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Posted: 15 years ago
That was really amazing......
plsss update the next part sooooooooonnnnnn..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
ur awesome writing skills prompted to comment again!!
awesome deasr dolly!!! do update it fast!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesoem update.loved it. continue soon.thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
I was waiting for this ud so long. So sad ud. Actually the total ff is sad. I cant find the exact word to describe it. Awesome ud.
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally you updated.........................
awesome yaar ,.................👏👏👏
mindblowing work..........................
do continue soon...........
thanks for the pm......😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
itna late reply karne ke liye tu mujhe joote baar, chappal maar, kuch bhi kar, main sab kuch sahne ke liye tayyar hun. tune itne mahine baad update kiya aur main bhi itna late reply karungi to yehi harsh hoga na????? i know it must have taken u a good lot of time to write something like this.

O M G !!! u really did it again jaan, as mallu said. Seriously, everytime i read this ff and i fall in love with it again and again. specially gunjan and mayank. ok mayank starting mein gunjan ki baat nahi manta tha, but ab to manta hai na !!! they are truly our jaanuable ppl. u made me freeze in the flashback part. thw words u used there created a live picture in front of my eyes. Not tht just, ur ff always creates a live movie in front of me. U really are a rockstar jaan. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Hats off to u jaan !! love u, i dont know how much, but love u alot. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

vinu

PS: Mallu jaanu. its ok yaar. ab tujhe time nahi mil raha to usme teri koi galti to nahi hai na?? though i m terribly waiting for ur reply aur dolly madam ka bhi, but still i can wait for u 2.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys hi!!!!!
oki there is a lot of things with this update first n foremost being that i am changing the NAME OF this ff .. n well u guys know me so u obviously must have guessed that who coined the new name
well its simi .. of course..
n the new name is
LOV BEYOND BOUNDRIES......
HOPE U GUYS LIKED THIS ONE BETTER...
n well second thing being the title vm ,, n its made by sush (my jaan. lov u)
n guys its just awsome n mindblowing.. num sabko ko pata hai k sush kitni badi rockstar hai in cases of vm making
here is it do c it guys n pls comment...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cO0CFe0TSvA712924[/YOUTUBE]
oki well guys now here is the update nn seriously guys i have hardly any idea what i have done in it as usual....
part13>>>>

Part 13''.

Scene 1(by mayank)

(present)

U= WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED????

I had no answer to this question of uday'.what was I too tell him anyway..

Someone shook my shoulders..

U=mayank.. gunjan itna kyun ro rahi hai??pla batao aakhir yaahan hua kya ha inn why did she mean when she said samrat chala gaya???

I tried answering him but the torrent of pain that had engulfed me made me choke up on my own words'

I kept telling myself that it was not as bad' it wasn't as if I was again searching for her n his remains in burned up human chunks lying scattered over a dusty street painted in road'

No it was certainly not that bad mayank..

It wasn't as bad''

YET 'it was bad enough'..

SCENE 2..(BY SAMRAT )

[present]

S= NUPUR NUPUR KAHAN HO TUM???

This was insane .. I could hear her sobbing clearly n yet why the hell wasn't I able to see her nnn why the hell were we pulled back'. N again ..HELL what the hell were we doing in this creepy n dark forest???

S= nupur answer me pls'. I can't..

In that instant my foot got entangled in something grimly n I fell forward face down on the wet forest floor'my head hit something hard..

A sharp stream of pain seared across my forehead'..

This was strange ' hell strange..

I was dead wasn't i????

Then how could I feel the pain of my injuries??

This was actually not possible not even close'.

I started to sit up on the forest ground amongst the numerous tree roots'..n then automatically my hand reached towards my forehead.. my fingers already tracing the deep gash just abv my right temple'.

The gash should have disappeared within seconds'.. well it didn't'.

I looked at my wet an sticky fingers'.

The thing on them was dark nn marronish with a tinge of black'

The only thing I was sure abt was that this wasn't blood'.

But then what it was???

Precisely at that moment I heard nupur behind me' she waas sounding terrified'.

N= samrat we r trapped' mujhe vapas jaana hai.. par mein nahin jaanti kaise?

As I looked at her desperately.. it felt as if the strange n unwelcomed forest was closing in on us'''.

SCENE 3[DIA'S ROOM]

(by narrator)

Even though it was a moonless night, still dia could clearly see the harsh rin pouring down her window's.

Strange..

The thunderstorm was too loud.. no one was going to get any sleep through these ghastly sounds of the storm'not that any one in this house would be interested in a trivial thing like sleeping tonight'yet still'..

She could hear dodo shouting in mayank's room.. even in this storm .. dodo's anger was clearly carried by soundwaves to her'

Something had again gone wrong' very wrong may be'

She sighed..

There was a time when dodo was a comedy king.. he was a cute , adorable n stupidest bumpkin'but now this uday hardly bore any resemblance to her dodo'..

Life had changed so drastically 4 each n every one of them'

She pulled up her skirt to see her scratches again.. they were much lighter then b4'

Magically they had been fading away too quickly n all this had started happening after the fit dia had suffered in the morning'.

Even her major wound just above her thigh which was the one responsible for disabling her 4 life didn't pained her any more'.

She knew she could speak again..

Her throat no longer felt dry as it had felt for the past one year'

Yet still she was too afraid to speak'.to tell anything to anyone'.

May be this was just a dream' obviously it was a dream..

As realities didn't muddle up people's life as their's had been done in the past two days'..

N with that thought she gave a wary look to samrat;s diary lieing by her bedside table'.

phew.. n last but not the least guys mmm making a pm list out here for this ff .. pls guys do reply or press the like button so that i can include u all who want to read this story
pm list(reserved)
loads n loads of lov dolly
Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee ud dolly..
mindblowingggg..
really luved it..
n luvv d vm.... grr888 work sush...
pllzzzzz do cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago

commented abt it on page 54........

i had forgotten about this reserve
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW loved it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
esp the VM by Sush!!!!!!!
the update was awesome!!!!!!!!!
But i'm just a little confused about what has happened to samrat and nupur!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz cont sooooooooooon kk promiss??
Mira

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