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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tzahra

Hey Simi,

woooh whtz happening,
fights,and who the hell is that girl ooh and one boy waow two villans entry i hope they will not create any stupid scenes....but promo looks interesting so do continue the next part soon..

hey tzahra
thanks a lot for your comment sweety , i m glad that you liked the promo , will try and update with the past today only , just few editing of the part is left , will try and update it soon
till then take care
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: amruta04

hey simi

nice promo
waiting for the update
continue soon

her amruta
thanks for the comment sweety , wil try and update with the part soon
till then take care
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah Simi its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteur rockstar dear so Ridhima is angry & crying plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


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hey nidha
thanks a lot sweety , thanks for this lovely comment
will try and update with the next part soon
till then take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Simi,
The part was really awesome, I loved it.
Their friendship is amazing, I am really loving it.
The promo is superb, I wonder what is going to happen.
Poor ridzi was crying.
Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Simi,
The part was really awesome, I loved it.
Their friendship is amazing, I am really loving it.
The promo is superb, I wonder what is going to happen.
Poor ridzi was crying.
Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.


Luv u<333
Kashish

hey kashish
thanks for your comment sweety , i m glad that you liked the part ,
well try and update with the part soon,
till then take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART 6 ON PAGE 17
PART 7

RECAP:

FINALLY ADITYA AND SANJANA CANFESSED THERE LOVE
RIDDHIMA ARMAAN AND DEV WENT OUT FOR A DAY

ARMAAN JEALOUS ON SEEING RIDDHIMA WITH SOME OTHER GUY

ADITYA AND SANJANA SPEND SOME TIME TOGETHER

NOW AHEAD

IT WAS A NORMAL WORKING DAY

MORNING RIDDHIMA ENTERING COLLEGE WITH SANJANA

saanjh: where r rest of them ?

riddhima.: I don't knew all three r like out of my sight since morning I haven't seen anyone of them , even tried to call adi and armaan , but there cell is just unreachable

Only then they saw dev's car entering the college gate

saanjh: look dev's car , I think all of them r here

They went near parking and then dev and ishika came out

Riddhima went near the parking lot and instantly started yelling on dev "where the hell r you all since morning " [then her eyes fell on ishika] " ishq [hugging her] how r u sweetie and when did you came back from Delhi"

Ishika hugging her back : "I came back just today in the morning went to your house only dev was there so I came over here with him well where r adi and armaan"

Riddhma remembering that she was to ask dev regarding them : " I don't know dev , where r they ?

Dev got nervous don't knew what he shall say : " they actually riddzs , armaan and adi they , yaa they r in office, no I mean they have went for some office work

Riddhima was not convinced by his excuse : " office work ! r you sure dev , listen don't you dare to lie to me , where r they ?

Dev trying to convince her : " yes yes riddzs , they r gone for some work

Riddhima : I knew very well , where they must have gone and what is there soo called important work

Saanjh also understanding situation and what riddhima trying to say : " no ways , dev why did you let them goo over there

Dev still trying to hide the truth :" no actually , they "

Riddhima getting angry : : enough that's it dev ! don't lie , I knew that they have gone to valley , for that stupid bike race , am I right dev ?

Dev confused what to doo now : riddzs actually they ,

Riddhima was damm angry : by the way , how come you didn't went there with them , , wait let me guess they both must have said you , that , 'riddhima is a fool , she will get easily convinced , with any excuse of yours , right '

Dev said normally : why r you getting angry on me , they both have gone for the race , not mee , they will be back soon , you can get angry on them then , for now lets goo , its time for the lectures ,

Ishika shocked on listening that dev was coming with them in the classroom , to attend lectures , : dev you gonna attend the lecture , r you ok dev ?

