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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: ishwariya

congo sam for compleeting 100 pages...
i know mein tohdi late hoon comment karney kay liya.....sorry yaar.... hey sam .. plz asi twist sab math low... dil baut kabrajahta hai.....thansk yaar.... its was a ver nice n a long part............

Thanks Dear!!!!!
Loved your comment....Don't worry...
Picture abhi baaqi hai mere dost😉

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: GEhsaas
Hey Sameera di,

I really LOVE your FF !!
Awesome !!

I really have no words to describe it
Add me to the PM list please !

Love,
Ehsaas

Welcome to my ff dear!!!!!
Thanks for liking it...
I have added u to my pm list..😊

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

#843

Originally posted by: vruls
hey congo for completing 100 pages
great part
but when will they acually meet
cant wait
pls update soon
love sanam
n thanks for the pm

Thanks Sanam!!!!!
Next few parts will have all your answers...😊

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

#844

Originally posted by: kash_lover_21
agar cv's k mind k hisaab se predict karun to....ummmm....
Haan!!!!!!!!
Armaan hospital se bhaag jaye gaa..... Aur phir shuru ho gii armaan ki talash....😆

Behti hawa sa tha woh
Udti patang sa tha woh
Kahan gaya usae dhoondo

Behti hawa sa tha woh
Udti patang sa tha woh
Kahan gaya usae dhoondo
Hum o to raahein thi chalati
Woh khud apni raah banata
Girta, sambhalta, masti mein chalta tha woh

Hum ko kal ki fikar sataati
Woh bus aaj ka jashn manaata
Har lamhe ko khul ke jeeta tha woh

Kahan se aaya tha woh
Chhoo ke humare dil ko
Kahan gaya usae dhoondo

Sulagti dhoop mein chhaaon ke jaisa
Raegistaan mein gaaon ke jaisa
Mann ke ghaav pe marham
Jaisa tha woh
Hum sahme se rehte koovein mein
Woh nadiya mein gotae lagata
Ulti dhara cheer ke tairta tha woh

Baadal awara tha woh
Yaar humara tha woh
Kahan gaya usae dhoondo
Hum ko to raahein thi chalati
Woh khud apni raah banata
Girta, sambhalta, masti mein chalta tha woh
Hum ko kal ki fikr sataati
Woh bus aaj ka jashn manaata
Har lamhe ko khul ke jeeta tha woh

Kahan se aaya tha woh
Chhoo ke humare dil ko
Kahan gaya usae dhoondo
😆
😆

kYA BAAT hai????? Armaan koi qaid mein hai kya???? jo bhaag jaye gaa????

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Posted: 15 years ago

#845

Originally posted by: k_anjali12
😆😆

awesome !!!!!!!!!

then story takes to leap for 18/20 years yaar .. .. n may be Armaan looses his memory of his past life with Riddhima N Sia help AR 2 meet each other😛

how's that Kaajal😳

Oho....superb...mein agar aisa kuch karun to mere liye joote chapal app donow k liye kya laoon????

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

#846

Sorry bhae...agar tum donow ko replies karne lagi to phir mujh par cheekho gay k updata late kiya....so ab sirf update karun gii....replies baad mein dekhun gii...

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

#847

This part is dedicated to Hima and Kaajal!!!!
Kya pridictions thi wah wah!!!!!😆😆😆

The whole gang was sitting in the cafe......Rahul Muskaan enters and taking a chair Rahul said...."Armaan kal Ridhima se yaani apne doctor se milna chahta hai......"
"Aur Ridhima apne patient se yaani armaan se poore hosh o hawas mein milna chahti hai...." said Abhi....

"to ab????" asked anjali....

"Abbbbbb......pata nahi........." said Piya and they all got busy in thinking what will be their next step....

Just behind them two boys were sitting.....one was looking irritated by other and the other looks quite stupid but was still busy with his talks.....

"Dekhna.... jiss din mujhe chance mila mein...sab ko peechay chor dun gaa....mere jaisa actor har role kar sakta hai...dulhan ka dulhe ka...doctor ka patient ka...pagal ka......"

"Haan!!!! yeh sahi kaha tum ne tumhe pagal ka role to koi bhi de de ga..." said the other one sarcastically.....😆😡
😡

"Actor!!!!" said Anjali...

