal ki personal photographer bhi bangayi hai ye to aur bhi accha hai ab sujal ne to kashish ko kashish kehke bulana shuru kardiya i hope next part mein kashish bhi sujal ko sujal bulana shuru karde to accha rahega aur mujhe indono ka haath milene wala scene bhi bohot accha laga.Sujal ne to kashish ko gaadi mein baith kar jaate hue dekha to kya woh gaadi dekh kar pehchaan nahi paya ke ye to woh park waali ladki ki gaadi hai.

Ye story to bohot hi interesting horahi hai please jaldi se continue karo aur thanks for PM.

BYE AND LOVE YOU BOTH