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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Greate update!!
Nishant is so understanding, he is very sweet.
I liked how you showed the kids asking about Angad and how Kripa did not know what to say to them. Very nice.
I wonder what Kripa and Angad's past was like.
I guess I will have to wait for that!!
Please update soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
gr8 part di!!!
loved d convo b/w nishant n kripa...
d kids r adorable...
cont soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was really good plz contd soon loved it waiting to know why angad let her
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for pm
nice story
liked it
wonder what went wrong between ak
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg this was awesome..cant wait to know more about Angad.. plzzz continue soon and pm me plzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey awesome part....
Wonder what happened between AK..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice fic....
wonder wat happened b/w ak...
how cud angad abandon his kids???
cont soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Live.Laugh.Love

Greate update!!

Nishant is so understanding, he is very sweet.

I liked how you showed the kids asking about Angad and how Kripa did not know what to say to them. Very nice.

I wonder what Kripa and Angad's past was like.

I guess I will have to wait for that!!

Please update soon 😊



Thanks Dear...

Yeah....some people are very good and understanding....It's is their inbuilt quality....Yup...right..you need to wait for 6-7 more parts and you will find out for sure....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: akrock

hey nice fic....
wonder wat happened b/w ak...
how cud angad abandon his kids???
cont soon....



Thanks akrock....There are reasons behind every thing a person does....lets see what happened between them in coming parts....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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CHAPTER -3


FLASH BACK…….

Kripa's mom Gayatri and Dad Suryabhan Sharma were separated a long time back…When Kripa was just a year old……She knew that her dad had an affair with some one else and wanted to marry the girl… Gayatri left Mumbai and settled in Nainital ….She was devastated…… ……But still she had been strong for Kripa…….Suryabhan was a wealthy man….and Gayatri got a good alimony and child support, financially after Kripa's mom got custody of Kripa……..Surya did not fight for Kripa any way…….All he wanted was a divorce….nothing else……..….Kripa's mom raised her alone…and loved her very much…They both were very happy, in their own world……Kripa's dad never came to meet her after that…….He was too busy with his new married life……. Kripa had always got a present and a card from her father every birthday, though…….But she hated him….…for breaking up their family ……

But suddenly everything broke loose, when Kripa was 10 years old, her mom left her, she died due to heart conditions….. ...Kripa had not seen her dad from last 9 years…….He came to Nainital, when he knew that Gayatri was no more…….But he did not take her home….His second wife did not want her in his house…….So he went to the convent school and got Kripa admission in it……..It had its own hostel and was quite luxurious and comfortable………Kripa soon settled down in her new environment……..She felt hurt that her dad did not want her……..she missed her mom…….And felt lonely.….But then she met a guy………Prithvi……..who was in her class…..Both were of same age…..and he stayed at the hostel too………

P: Hey……..My name is Prithvi………what is urs? A slim 10 year old Kid asked Kripa curiously looking at her….

K: Kripa …..she said eyeing him……..

P: Will you be my friend…..I don't have any friend here……..yet… he said with a smile...……Kripa just nodded but did not move…….He came forward and gave her a hand……..to shake…….and smiled at her politely……Kripa smiled back and shook his hand……..

And that day had started with the beginning of beautiful pure friendship....


P: So where are ur mom and dad?

K: My mom died and she became an angel and my dad doesn't love me……and stays far away……..I don't love him too…..What about ur mom and dad?

P: Oh….My mom and dad have become stars…..Father D'Souza said that when some one dies they become stars and show us path during night…….

K: Then how come my mom is an angel? She must be a star too…..

P: May be she liked to rather be an angel……..he said shrugging…….

K: Yeah may be…..Why don't you have any friends……….? Prithvi turned a little pink……….

P: I have, but then he went near her and whispered…….I don't have any girl friend…..he said slowly…….

Kripa blushed a little and gave him a sweet smile……..

P: So will u be my friend?