Riddhima still very angry , said sarcastically , : no ishq today he will definitely attend the lecture , you know , it must be an order from his soo called friends , that , they both won't be coming to the college today , so he has to be the substitute bodyguard for us

Dev : ridzi stop giving these sarcastic comments of yours , adi have only told me to take care of you , not to be like your bodyguard

Riddhima very angry now : koi jaroorat nahi hai , we don't need you , and remember one think , if today I even see you somewhere near around me ,then , then you just wait and watch ,

Dev : what , why can't I be with you today

Riddhima : [angry] its going to be like that only , khud to chale gaye bodyguard chod gaye 'mummerring to herself' , you just go from here , I don't wanna se you anywhere near my sight

Dev was very irritated : unka gussa mujhper kyon nikaal rahe hai

[ishika came between the fight]

ishq: dev , relax , I have to talk to you , riddzi ,saanjh ,you both go ahead ,in the classroom ,

[sanjana took angry riddhima from there]

dev: why is she getting so angry with me , what have I done ? I didn't even went with them [like a baby]

ishq: [very lovingly] oh so sad [now angry] but u guys deserve this ,

dev: [confused] what !

ishq: don't behave so innocently , armaan and adi knew this think very well that the race in the valley , is so dangerous , still they went for that and that too , without telling anyone , and hiding it from riddzs , poor riddzs , she is not telling anyone , but I know very well how much scared she is right now

dev: come-on ishq , its just a race ,

ishq: ya right just a race , you find it really exciting naa by getting your life in danger

dev: I know and I understand see that's why I didn't went for the race

ishq: dev don't try and act innocent , I very well knew why have you not gone there , because you were scared of riddzs anger

dev: really [sarcastically] and why should I be scared ,

ishq: yes , because , you still remember , that what had happened with you last year , when you went for that race

dev sadly : I remember that , yaar I remember that very well I alone had to bear with your girls full anger , because aditya and armaan , were soo clever , that they easily escaped your anger , by there fake injuries

ishq: fake injury! U mean they both were not actually injured [shocked]

dev: do you really think so , that was there plan phoolan devi ke gusse se bachne ke liye

ishq: phoolan devi who ?

dev: riidzs aur kaun ,uska gussa phoolan devi se kam hai kya

[they both laughed together]

dev: ok lets do one think , we four will go out and enjoy after the college today , leaving , adi and armaan

ishq: cool we will

[ishika went in the class ,and dev got busy with his college friends]

rajeev: [student in college] hey hi dev

dev: hi dude , how r u ?

rajeev: fine , dev , what had happened between armaan and sameer

dev remembered the mall incident : nothing much , you know naa, that he try and get over friendly with riddzs , that's it , armaan got angry with him ,

rajeev: oh ya you r right about this , sameer , is really very arrogant , and he really try a lot to get close to riddhima ,

dev cutting him in between with bit anger : aaj ke baad aa kar to dekhaaye riddzs ke saamne then I will tell him ,

Rajeev impressed by dev care for riddhima : you all really care for riddhima alot na , you always protect her ,

Dev very lovingly : off course riddzs hamaare jaan hai, bahut innocent hai , bilkul just like a small kid , and she is so delicate that sometime we feel that , if we don't handle her with care , then you know what i mean

rajeev: yaa off course ,I can, she is the jaan of you all , but now get attentive that sameer is definitely going to do something

dev: means ?

rajeev: actually , he had gone to that rocky and group , and today they have even got a new entry in there group

dev: new entry ?

rajeev: yaa there is a new admission , in our college

dev: new admission , and that to now , in final year

rajeev: yaa , some RATHODE , I don't remember the name

A voice from behind , ARJUN SINGH RATHODE ,

dev and rajeev turned back , a tall , dark handsome boy was standing there, arjun belonged to a royal family ,from Rajasthan , and that can be seen in his looks and walking style and talking style

arjun coming towards them , very arrogantly : hi I m arjun , hum is college mein naye hai , aaj hi join kiya hai humne

dev: humne , but you r standing here alone , I don't find anyone with you

[making fun of his speech]

arjun: it wasn't soo funny , these r royals style , and I m sure you would not knew it , you cheap [arrogantly]

dev: oh really ,so prince of Rajasthan aapne to hammaare is poor se college mein aakar iski shobha badda di [sarcastically]

arjun: hum , tum jaise chote logo ke muh nahi lagte

dev: [angry] excuseme , do you even knew whom you r talking to ,

[arjun an arrogant guy , in his arrogance of being rich , .but he didn't knew that dev and aditya family were 10 times richer than him , but dev ,armaan and aditya are always been down to earth , but this arjun was a big show off type of person]

rajeev: let it be dev , leave him lets go to canteen

[ dev went away from there with Rajeev , after giving angry looks to arjun , he didn't liked him at all ,

arjun is left there and rocky and sameer and there group joined him there]

arjun: what the hell , does he think he was , [for dev ]

sameer: leave it arjun , you r new to the college soo just leave them ,

rocky: yaa come on we will show you the whole college

they went to see the college,moving in the corridor

riddhima and ishika were coming from the opposite side..................

