ff 'sweet revenge' last part - pg 74 - Page 3

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sounds interesting ur promo.. so when are u updating it
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hey adi..i liked the concept...different n interesting...n promo is too interesting...update soon n m in ur pm list....
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hello friends here is the first part hope it wil not disapponted your ecpectations

"pairs made in heaven"
i always believe this becoz when i was small mom alwys tell us alot of stories of pixy and giant ,and raja and rani.one day my mom tell us the story of cindrella ,i like this story most becoz from this i learn that" jo aap ke liye bana hai vo kahin bhine ho vo aapko milker he rahega chaye kitni he duriya kyo na ho "

god is made someone for me and i'll find or he 'will find me some day and we will live happily .

but sombody says "a person life can change in one second "befor long time ago i dont believe this but know im the one who truly believe this. befor 10 minute i was nupur bushan and now im nupur sharma
" nupur maynk shrma"
today not my sername but everything is changed ,every girl hava a dream when somebody take you to different world ,world of love ,happines but some time sweet dreams turn to night mears
dia left marrige becoz she love rv and run from marrige.

my mom and mynk mom was best friends ,but they cant meet frm long time and one day me and mom meet amynk mom in market ,maynk mom and his sister gunjan.this time dia is not with us
after that meeting me ,gunjan and maynk mom get very close we share ggod relationship, and after few days she comw with maynk and ask for the hand of dia for maynk

maynk saw dia in some party and fall in love with her,love at first sight

we belong to middle class and sharma hold a bid business empire well my mom is too happy with this relation but not me

me and maynk dont meet each other becoz everytime when he come i were not at home or when i go he was not there.
for maynk mom i can say she is very sweet lady and worlds best mom after my mom.

and this time me and gunjan share good friendship

maynk never interested in girls before he see dia .but when he saw her ,he likes her ,her attitude ,her style
everthing made him insaan
but dia luv rv, but she denaying this feeling becoz rv dont hav enough money and dia dont want to live like poors so she broke up with rv. and agree with this ristha.
i know dia better then she know ,i know she loves rv but there is a fight between her heart and mind , di only listen your heart ,i advice her .
ya that time she denay to look after my words but when she understand the true lov she drawback this marrige and run away ,she loves rv .

in mandap

panditji calling for bride when she not come
then we all know that sher run frm the marrige ,then my mom broke down frm this shock shilpa aunti and my mom take decision and for the sake of my mom and save the grace of both family i take place as a bride.

nupurs thought end when she hear door open
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she turned and saw maynk and anger is visible frm his face ,not anger pain which cause of betryial of someone who he love

he marched towards her, everystep of maynk increased nups heartbeat .

the room is beautifully decorated whit rose patel and candles

now maynk is inch away frm nups and his lips touch nups neck

MAYNK-what happen darling ,why r u standing here u forget that today is our first night ,you hav to full fill my wishes ,if u dont know what hppen in first night dont worry i will gave you practical .and he grap nups hand and throw her on bed and he was over nups

NUP-in horror maynk leave me, u rnot in your sense

MAY-he put i candle and put the candle down on nups hand,nupur scream due to pain ang cry with pain,you know nupur tumhare ye aasu muje bahut khushi de rahay hai ,mein baahut enjoy kar raha hu yeh pain tjo tumhare face per hai its soothing my pain,im thinking if everyday i see you in pin then i will be more happy .

you know these crocodile tears not melt my heart,but i hav no heart your sister broke my heart ya ,
you and your sister is totally nutankibaaz only play with emotion of others

[nupur can see the pain in maynks eyes and know that he is too hurt with all this]

NUP-maynk i know whatever di done to you is wrong , but vo to or bhi galat hota agar tum or di shaddi karte becoz she dont love you

MAy-love ka means bhi pata hai kya tumhe , tum or tumhare sister ko to sirf logo ke emotins se khalna aata hai ,but not me , you will regrate this marrige ,i will amke your life hell
well i m telling you about first night jannu

he tighned his grip on nups hand and nups clenched bedcover in pain ,maynk grip turn stronger and leve red mark on nups hand and he cupped and liplock his lips wid her and nupur scream in pain becoz he cut her upper lip and blood comes frm her lips and then dig his teeth in nups neck and she try to struugle to protest but he is so strong , and he grab her sarri and make mark on her back .

she cried in pain and maynk grab her hand and push her on the floor
drling now you know what happen in first night . she screm in pain.
you knoe you are thnking that i like you ,so dont think i never like you , and never ever touch you
you r not at all worthy for me .

but i like to see u in pain.

miss nupur shrma "your sister broke my heart and now i hav nothing to losse and this time is pay back time "
i wll never love again in my life some one else ,she destroyed me.

now this time i never remrmber anything she alwys tell me that she never bear tears in your eyes it hurts her alot and now she will see you hurt being punished for the sin of her.

but im very happy that every wound which i give to you will decrase my pain

and saying this he down his face to hers ,not leave for a second with hatered

MAynk-darling so alwys remember this night and now getout i dont want to see your bloody face


with love
aditi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg omg.........ye mayank nahi ho sakta.....how can he do dis 2 nupur......cant believe it.....i know he is also hurt by dia......but he cant do dis 2 her...... nice part yaar.....gr8....par plzz sab thik kar do.....i cant see mayur like dis.... continue soon...... thanks 4 d pm dear.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome part! Do continue soon plz!! Thnks for the PM!

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OMG who is this devil....😈.....mayank!!!!!!!!!!😭 oh god...he is a beast..😡...poor nupur...😭......continue soon.....pm me😳

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