So here we go with the updates...
Its the flash back scenes... and this will be the routine for a while... until i reach upto the real reason we will travel thru their past..
I have come up with color scheme.. wherein the dialogues will be in blue, the scene description will be in purple, Here no way we will reach to the present.. If i mention present it will be the situation at which we are on discussion... the actual present scenes, wen it comes i will be intimating it to all of u as "BACK TO OUR PRESENT"
So ppl shall we start the rocking flash back ?????????????????????????????
So come on lets travel their journey together....
ophs/.. BTW there is the thanks giving and request post at page 20.
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Part 4
continuation of part 3 ............................................. Nupz is shocked, surprised and dont understand the mixed feeling she is into... A question mark is wat seems to surround her.. she gives mayank a y did u do this look??? and goes into the trans of wat they were and how they were before all this happened.............
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Now we enter the flash back and from here on the color codes apply
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Scene 1: BHUSHAN MANSION:
Everythin is quite different in Bhushan mansion. Its a 2 storey bunglow with all latest interiors and exteriors possible. Green grass and well watered plants. Inside the house. All latest gadgets from Plasma TV to iphone. Anythin u think about is present in this house. There are almost 20 to 25 rooms with atleast 30 to 35 servants. Wen u think of cooks - u will find atleast 5 of them who are specialized in different types of food. there is one cook just for chinese and so on goes the list. Also they had a dedicated underground parking for their cars and bikes. They had nearly 5 cars and only 3 ppl to use..
Father Bhushan (FB) a renouned businessman, very famous for his Textile Industry, is all well ready in his formal attire and ready to office, sitting in the coffee table reading his newspaper and having his break fast. He had a craze for cars and used to have a personalized driver. He was very sentimental regarding his car that he was the lone user of it. He never even allowed his wife to be in it.
Mother Bhushan (MB) - she is the business partner for her husband's company. A cute lady who wears all sorts of western as well as indian attire. She is a lady who knows what to wear when and also could carry her dress in the best ever senses...
FB & MB were such a lucky pair and were blessed to have such a sweet bubbly chirpy daughter. Shez the one and only daughter they have and had given their best morals to her. This gal was naughty, smart, kiddish at times yet very intelligent.
FB : (looks at his wrist watch each and every he reads a line in newspaper)
MB : Kya hua... Aap itne pareshaan kyoon ho??
FB : Pareshaan nahi meri ardaangini.. Par time toh dekho. apni pyaari si beeti kahaan hei. Usse dekhe bina mei office kaisa jaata.
MB : areey soyi rehgy.. Raat ko late aayithi. toh aap niklo office ke liye time ho raha hei.
FB : Ek din bhi aisa nahi tha ki meri beti ko dekhe bina mei office nahi jaata.. aur aaj.!!
MB : (Looking towards the stairs) dekho aagayi aapki pari.
FB : (to daughter) Beta, kya aap bhi. itni late karaadi papa ko jaana hei na office..
Daughter : Papa. am sorry .. kya hei ki kal late hui thi aur aaj college jaana hena toh ready ho rahi thi.
FB : Toh chalo. ab jo mujhe hamesha deti ho woh dedo aur mei nikalta hoon.
Daughter : (gives a kiss on her father's cheeks) ****this was a habit from the time she was born. she used to wish her dad and kiss her before he left to office. she was considered his lucky charm as only after her birth his business started to flourish *****
FB : Chalo beta. (he too kisses his daughter and his wife and leaves to office).
MB : Beta ab tum bhi break fast khalo. tumhe bhi jaana hei na>>...
Daughter : Maa.......... Aap kitni pyaari ho. (gives a kiss on her cheeks also) Maa aaj kya hei break fast mei. jaldi khake nikalna hei. Areey mei toh bhulhi gayi. un teenon ko bhi miss call deni thi.
**********************she gives them a miss call***********************
MB : yeh lo tumhari favorite sandwich... Aur yeh kya pehna hei tumne.. tumhare joote tumhari dress se milti hi nahi. change karke college jaana.
Daughter : teek hei maa.. thanks ki aapne yaad dilayi.. nahi toh mei aisi hi jati. (then she calls on Ramu kaka who comes running towards her)
Ramu kaka : kya hua beta... bolo...
Daughter : Ramu kaka, mujhe aaj college jaani hei.. aur aap please dekhiye ki meri gaadi mei petrol hei ki nahi.. aur agar nahi hei toh please bhar ke layiye. college ka time ho raha hei.. aur mujhe achcha nahi lagega ki gaadi beech raste mei rukhe.
