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Posted: 16 years ago
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Next Day
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Gafar has come to meet Mayank as he couldn't meet him that day.

"Gafar bhai iss barish ki mosom mai repairing hoga kya?"

"Wo to aaplog jaisa bolenge."

"Ok, wait. Mein maa ko phone karke poochta hoon."

Mayank dialed the number of his Kolkata's house.

First time no one received the call.

"Koi phone kiu nehi utharaha hai?" Mayank said to himself.

Mayank dialed again. This time someone receive the phone from that side.

"Hello."

"Mayank, tum?"

"Kiun? mein aapne ghar pe phone nehi kar sakta? "

"Haye…Meine aisa kab kaha?Haan lekin mein sochi rahi hoon, kahin aaj sun rise west to nehi huya na?"

"Aur tumhe aisa kiun lag rahi hai?"

"Aaj Mr. Busy ko phone karne ki fursat jo mil gaya…isliye.."

"Nupur, aapni bakwas bandh karo…Maa ko phone do."

"By God Mayank. Tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai. Anyway aunty is not here. She is taking rest."

"Tell mom, its very urgent."

"You tell me, what's so urgent? I am her P.A."

"P.A!!!!!!!! When did mom appoint u? But u can't help in this matter Nupur."

"Nupur k liye koi bhi kaam impossible nehi hai..Samjhe tum? By the way, did you get a scolding from your mom, yesterday?"

"Nupur tum maa ko phone de rahi ho ya nehi."

"You don't listen a single word of aunty. Aab aunty ki tabiyaat kharap hai…. Aab to tumhe Kolkata aana hi padega."

"Usse tumhe kya faida hoga?"

"Meri faida hai ismein. You have to obey my orders. Aunty has given full power to me. She is very angry at you. Even aunty has told that she will not receive your call from today."

"Is mom really angry with me?"

"Very much. Actually she is worried about you. She told me to take your responsibility." She paused for a second before adding, "I refused." saying this Nupur started laughing loudly.

"Hmm, you are filling mom's ear against me, right?"

"I have no time for that duffer. I am very busy with my job. Now say quickly why do you call for, I can't talk to you for long. I have to finish lots of work."

"Uff. Ask mom should I tell Gafar to start the repairing work. Gafar is waiting for a long time."

"Tell Gafar there is no need to repair now. Tell him start the work after rainy season. One more thing Dr. Shribastav went to your house today .You were not at home. He called back here. He will go in the afternoon. Please stay at home in the afternoon. Don't make mom more angry."

"Ok, bye."

"Listen, I will not come here from tomorrow…You do whatever you want. No one will stop you. Hearing about your heroism aunty's B.P gone high. We just returned from doctor's chamber now. There is no need to tell u what he said, after all I have to manage all the things."

"Kya? Maa aab thik hai na?" Mayank asked getting tensed.

"Aab badi fikar ho rahi hai aunty ki? Kitne bar kaha hai tumse..aunty chahti hai to Kolkata laut aayo…lekin nehi …Tum to apne marji se chaloge…"

"Nupur…tum meri baat ki jawab de raho ho ya nehi?"He asked raising his voice this time…

"Nehi bataungi…"She muttered to herself "sadu kahika!" and disconnected the phone.

"Huhh, I have no right to know what happened to my mom. Its too much." Mayank was disappointed.

But his anger vanished when he remembered how much Nupur cares about her mom, how she is managing everything, how she helps his mom in every step, it was not possible for him to be angry with Nupur anymore.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
That's all for now..
Waiting for ur replies...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
very nice and unique concept... i liked u r FF...
can u PM mi next time when u update?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Really great.,awesome. Do continue nd a million thanx 4 the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
awesome yaar
nupur ke entry next part me hoge wait for this
and the fight section is too good
awesom yaar
thx for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
she cares for her mother
but why mayu not in colcatta
nice part
next time plz pm when u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
very nice dear,, so nupur child hood frined haan.. so when is she coming???
Waiting for the next part do PPM me...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hey...
i m so in luv wid ur ff..!!
so different i must say..!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
wow next part nupur conversation was wonderful.. she should take responsibilities of mayank also.. ufffffffff waiting for the next part,...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
I'm really loving reading your FF...it feels like reading an old-fashioned detective novel...which has all the elements in it!!
I mean really....like right down to the protagonist being a man of principals....has an eye for detail....mom in kolkata...childhood sweetheart...and samrat as the best friend who's an officer...and the politics!! The graphology adds such an interesting twist!
The riot that broke out and mayank jumping in between...awesome scene!!
Something is going on here....this undercurrent of mystery is really exciting!!
At Last nupur's entry!! Loved their conversation...they know each other so well!!...hmmm....mom's trying some matchmating..LOL...!
soo looks like nupur's going to come meet him..!
AND on top of that the looong update was a treat to read!!
looking forward to the next part! do continue soon....!
thanks for the pm!

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