MAYUR FF - KIDNAP.. ~~updated part 6 page 34.35~~ - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome Priya!!!..
hailllaaa!!!...this suspense...u are killin me with dis.!!!..I loved the part when Sam says nupur kuch bol nahi paa rahi..LOL..u cracked me up with that one!!!😆...the way mayu stares at her in the beggining...and the way she trips and he holds her by the waist!!!..ahem ahem...next what..my brain is going in all directions re..whats in your mind??!!LOL..i love the suspense u r creating arnd the reason for the kidnap..superb..!!
great going..keep writing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

nice update plz add me to ur pm list thanks

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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
Hey,
Awesome part dear....👏
Aur nupur ne to had he kar di....Kidnapping k beech mein usse picnic yaad a rahi thi😆
Continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Love,
Sameera😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

interesting yaaar

update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

thank u so much... next part coming soon...

Originally posted by: preethis

nice part..... its wonderful.....

thank u so much

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

oohhhh now this is really a very different FF.. a) i would have never thought they actually knew nupur.

b) did mayank only kidnap her becoz of school problems?
:S
but otherwise i really do enjoy the way u write.
do cont soon.
xSonia

thank u so much sonia.. love such twists.. u will enjoy more...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: hgrhr

really nice update!! i was waiting to read the next part..!!

hehe....soo they all are still in college and mayur still bicker....hmmm....but i can't figure out what could be the reasong they kidnapped her..!!
its really interesting.....
LOL...and nupur after still being kidnapped was ordering him around for that sandwitch..!
thanks for the PM...continue soon!

think think.... this is wat i want my FF readers to .... thanks a lot dear u liked it... u will like the future episodes tooo
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

haila Nupsi ko kidnappin ke beech Picnic kahan se yaad aaya ane ways awesume part Priyu

hahahahaaaa... therez a apoint in picnic dear... thanks dear....

Originally posted by: -Neelam-

Awesome part Priya!!!! Continue soon dear!! Thnks for the PM!

thank u so much... sure will PM u..

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hi.
its really amazing
i got some different flavor from it
plz we want next part little bit longer
Pm me and add me on ur frnd list
Faria

thank u so much for enjoying ma FF... i tout this was bit longer... if u want more i am ready for it... u r there in ma PM list...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: palak5

Awesome Priya!!!..

hailllaaa!!!...this suspense...u are killin me with dis.!!!..I loved the part when Sam says nupur kuch bol nahi paa rahi..LOL..u cracked me up with that one!!!😆...the way mayu stares at her in the beggining...and the way she trips and he holds her by the waist!!!..ahem ahem...next what..my brain is going in all directions re..whats in your mind??!!LOL..i love the suspense u r creating arnd the reason for the kidnap..superb..!!
great going..keep writing!

i really dint knw .. suspense kills u huni... keep ur brain wandering... many things to come... u will love it dear... for sure der is mayur romance and all.... with a happy ending..
thank u so much..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: farrda01

nice update plz add me to ur pm list thanks

thank u so much... surely will PM u...

Originally posted by: sameera_12

Hey,
Awesome part dear....👏
Aur nupur ne to had he kar di....Kidnapping k beech mein usse picnic yaad a rahi thi😆
Continue soon and thanks for the pm.
Love,
Sameera😊

thank u so much dear... next part coming soon... kadnaping n picnic has some connections.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesum Dear
Add me to ur pm list
Ill add u in my frnds list
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey just now read ur ff dear....really interesting......i wanna know the suspens tied around kidnapping....please pm me.....

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