Mayur FF-Nupur ka Swaymvar -updated part 9-page 23

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

like??? nno i didnot like the part..... i luvd i t awesome thanx for da Pm

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Tarandeep Kaur {Taran}

@frndship_trust

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

hey it was really great reading ur FF...its was sweet one...wow nupz say a lot abut mayu...bechara sun kar kya soch raha hoga...lolz...well it was so cute scene to be imagined...keep up the gud work yaar.....👏

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Kyun meri kya mu dikhaye hai jo mera wahan jaana zaroori hai

wow this dialoge is too lovely

nupus is so cute and mayu is so naughty

and love how she murmuring all stuff about maynk

soon update the next part

may be their is some naughty plan of maynk is coming

so waiting

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

wah...mayank rajkumar ishtyle mein flirt kar raha tha..!! LOL..

Great part yaar!! loved it!

Nupur toh uske baare mein bole hi jaa rahi thi....hehe....first meeting was awesome! I think mayu ko love at first sight ho gaya hai shayad....

looking forward to the next part...! do continue soon...

thanks for the PM

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399703

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

hey huni! sorry to comment late! i just read both the updates! they were awesome! loved it!

thanks for the pm! keep it up!

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#46

hiya ranjana,

wow dis is amazinggg.....
i've got to say you have got the most challenging ff i'm readin cuz of all this hindi like the proper royal way of speakin....im impressed
i jus read all the parts now and i love it...cannot wait for the next updateee
love lotss
xxxxx

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Fathima Fernandez

@sweetgalFats

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Hey yar! ths update wz very gud! ur hindi is really gud yar! Nd MayUr meetng wz very well written! Do continue soon! nd Thanx for the pm!

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preksha07

@preksha07

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#48

nice 1 yaar...keep it up....cont.soon......and pm me asap....

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Preethi

@preethis

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#49

nice update dear.. loved it..waiting for the next update...

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430105

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#50

hey ranjana...awesome yaar...loooved the mayur part....and mayank to yahaa flirting karna shuru...by god....i just loooved the way nups was toking abt him and mayu didnt get offended..lol....please do update soon and do pm me