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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

sindhya ... a very high One shot ... my heart is right now feeling so heavy ........ why didnt Mayank stand for his Love ???? why didnt Mayank tell his mom ??? why did he kept quite ???? and then he actually send invitation to Nupur for wedding .... why so cruel ???? and he had son with someone else ??? and his wife actually ask Nupur to come ???? what did Mayank want from Nupur ....he hit her with every arrow ...and then was asking forgiveness ???? and asking her to come back ???? what if his wife and son had not died ???? he would have more children ...and Nupur would be as alone as she is now !!! i hate him even though he died ...i cannot forgive him ....bec a Man ,who did what he did to Nupur cannot really Love her .... He was a cowrad ..... till the very end He was sorry for himself ...when he was the one who created the pain for them .........

Sindhya I just hope it never happens with anyone in life ...i have tears in my eyes as i write this .....u r a very powerful writer ...👏
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-Yuvvraj-

@-Yuvvraj-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

definitelyy sana... no wonder shes 2nd posttion in hall of fame...

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falak

@falak01

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

edited my post at page 1..do see...love ya...😃

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

sindhi i m feeling a lump on my throat yaar.what FF.u r a gem...trust me.🤗but plzz write a happy one....later.

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

vry beautifully written ......... i am in teras after reading dis one short ........ u r a superbbbbbbbbbb writer .......... kya one short tha ........... i juz hope dat aisa kisi bhi couple ke saath na ho ............ nd next plz write a happy one short in wich mayur live happily ever after coz even in my wildest dream ........ i can never imagine dem to be like dis.......

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Afshan

@afshanmk093

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

ooooooh god sindya u made me cry and u have done a commendable job man yahann log tumharay fan hu chukay hay wat else to write i want u to continue it dear............................... plzzzzzz

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

heartbreaking yet beautiful.. btw nupz is abt 50 yrs in d present? n alone? dat was too horrible.. dis oneshot haunted me for 2 days.. pls pls do a happy one next..