"Doctor!!!!" said Muskaan....

"Patient...." said Nikki.....

"Ek minute...ek minute.... aisa sochna bhi mat....kyunki armaan jab interview lena start kare gaa naa???? to chutti ho jaye gii uss actor kii....arre yaar!!! usse do minute mein pata chal jaye gaa k kaun doctor hai aur kaun hai....." said Piya....

"To phir kya karein????? koi aur option chorra hai armaan nai????" asked Rahul....

"Mein iss se ja k baat karta hun...iss ka audition lena pare gaa....." saying so abhi left his chair and went towards that actor....

"Lekin Ridhima ladki hai ladka nahi......" said Muskaan.

"Aree lekin yeh baat armaan ko to nahi pata hai naa???" said Atul...

"Haan to bhai sahab app kya keh rahe thai???? k app kisi bhi kisam ka role kar sakte hain????" asked Abhi....

"Haan haan bikul...." said the Actor....

"Good!!!!! mera naam Dr Abhimanyu Modi hai...." said Abhi introducing himself....

"Aur mera Mohan Pyare...." he said....

buzz buzz.....
Piya saw her mobile screen on which "Ridhima" was flashing....
She picked up the phone and said...."Haan Ridhima!!!! bus raaste mein hun aa rahi hun...." said Piya....

"Ok guys mein chalti hun tum log dekho k kya kiya ja sakta hai???? Best of Luck!!!" saying so Piya left....

The whole night Atul, Rahul and Abhi taught Mohan Pyare how to deal with Armaan and Ridhima...they told him that he has to play the role of both the characters patient...Armaan Aka Karan Singh and Dr Ridhima Mallik Aka Jay Mallik....

"Akhir armaan ne mujhse jhoot kyun bola???? akhir such kya hai??? Ab mein sachai ka pata laga kar he wapas jaoon gii aur iss baar mujhe such jaane se koi nahi rok sakta....Khud Armaan bhi nahi...." Ridhima took a final decision....

Piya enters and saw Ridhima's expressions.....

"Isse dekh kar aisa lag raha hai jaise k kisi baat par jum gai hai.....Pata nahi kya karne wali hai...mein poochoon????? nahi!!!! Agar usne batana hota to bina poochay he bata deti....wo mujhe nahi bataye gii...." Piya thought....

That night opposite things happend....Ridhima slept peacefully whereas piya was just turning sides thinking what will happen tomorow...????

"Valentines Day."

Next Morning.....

When Piya woke up she saw Ridhima was already ready to go....

"Hello???? ajj itni subha subha??? ruko mein bhi tayyar ho jaoon phir saath chalein gay....." said Piya....

"Haan...lekin siya????" asked Ridhima....

"Uss ki fikar tum na karo mein sambhal lun gii usse...." replied Piya.....

Soon Piya also got ready and they both went to hospital along with siya.....

Here Piya was shocked as Ridhima gave siya to her and went towards Rahul's cabin.....Piya followed her.....There they saw Niki, Muskaan, Abhi, Atul, Anjali... they were discussing something....

"Are you sure k wo Gaddha apni over acting nahi dikhae gaa????" asked Anjali....

"Yaar!!! Hum ne bohat mehnat ki hai, iss ko rattafication karwaya hai dialogues ka saari raat jaag kar....Mujhe nahi lagta k ab kuch gar bar ho gii...." Said Atul..

"Aur Waise bhi we don't have any other choice...Armaan jaanta hai k Piya ek gynecologist hai warna ussi ko Ridhima ki jagah par bhej dete...wo sab kuch sambhal leti..." said Niki..

"Kya yaar...Mujhe neend a rahi hai....saari raat un do idiots ki wajah se jaagna para..." said Abhi. He was damn sleepy...

"Do idiots kaun????" asked Muskaan...

"Ek wo jisse sari ratta lagwaya aur ek wo jis ki wajah se sab ho raha hai..."ARMAAN!!!!" said Rahul with a frown..

But when they saw Ridhima they stopped....They all looked at Piya but she raised her shoulders indicating that she don't know anything.....

"Mujhe Armaan se milna hai...." said Ridhima...

"Kya??????" yelled Piya...

