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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: princess52

heyyy....lollzzz sorry again for being late had so many updates to read tht never got time but now atlast fisinsd...this was the last one

n i loved the part ridz was so scute ...n is tht guy n armaan the same.....pllzzzzz
make it more romnatic i just loved the part....i had gooosebumps lolzzz

continu soon n om me as wlel
love habs

Hey sweetie it's ok to be a bit late yaar, don't say sorry ok 😡😊.....m glad tht u liked it 😳😊.......sooo u want more romance hmmmm will definitly do tht......evn dont mind adding mre romance 😳😆😳.....will continue super sooon........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aarora

wow honey..amazing part..loved it..riddhima drunk n telling everything to that mysterious guy..lol..how cute..hope armaan is only this mysterious guy..continue soon..cant wait to read more..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

Hey thnx alot m glad u liked it.....will continue sooooon.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteso Armaan helped Ridhima and take her to room but still u not disclose who is that secret admirer plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

"You are my sunshine,
You are my shining star,
Everything I'm not,
You are.
You make me laugh,
You make my heart smile,
Everything you do,
Makes life worthwhile.
You are so sweet,
You are so very kind,
Everything I cherish,
In you I find.
You are a blessing,
You are an angel I see,
Everything about you,
Is Gods gift to me."






Nidha

Hey thnx alot m glad u liked it....hmmmmm Armaan is helping her bt don't worry i'll sooooon disclose the stranger.....will continue sooooon.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipu

heyy!!!

dear that was fab...

i mean the concept am totally fida over it...

ohh ridz was so cute...and ammy was asusuall so ....what would we say...

just update next one soon....

Hey thnx alot m glad u liked it.....will continue sooooon.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: funkybratz

is it really armaan the guy who danced with her?as in he also have blue eyes its so confusing.but i love this confusion.update soon and do pm.take care. bye. 😊

hmmmm how he is will sooon be out.....will continue sooooon will surely PM u.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva

great update

I hope Armaan is the guy Ridz was dancing with
thanx for the pm
plz continue soon

Hey thnx alot m glad u liked it.....will continue sooooon.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SuKaSh

hey great part dear

loved it soo much
load of confusion lolllzz but i guess armaan n admirer r the same n i hope so too
continue sooooooooon n thanx for the pm yaar

Hey thnx alot m glad u liked it......will sooon solve the confusion.....will continue sooooon.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzi830

hey
nice part..loved it..thanks 4 the pm..continue soon...

Hey thnx alot m glad u liked it.....will continue sooooon.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jennykaran

great part three!! i loved it.. now m confused about if the mystery guy is armaan or not.. plzzz update soon!!

Hey thnx alot m glad u liked it....will soooon solve the mystry.....will continue sooooon.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 4
"I Love You" she shivered hearing him whisper in her ear n closed her eyes as he kissed her ther......her lips tremble feeling his hot breath on thm......he looked at her n tuck a strand of her hair behind her n lightly caressed her face with his cold fingers......while adoring this gorgeous beauty......his other hand went around her waist n pulled her closer to himself crashing her soft figure with his masculine one....she could not breath properly......n her eyes refused to open scared tht she might get lost in those ocean deep eyes.....she felt him kiss her eyes n thn her cheeks moving towards her lips....suddenly she felt someone shake her hard.....n hear someone scream in her ears......
"Riddzi get up.....Riddzi" someone shouted in her ear....making her jump up in shock n scream "AHHHHHHH" her breathing extremely heavy firstly bcoz of the dream n 2ndly bcoz of d sudden shout....she opened her eye's n looked around n noticed tht thy wer yet in the plane n all eyes have turned towards her.....embarrassed she quietly set down n looked down.....when she rem tht someone had shouted she looked up at Muskaan n saw her smirk.....
"What the hell Muskaan is this the way to wake up someone"
"What cn i do u sleep lke a pig...."
"watever" Riddhima looked totaly annoyed.....she was jst goin to see the persons face if Muskaan had nt disturbed her....thy wer on ther way to Europe Switzerland......
"Now stop making this dirty faces.....n gt ready we r almst ther" Muskaan laughed seeing Riddhima glare at her......
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Cmeing out of the plane Riddhima shivered feeling the cold wind brush her body.....she inhaled the fresh air n stepped out of the airport where a car was waiting for thm.....to take thm to the cottage thy had booked.....thy didn't wanted to stay in ny hotel n so thy had arranged for a small cottage for the next 12 days.....
Cottage ::


Bedroom ::


Fireplace ::


Kitchen ::



