Secret Desire (AR FF)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys,


I have been a avid reader of several AR's FFs on this forum and I decided to try to write one myself for the first time. Appreciations and criticisms are welcome. I would appreciate your comments which will encoruage me to write further. I am only going to concentrate on Arman and Ridhima, but other charcters will be there in the background.Will introduce the extras as an when hey arrive.


Secret Desire (AR's)

Concept:

Sweet gentle medical college graduate Ridhima's life changed forever when Arman, a dashing rough edged, handsome blue eyed doctor branded her with his masterful kisses and gave her a true taste of the tantalizing passion.

Since his first kiss had caused a sensual awakening, Ridhima knew that Arman was the only man for her.But the problem was that Arman had worn off marriage completely, especially to an innocent girl like Ridhima.

He had told it to her on several occasions, but Ridhima was not going to give up. Arman had always taught her to fight for the best and that's what she was going to do ' fight for Arman's love and not settle for anything less.


Prolouge

"Why did you come her Miss Basket? " Arman drawled

I wanted to see how does Dr.Amran-Mr. Know it all , live his other part of life" Ridhima retorted. " Rhea said that you wont allow the love of her life in your house"

"So, what are u going to do to convine me? You are a virgin with no expreince, so you wont be able to appease me?" he asked with a naughty glint in his eye and sloowly started approcahing her.

Ridhima's heart rate increased on seeing him coming towards her with tha menacing stride. " You arent supposed to know that I am a virgin". she squeaked, her voice having left her due to nervousness.

Arman boldly gazed up and donw at her body and let his gaze linger.

"Stop staring at me like that" Ridhima burst out. "What has gotten into you"

Arman smirked and kept looking at her body apprasingly and said matter -of-factlyone word seductively" Desire".

She forgot what she wanted to say. This always happened when Arman dropped his voice to a senuous whisper. Seeing Arman coming so close to her, her knees became week and said " Please dont say such words and look at me in this way" she tried one more time.

Moving so close to her so that heir nose touched and he let his hands trail up and donw her arms" May be I should not..." he whispered in her ear and moved a step closer, blocking the air flow between them ,which caused her to shiver....



Character Sketch:


Arman Mailk: 26 years old-senior docotor at Sanjeevni Hospital. Handsome, blue eyed guy. He doesnot beleive in love and marriage and has sworn off. But he still dates girls. Hold a special relationship with Ridhima. Always is protective abt her. He likes her, but doensot want to have any intimate relationship with her as she is belives in marriage and love.Both his parents have died in a car crash when he was in his teenage years and he is left with lots of money which has been carefully invested. Has been a father figure for his brother and sister.

Rahul Mailk: 24 yrs old, younger brother of Arman. Doing a job at a advertsing firm. Has feelings for Muskan Chadda, but has disregarded them. Loves to fight with Muskan.

Atul Malik: 21 yrs old, youngest brother of Arman Malik. Last year of engineering. Secretly loves Angali Sharma

Rhea Malik: 20 yrs old, youngest of the Malik family.Good looking, spoilt and spins her brothers around her little finger. Best friend of Ridhima Malik. Secretly jealous of Ridhima's beauty. She can be mean, but still good at heart.Not good at achademics.

Ridhima Gupta: 20 yrs old, innocent, intelligent, beautiful, green eyed girl. She is much mature for her age due to death of her parents at a young age. She doesnot have much money, but never to ask anyone for money. She belives in taking care of her finanincially. Loves Arman Malik and has decided that if she will get married, it will only be with Arman and no one else.But dates other guys to make Arman jealous. Knows Arman Malik and his family as their parents were friends. She lives in a girl's hostel.

Anjali Sharma: 21 yrs old.Friend of Ridhima and also lives in the hostel. She is in the last year of Engeneering in the same college as Atul. Considers Atul her special freind. She is not able to understand her feeligns for Atul.

Muskan Chadda: 24 years old. Freind of Ridhima. Assistant of Rahul Malik. Fights with Rahul a lot. Best freinds with Ridhima and Rahul. She likes to be aorund Rahul and hates his girlfriends, but hasnt understod yet.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting concept, do continue :)
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do continue....sounds good...lets see how you take it forward, will be interesting to read.....
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hey very nice..continue soon..plz PM me whenever u update..
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woah dear its really an awesome oneā­ļø mind blowingšŸ˜superbsound interestingšŸ˜› plz continue it soonšŸ˜› & send me pmšŸ˜‰ when u update it if u don't have any problem😳


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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's really awesome start dearā¤ļø really fantastic ā¤ļøloved itā¤ļø n completly different ā¤ļøwaiting for ur next partsā¤ļø n plzzz pm me when u update the next partsā¤ļø

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now dis 1 sounds really nyc
luking forwars 2 it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice concepet
continue soon
do pm me
with luv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear,
reli interestiing concept...
do cont. soon plzz....
nd plzz do pm me....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you all for your encouraging comments. I will include you all in the pm list. Part 1 will be up in 2 days.😊

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