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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurg2010

itne dinon ki intezaar ke baad update mil hi gaya..........
it was really a nice update............
u express nupur's feelings very well..................
great job this time also............as usual...................
please do update soon............
and add me to ur pm list and pm me when ever u update.............


hey thnx ill try promise😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

i will try

Originally posted by: charmie_mayur

please update soon dear!!!


ya i will try

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

just read your ff........
plzzz continue soon


ya i will try
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23

hey lovely update
it was a senti one
but loved it
thanks for pm


ur welcome
n thnks
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

hi dear i readed it ur ff n it's amazing u really r god writer plzzzz add me ur pm list n plz next time ur update pme thanks


i guess i did that already
thnx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey madhvi
u updated after long time
happy to c ur update.
it was fantastic part.
loved it to the core
keep updating


hey thnx for being so patient
ill try promise
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

hi dear i readed it ur ff n it's amazing u really r god writer plzzzz add me ur pm list n plz next time ur update pme thanks


i guess i did that already
thnx 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

hey plz update soon
its about 1 and a half month since u updated
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update!!!


i knw im late
but im trying hard dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys i knw its almost been 2 months that i hv updated.......but frm my side its been longer.....i hv been answering exams all this time ......imagine.....i stll hv 10 more days to go, but am hearing ki postponed ho jayega so 30 more days 😭. after that ill go back home to my mom after almost a yr😭. This is my easiest ppr so i hv come up with an update. I honestly thank u ol for putting up with me inspite of all this😊. Love u guys
I lack some1 to proof read it.....so ignore weird errors.....im sry for those
Btw my plan is to get some +vity back from this point onwards😊
Also i promise my nxt update by tomorrow😃
Also i promise to end this soon n properly.....n nt to start one till i hv time or hv finished writing the entire thing😊
plz leave ur comments so that i keep a track of who ol still follow it😕
thanku ~~

love
madhvi
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Part 22-

A new day to the life in pune....with its windy n cold weather.....nupur woke up only to feel gunjan's absence in the house...her sister was off with the love of her

life....she felt lonely but she was happy for her...very few people fall in love n out of those few people very few actually marry them.....gunjan is lucky.....touch wood.

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"mayuu......arre beta sun na.....mayu"

mayank came to his mom's rum only to find her struggling with some clothes...

M- ma ye kya laga rakha hai subah subah.....mujhe kyu pareshan...."

MM- beta main toh wadrobe clean kar rah thi

M- ma pichle mahine toh sar se pao tak sara wadrobe saaf kiya tha phir ab kyu

MM- jyada sawal mat kar upar se woh bag nikal

M- maa

mayank gets down the bag n opens it....

m- ma iss bag ka kya karogi

mm- kuch nai

m-acha ma main soch raha tha ki

mm- haan bol sharma mat bol

m-tum nupur ke saath kyo nai rehti kuch din

mm- acha main aaj kal inta bore karti hu

m- nai ma, woh gunjan nai hai toh woh.....

mm- bechari akeli hogi....

m- haan

mm- aur mera mayu

m- ma main apna khayal rakhlunga....pakka

mm- acha thik hai...

m- thanku ma

mayank hugs ma....

mm- chal ab packing mein help kar

m- haan

mm- ab jo bag khola hai usme bed par pada sara saman dal de

m-oh..k..

he luks surprised at his mom.....she was already packing for leaving??

mm- tu jo soch raha tha woh mere samajh mein aa gaya tha beta.....ab jaldi kar

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nupurs day was as usual boring- college- radio office - home.....she dint see mayank today.....but dint miss him much

nupur was happy about the fact that she was moving on....at least trying too...

nupur headed home thinking about what to eat......anda roti...nai maggie is good no need to cook :)

nupur reached home tied her hair up in a bun...put the radio on......her fav radio show which plays old songs was on.....n headed to take a bath.....after the bath she

started preparing maggie when she heard the door bell ring.....

Nupur came to open the door

n- arre mayank ma aap dono.......

MM- haan socha tumhe hi bolte jaaye

n- aayiye na under

mm- main soch rah hu ki kuch din tumhare saath reh jau beta......main mayu se bore ho gayi wahi gandi gandi chize karta hai n khata hai

n- arre ma iski koi jarurat nai hai....main thik hu....aur kuch hi dino ki baat hai

mm- beta tum toh formality kar rah ho

n- ma....

mm- badi begairat ho ma saman leke aayi hui hai, toh bhaga rah hai

n- arre nai (looks at her bag).......main ab toh jaane nai dungi....arso baad ma k saath rehne ka chance jo mila hai.......

she goes in to get juice for her guests...comes out with juices n serves it to them

n- maa mayu...i mean mayank

mm- reh lega kuch din mere bina....waise bhi mujhse tang aa gaya hoga

m- maa

mm- main andar ja rah hu nupur fresh hoke aati hu.....mayu bag andar le aao plz

mayank takes the bag in n helps her n nupur follows....after the un packing is done mm goes in to change

m- nupur ma ko ye dawai khilayi hai....plz yaad se, unhe dawa bunk marne ka bus bahana chahiye

n- hmmmm kounsi kab kab

m- woh is dubbe mein time ke hisab se dose hai, bus de dena

nupur opens the box n sees 3 different color of pouches light blue, yellow n dark blue.....light blue for morning, yellow for after noon n dark blue for night.

n- mayank by god, itni mehenat

m- haan ma ko aise dawaiya khilata hu takki she doesnt knw kounsi medicine kha rah hai

n- kyu??

m- unhe pata chala ki unhe bp hai toh unka bp badh jayega

nupur giggles at this

n- mayank woh ma hai bachi nai

m- haan but phir bhi......

n- tumhari baatein sirf tumhe hi samjh aati hai

mm comes out of the bathroom n says nupur khaane mein kya hai.....at this nupur mentions she planned to hv maggie......

MM went to the kitchen make some food n gave nupur a big lecture on how maggie is unhealthy.........mayank had left the two to themselves n had gone way b4 dinner.

that night mayank nupur both slept peacefully.....unaware of mm's plan for the next 10 days

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Its not really a big part but ill come up with one soon.
Also how 10 days mein mm brings back old nupur, n mayank makes her believe ki love isnt bad/manhus at ol, will b seen. I promise to give u the nxt update soon, but after that exams agn😭. When im home ill update regularly😃
do tell me wat u feel
madhvi😳
Edited by -madhvi- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
mm was rocking
loved her a lot
i wonder watz her plan
i think its to bring amyur closer
can't wait
coninue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
madsooooooooooooooooooooooo meri jaaaan :D
kitte arze hue ,,,
and positive...*haayee mein mar jaavaa 😃*
Sachi u ll pass with flying colours..:)
meri achi duaen tumhare saath hai
waiting for the next update....EAGERLY 😆

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