FF: Incomplete Life - Ch 21B on PG 76 & Note PG 78

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pinkylover01

@pinkylover01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#421

hey dil,

nice update, im very proud of the way they interacted, it kinda reminded me of the lion the witch and the wardrobe, when the lion and lucy finally except eah other...

overall well done

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kamarunnisa

@kamy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#422

finally dil............. now how long should we wait come on yar .......I am an old women i'll forget what i read if u don't update them soon....

love

kamy

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Ramya

@iloveserials

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Posted: 14 years ago

#423

Dil

Plz plz update soon. Awaiting next part eagerly.

Ramya / ILS

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Lunna_22

@Lunna_22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#424

Hey hey update soon please if you're not too busy, thanks.
Your stories are too good to be left hanging.👍🏼

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@jazzy28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#425

Pls update soon yaar. Waiting. :(

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JAN_SA

@JAN_SA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#426

waiting desperately for an update please pretty please

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Ramya

@iloveserials

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Posted: 14 years ago

#427

plz plz plz give us an update soon. I hope u have not forgotten this FF. We are all eagerly awaiting an update, Dil.

Plz continue soon............

ILS / Ramya

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@andyash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#428

where are u ? please please update soon

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#429

Pls update dear. Pls give us a preview

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#430

I really apologize guys for the long wait. I've just been super busy lately and haven't had time to think about writing. Here's a short preview for now. I'll try to finish the update and post it real soon.

Preview:

"Knock, knock." Jai hears the muffled voice of his friend as he taps against his office door. Used to his intrusions by now, he allows him in knowing very well that even if he refused it'd make no difference.

"Hey dost, look what I have for you," Rohit announces in a sing-song tone. Jai glances up exasperatedly wondering what Rohit is up to now but holds his tongue from snapping at him when seeing his wife and son come in to view. He becomes bemused on seeing them here in his office.

"Bani...," he slips up her name almost immediately once rising from his seat. Bani looks to him sheepishly--praying for the floor to split open and swallow her up just about now. She bites down on her lip as her husband stares at her fixatedly with his piercing gray eyes.....

Edited by Indian_Goddess - 14 years ago