K: Yeah I will…….But if you promise that u won't kiss me………she said making faces…..

P: Ok….I won't kiss u……But can I hold ur hands….

Kripa nodded and hand in hand they walked to the hostel…….

Two years later………….Kripa's 12th Birthday………

P: Why did you throw away the gifts which ur dad sent? Prithvi asked her frowning……

K: Because I hate him…….He left my mom and me…….and My mom kept crying all the time…..She was sad and alone……..and had to take care of me herself……….she said angrily…..

P: Oh…ok……..Common……..don't be angry now….It's your birthday…….See you like my pen right? Kripa nodded…….Prithvi pulled out his pen from his pocket…….Then you keep it…..he said giving the pen to her…..consider this your birthday present from me…….

K: Really?

P: Yes really…….

K: Thanks Prithvi…..You are my best friend in the whole world……..

P: And you are mine…..Common lets go

With time, Prithvi became more and more protective of Kripa…..He thought it his duty to take care of her……..He kept tag about her whereabouts…..helped her with her studies……..played with her……..protected her from some real bullies at school……..Made sure she ate properly…..Cheered her up whenever needed…and...encouraged her to try new things ……..etc….etc….Kripa held on to him tightly…….He was his life line to depend on…….She looked up to him for solutions to her every problem…….He was her super hero, who could fix it all……He was her best friend in the whole world and he was her cheerleader…….all the time………Children never tried to play any prank with her or tease her, because they knew if they messed with Kripa, then Prithvi would not spare them………and further Kripa was the favorite student of couple of teachers in the class…….She was adored as she was sweet and loving…...

As years passed Kripa and Prithvi became a family……..Prithvi's dad was the trusty member of the convent………His mom passed away while giving birth to him…….and his dad bought him up…….But his dad was a diabetic patient and he died due to infection in his lungs……….which could not heal due to high sugar………Prithvi was taken in to the convent by Father D'Souza and his dad's money were all saved in his name…………..

As a daughter Kripa owned a part of her dad's property which she is unknown about currently……..She never opened her birthday presents, received from her dad, after her mom passed away…..She just threw them out……..But she always waited for Prithvi's present eagerly on the day of her birthday…….It would not be big gifts like her dad gave…….Just a candy, or a nice pen, or some times some Prithvi's used things, which kripa liked…..He would ask her to take what ever she liked….from him on her birthday…….They had a very sweet relationship……..and Father D'Souza loved to see them together……..

It was Kripa's 15th birthday….and as usual a parcel came for her early morning……..Her mood soured looking at the parcel………She took the parcel in her hand and looked through the card………Her dad's signature was there…….Not a word written………But just signed…….A unknown anger surged through her veins……She gathered the package and ran out of the door and went near the dustbin and dumped it along with the card……..She ran all the way to the church and sat there in the corner……remembering her mom………She missed her so much……..Tears came down her cheeks ……

Father D'Souza had seen Kripa coming to the church……He sighed…….he knew the reason for her distress…….He had written many letters to her dad saying that his daughter needed him and he should come and spend some time with her……..But there was no reply from him…….Only yearly fees and a present for Kripa for her every birthday, which Kripa just thrashed it……..He felt bad for her…….He went to the church and found her sitting near mother Mary's statue and crying ……..He went to her and kept a hand on her head……….Kripa looked up through her tears and saw Father D'Souza…..

F: Child……..You need to gather ur strength and stop crying…….Your mom is not with you today, but she will always be in your heart……….and Mother Mary is always there for u too…….Lord has given u this life for some reason….Cherish this life dear and keep smiling…..Smile and the world will smile with u..…..he said with a soft smile….His kind smile made kripa wipe her tears and nod………Happy Birth day Kripa…..May God bless u and give u all the happiness u deserve…..He said kissing her forehead and taking the cross out of his pocket he handed it to Kripa……..Keep this with u near your heart….when you need your courage……You will not be disappointed……….