😆😆[Aur iss k saath he sab ki neend uran choo ho gai]😆😆

"Ridhima yeh tum kya keh rahi ho???? aur tum to jaanti ho naa??? k armaan conference k liye bahar gaya hua hai...." said Nikita....

"Mujhe pata hai...lekin agar mein uss se mil nahi sakti to kum se kum phone par baat to kar sakti hun naa????? Mujhe uss se baat karni hai...." Decleared Ridhima...

"Lekin kyun????" asked Abhi...

"Kyunki iss case ko pehle wo handle kar raha tha...."

"Sister app ne doctor rahul ko kahin dekha hai????" asked Armaan....

"Jee wo apne cabin mein hain..." sister informed...Piya was standing at rahul's cabin door so she heard that....Her eyes popped out...

"Wo mein ati hun...." Piya excused and went out of rahul's cabin...she let siya stand on her own because she knew that siya will start running and same thing happend....And piya started running after her and acted as if she is trying to stop her....Siya saw armaan and held his finger...Armaan took her in his arms and smiled kissing her on her cheek....

Piya went there and said...."Armaan isse idhar do yeh bohat shaitan ho gai hai...."

"Kyun kya hua???? " Armaan asked...

"Arre bahar ek couple khara tha...yeh madam apni shararton se baaz nahi i aur uss admi ko ja kar papa keh diya...uss couple k beech larai shuru ho gai....."😆 Piya lied because she knew that armaan will now ask her that why siya shouted "Mumma" seeing Ridhima's photograph...

Armaan laughed out loud and said...bachi hai...and then thought... "Mein bhi naa pata nahi kya kya sochne laga tha...acha hua meine piya se yeh sawal nahi kia k ridhima ki photo k saamne siya "Mumma" kyun chillai...."

"Ek to mein apni iss saheli se bohat pareshaan hun....Ajeeb hai apne kaam k liye siya ko mere paas chor jaati hai....Ab mein bhi ek doctor hun...mujhe bhi kaam hota hai lekin nahi usse to koi khayaal he nahi hai....Ab mein iss ka kya karun?????" Piya acted rude...

"ufff!!!! Piya tum kitna bolne lagi ho????? ek kaam karo isse mere paas chor do aur tum ja k apna kaam karo....." said Armaan and walked towards his room....and Piya followed him....

Closing the door behind Armaan said..."Arre haan yaar wo zara rahul ko bhejna please...mujhe pata karna hai k wo dr mallik kahan hai????"

"Dr Mallik??? wo to tumhara naam hai naa???" Piya acted innocent...
"Arre mein nahi wo Dr Mallik jo mujhe operate karne wala hai....kahan hai wo????"
Just at that moment someone knocked and entered.... Piya was shocked as he was Mohan Pyaare....

"Hi!!! I am Dr Mallik...." he started his Drama...
"Oh to app hain Dr Mallik...." said Armaan and looked at him from head to toe..
Piya stood there queitly and saw the whole gang standing outside and watching what is happening from the window...

"Well meine app ka case study kiya hai aur yeh itna interesting hai jitna k shahrukh khan ki film darr ka climax...." said Mohan Pyaare....

"What?????" shouted Armaan....

"Huh???? itni over acting....armaan ko do minute mein pata chal jaye gaa k yeh doctor nahi hai..." Piya thought...

"Saale ne shuru kar di apni over acting...." said Abhi standing outside....

"Mmm...mera matlab hai k bohat difficult case hai....." M.P corrected himself...
"To app k analysis k hisaab se mujhe kaun se type ka tumor hai????"

"Kya yeh cancer ki surat ikhtiyaar kare gaa????"

"Mere operation k baad worst to worst kya chances hain k mere saath kya hoga???" Armaan started rapid firing...

"Wo.....Mein bhul gaya..." mumbeled M.P

"Oh God!!!!" Rahul hit his head against his palm...And Atul ran inside.....

"Wo Dr Mallik app k liye phone hai app chaliye...." Atul grabbed his hand and took him outside....And Abhi hit him from behind....

"Saale!!! itni over acting karne ko kis ne kaha tha...aur tujhe itna kuch yaad karaya tha sab bhool gaya????"

"Arre mujhe kyun maar rahe ho???? mein bhool gaya to bhool gaya...." M.P tried to protect himself...

