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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
couldnt believe it was ur first FF... for a start u were amazing dear... very well placed FBs and present scenes ,,... enjoyed it... waiting for updates.. .and plzz do PM me wen u are ready with updates.. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by little_dragon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
awesome ff madhavi pm me yur updts naa
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
hey madhvi good job

u are very imaginative
all the best
looking forward for ur updates
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
i love it :) pls continue soon....and pls add me to ur pm list!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Yaar...
Awesome awesome...
I love it.... I cant believe its ur first FF... The way u have written the story is too good... Be positive n continue the good work...
Pls PM me ur next update honey...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Thank you all sachi mein mera conifidence boost kar diya aap sabne milke😃
I hv updated the 2nd part plz read that and comment too.
hasiii, Arjun_mayank, annie07, Piya_2009, Kanky, mjht_fan, abs_insane, taniyamiths, mjhtnupurmayank, mayank-nupurfan, myownarea, rresham, preethis, little_dragon, anthara_mjht, palak5, krishmjht, ananya_s, sweety4jaan, ranbir_lekha, ghtk1, Shafoo, ch0c0lates, Sunny-Malik, ~*mishu*~, shama420, ruchimayur, falak01, Kanika05, Mrs.MohitSehgal, -Neelam-,
Bollywood-chic, utfracks, AMMY LOVES RIDZ, SanaSarwar, surbhi123, gr8_mms, vaish04, muneefah, AFSHA18, sweetgalfats, tehzeeb25, Nishithini, naina.s.
Thank you all....😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
The previous pg has thank you note plz see i hope i dint forget any1
This is part 2 of thoda thoda pyaar ...............Plz comment honestly and kindly ............i hope u like this part too. Blue is today black is flash back
Part 2- Ragging

Mayank is back home, he sees mom looking at his dad's photo''.he doesnot like that ''''.he hugs his mom from behind and says "ma baba ki yaad aa rahi hai"

Ma: Arre mayu, haan aaj humari shadi ki saalgirah hai na'''.

Mayu surprised : Ma tumne kabhi bataya nahi?

Ma : Tune kabhi pucha??

Mayank: Aaj bataona

Ma sits on the sofa while mayu sits on the floor and keeps his head on her lap.

Ma: Beta, baba mujhe mere college ke dino se pasand karte the par unhone kabhi kaha nahi.

Mayank: Aur tum ?

Ma: Mayuuuu, who bas mere padosi hi the''..saalo bad unki ma ne meri ma se shaadi ki baat ki '

Mayank: aur??

Ma: Humari shadi hogayi

Mayank: Bas??

Ma: haan beta kash tere papa ne mujhe pehle ilu kaha hota toh mere paas bhi love story hoti sunnane ko''''par afsos nahi hai *smiles*

Mayank a little unhappy ki he dint hear a love story goes to sleep and nupur is cosy in her thinking of mayank.

Next day-

Gunjan wakes nupur up and notices she has fever.

Gunjan: Dee tumhe toh bukhar hai

Nupur: Arre kuch nahi thik ho jayega

Gunjan: Nahi dee tum baitho main kadha laati hu

After a while Gunjan gets kadha . And Nupur drinks it.

Nupur: Chal ab college ke liye der ho rahi hai

Gunjan: Nahi dee aaj hum nahi jayenge tumhari tabyat kharab hai na!!!

Nupur thinking about Mayank: Nahi gunjan padhai miss ho jayegi na .bilkul nahi chal chalte hai.

Gunjan: Dee agar yahi baat hai toh main jaati hu, acha apna khayal rakhna bbye.

Gunjan leaves Nupur is angry ' Kaisi behen hai'''.ab main mayank se kaise milungi. Mujhe toh lag raha hai ki meri ragging ho rahi hai'Bas iss bar Gunjan kar rahi hai by god!!

She sits and wonders about her ragging in college''..

FB

In the canteen Dia introduced them to all.

Dia: Friends ye hai meri Morena cousins. Sorry sisters jo tumhare saath Class mein hua who ragging thi'.

Nupur: (yells) Ragging??

Samrat: Jo ab tak khatam nahi hui babes

Dia: Par'.

Benji: Jab tak guru Samrat khush nahi hote tab tak ragging hogi''' Toh boliye guru Samrat Morena se aayi behene aisa kya ukhade ki aap khush ho.

Nupur tries to say something but uday interrupts: Yeh toh decide hi nahi hua tha ki yeh kuch ukhadengi '.inhe dekho toh '..yeh kitni kamjor hai''kaise kuch ukhadengi

Benji shuts up Uday

Nupur: Second year mein kaisi ragging??