Ramu kaka : beta mei abhi karatha hoon. Aur aap chinta mat karna. Aisa naubat aapko hum aane nahi denge. (ramu kaka goes. fills the car key to the driver and asks him to fill petrol and be back soon)
************ Ramu kaka is like a manager in the Bhushan mansion and is totally faithful towards his employer (Bhushans in general). And he had been working there even before junior bhushan was born. Wen junior bhushan was born she was taken care by Ramu kaka wen FB & MB used to go for conferences.*******************
The car is back. Its a Lamborghini Red color car. Driver hands over the key to Ramu kaka and says the tank is full now. Ramu kaka gives the key to our junior bhushan who is all set to go to college after a vacation of 2 months. Ya shez in second year and is all excited to visit her friends in college after the semester summer vacation.
Here comes our junior bhushan in pretty pink frock wit pink shoes, pink hair band and pink hand bag with jus a note.. And this is our NUPUR BHUSHAN... the whole and sole of Bhushan Family......
She enters the Red Lamborghini and starts her car... The car takes a turn and nears the gate,,, the watch man opens the hears races our Nupur... She is a race maniac.... Cars & Race are the 2 great hobbies of hers....
ZOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM.......................................................................................
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Scene 2: THE SHARMAS
The Sharmas is another huge bunglow jus a street parallel to Bhushan Mansion. It is also a 2 storey bunglow with wide range of interiors and exteriors. They too have a underground car park and supports around 3 cars and 3 bikes. The Sharmas had a beautiful back yard with fountain and beautiful lawn and too add a swing with back-rest wherein 2 of them cud sit comfortably. The Sharmas as well had a lot of servants wandering around the house with one or the other work. Everybody were busy with thier assigned work and house seemed too systematic.
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Coming back to watz happening in the sharmas the same time as wat was happening in bhushan mansion....
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Father Sharma (FS) : A renouned industrialist, whose main concern was Petroleum. Most of the petrol bunks in the city were his.. and he had base all over the country and usually bathed in money.
Mother Sharma (MS) : A totally gharelu female.. A full time house wife yet her main interests were kitty party. She was more into partying.
FS & MS were blesses with One and only son. He was a pampered kid and always loved to be in the alone yet expected he surrounded by ppl. He was dashing in looks wit about 5ft9" height. HE was anybody's dream come true. Even though he had many gals around him, he stays far away from them except for one.
At the break fast table,
FS : Areey srimati, kahan ho tum.. Aur apna ladla kidar hei???????
MS : Areey subah subah kyoon chilla rahe ho... Kya baat hei.. Mei toh yahaan hoon aur aapka subah ka nashta bhi yahaan taiyaar hei.. Toh ab kya???
FS : Arey apne bete ko aaj college nahi jaan hei kya??? Kab woh neeche aaye aur kab mei usse pocket money de aur kab niklu office ke liye..
MS : lo aagaya aapka ladla. (looking at her son whose in a HBshirt with a blue jean and jus a note in hand) beta aaja.. Papa ko tumhari chinta horahi hei.
Son : Papa Maa good morning.... Nashta taiyaar hei na... Aaj mujhe college jaana hei aur yeh lo mei taiyaar bhi hogaya...
FS : Beta jaldi khalo aur niklo office ke liye.. Aur tumhare car mei petrol daali hei. Aur apne gaadi ke saare papers gaadi mei rak di hei dashboard mei. Aur yeh lo key. Sambhaal ke chalana.. Teek hei??
Son : Ji papa.. thank u so much...
FS : (leaves to office leaving MS & Son at home)
MS : Beta tumne mobile lee hena???? Abhi miss cal ka bhaarish shuru hoga..
Son : Thanks maa,, Tumne yaad diladi... (calls for champa the servant) Are champa mere mobile le aana.
**************************Champa is the servant who is very friendly to son of FS & MS.. he is actually champak lal but they call him champa ***************************
Champa : (champak lal brings the mobile and says ) Baba tumhare phone mei 2 mis calls aachuke hei.. jaldi taiyaar to jayiye.. nahi toh pata hei na kaise ghussa karte woh dost.....
Son : Champa thank u so much... Maa mei nikal raha hoon... Shaam ko milte hei. Abhi already late ho chuki hei...
MS : Beta yeh dhood toh peelo...
Son : Maa late ho rahi hei.. jaldi do na.. peeke jaatha hoon.. Nahi toh aapka poora din kharab hoga... aur uske wajah se aap mujhe cal karke pareshaan karegy...
MS : (gives the mug of milk)
Son : (drinks the milk, returns the cup to mom, kisses her and bids adeu for the day) bye maa...
The car is ready.. Its the Black Porche sports version waiting there for our Hero, Mayank sharma to enter in... The car starts, moves slowly and once crossed the gate, the racer sound without the silencer is heard...
And here behind u find the red lamborghini joining his and the 2 cars make their way in the racer style.
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Ok gals hope u all enjoyed reading it.. And as for many requests i have tried my level best to keep it lengthy.
Hope i have not dragged much and kept the scenes interesting....
I request u all to use the LIKE button if u feel i have kept up to ur standards.....
All ur positive negative criticism is welcomes... Those are the support factors for me to continue wit ma FF...
Edited by little_dragon - 16 years ago
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