K: Thank you Father ……..I will always cherish it..…kripa said looking at Father with smile…..Father nodded and went away…..But Kripa sat there on the bench, looking at the cross……….Prithvi came running to the church……He had asked Father D'Souza about Kripa and he had told her that Kripa was in the church…….He took deep breathes when he saw her there ………as he was out of breathe due to fast running……..He then slowly went to her and sat besides her….He knew the reason she was there…….He kept a hand on her shoulder and Kripa without looking at him kept her head on his shoulder sadly……..They sat there for a long time in silence……..Then Prithvi spoke up……

P: So Kripa what do u want from me for your birthday………

K: Just be there for me whenever I need u Prithv……..That's all I ask……..Kripa by now was more matured and she knew only thing that mattered to her was his friendship……….

P: Did I ever disappoint u………in these last 5 years……..

Kripa shook her head……..

P: Then why do u think that I will not be with u in the future……..You are my best friend…..and I promise you, I will never leave u……..alone………He said hugging her……….Kripa circled her arms around his waist and hugged him back……..

P: So Now tell me……….what do u want……Ok…..we will change the tradition from today…..I will ask for a present from u on your birthday and you ask me the present on my birthday……..Ok……..Kripa smiled and nodded………

K: Ok….tell me what do u want…….

P: For u to be happy for ever and ever…….and never let a single tear drop from your eyes…….Will u give me that………?

Kripa nodded with tears in her eyes again and hugged him tightly………Then when she released him……..she wiped her tears and smiled at him genuinely……….

P: That's like my good girl……….

K: Shall we go and celebrate now…….I want to eat cake……….

P: Ok….But I will tell u now itself…….I have only 25 Rs. In my pocket…..So we have to share the cake and drink…….

K: I am in…….lets go…….she said pulling him up…….Then she looked at the cross in her hand …..It was a delicate chain with a small cross on it…..she showed it to Prithvi……..

P: This is Father D'Souza's cross…..He said surprised………looking at Kripa…..I saw it in his office…..He has it in his pocket all the time……..

K: Yeah he gave it to me today……..for my birthday………

P: Vow…….lucky girl…..why don't you wear it…….He said happily……

Kripa nodded and put the chain in her neck and kissed the cross…….and smiled at Prithvi………

Both went to the church restaurant out side the campus and took a small pastry……..Prithvi put a candle on the pastry and lighted it on……..

P: Common make a wish………Kripa smiled and closed her eyes……..and then opened her eyes and blew the candle…….She cut the cake with the plastic knife, Prithvi sang happy birthday to her and then they fed a piece to each other…..After eating the remaining pastry and having a glass of juice, they went back to the hostel………Kripa was in for a surprise ………Father D'Souza and other teachers along with her hostel friends had arranged a cake for her and a small gift………..She was overwhelmed…..They held her hand and bought her in and asked her to cut the cake………She cut the cake and fed her teachers, Father D'Souza and her friends…….They gave her the small gift they had bought…..and asked her to open it…….It was the Mother Mary's statue, which Father D'Souza had bought for her…..Kripa looked at the statue with tears in her eyes….then she smiled at every one through her tears..…..She thanked them all and hugged every one…….

Next year went in flurry…..Kripa and Prithvi were in the 10th standard………Both very much busy in their studies for their Board exams…….At last the exams were finished…….The school had arranged for the picnic for 2 days to Near by Nainital places and Prithvi and Kripa were looking forward to the trip…….They both were going out of the campus after a long time….and were too excited about it…….They talked about what they would do and stuff for hours and soon they all left for the trip……..

They spent 2 amazing days in a camp…… near Kausani and saw all the near by places…….Ate in hotels……..and had the time of their life………

The remaining days of vacations went by with Kripa busy in some drawing classes and Prithvi in his sports…….



