Mayur FF-Nupur ka Swaymvar -updated part 9-page 23 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
hey

nice part
the punishment was so sweet
n horse riding ko hindi mein ghud sawari kehte hain..........
n hope usme mayank hi jeete.......
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
ha ha ha ha.. lovely concept.. loved ur ff man.. it is really nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
awesomeeeeeeeeee.........superbbbbbbbb........read all d 4 parts 2day...........i lovd it vry vry much.....plzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz add me to ur pm list....n plzzz continue soon....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5

Nupur and Mayank were both on their horses treading slowly on a path in the forest nearby the palace. It was getting more and more dense. They started the race.

Both the horses were galloping almost neck to neck. Mayank was starting to get a little further than Nupur, but Nupur was almost about to catch up when something held her back.

Her dupatta got stuck on one of the bushes. She quickly tried to release it without ripping it, but Mayank was pretty far ahead than her by then and looked back and smiled at her.

Nupur made a face and started going extra fast. She smiled as the wind blew her hair back enjoying the ride. Just then she felt someone cover her mouth tightly and pulling her off her horse. She struggled and tried fighting the person who was trying to kidnap her and bit into his hand.

Kidnapper- Ahh!

She knew it was her only chance and Nupur screamed- MAYANK!

That was the only thing she could do before she fainted.

.........

Man1- Abhi tak hosh nahin aye ussko?

Man2- Nahin huzoor. Abhi tak behosh pari hain bechari. *pause* Agar aap bura nahin mante to kya main poonch sakhta hoon ke kya dushmani hain apko usse jis ke liye apne mujhse yeh kaam karne ke liye kaha?

M1- *evil laugh* Dushmani? Dushmani toh bohat purani hain lekin usse nahin, uske pita se. Maharaj Suneil!

M2- Huzoor agar baat cher hi di hain toh puri kahani toh baata dijiye apne iss sevak ko.

M1- Bohat sal pehle apni jawani wale dino main mein iss rajey ka sabse baara chor hota tha. Koi cheez aisi nahin thi jo mere liye namumkin thi. Jaane kitne ghar or kitne logon ko maine apni shaitani se luta. Par yeh mera liye kaafi nahin tha. Mera nishana toh kuch aur hi tha... Ranchghani ke rajya par kabza. Par ek din aisa bhi aye jab maine kisi ko apna saathi banake sabse bari galti ki. Aur ussi galti ke wajah se main pakada gaye.

He closes his eyes and continues...

M1- Dus saal! Dus saal maine Maharaj Suneil ke ked (jail) mein guzare! Aur isse behtar tarika kya ho sakhta hain pratishodya (revenge) leneka. Maine Maharaj Suneil ki sabse kemti cheez churai hain. *evil laughter* Unki beti Raj Kumari Nupur. *more evil and phsycotic laughter*

...........

Nupur slowly opens her eyes as she gained concious. She tried to move but couldn't. Her arms and legs were all tied to a rusty uncomfortable chair. A cloth was tied around her mouth so she was unable to open her mouth.

N in head- Main yahan kaise agayi?

She slowly starts remembering that she was on her horse when someone had grabbed her and took her away. After that she didn't know anything else.

N in head- Pata nahin kahan hoon main. Mayank? Kya usse meri awaaz sunni hogi? Par woh to bohat door tha.

(Nupur is getting mad) Itni himmat kia kisne mujhe hat bhi lagane ki!?

She starts shuffling around in her chair trying to make as much noise as possible.

.........

Rewind back to when Nupur was getting kidnapped.

MAYANK!

M- Yeh toh Nupur ki awaaz thi! Kahin woh koi musibat mein toh nahin phas gayi!

He turns around and the last glimpse he had of Nupur was with some man galloping away on a black horse.

Mayank was very worried and makes his horse change direction and go in the direction where he last saw Nupur. Not before long he got very confused and for a long time was roaming around trying to get any sense of direction. In the end he just decided to follow his heart and after some time he noticed a bend in the way leading towards a cave.

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That's it for now guys. Please continue reading and commenting like u all always do. I really appreciate everyone for reading and supporting NKS (Nupur Ka Swaymvar)!

Promo:

Mayur lost in the forest.

Edited by ranjana_c - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
awesome yaar
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm yaar
update next part sooooooon plezzzzzzzzzz
Posted: 16 years ago
#76
aw nupur got kidnapped
n mayu is gonna save her!
great part
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
woooooooooow .
plz jaldi update karo .
mujhe pura part padhna hai.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Aw, hw sweeeeet!

My Mayank will defo save Nupz!

okies! looking forward to the lost in the forest part!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
hey ur update are always kinda short.......plz update soon as possible thn..im waiting n yeah ur update was really great.....keep up the gud work......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
omg...nupur was kidnapped...!!
But Mayank's going to be the knight in shining armour..!! haina...?yay!
wow...the story's getting really interesting..!
loved this part..! do continue soon..!

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