ishq: riddzs cool down sweety , its ok

ridzzs: I m felling really scared shq , hope they both r fine ,

ishq: relax , sweety I m sure they will be

riddzs: where is saanjh by the way ?

ishq: saanjh , had gone to library , must have got lost in her books ,

rizzs: no not in books , she must be lost in adi's memories

[Laughing on there jokes]

ishq: I will go and call her , you go to canteen , we will join you there

ridd: ok , come fast

[ishika went and riddhima is walking alone towards the canteen]

and from the other side arjun also coming in riddhima's direction

and clash

it was arjun's fault , he was so busy in looking around the college ,that he didn't saw in front and that's why he collided with riddhima , resulting in riddhima books falling down ,

ridd: [very angry] what the hell , can't you see

[riddhima went down picking the books and arjun also went down for helping her with that]

arjun: humme maaf kijeye actually hum college dekh rahe the to ,i m soo

[as he looked to riddhima]

arjun: [after a pause] wow , beautiful [mumerring]

ridd: excuse me

arjun: sorry vo vo ,humse galti ho gaye

ridd: humse? takkar to aapse hue hai , baake sab ne kya kiya

[to make fun of arjun]

arjun: what !

[got angry , second time somebody making fun of him , first dev and now riddhima] I was talking to you , I m sorry

ridd: u better be [arrogantly]

arjun: by the way , I m new in the college , I have joined today only , hi i m [as he was about to introduce himself]

ridd: excuse me I have to go ,aap kripya karke saamne se hatenge , [again arrogantly , and intentionally saying in Hindi , to irritate him]

[riddhima normally don't behave like this , she is not soo rude always ,but today she is really angry with armaan and adi and her anger bursted here like this]

[riddhima ,went from there ]

arjun: not bad , what a style , humme nahi patta tha is college mein itani teekhi mirchiya hai

sameer : carefull buddy , muh[mouth] na jal [burned] jaaye

arjun: hai humme to mirchi bahut pasand hai ,kuch naam bhi hoga inka

sameer: yes ofcourse its Riddhima

arjun : Riddhima interesting

[riddhima went to canteen]

ishika and sanjana were sitting there

ishq: hey riddzs what took you soo long ?

ridds: nothing , just , got an encounter with a chalti-firti Hindi dictionary

saanjh: 'chalti-firti hindi dictionary' ! What's that?

riddzs: it was a boy , some new admission

[who was listening the conversation came in between ]

dev: oh , that 'prince of Rajasthan', he is too arrogant I tell you , did he said something to you [ now with concerned and a bit anger on him]

[riddhima looked dev there and remembered the morning incident]

ridd: tujhse matlab , and by the way what r you doing here , you go to your friends , adi armaan ka chamcha [ very angrily]

dev: CHAMCHA ,riddzs its getting too much now [pointing a finger and with fake anger]

ridd: I haven't done anything yet , now you wait and watch what I m going to do now

[And she just went from there to the valley where the race was to take place]

dev: today adi and armaan are gone , bhagwaan unhe riddhima ke gusse se bachaaye

[riddihima reached the racing ground , adi and armaan busy with here race ..and armaan surronded by girls , he even got a new girlfriend just now]

riddhima reached there in the middle of the race , the race was held in the valley , one side was a mountain and other side was a deep valley , if they loose there balance on bike , they can end up in a serious accident or even they can fall deep in the valley]

announcer: as you all can see this is the last level of the race , now the final contestant have to do a jump , with there bikes , from that mountain , whoever will do it first will be the winner , but before doing this jump , we need to tell you , that if the contestant is not able to jump properly , then there bikes can even fall deep in the valley , this is the race of life , and now only our 4 finalist r left , who r going to doo this race and they r armaan adiya, sahil and rohan , so lets see , who gonna win this one today

