Mayur FF:SHATERRED IN LUV--REASON 2 LIVE.Upd:pg-42 - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
wat yaar i wait soo much 4 dis update.. and so small.. plz plz plz nxt tym i want a long one.. on d whole it was superb..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 16 years ago
I am sorry i think i read the part 6 but forgot to comment on it, so sorry again.
Thank god Noops opened herself infont of Mayu like that n i really loved this.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š Now when they have became friends i feel slowly the love would take place b/w them. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Noops was herself surprised y did she say those thing to Mayu in like this?๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
Good that Gunjan had invited both of the guys on her home for her birthday. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ It gave them some time to spend with each other.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Gunjan tried her best to make close her bhabhi to Mayu. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† All thier family members also enjoyed the boys company.๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I really liked the way Gunjan sent Mayu n Noops for walk.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Mayu loved her company n wanted to see her smiling face forever like this, good n soooooooo romantic. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria_dmg

wat yaar i wait soo much 4 dis update.. and so small.. plz plz plz nxt tym i want a long one.. on d whole it was superb..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Sure madam...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

I am sorry i think i read the part 6 but forgot to comment on it, so sorry again.

Thank god Noops opened herself infont of Mayu like that n i really loved this.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š Now when they have became friends i feel slowly the love would take place b/w them. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Noops was herself surprised y did she say those thing to Mayu in like this?๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
Good that Gunjan had invited both of the guys on her home for her birthday. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ It gave them some time to spend with each other.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Gunjan tried her best to make close her bhabhi to Mayu. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† All thier family members also enjoyed the boys company.๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I really liked the way Gunjan sent Mayu n Noops for walk.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Mayu loved her company n wanted to see her smiling face forever like this, good n soooooooo romantic. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