"My God!!!! isse doctor kis ne bana diya????? Mein iss se surgeory to kya ek bandage bhi nahi karaoonga....." Armaan decleared...and Piya walked out....

"Ab kya karein????" said Abhi....

"Idea!!!!" Muskaan jumped....

"Kya???" asked Nikita....

"Hum iss gadhe k kaan mein air phones laga dete hain...hum dictate karte jaein gay aur yeh bolta jaye gaa...." Muskkan suggested...

"Perfect!!!!!" said Anjali....

"Aur haan ab agar over acting ki naa??? phir dekhna...." Atul warned M.P

"So what do you think...yeh tumor kis stage par hai????" asked Armaan....

"Well...i am sorry to say its on almost its last stage....Agar jald se jald iss ko operate kar k nahi nikala gay to yeh cancer ko surat bhi ikhtiyaar kar sakta hai...." Abhi dictated....

"Nikki!!! Apne baal control mein rakho yaar...." Abhi shouted...and M.P said the same to Armaan...

"What????" Armaan yelled....

"Abay gadhe...tujh se yeh bone ko kis ne kaha tha????" Abhi shouted on M.P..
And M.P realized what he had said....

"Wo...mein...mera matlab hai k...mein poori koshish karun gaa iss case ko control mein rakh sakun...."...said M.P

Finally after loads of inquiry Armaan agreed to get treated from this Dr Mallik.....He thought..."Zyaada se zyaada kya hoga??? mein marr he to jaoon gaa naa...waise bhi jeene k liye ab koi wajah baaqi nahi hai...." Armaan thought....😭

Now the second part of plan was to give a make over to M.P so that he may look like Armaan aka Karan Singh when he was wearing beard and mustache...

"Lekin yaar ek masla hai...Ridhima ne zidd pakar li hai k usse Armaan se baat karni hai..." Anjali showed her fear....

"Tum uss ki fikar na karo...mein koi na koi raasta zaroor nikal lun gii uss ka..." said Piya....

Armaan was sent outside with Piya and Siya to get some fresh air and now Karan Singh was lying on the bed and Ridhima entered for his check up along with Rahul....

"So app ko kab pata chala k app ko brain tumor hai????" asked Ridhima...

"Jee...Mujhe Brain tumor hai????? Good good good!!!!!!" Said Karan Singh excitedly...
Rahul showed him eyes....

"App khush kyun ho rahe hain????" asked Ridhima with a confused look....

"Wo iss liye kyun k iss se pata chalta hai k mere paas brain hai..." He said giving a stupid smile....

Ridhima looked at rahul.. and Rahul said..." Mein kaha tha naa k kaafi critical case hai..." and Ridhima nodded she turned to grab a pen and Rahul slept M.P "apni over acting apne paas rakh seedhe seedhe wohi jawaab dena jo armaan ne tujhe diye thai...."
Actually they all have an idea that what sort of questions will Ridhima ask from her patient so they asked M.P to ask those questions from Armaan....

Now M.P acted good and did as it is as he was asked to do so....Ridhima taking a note of all the things went out... and Abhi, Rahul and Atul kicked out M.P from the hospital saying that..."Ab yahan ghalti se bhi nazar mat ana...itni over acting karta hai...abhi saara bhanda phoot jata...."

In the park Siya got more excited as She saw so many birds around her eating grains.....
"Bhaoo!!!!!" Siya went to them trying to grab them...

"Hawww Dall dai...." [Darr Gai] Siya said with a giggle looking at Piya and Armaan...

"Hawww App ne birds ko dara diya????" Armaan pouted...

"Naiiiiiiii...Bud Ganni!!!!" Siya flew her arms in the air in a bird style and again started jumping seeing so many heart shaped balloons in the air flying freely...After all it was Valentines Day!!!

Armaan saw this and bought some balloons for Siya...And Piya watching all this couldn't say anything but just to smile seeing the bonding between a father and a daughter....

"Blloon!!!!!!" Siya giggled grabbing so many balloons from Armaan's hand...

"To app ko balloons pasand hain ????" Armaan asked giving her all...Siya first kissed Armaan on his cheek and then started playing with so many colorful balloons and Armaan and Piya sat down on a bench .......

