may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27 - Page 7

Very very romantic scene....loved it.....please update soon....

Very nice concept....and awesomely written......please update soon and if possible please PM.....

amazing ff. plz continue soon send me a pm whenevr u update. regards Lekha

Sometimes god even play dice with us….maybe he played with nupur too……….while making the breakfast in the morning in kitchen she recollected her past.

How mayu was jealous when she was dancing with rv on farewell party…….mayu and nupur were best friends………but always felt attracted towards each other……they always became jealous by seeing any opposite sex with the other………their bond was strange……..at that party she could see mayu's eyes piercing her as if she has been found guilty……….but she could not make out why he is so annoyed……..then after few minutes she received a text msg by mayu to meet in the parking lot……

When she went there mayu was looking really dangerous, he gestured her to sit in the car…….nupur was too scared to say anything……..she just sat there without uttering a word……….within no time they reached at his farm-house…….they entered the home…….nupur when hesitately asked mayu for what business they have come here???he took her to the bedroom and without saying anything to her he looked into her eyes and slapped her……..he pushed her to the wall……….hit his fist against the wall and asked her did she love rv……she was too numb to response but nodded negatively ,mayu suddenly hugged her and said sorry for slapping her……..he said he cant bear to see anyone touching her….it kills him……nupur pulled apart and saw him in tears…nupur then cupped his face in her tiny hands and confessed only mayu has the right to touch his nupur……..now nupur was also in tears……..mayu took nupur in his arms……and in no time they were kissing like a desert who just got a drop of water and is trying to absorb it for last…………mayu hungrily pulled away her saree off from her shoulders and she willing surrendered herself to him……..whole night they pampered and cried surrendering themselves to each other….while making love on bed and on bedroom floor…..that night made them realize that they are very much in love with each other………

Things were going great……..they were famous as lovers ….many times they'll get into a small fight but then in the very next moment they'll be found ,making out…….their love was always very passionate………..

After 2 years mayu joined his family business though he never lived with them……..nupur too started her career as a journalist in electronic media…….they got married…..in early months they were happy to no bounds………life was perfect…but..then………nupur was injured while covering a news……..mayu was mad like hell……he loved her and couldn't bear to see her in pain……..

He asked nupur to leave job…….nupur would have left the job for mayu but mayu then said….if she want to continue with her job she can leave him………those words broke down nupur ………….she felt she has no importantance in his life,he don't need her anymore……..she knew he loved her but wasn't her self-respect anything……..how could he take her for granted…..mayu was more important to her……his honor,his pride……..but he actually he took her for granted ……….she wondered if this is what called love???????nupur immediately left the house….the job…………

Now back at present she knows he hates her for choosing her job over him……but she never chose her job……sometimes she wanted to clear this misunderstanding between them and say she always wanted him……..sometimes she wondered if she did the right thing by leaving him……by not telling him that he was always important for her…….but today she knows he actually hates her for telling about their daughter and for that she is guilty…
in the backgound somewhere a play is being played refrring to nupur's condition

"hum bewafa hargiz na the,par hum wafa kar na sake
humko mili uski saza,jo hum khata kar na sake"

thx to nihita

reserved ....

sorry for commenting so late as i was out of station.i read third part ne. so for third part:

Wonderful loved the part..... Adi keep doing the good work,,..... meine padh liya.....

fabulous 4th part....very romantic....

awesome yaar

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

sorry for commenting so late as i was out of station.i read third part ne. so for third part:

nice update yaar...n it really looks perfect family....mayu n dia ae sooooo sweet.....its really getting interesting now...what will doctor say?

very nice update

nw i ll read fourth1.

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