Everyone hooding for armaan

Riddhima reached there but , the guard did not allowed her to get in , she had no option but to watch the race to end up , she was standing there , in the audience

ridd: [she was damm scared , folded her hands and started mummerring ] oh god! Please save them, please god , please

She didn't even dared to open her eyes

But armaan and aditya , did the stunt perfectly , but armaan was more fast , hence won the race

Riddhima opened her eyes , a sign on relief , she took a deep breath , and then proceeds towards them

Armaan surrounded by many girls and aditya was also there , standing with armaan

armaan: hey gorgeous , soo did you like the race [flirting ]

kiran: [latest just now created girlfriend , she was wearing a mini skirt , you know armaan type of girl] wow , ammy you were too good

adi: gosh , armaan it was great , first I thought that today we r gone , but then what a perfect stunt bro ,

armaan: it was great , what a race I loved it ,

adi: yaa right you would love it more , you got a new girlfriend right [ said slowly audible to armaan only ]

[they stopped , seeing riddhima , riddhima coming close to them.]

armaan: riddzs yahaa [shocked]

adi: ye dev ke bachee ke pait[stomach] mein koi baat nahi rehte hai , he must have told everything to her

armaan: oh god ! Save me ,

adi: save us ,[helplessly] , all the best dude

armaan: to u too

[Riddhima approaching them she came there in front of them]

adi: [nervously] riddzs , riddzs I actually

ridd: [very calmly] soo congratulation you won the race , hope you guys enjoyed it

[armaan and adi confused they had expected a sudden burst out off riddhima on them , but she was really calm and smiling on them also]

adi: [very lovingly] bachaa actually

ridd: what happened adi , what actually ? I was just asking that how was your race , hope you had fun

armaan: [confused] you aren't angry with us

[Everyone was shocked , dev sanjana and ishika who had also reached there were also confused]

ridd: [very serious] angry , why and on whom ? who am I to get angry with you guys , and does it really matter you guys if I get angry on you

adi: [serious too] bachaa why r you saying like this ,

ridd: I m saying it absolutely right adi , if you guys would have really cared about me , then you wouldn't have came over here like this , if I was really important for you then you must have told me about this

armaan: riddzs actually

[Cutting him in between]

riddi: armaan I m not talking to you , I m talking to adi right now , so you just stay out of this [angrily]]

armaan: riddhima , why r you talking to me like this , ok we did a mistake , and we r sorry for that

ridd: mistake ! no armaan you haven't done any mistake , its mee who had done it , it was my mistake that I expected from you that you both wont do any think that will hurt me , or you both get in problem

adi: riddihma [putting his hand on her cheek , trying to calm her down , but she jerked it ]

ridd: stop it adi , i just don't want to talk to you guys , not a single word , do you even know what is my condition since morning , I was not able to sit for a second properly , how the hell scared I was , thinking that if some think happens to you , but why would you care about all this , you really enjoy na , doing all this races and getting your life's in danger , fine go ahead , do what ever you guys want to , I won't say a word to you guys from now

[dev ,ishika and sanjana also realized by now , that this matter is now become serious]

armaan: riddhima actually

ridd: that's it armaan , not a single word [angrily]

kiran: [armaan gf watching her scolding armaan] [very arrogantly]

what's her problem manwho the hell r you , talking to ammy like this

armaan: [angry but not so loud] stop it kiran you please stay out of this

ridd: no armaan its ok , she is right I m sorry that I talked to you like this [still angry said all this]

kiran: you better be , you better be , i knew your type of down class girls very well , you can doo anythink to seek attention from armaans types of boys

[that's it , armaan anger grew up , haw dare a girl armaan just met and shared some time can say , her best friend , her riddhima like this how dare she insulted riddhima ]

armaan: [angry and loud] kiran ! how dare you said all this to riddhima

kiran: armaan i was just [confused for armaan , insulted her]

armaan: shut up , this is our personal matter , who the hell r u to interfere

armaan: [getting close to riddhima] riddhima

[But she just went off , she just ran from there, she was actually crying]