Sheena: Babes ragging toh hogi. Tum batao tum humare entertainment ke liye kya kar sakti ho. Hum entertain hue toh tumhe chod denge'.

Samrat moving closer to Gunjan's face: Tumhe aapne group mein bhi lenge. Kyuki tum Candy ki sisters ho.

Nupur: Main acha nachti hu.

Samrat: Cool toh hum sad song gate hai aur tum happy dance karo

Nupur: Kya??

The gang sings kahin toh hogi who''''

And Nupur is standing

At college''.

Mayank is looking for Nupur, But he meets Gunjan ''

Mayank: Nupur kaha hai??

Gunjan: Dee ki tabiyat thik nahi thi '..toh who ghar par aaram kar rahi hai

Mayank yells: Kya?? Aur tum college aa gayi usse chodke

Gunjan: Mayank dee ne hi mujhe bheja taki notes na miss ho

Mayank moves on leaving Gunjan wonder on his behaviour. Mayank moving towards the library is thinking what a fool Nupur is''..

He accidentally enters the hall where girls are practicing dance. This reminds him of Nupurs dance''..

FB

The noise of gang singing had reached the library. Mayank was getting disturbed. He came out to stop them. But he was astonished to see Nupur doing the "channe ke chet mein" step on kahin toh''.He forgot his anger and was all smiles'''.Nupur's steps got funnier by the minute and every1 in the canteen hooted for her and clapped too.

The dance gets over.

Chinu: Ab Gunjan baby kya karegi??

Samrat moves towards Gunjan: Yeh toh Gunjan baby hi batayegi

Nupur: She is good with studies'

Samrat: Toh isse padhai ke sawaal humara academic champ karega''

Samrat moves towards Mayank and winks at him.

Gunjan is worried and holds Nupur's hand

Nupur: Chinta mat kar tujhe sab aata hai'

Samrat: Sirf teen sawaal aur Chinu ki Gunjan baby pass ''.

Mayank: Shri Sur Das ji zyadatar rachnae kis bhasha mein likhi gayi hai??

Gunjan: Braj

Mayank: Atomic orbitals are filled according to which rule??

Gunjan: Hund's rule

Mayank: The month of july is named after??

Gunjan: Julius Caesar.

Mayank nods and Samrat declares them the a member of there gang.

There is hooting in the canteen and claps too to welcome the new girls

Mayank asks them not to make much noise and leaves.

Mayank is now in the library thinking of Nupur and turning the pages of the book.

He suddenly comes back to the present and thinks

Mayank tujhe kya ho raha hai''Nupur ke alawa kuch nai sujhta ''.teri kitni responsibilities hai tu college ke last year mein apna focus nahi kho sakta'

Pata nahi kaisi hogi ?? Mil kar aata hu '..Apna khayal bhi rakh rahi hogi ki nahi??

Nupur at her place wondering''..

Gunjan ne bataya toh hoga na'''.Main Gunjan ko puchu call karke??

Nai nai Mayank aayega pakka aayega

Nupur: Aao aao Mayank Sharma im waiting


Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hey madhavi
yay me first well written part yaar lovely update
pls pls pls pls Pm me the nxt part
lekha
Edited by ranbir_lekha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
this is the pm list tell me agar some one wants to be added or subtracted
hasiii,
Arjun_mayank,
annie07,
Piya_2009,
Kanky,
mjht_fan,
abs_insane,
taniyamiths,
mjhtnupurmayank,
mayank-nupurfan,
myownarea,
rresham,
preethis,
little_dragon,
anthara_mjht,
palak5,
krishmjht,
ananya_s,
sweety4jaan,
ranbir_lekha,
ghtk1,
Shafoo,
ch0c0lates,
Sunny-Malik,
~*mishu*~,
shama420,
ruchimayur,
falak01,
Kanika05,
Mrs.MohitSehgal,
-Neelam-,

Bollywood-chic,
utfracks,
AMMY LOVES RIDZ
, SanaSarwar,
surbhi123,
gr8_mms,
vaish04,
muneefah,
AFSHA18,
sweetgalfats
tehzeeb25,
Nishithini,
naina.s.
yoshita.mayurfan
cool82d
roshni_light
robinblue91
mayank-nupurfan
hgrhr
shinella
AFSHA18
jeniluvmayur
ritu_randy

Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
hey madhavi..!
ohhh...I missed the FF when you'd posted it..!
Loved the first part!
LOL...kya ragging hui dono ki...Samrat ne nupur ki aur Mayank ne Gunjan ki ragging ki..LOL...the flashbacks are really nice..!
LOL...nupur ko pehle se hi pata hai ke mayank use dekhne ayega...hehe...
I'd love to read more...do PM me when you update! add me to the list...wow...you have one long list!
Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago

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