The morning was dull in Delhi………The fog had covered most of the city…….Angad was sitting in the Hospital bed besides his Grand dad ……..Looking out of the window…….His SSC results were to be released in the paper today….He sighed…….His papers have not went well……..He was under a lot of pressure as his grand dad was ill all the time during his exams and now he is admitted in the hospital after 2 months…….Within a month he had to take admission in the Junior college…….But he did not know how he would do it all…….Doctors told him that he should keep his grand dad in the nursing home where all the elders are taken care of…..as it will be a lot of work to keep a paralysis person at home…….Angad did not have any one……He only knew that his mom had left him at her parents house when he was just a baby and never returned……..And later he got the news from his grand ma that his mom was dead. ……..and he did not know a single thing about his dad…….of who he was or where he was…….He stayed with his grand parents……..His grandmother died 3 years ago, she was nearly 60 at the time……..and now his grand father was ill……..There were couple of good neighbors, who were helpful……They had a cook and a servant to clean….Though they were not rich….They had a decent flat and a good enough bank balance to keep them going for next 10 years…….or so……..Angad had not yet decided about what doctor said……..His grand fathers good friend Shrivastav Sharma and lawyer who was nearly 10 years younger to him…..came to visit everyday…..and kept eye on Angad……..He managed all the assets of his grand dad and paid the bills on his behalf……….He was right here sitting besides his grand dad at the moment………

S: So Angad what did u think about the doctor's advice…..I think it is a good idea…….There will be nurse to take care of her….and lots of people around…..He will be more happy………You can go to some hostel and finish your education…..You can come to visit your grand dad once or twice every month……..When he is better, you can take him back home…….

Angad did not tell any thing….Just stood there with his head down……..He was unable to make any decision…….After all he was a small kid too…..Shrivastav sighed and went to him…..

S: I know , he is the only family you have and you are not able to decide…….But trust me, this is the only good solution………Your grand pa is old and needs lots and lots of care…….You can't take care of him as you have to do your studies………You are too young to look after him and do every thing your self…..Listen to me…..I will arrange everything……….There is one Good School with hostel in Nainital, and Father D'Souza is the head of the School, I know him from my childhood and we have kept in contact…..I am sure he will take u in and you can stay there with other children……..And once ur grand pa is fine…….You can come here and take him home……..He said with a hand on the young shoulders……..

After 1 full minute, Angad looked up and nodded his head……..

A: Ok Uncle, I will go to Nainital…..When will they shift Grand Pa……….?

S: After he is stable…..May be in a week or two……Good ….You took a nice decision……It is best for every one……Till then I will make all the arrangements and once you get the results we will talk to Father D' Souza and go get ur admission……….Is that fine…….Angad again just nodded…….And stared at his grand pa………


2 Months later……….

S: We are here Angad…….Common take your luggage………He said getting out of the taxi……Angad slowly got down and looked around and then stretched his body a little………He slowly opened the back of the car and took out his airbag and a small suitcase, he had packed him self……….He had gone to old age nursing home to meet his grand pa, he still did not recognize him, but smiled at him……….Angad was content with it…..He had then gone home……..Asked the servant to clean everything, then locked all the doors and windows, taken his bag and joined Shrivastav, who insisted that he would send him to the hostel himself…….And here he was at last………His results were OK….He had passed with distinction…….But not what he expected…….2 Years back he was always a top student and was very ambitious too……Shrivastav came and took the air bag from his hand and they both walked inside…….

The nuns from the school made them sit in the principal's office…….Angad was little uncomfortable……He was not used to places like this…….Big church……..the hostel, school just next door…….all this was new to him…..He shifted a little tensely…..and waited for the Principal to come…..Then he saw the man with long robe walking to them with a friendly smile….He greeted them friendly and talked with Shrivatsav for few minutes…….Then Shrivastav told Angad that he would leave now…….He gave him his and the nursing homes phone no, and asked him to tell him if he needed any thing…….Once he went away…..Father D'Souza walked him to the hostels and showed him his bed…….There were around 20 beds in the room and all shared 6 bath rooms which were attached to the room on either side, all had a bed, wardrobe and a study table along with chair…….with dustbin and lights individually……..No one was in the room for now

F: Child…….The mess is in the 1st floor and Library on the 2nd…..Nun Miss. Rose would show you your school tomorrow and your classroom as well…..You can go to mess for breakfast (6am -8am), Lunch(12noon-1pm) and Dinner(7pm-8pm) and you and give your clothes for washing, every Monday and Friday to Nun Miss. Edward, who is in charge of this room and If you need any thing else she will be the one you contact…….Is that clear with you…….?

