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Posted: 16 years ago
nice promo yaar
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey thanx people 4 liking it i'll update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
dolly i was in tears after reading part 4 ........... oh GOD poor mayank and anshu ......... kya hoga unka ......... nd gunjan tooooo ...... but at was da need to kill them ......... i cannot bea to see mayank like this ........... but this part nd the promo both were nice ........ but next time plz writ a happy ff ....... i can never ever see my mayur separated .....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti123

dolly i was in tears after reading part 4 ........... oh GOD poor mayank and anshu ......... kya hoga unka ......... nd gunjan tooooo ...... but at was da need to kill them ......... i cannot bea to see mayank like this ........... but this part nd the promo both were nice ........ but next time plz writ a happy ff ....... i can never ever see my mayur separated .....

hey my other two ff's are too happy ones
but ya this one is ultra tragic
sorry for it
what's cmg next will be a shocker
too illogical as i said
dunno how u people will take it
any ways thatnx sweets 4 replying to it n liking it
ya n my other two happy ff's are
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Posted: 16 years ago
give me a day pls
at the most i'll update it by tomarrow
sory 4 delaying
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Posted: 16 years ago
DOLLY TUM STUDIES CHOR DO YAAR
APAN SAB EK START UP START KRTE HAI.......WAHI WALA😉
U R ROCKINGGGGGGGGG
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sugar03

DOLLY TUM STUDIES CHOR DO YAAR
APAN SAB EK START UP START KRTE HAI.......WAHI WALA😉
U R ROCKINGGGGGGGGG

haan vahi vala
lets start it yaar
i am damm bored of life
kher vah maninder tu aaj kal kitna sensiba;lly reply krne laga hai
ok start up ka naam soch
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi friends how r u????????

Oki this is update 5 of the Mumbai blasts

Update 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

(Present)

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I entered my room n bolted the door behind me.. finally the tear glands enjoyed their full freedom and tears came gushing down my cheeks …………

but the pain didn't relax , not even for a single second ,,

Infact it kept on growing with every passing moment ...

I looked around my room, my eyes settled on the sofa that me n nupur had placed underneath the chandlier while desighning our room…

That was the place where me n nupur first made out,

That was the place where me n her shared our second , third, fourth n fifth kiss, the first being on the eve of our marriage,,

"stop stop stop mayank",a voice detached from me spoke , may be in my brain

"u were told to do something to cease the pain , u weren't asked to stab urself with a few more knives"

In my abbriated state I started pacing around the room ,stumbling across a lot of furniture…I didn't stop , I was afraid , not being in constant motion somehow would have made bearing nupur's death impossible…

"mayank pls do something , just few hours ago u were thinking of moving on,, remember???"the detached viose in my brain spoke again.

"moving on yes I was thinking of moving on "another voice in my brain spoke,

" but does that mean leaving nupur behind??? how can I do that ? how can I detach the core of my existence from me n move ahead?? why does this world wants me to 4get nupur,, which explanation do I give them so that I am allowed to preserve her imprints within my self??"

"think of something else mayank .. think of someone in greater pain than u, think of gunjan"

"gunjan,, was she in greater pain then me ??? but how,, she lost someone she was going to marry in a year n I lost someone who was married to me for a year ,,how is her loss , her pain greater then mine??"

"it is n u know that mayank, at least u n nupur were officially each other's , samrat n gunjan weren't!!

u n nupur discovered what mysteries each other's bodies were , they never did. At least u have the last imprint of nupur left with u , a part of her a part of u , anshu …. Gunjan has no one , her life is like a space filled with nothing but vaccum , n ya u just lost ur best friend n ur wife she lost her love n her sister "

a sharp rap on the door of my room brought me out of my trance ,,

mayank== coming

"no more thinking of the past mayank ,just the present ,, no need to succumb to ur injuries un necessarily ,u have to much responsibilities to take care of.."

I looked at my bed n, at the 1 year old kid sleeping over it,, he looked so sweet n so cute , he has inherited his mother's eyes n lips, but he looked more like me,, I had to 4get the past n move on , if not for some one else then 4 my son "

He started crying , the sudden lighteneing sound outside had waken him up,,

I picked him n cuddled him in my arms n tried to pacify him..

I was unsuccessful , anshu had this habbit of searching gunjan's arms when ever he woke up untimely from his sleep,,

The vaccum that was created in his life after the death of his mother last year was filled by his masi , by gunjan,,

I opened the door n moved towards the lobby ,

Gunjan was already rushing towards me ,n without uttering anything she took anshu from my arms n within seconds he was quiet…

Her eyes were swollen , she must be crying too ,huddled up in her room.

I wondered if my face looked the same as hers ,, devoid of any life..

Gunjan= tell them everything n I have kept samrat's diary on the table ,,

Saying so she went in the drawing room and settled on the settee placed near the window ith anshu in her lap ..

I stood there for a few more minutes observing her n my son , who was now playing with gunjan's hair locks,,

Then I looked at myself in the mirror

No way did I looked like her ,, my face wasn't as devoid of emotions as hers , I realised what it meant having anshu inm y life ,, it was as if I still had her, as if I could still stake a claim over nupur,,

But gunjan could stake no claim , still she was holding on to samrat in pure vaccum , with no support at all ,,

Benji==mayank tum kuch bataoge bhi pls!!

Maynk== huh haan. Yesterday anshu was playing in samrat's room when he found this ,,he found samrat's diary

Uday== but dude jab hum logon ne samrat ka room search kiya tha uski us uski death k baad , tab to humein vahan koi diary nahin milli thi..

Mayank== ya I was astonished too , but may be we missed out on it

Benji== ok so what about samrat's diary??

Mayank== I read it , samrat wrote this diary assuming that he was already dead

He wrote it , in a way that it contains a message to each one of us, it carries the details of what he wanted us to do after his death ,,

And it carried the details of his last moments,, u remember how he felt on the day of the blasts

And it

Benji== wait wait wait dude, kya kaha tune??? It contains how he felt on his last day , just b4 his death!! Have u gone insane?? How could samrat write a diary entry when he was about to die?????

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Ok guys so this is the 5 update , I think there is not much in it, hope u people don't get bored while reading it..

Thanx 4 the love u showed towards me guys ..

Love

dolly

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Posted: 16 years ago

GOSH wat a touching part yaar

amazing
realyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy good
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

GOSH wat a touching part yaar

amazing
realyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy good
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thanx tehzeeb 4 replying so early
i'll update soon
thanx 4 liking it

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