hey nt a problem Mahak....
i do rly luk 4wrd 2 ur comments...so its fine๐Ÿ˜ณ
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†dunno 4m whr i gt ds idea of gunjan's b-day....bt dn it'd wrk out...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
yaar ye suspence kya hai?????? mayank ko kya hua ???????? plzzzz continue soon....... really want 2 know what happened 2 him....... thanks 4 d pm dear......do pm me next time........
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi Kiran
Nice part yaar.
i like it very much
plz update soon the next 1 and PM me
Faria
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyaaaaa..........hi everyone...!!! Without delay, here's presenting 2 u all---
Part-8:
..Nupur was in shock:"Kia?"
She immediately disconnected da phone n called Mayank...da one or two moment b4 Mayank picked up da phone wr killing her...
N dn came da voice:"Hello?"
Nupur gave a sigh of relief knowing it was Mayank...she had tears in her eyes..she didnt knw y tho..!!
Wen thr was no response Mayank knew da no. n said:"Nupur?"
Nupur finally managed 2 strt..:"Mayank..tum hospital mein..?"
Mayank:"Arey wo actually mera.."
B4 he cud cmplt, Nupur strtd scolding him:"Tumhein kia apni koi fikar nahi...jo mann mein aata hai karte rehte ho...tum..tum..ye..ruko..main abhi tumhare paas aati hoon..kaunsa hospital?"
Mayank, quickly:"City hospital..lekin main ye keh raha tha k..."
Till dn nupur had disconnected da phone...
On Mayank's side...
Samrat was thr in da hospital wen nupur called him n Mayank had bn silently listening 2 da convrstion..
Samrat:"Kaat dia naa?"
Mayank, angrily lukn at Samrat:"Tujh mein akal nahi hai kia...tu usse bata nahi sakta tha...wo bechaari kitna pareshaan thi..."
Samrat:"Par?"
Mayank:"Chup!!Saale, tujhe apni bhabhi.."
He stopped wen Samrat gave him that "ACHA BACHU ABHI SE" luk...n repeated lukn away 4m him:"I mean...wud-b bhabhi ko pareshaan karna bohat pasand aata hai...tu usse bata deta naa k.."
Samrat tuk ovr:"Abay kaise batata?Mauka kahan dia...?apne us tragic "KIA" k baad dekha nahi kia reaction raha?"
B4 Mayank cud spk a voice came 4m behind..:"Mayank.."
Nupur ran twrdz him n hugged him...Mayank was surprised..bt actually he was luving ds surprise also...dt one moment was rly so different 4m any moment of his lyf...he knew smwhr evn Nupur was feeling it...he moved his hands 2 hr shoulder n closed his eyes...trying 2 feel ds feeling mre than himself...mre than anythng else...trying 2 hold ds moment 4 as long as he cud...mayb evn 4 a lyftym..then finally with Sammy's teasing:"Ahem.." he reluctantly had 2 leave her n Nupur finally realized wt she wz doing...gosh!!she was so embarresed...
Bt ds tym b4 she cud strt..Mayank said:"Chup!Ab meri sunogi?Actually meri mom ka ek minor operation tha..is liye do teen din se yaheen hoon...main ne is samrat se kaha tha tumhe bata de..lekin ye........."He gave an angry luk 2 Samrat...
Nupur dn turned 2 Samrat n in her innocent scolding manner she strtd on him:"Tum bata nahi sakte the?"-----------mayank was jst staring at her...maan!!hw adorable she lukd!!!
Samrat said in da same way as she did:"Tum batane nahi de sakti thi?"
Nupur:"Tum...pehle bata dete!!!"
Samrat:"Bataya toh tha!"
Nupur:"Acha kab bataya?"
Samrat:"Kab nahi..kisse bataya?!!!main ne office mein ek do employs ko bata dia tha..."n dn teasing them said:"Itna kaafi hota hai naa?yaa Nupur ko especially batana tha..MAYU๐Ÿ˜‰?"n then he strtd touching Mayank's hair...
Mayank, irritated:"Baalo ko mat chuo๐Ÿ˜†...aur Mayu?tu..."
Nupur was jst controlling her laughter...at which Mayank ws clearly embarresed!!!
Dn Nupur went 2 meet Mayank's mom..who luved ds gurl!!da saas-bahu meeting was pretty fine!!
Nupur went bak home........she was so embarresed at hr reaction...n dn "Mayu!!"...gudness she actually laughed at it vneva she thot ovr it...!!!
At Mayank's place..
Mayank n Sammy wr bak finally aftr his mom's discharge..in Mayank's room..Sam came 2 tl Mayank he was leaving..vn Mayank said:"Tu...bohat tym ho gaya main ne tere saath kuch kia nahi.."
Samrat crossed his hands at his chest n said:"Bachao!!Tum ek akele ladke ko dekh kr fayada uthana chahte ho....ghar mein baap-bhai nhi hai kia?"
Mayank pressed his neck n said:"Abay...filhaal toh gussa hai..!!"
Sam:"Arey..sun toh!!bhabhi beautiful hai na?"
Mayank left his neck n moved forward n said:"Haan..bhabhi bohat beautiful hai.."he was lost in his own wrld wen Sam came n said in his ears:"Teri ya meri?Agar Nupur ko teri bhabhi banana hai toh i dnt mind!!"
Bt b4 Mayank cud catch hld of him he ran away..n Mayank smiled at himself n said:"No way..she's only mine...Luv u..Nupur!!"
BUZZ!!
Comments Please๐Ÿ˜ณ
---EDITED..
Ppl..again ds request if u want me 2 add u 2 my pm list..add me up as ur buddy..dt'd b rly helpful..!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
EDITED AGAIN--Nxt update on pg-23
Edited by kiran--madi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesume!!

Awesum

nauty sammie!!!
luv hym 4 wat he did

Keep postin parts
luv ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow..! loved it Kiran...!!! keep up the gr8 work yaaar,,,she hugged 'im n sam's soo naughty.. ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome huni!
loved hug scene!
how sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!
mind blowing update!
thanks for the pm!

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