Mayur FF-Nupur ka Swaymvar -updated part 9-page 23 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey dear hw are u?

I tld u before you are the best.

ab mujhe nahi lagta ki you need any other comment 4m me.

hai na???

take ur own time 4 update,bcoz study is also imp.

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Posted: 15 years ago
very cute update..........loved it........update ASAP....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guyz...i am soooooo sorry i noe i am so dumb, i didnt update for so long....its just since school started ive been so busy but now im really gonna try update more often
really missed u guys a lot....
here it goes..

Part 7
n- mujhe bahut bukh lagi hain, kuch khane ko nahi hain kya?

m- abh iss jungle mein, ek toh khana milna bahut mushkil hain, aur agar mil bhi gaya tum nahin khaogi

n- kyun, main kyun nahin khaoongi!

m- jab tum uss khane ko dekho gi phir tumhe pata lag jaayega kyun

n- acha! toh lekar aao

m- tum mujhe iss waqt jaake tumhare liye khana le aane ke liye keh rahi ho!? tumhe pata bhi hain, kitni raat ho chuki hain

n- seedhe seedhe kahi na, ke tumhe dhar lag raha hain

m- mujhe darr lag raha hain??! pagal toh nahi ho gayi ho! main kissi bhi cheez se nahin darta aur rahi baat khane ki, main le aate hoon par tum waise bhi khao gi nahi

n- pehle tum lekar aao phir dekhenge

mayank get up to leave

m- tikh hain, main jaa raha hoon!!

he goes to find some food.

nupur hears some wierd noises, it's actually just the wind she starts getting scared.

she gets up and looks around and she can't see mayank anywhere but then the sounds stop. nupur is relieved and sits back down.

she hears sounds again, this time they are louder. she runs looking 4 mayank but can't find him.

mayank comes back with a banana which he had 2 compete with a monkey to get. the banana is over ripe and is pretty blackish.

mayank doesn't see nupur and is really worried. he goes 2 look 4 her.

he couldn't find her anywhere. now he is worried 2 death, right then he hears her calling his name. he follows her voice and sees her. she was leaning against a tree looking terrified. mayank couldn't see her so frightened and runs to her. she sees him and hugs him. she was crying.

n- tum kaha the, tumhe pata hain yaha mujhe janvaron ki awaaze aa rahi thi

she hugs him even tighter. he slowly puts his hand around her waist to calm her down.

suddenly, they hear a roar. this time it's not the wind. mayank takes nupur hand and they run away from there.

m- pata nahin hum mahal se kitne door hain aur kitna waqt lagega raasta doondhne ke liye aur yeh jagah khatarnakh lag rahi hain, thoda aur aage chalte hain

n- main bahut thak gayi hoon main aur nahin chal sakti

m- bas thodi der aur

nupur was about 2 talk but mayank puts his hand over her mouth and picks her up.

m- abh tikh hain

n- mayank main chal-

mayank cuts her off

m- agar tum chalo gi toh pata nahin kitne bahaane banao gi

mayank carries her 4 half an hour and finally mayank stops.

m- tum yaha pe hi ruko main paani lekar aata hoon.

n- mayank ruko

m- kya hua

n- main bhi saath chalti hoon, pata nahin yahan par kitne aur janvar hain

mayank smiles and they both drink some water and continue walking.

15 minutes later they spot a small hut.

m- nupur woh dekho, chalo dekh kar aate hain kya hain

n- chalo

they enter the hut.

it was really small and tiny and had hay all over, but it looked quite safe.

m- hum yahin par rukte hain, abh toh main bhi thak chuka hoon

Nupur was about 2 say something but mayank said it for her

m- abh tum kahi gi tumhe thand lag rahi hain.

he looks around and spot 2 rocks he takes some hay, hits the rocks together and creates the fire.

n- tumne yeh kaise kiya!?

m- humare guruji ne humme sikhaya tha

Mayank gets some hay and puts it so nupur can sleep comfortably and he also lays down.

n- mayank, agar tum na hote toh paat nahin-

she notices mayank is sleeping so she also goes to sleep.

nupur wakes up first, the next morning and sees mayank still sleeping she waits for half an hour but mayank doesn't wake up. she spots the banana.

n- mayank shai keh raha tha, main iss jungle ka khana kabhi nahin khati.

she goes out of the hut and she felt nice 2 see the sun out. she goes 2 get something 2 eat. she was lucky and finds a coconut tree just near the hut

nupur takes lots of coconuts like atleast 6 because she knew it might be the only jungle food that would look good enough to actually eat. she goes inside the hut and sees mayank waking up.

mayank's POV:

i wake up and i see the most beautiful girl in the world, Nupur, she had food with her and she looked well rested. it made me feel good but i didn't noe why.

m- tum kab uthi

n- ek ghante pehle, jab tum soh rahe the, yeh lo narial

they eat until they are full and keep the rest of the coconuts with them.

when they go outside they can't believe there luck.

there is a waterfall with clean water flowing. nupur is really happy as she was thirsty anf felt really dirty, she stands under the waterfall and gets soaked she smiles and spins around enjoying herself, mayank joins her as well. they bump into each other. they share an eyelock. then, mayank starts moving closer 2 nupur nupur backs a away a bit, and mayank moves forward again. he takes his hand and moves some wet locks of hair that were falling on her face back. he notices that nupur was getting quite uncomfortable and realizes how close he is to her, he quickly backs away. there are a few moments of silence. finally, mayank talks.

m- abh humme chalna chahiye

n- hum aaj mahal pohanch jaayenge kya??

mayank remembers back to what zimba had said

Bechari raj kumari... kahan fas gayi, apne mahal se doooor

he wonders how far they are, but it's a fact that they have indeed gotten deeper into the jungle running from animals

he doesn't wanna upset her

m- shayad

this is all 4 today

plzz do comment and leave feedback

Edited by ranjana_c - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
thnxxxxxxxxxxx a special ton dear ki u finally updated............🤗🤗🤗...........
btw rockin update dear..........awesome............my most fav moments vr when mayu carried nups in his arms n tht waterfall moments....😳...........uff....they vr heavenly rockin moments..........thnxxx a ton for this rockin update........plzzzzzz continue sooooooooooon..........😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Ranjana
thanx GOD- u r back with ur update.
its really very nice.
Now pls try 2 continue it.
thanx 4 ur PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
AFTER A LONG TIME.............................THIS WAS SO SWEET.CONTINUE SOON....
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Posted: 15 years ago
back with a bang.. wonderful dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ranjana,
u finalllly upd8ed,😃😃
the upd8 was wonderful,😃😃
plzzzzzz add me 2 ur pm list 😃
& upd8 soooooon.😃
lotsa luv,😊😊
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thanxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey darlin!!!

your back and wiv a bang!!!
sach mein it was such a good update,,, i lovedd it,,,
i reallly missed ur updates... but like u sed u gona do it more often!!! cant wait for the nxt update
love loads
xxx

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