Thy looked around the cottage it was beautiful.....Riddhima n Muskaan selected the rooms on the first floor.....while Anjali selected the one on ground floor......thy wer surrounded by mountains n hills covered with snow.....the atmosphere was breathtaking.....thy roamed in the back garden n drank hot chocolate n had some cookies......Switzerland the land of romance n chocolates.....well thy had chocolate the only thing remaining was romance.....
"It's jst sooooo romantic here isn't it" Riddhima said twirling around......dreaming abt tht night on the beach with the stranger.....
"oooooo someone's getting romantic haan" Muskaan said teasing her....bt jst got a swt smile in return......it started snowing thn n thy rushed inside n set by the balcony admiring the beauty of this beautifull city.......after some chit chat thy eat ther dinner n went to ther respective rooms.....
Riddhima changed in a cute little strawberry nightie n sat down on the sofa gazing outside.....she pulled the comforter over herself n jst sat ther lost deep in ther thoughts.......
*wish m dream wld have come completely true......hmmmm this whole thing is nt bad at all jst wish tht i hd tht special someone with me right nw.....thn this whole thing would have been although more beautifull....(her thought went back to those little special moments in Bahamas, she would always rem thm.....those wer the parts of dream she had wen she was a young teen.....she used to read lots of romantic novels n had build her own dream land......jst like a fairy tale world.....as she grew she laugh on her own dreams thinking how stupid she is to dream of a stranger....bt thn wen she first felt him, her dreams came flooding back....n she thought mayb her dreams wer nt tht stupid....jst mayb) god wats happening to me, i don't know his name i have nvr seen him bt yet all i think abt is him......thy way he touched me the way he whispered in my ear (she thn rem the dream she had on the plane) 'sigh' hw i wish i cld meet him again n jst hold him once mre* her cell buzz getting her out of her thought's she saw n a smiled form on her lips...
"Private No..." she said excitedly....
"So princess u wanna meet me huh.....n u miss me n u even wanna hug me......awwww my baby.....don't worry main tumhari ye khwaish bhi jald hi puri kardunga......bt for nw jst go to ur frnt door...ther's smething for u" she jumped up excitedly n went down running n opened the door n nw even her eyes smiled with her....seeing.....
She tired to look here n there but cld nt see anyone ther it was completely dark n chilly cold out side....she picked up the teddy n hugged it tightly n ran back to her run.....her cell buzz again.....she ran n picked it up n opened the msg....
"So did u like it 'i loved it thnk u sooooo much' no need for thnx love 'she jst smiled'.....hmmmm well till the time m nt ther with u cn hug it n sleep 😉 'she blushed a bit n kissed the bear'....waise u know u look very hot in this cute little nighty 😉" she blushed n lay on the bed thinking abt him....she cldn't even msg him bck as it was a private no. bt thn wats the need she wld jst say n he wld hear it......she used to wonder how bt nw she doesn't care.....she jst wished tht he's always with her like this......she pulled the comforter over herself n hugged the teddy n went to sleep with a sweet smile......
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Next day thy went for a little outing.....thy went to the nearest market n got all the stuff thy needed.....thy had a fun filled lunch.....n roamed on the streets chatting n giggling enjoying ther freedom.....thy search n made a rough plan abt wer all thy will be going wat all thy will be doing.....bt b4 tht thy jst wanted to relax for sometime.....thy went back to the cottage.....thy wer jst sitting wen Muskaan's cell rang she wen to the other side to pick up the call.....she never actually did tht.....
"who's it Muski" Riddhima asked
"Oh no one jst a frnd" she replied n thn continued talking "hey everything is goin smooth ya no problems at all....bt i cn't tlk much rit nw....bt u don't 4get wat i said ok....byeee cya soon" she ended the call n walked back to thm....
"wat???? y are u looking at me like this"she said looking at thm starring at her.....thy shrugged, started doing wat thy wer doing.....thy went for dinner at a near by resto.....all n all the whole day thy jst relaxed n did nothing except for lazing around....
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Days went by it had been 3 days since thy came ther......thy would go sight seeing.....go to the near by disc or resto for dinner n did a lot of shopping....once thy wer at a local disc when a guy came to thm......
"Hey.....cn i join u" he asked sweetly....
"Sahil....omg i can't believe its u" Riddhima hugged him....
"Riddzi u know him" Muskaan asked confused...
"Ya i his my cousin form India...rem i had gone for a cousins wedding last year it was him" she said excitedly n thn turned towards Sahil "hey Sahil where is Riya n wat r u doing here"
"Riya is fine she's at home....actually after our wedding we shifted here so tht i could handle our business over here.....n i ws here to meet a frnd.....i ws jst going wen i saw u......wat r u doing here"
"well m on a vacation with frndzzz"
"Oh nice....bt nw u need to come for our Anniversary day after tomorrow its jst a small get together nothing big ok bt u hv to come n no excuses at all n ya do get ur frndzzz....."