"Armaan mere ek sawal ka such such jawab do gay????" Piya asked seriously....

"Haan poocho naa..." replied Armaan still looking and smiling at Siya's little acts....

"Armaan!!! Tum ne Ridhima k jaane k baad se kabhi bhi yeh jaane ki koshish nahi ki k wo kahan hai??? kis haal mein hai?????" asked Piya looking at him...
"Nahi!!!! Kyunki mein jaanta hun k agar mujhe yeh pata chal gaya k wo kahan hai to mein chah kar bhi uss se door nahi reh paoon gaa...." replied Armaan with moist eyes....

"Mein bus itna jaanta hun k wo jahan bhi hai bilkul theek hai...aur hopefully mujhe bhul kar apni zindagii mein agay bhi barh chuki hogi...." said Armaan....

"Armaan tum ne usse chora kyunki tum usse khush dekhna chahte thai...lekin kya tum ne kabhi yeh janne ki koshish ki hai k wo khush hai bhi ya nahi????" Piya asked...

"Piya!!! Usse khush rehna hoga...Meine uss k dil mein apne liye itni nafrat bhar di hai k......" said Armaan...

"Armaan!!!! Kuch dino mein tumhari sergeory ho jaye gii uss k baad jald he tum theek bhi ho jao gay....tub kya karo gay???? kaise reh pao gay uss k bagair????" Piya cutted armaan in between.

"Nahi piya mein kabhi bhi theek nahi ho sakta yeh baat mein bohat achi tarah se jaanta hun....." Said Armaan standing up....

"Matlab????" asked Pia with a confused look....

"Matlab yeh k mere operation k baad agar mein zinda raha to yaa to mein short term memory ka patient ban jaoon gaa...ya apni kuch saal ki zindagii bhul jaoon.... ya phir mein jo kuch abhi karta hun sab kuch uss ka ulta karne lagoon gaa..." said Armaan.....

"Armaan mujhe samajh mein nahi aa raha hai k tum kya keh rahe ho????" Piya make him turn to face her.....

"Piya iss sergeory k duran kuch bhi ho sakta hai.... 90% chances yahi hain.... meri poosri personality change ho sakti hai iss operation k baad...." Armaan decleared...

Armaan's words were like bullets shot from gun for Piya.....Tears oozed out from her eyes.....No matter how much she will say that Armaan is only her best friend but the truth inside was that she loves him...She shattered...

The whole day Ridhima kept on asking the whole gang to call Armaan and also warned them that she wont operate until she received Armaan's call...
Piya enters....

"Ridhima!!!!!"

"Haan???" said Ridhima turning back....

"Ridhima wo....shayad jaldi mein mere patient ki case file tumhare paas chali gai hai...plzz check karlo....." Piya requested and Ridhima went out....

"Yaar yeh Ridhima to Armaan se baat karne k liye peechay he par gai hai...." said Nikita....

"Hmmmm" Piya took a deep breath...."Ridhima ko Armaan se baat karni hai naa???? to theek hai Armaan Ridhima se baat kare gaa....Armaan ki zindagii bachane k liye...jo bhi karna hoga..hum zaroor karein gay...." She said Wiping away her tears....

"Armaan aur Ridhima ki kismat mein agay kya likha hai mujhe nahi pata???? Arre saath rehne se zyaada to wo donow alag rahe hain....Ab BUS JO HUMAY KARNA THA HUM KAR CHUKE....RIDHIMA KO ARMAAN KA NUMBER DIAL KAR K DE DO....AB JO HOGA UN KI KISMAT MEIN HO JAYE GAA...."Piya finally said...she was fadeup of all this now...

"Lekin tum jaanti ho naa??? k Ridhima Armaan ko operate kare ye illegal hai...hum yeh sab chup kar kar rahe hain sirf armaan k liye..."Anjali said
"Wo sab tum log ab bhagwaan par chor do....Un ki shaadi hum ne nahi ussi bhagwaan ne karai thi...wo he unhe saath le kar aya tha aur wo he ab unhe milaye gaa....Unhen un donow ko milana he hoga...Siya k liye..." Piya replied...

Ridhima returns....
"Nahi Piya!!!! mere paas tumhare patient ki koi file nahi hai..." said Ridhima...

