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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

Hi Dolly.

Thank god u posted the nxt update. I was dieing to read this part. I knew tht it will be sad, very very very sad, but still i wanted 2 read. & i got the idea of 'illogical part' .But u know what dear, last moment mein dimaag kuch aise hi kaam karta hain. Actually, BILKUL BHI KAAM NAHI KARTA, KUCH BHI NAHI SUJHTA. But u made atleast nupur 2 think something, to think abt her beloved ones.

Really, i HATE THT BEARDED TERRORIST. Kyun yeh log itne nirdayi & heartless hote hai???? Unhone apno ko kho diya to kya doosre ke apno ko bhi khowa denge. F^^^.

Anyway, plz continue asap. I wanna really know how their life is gonna be.

Vinu

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zoya

@tingtingteeding

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

wow!!! i'm speechless really

ive got goose bumps

plzzzzzzz update soon

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Hiba Aijaz

@hiba.aijaz

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#83

gud job,,,,,,,,,,,becharti nupur.luvz mayank a lot

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

GOSH ! it was such a touching part 😭

d countdown part was sooooo good & touching

update next part soooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

n plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make it long plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

oh it was so sad.............plz update soon

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Priya

@little_dragon

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

hey dolly...

too painful an update described very well the events and te ten secs of nupz touts and her last byeee was tooo beautifully scripted..

ur an ace writer...

but y??? y such a painful FF... I knw it happened in real life. and my uncle luckily escaped from one such terror attacks in mumbai.. Yet U made me remind of those incidents...

U moistened ma eyes.... Felt a very heavy heart...

So now watz next in bag for us???? more sorrows?????

thanks for the PM.. write more update soon... wanna knw te essence of te show...

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#87

its so sad n depressing the ff n the fact that this happened
i remember when i heard abt the blasts i immediately called 2 of my friends both of their families live in mumbai n all i cud think abt is how cruel n heartless these terrorists r. i was so scared for my friends one of friend's father was in mumbai that time, thank god no one i knew died in that but i still feel like crying when i think abt it
ok too much of my story coming to ur ff
it was just fab, the last seconds of nupur, her good bye, samrat n the little kid
i really did feel like crying
anyways continue soon

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats
Hey Dolly!!! Wat a kind of man he is??? God! Ths is sooo true even wat u wrote! Nd Itz very very well written! I really lykd ur idea! Nd the thoughts which were going on in Nupz head wz really touchng! Do continue soon! Thanx for the pm!!!

he was a terrorist a yaar , a man devoid of all rational feelings

insane mad ...

thanx 4 liking it yaar thanx so much

i'll update soon

Originally posted by: cute_gurl
this part was so sad :(
the part where nupur was thinking through her last moments was really portrayed very well and i could actally feel the tension building up! update soooon!! i cant wait!

thanx 4 liking it sweets ;

that was my fav scene to the last 15 minutes

Originally posted by: princessyashika
yaar thank god you posted,I was dieing to read this.But today I can't say that it was good,it was worst,I was in tears.Your writing skills always bowl me over as they did today but this time something was even more impactful...the content and mystery.I can't beleive that
henous murderous bearded man he spoiled the cake so that samrat and nupur could become his victims...............god I feel like killing him.

And the line nupur said at the last 10th second,my heart broke , these things actually happen to ppl and there loved ones.And the way you described samrat's death,you made my eyes wet(moist would be a small word).I hated that bearded man more than any of ours MJHT villians like sheena and RV.But all in all this part was the most hitting,most painful,most impactful!!!

we hat these people more because they r real time idiots ,,, u know the reality . i hated this part too though i liked the last scene .it summarized what goes in mind when someone is abt to die

knowing that fear too well i could write that scene..

thanx 4 liking it yashika( that's ur name isn't it???)

Edited by dolly18 - 16 years ago

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: preksha07

yaar mujhe to starting se hi lag raha tha ki us bearded man mein kuch to gadbad hai.....i just hope ki nupur is safe....although..... i know that she isn't.....nice one yaar.....but too sad....cont. soon.....

no she isn't

i am sorry bt uptill now she isn't

thanx 4 loking it yaar

n me sorry it made u sad

i'll continue soon

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer
Hi Dolly.

Thank god u posted the nxt update. I was dieing to read this part. I knew tht it will be sad, very very very sad, but still i wanted 2 read. & i got the idea of 'illogical part' .But u know what dear, last moment mein dimaag kuch aise hi kaam karta hain. Actually, BILKUL BHI KAAM NAHI KARTA, KUCH BHI NAHI SUJHTA. But u made atleast nupur 2 think something, to think abt her beloved ones.

Really, i HATE THT BEARDED TERRORIST. Kyun yeh log itne nirdayi & heartless hote hai???? Unhone apno ko kho diya to kya doosre ke apno ko bhi khowa denge. F^^^.

Anyway, plz continue asap. I wanna really know how their life is gonna be.

Vinu

hey vinu.. i got the idea of what u r thinking .. if i am right then u r in 4 a surprise ,, the illogical part is really illogical much illogical then ekta mai her self.....

i think last moments pe dimag kaam karta hai ,provided u have a few minutes to enjoy ur last moments on earth

i had a close shave once , so i knew ,, that time 4 once is either totally consumed in fear or totally deviod of it

mine was without fear .. bt i am still alive so let bygones be bygones....

terrorists don't have heart ,, even if they have they hardly listen to it

we saw it last year , this year , year b4 it,,, i just feel blessed that till now i personaally didn't suffer much due to it n i wish i never have to suffer neither any one else 4 the matter

hey vinu ever read srinagar consipiracy by vikram chandra.. read it if u like ,, i won't say its a good book

i think its an eye opener ..

thanx vinu 4 putting ur views so firmly across

Edited by dolly18 - 16 years ago

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: little_dragon
hey dolly...

too painful an update described very well the events and te ten secs of nupz touts and her last byeee was tooo beautifully scripted..

ur an ace writer...

but y??? y such a painful FF... I knw it happened in real life. and my uncle luckily escaped from one such terror attacks in mumbai.. Yet U made me remind of those incidents...

U moistened ma eyes.... Felt a very heavy heart...

So now watz next in bag for us???? more sorrows?????

thanks for the PM.. write more update soon... wanna knw te essence of te show...