[She got in her car and drive back home]

[Dev , ishika , sanjana and aditya , followed her]

armaan Again to kiran

armaan: [still very angry] you , what the hell do you think of yourself its not riddhima , its you the one that type of down class girls , you got it

kiran: oh really , ya right she was not down class girl , infact she was really intelligent , by the way armaan why r you feeling soo bad , if I insulted her a bit ,

armaan: because she is my friend, and

kiran: friend ya right friendship , perfect word , I m not blind armaan , I can see very well ,that what all it is , and a perfect word used to hide it ,

armaan: what do you mean who the hell r you to comment on our friendship

kiran: armaan and a girl , and there soo called friendship , armaan and being as a friend with a girl , doesn't suits you

[kiran just went off from there , and armaan was confused]

armaan:[to himself] off course she is my friend , these kiran types of girls don't even knew the meaning of friendship soo they can never understand

[And he don't thinked more about it , he had got a bigger problem ,riddhima was sad, she was crying she was hurt]

Now adi and armaan were also feeling really guilty , riddhima was crying due to them

riddhima parked the car at her house and as she came out adi took hold of her hand

adi: i m sorry baby , really sorry , I promise I won't do anythink like this ever again , please don't cry

[as he tried to touch her to , clear her tears , she jerked his hand ]

ridd: don't try to talk to me, don't even dare to

armaan also came there

armaan: riddzs , listen please , don't take that talk seriously ,please don't cry

[He also tried to clear riddhima tears and she went back]

ridd: I don't want to talk to anyone of you

[And she ran away and locked herself in her room]

Riddhima , really sad , this was a serious fight this time

Who will be able to convince her , adi or armaan

PRECAP:

ridd: how dare you , how dare you touch me , give my duppatta back to me

arjun: [arrogantly] if I don't give it then what will you do , scream or shout and will call the whole college

sameer: what will she do today , she didn't even have her soo called bodyguards with her today , and no one will come for her now

THATS ALL FOR NOW
I KNOW A BIT SHORT ONE , ACTUALLY I WANTED TO POST MORE BUT NOW ITS TOO LATE HERE , AND I M FEELING SLEEPY ,
WILL COUNTINUE WITH THE NEXT PART TOMMOROW ,
AND WILL PM YOU AFTER THAT ONLY ,
TILL THEN TAKE CARE
LOTS OF LOVE
SIMI
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Posted: 16 years ago

FRIENDS ,

UPDATED PART 7 ABOVE
WILL UPDATE MORE PART OF IT , TOMMOROW
SORRY NO PM'S AS FOR NOW ,
HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THE PART , WILL COUNTINUE AHEAD WITH THIS TOMMOROW ,
TILL THEN TAKE CARE
LOTS OF LOVE
SIMI
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Simi,
waowwwwww fight,anger,tears ufffffffffff,
but apart from that the part was great well these kinds of ups downs make friendship more stronger,
so lets see wht will Adi and Armaan do know to make Riddhima forgive them,
aah poor Dev but wht can we say is Riddhima,
ooh great that Kiran villan is gone and wht the heck three villans Sameer,Rocky and hum i mean Arjun waow lets see wht cooking in their minds,
precap looks a bit interesting do continue the next soon plzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow that was an amazing part! loved it! that arjun is such a jerk! the fight between ridz adi and armaan was intense..i can understand how scared and angry ridz is! ahh that kiran was soo rude, am so glad armaan stood up for his friendship and told kiran off! now how will they pacify her, she is very upset!
looks like arjun and sameer are going to give riddhima a hard time now :( im really excited for more, please continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey simi...

rocking update...armaan and riddhima setting them up to make them confess their love for each other was so cute... and armaan 's possiveness the way he talked to sameer... and riddhima's temper..at the boiling point ..and their fights..hoping that everything settles soon and the recap seems interesting..sameer and arjun..

waiting to know what's gonna happen next,...

continue soon and thanks for the pm...

loads of love...

Caramel...

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