"oh sure we'll come..." Sahil gave her his card n bidding byees left frm ther.....
At night Riddhima was sitting in the living room watching TV, she was not at all sleepy.....while Muskaan n Anjali wer sound asleep in ther rooms......it was 2 in the night n completely dark outside n it was snowing tooo making the weather chilling cold.....Riddhima heard a voice frm the kitchen she went ther but did not see anything or anyone ther thinking it was js herillusion she went back......wen she heard some one knocking on the main door.....wondering who cld be ther this late n in this whether......she jst sat ther scared to open when she heard the person knocking harder....nw she was very scared she thought of calling Anji n Muskan bt thn thought tht she needs to check who it is first mayb someone needed help.....
She went towards the door n called out "who is it" bt she got no response she called again bt yet no response, she thn turned back to go wen the lights went away n the person knocked again.....scared she turned back when the person knocked harder......nw she was very very scared all types of horror thoughts came in her mind as she trembling turned the knob n opened the door......bt ther was no one ther she went a bit out n looked here n ther n called out again bt she got no response bt thn the door to the cottage closed living her outside......she turned around shocked as she heard the door closing with a thud.....
"who is it" she called again shivering bcoz of cold as well as fear......she could nt see much bcoz of the dark n foggy weather......she tried to open the door bt it ws locked.....she looked here n ther bt yet see cldn't see anyone.....she went towards the backyard thinking mayb the back door wld be open......she hugged her self with her hands as she was wearing a small nightie with no over coat n ws feeling very very cold when she felt someone hug her from back.......
She closed her eyes feeling the touch n stoped in her track.....whn she heard a familier whisper....
"Feeling cold sweetheart, dont worry i'll warm u up" he said in a husky voice....she knew it was him she was abt to turn back when she almst choked on ther great as he kissed her neck....he carressed her stomach sensually through her satin nightie.....n held her closer.... "U wanted this didn't u???" he asked her sensually..... while she nodded unconciously.....n thn whispered back "but more thn this i wanna know who u are"
"well baby even i want to come in front of u as like this i can't love u completely" he said touching her trembling lips lightly making her gasp.....n thn continued
"But u know wat i like it far too much to see u like this....a bit scared, a bit nervous n trust me the look on ur face wen i hold u turns me on completely....." Riddhima shivered hearing him.....her breathing bcame hard as she felt him turn her around.....she wanted to open her eyes bt she jst couldn't do it as she felt his breath on her lips......n he pressed her closer n stroked her back to make her feel warm, when he noticed the goosebumps on her body.....bt little did he know tht thy wer not bcoz of the cold bt bcoz of him.....
"i soooo wanna taste u right nw" he whisper against her lips n traced her figure lightly frm her face to her waist with his hands sensually......making her held him tightly putting her hands on his shoulders......this was the first time tht she was actually touching n feeling him......n she liked his touch very very much......her breathing was completely out of control as she heard him say all this.....he was soooo close to her she could feel his whole body against her......she was feeling nervous, scared, excited n ya happy all at the same time....
He moved close to her lips bt at the last moment as he was abt to tuch her lips her he turned n kissed her cheeks......n left her......
For moments she stood ther in dazz at wat jst happen.....bt wen she realized tht she could no more feel him, she opened her eyes n to her surprise she was inside the cottage.....she didn't rem him taking her in.....bt thn she was too much into him to notic him moving in with her......she sat down on the couch rem all tht happened jst moments ago.....she knew his voice she knew his touch....she had a feeling tht she had heard him n more over tht seen him b4.....bt thn she couldn't bring herself to point out who he actually is....as he had always diverted her when ever she had tried to imagine him......
*Y didn't i open my eyes.....sweeti u tried bt thy didn't listened to u.....ya i tried shit man i lost such a nice chance to see him....he was sooooo close to me 'sigh'.* she soke to herself......but the answer was tht she could not control herself when with him n tht's wat made itdiff for her to identify him....his touch, his voice had tht effect on her.....
After a long discussion with her heart she went back in her room.....n slept thinking abt him....
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Hey guys here is the 4th part for all of u i knw its short bt promise the next part would be longer n sooner......i jst hope u all like it.....do leave ur honest comments/criticizms abt it.....silents plzzzz do comment or press the Like button if u like it....😉

P.S :: guys don't worry the stranger wld be out soon....jst waniting for the moment to come 😆😉.....till thn enjoy...
Edited by crazy_4_karan - 16 years ago

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