Angad nodded…..

F: Good….You get some rest and if u are hungry go down to the mess and ask for some thing…They will serve you with what ever they have for now…..I hope u will like your stay here …I will pray for your grand fathers quick recovery…..….he said gently and after patting him on his back, Father D'Souza went away…..

Soon, Miss Edward came in with Angad's books, his stationary, school uniform and shoes as well as some other things he would need………She kept everything in its place and asked if he needed help with unpacking……..When Angad nodded, she took out his bag and slowly arranged everything for him….with him helping side by side…..She told about the friends he would have here……..About school, discipline, etc….etc….Once they were done she took him by shoulder to the mess and bought a plate full of food and asked him to eat…..She told him to go to his room later and went away to do her work……..He felt pretty relaxed in her company and that bought a little smile on his face at last.

When Angad went to the room later, all the children's were back…….They went to him and asked him his name and other details and told them there names……They told him there experiences here…….cracked jokes and involved him in the conversation….…He found all the children in here from same class as his…11th standard Commerce..….Soon Angad felt quite comfortable around them……..At night all of them went to dinner together…..They saw Kripa and Prithvi sitting together…..and sighed……..One of the boy whispered……….to Angad……..

B: Ok….You see that Boy with red shirt and the girl besides him…Angad looked where he was pointing and nodded…They are Prithvi and Kripa…...He stays with us too in our room…And she stays in opposite room with all other girls..….He is a nice boy…….But don't mess up with Kripa…Angad raised his eyebrow and the boy shook his head…. she is his best friend….and if you mess with her he will not spare you…….he said getting back to his plate and started eating……..Angad looked at them both…….After a few minutes he got involved, with his friends forgetting all about Prithvi and Kripa……..

After dinner Prithvi came back to his room and changed into his night clothes……Angad's bed was just next to him and when Angad came and sat on his bed, prithvi looked up with a smile on his face…….He talked to Angad for some time and asked him about his parents, his marks etc…….and told him about himself too…After talking for an hour to each other, they saw that they both had lot in common……Soon before night was over they became good friends…….They shared jokes, laughed…..talked about their interest, what they want to do in the future…..etc…etc… All other children's also joined them and had a nice time together…..All of Angad's doubts vanished and already he felt good here…..Being alone for so long with his ill grand father made him miss out his life….He liked the children here, they were good and understanding and all loved to have some fun…….together……..

Next day……..Miss Rose came as Father had told him and showed him around the school, the library, other rooms…etc…..It was a huge school……..With nearly 20 class rooms in all…….He came to know that every class had up to 40 children and there were in all nearly 800 children in the campus staying in the hostel and studying……..in this school……….He liked the friendly nuns, who were very loving and caring by nature and answered all his questions patiently………When Miss. Rose escorted him to his class room and introduced him to every one……..All greeted him cheerfully….Boys were all his room mates, except some and others were girls……..When he looked up to see where he could get the seat Prithvi pointed him to come sit with him…….With a genuine smile Angad went and took seat with him……..

In the lunch time…..Prithvi introduced Kripa to Angad….and Kripa welcomed him with a big smile…..Angad immediately liked Kripa and they became friends as well…….

The class began after the lunch break and so did life in the hostel for all 3 Friends…….Prithvi, Kripa and Angad…………..

FLASHBACK ENDS………AND BACK TO PRESENT………..

I believe in angels,
The kind that heaven sends,
I am surrounded by angels,
But I call them friends.

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