"Oh...Acha theek hai...mein phir se check kar leti hun apne paas...." She replied and looked at Abhi....

Finally Atul dials Armaan's number and said..." Ridhima!!! Armaan ka phone lag gaya...yeh lo..." He handed over the phone to Ridhima...but this all was so quick for her that only the thought of talking to Armaan raised her heart beats....

She took the phone from atul.....

"Hello!!!!" said Armaan

Ridhima's heart beats increased more.....She was unable to speak.....
In this span of time everyone got out of the room...
Ridhima controlled tried to controll herself and but she was unable to.....Suddenly flash back occurs...

"Armaan app ko kuch batana hai...."

"Bolo" Armaan said rudely....

"Armaan wo...wo..acha pehle yeh bataein k aj meine ap ko airport par kisi k saath dekha tha...wo kaun thi?????"

"Oh to ab tum ne mujh par shak bhi karna shuru kar diya hai...."

"Nahi Armaan ...Mein to bus aise he...." She tried to explain....

"Aise he...kya...????Tum jaana chahti ho naa wo kaun hai....to suno...Mein uss se bohat pyaar karta hun.....Aur tumhe itni he problem hai to tum mujhe chor kar ja sakti ho......"..After shouting on her he left....

"Hello????" Again hearing Armaan's voice made her come out of her past....She quickly wraps her dupatta around the telephone receiver and said

"Dr Armaan Mallik?????"

"Jee bol raha hun..." said Armaan from the other side....He was unable to identify her voice...

"Ummm...Sir actually sir ek case mein app ki kuch help chahiye thi...can i chat with you on internet..." she asked wiping away her tears...

"Ya sure..." said Armaan and gave her his ID.

Putting the receiver down Ridhima controlled her breath and thought..."Nahi!!!! Mein uss se baat nahi kar sakti.....wo to Muskaan se....lekin phir wo ghar par sab kuch pehle jaisa...wo sab kya tha?????...Meri kuch samajh mein nahi a rah...Mein chah kar bhi uss se baat nahi kar pai....Plzz God Help me..." She said looking at the sky..

Now Ridhima quickly made a fake ID and chated with Armaan for about an hour.....She was much comfortable and professional in that...

There Armaan was feeling like the case is some what similiar as his....Niki was in his room to give him medicians but when she saw all this she smiled and thought....
"Aisa lagta hai...jaise Ab Bhagwaan bhi inhe ek doosre se door nahi rakhna chahta...." A smile appread on niki's face....

A valentines Day with zero romance was never there in anyone of their lives but this valentine day was horrible for all....The whole Gang was so tired that they entered their homes and hit the beds....

Armaan and Ridhima both were not at all sleepy.....
Ridhima because she heard Armaan's voice today.....She had the chance but she became so weak at that moment that she didn't talk to him...And Armaan because he missing Ridhima badly

Armaan was standing in a mandir praying.....
" Ajj shayad mein apni akhri khwahish le kar aya hun app k pass.... Wo jahan bhi ho humaisha khush rahe.... Mujhe bhale bhool jaye lekin apne ane waale kal ko bharpoor andaaz mein jiye....Aj ka din "VALENTINES DAY" yaani pyaar ka din kehlata hai aur mein chahta hun k ajj k din uss ki zindagii mein phir se pyaar aye...jo usse humaishe khush rakhe...Koi aisa jo uski ankhoon mein kabhi ansoon ki ek boond bhi na anay de...." Armaan scilently prayed with closed eyes...
The lady standing beside Armaan moves back and now Armaan and Ridhima both were standing beside eachother.....
"Plzzz meri madad kijye...uss sach ka pata lagane mein jis ne meri zindagii uljha k rakh di hai....Plzz...Ab mujhse aur nahi saha jata...Meine ab tak apni zindagii mein ane waale har toofaan ka dat kar samna kiya hai...lekin ab bas aur nahi....plzzz aur nahi...." Ridhima Prayed scilently and two tears ran down her cheek...

Armaan opened his eyes and was about to turn and go back when he finally saw Her....

His eyes widen up with shock ..... "Ridhima!!!!" he whispered...

Ridhima was about to open her eyes when Armaan hid behind a pillar.... She wiped away her tears and was going back when a photo fell from her file....
Ridhima picked Siya from the hospital and went back to the hotle while Piya excused and said that she has to stay for few more hours....

As Ridhima left Piya start searching for Armaan but he was nowhere in the hospital...When she inquired a nurse said that she saw him going out....Piya ran outside and saw Armaan in the mandir from a distance...

5 minutes were left before 12 in the midnight.... Armaan came out
"Nahi Ridhima yahan nahi a sakti...Kahin usse sab pata to nahi chal gaya???? Nahi!!! usse kabhi kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye.."

Armaan was loosing his senses when his eyes fell on something which fell from Ridhima's file...
He pick it up and truned to see...
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The clock strick 12
Piya reached Mandir and Armaan saw the photograph.....

Piya's eyes were wide opened....Armaan's eyes turned red and got teary..he looked at Piya and said..."Dekha wo apni zindagii mein agay barh gai...Uss ne shadi kar li...Yahi to mein chahta tha Phir pata nahi kyun mujhse yeh bardaasht nahi horaha..."

Everything got blured....The world started spinning around him...And he fell on the floor.....

Armaan and Ridhima's photograph fell from Ridhima's hand on earth and broked into peices...

And Piya ran towards Armaan....She tried to wake him up but it was too late...He reached in the middle of game called as "LIFE OR DEATH"
"Armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!!!!!!" Shouted Piya....

Shriveled leaves crunching under my feet....
Whispers of the wind in my ears....
Not been able to see anything but darkness ahead....
I feel trapped....
Within my own thoughts....
With no way out, nowhere to escape....
The darkness weighs down on me....
Smothering me under its cruel feet....
The cold cruel laughter.....
Ringing in my ears....
Making me wonder....
How long would it take....
For the end to come......

Armaan's sergeory but by whome???

Will it get successful???

Will the journey of ansoon end???? Will Armaan survive or the end is waiting for him?????
Agay kya hoga???? Ab yeh app log pridict karo....

I am so sorry kal update nahi kar saki......Lekin i guess agar koi iss ff ko parhne k liye wait kar raha tha to ussne pridictions zaroor parh li hongi.....😆
Uff kitni khaufnak pricdiction hain hima aur kajal tum donow ki...Anyways ab iss update k baad jootey chapal mat phenkna..baaqi sab khair hai...Aur haan...ek din late kiya hai lekin as you said kaajal ... compunsate karne k liye bara part bhi diya hai....

So that was part 10... I know its very sad but yeh phase to ana he tha....
Waiting for your comments....
Love,
Sameera😊

Edited by sameera_12 - 14 years ago

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Aishwarya sharma

@Ishia

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#848

hey sam first of all thanks for those wonder full part................
yaar inti achi part... thanks but plz yaar dont make me cry more....agar tu ne muje aur rulai na... teri bed room mein tsumani ajeygi... .. mujhse aur nahi hota. armaan aur ridhima ma toh abi toh milla toh....
woh sharuk wala part baut acha tha... shrauk ki movie ki climax
blloon nice ... inti achi story ... armaan shayd yeh janjata ki woh uski aur ridhima ki beti hai.. yeh pyaar humseh insaan ka dimaag karab kardeytha hai.. kabi kisi ko kush nahi deti .

cmg to the perdiction... mujhe laghta hai ki shayad.piya armaan aur ridhima ko milwalegi i'mean she knows that she cant c her best friend like this.. ya fir.. ridhima ko puri sach pata chal jayega...
if piya would have been the negetive character then she would hide the truth behind n will make some how ridhima operate armaan... ya fir asa bi ho saktha hai ki ridhima ki waja se armaan puri thara teek hojayeh
just keeping fingures crossed.....

Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago

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Hima

@k_anjali12

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#849

Hai Sam!

Awesome update yaar.Loved completely.

Siya is sooo cute yaar.

Arey yaar make AR to meet soon .. .. now I really cant wait to read the next update.

Update soooooooooooooon Sam.

Takecare .. LOVE U!

Edited by k_anjali12 - 15 years ago

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keya

@krazy4kash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#850

hi sam

g8 job.......the pics n all bring the real assence in ur ff.............luved it......i hope it goes well..........tht mohan pyare was funny.........update soon

luv
kj

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