Mere Apne3(AR) - Epi51-70 - Note on Pg151 - Page 40

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

~~reserved me first...!!me first...!!lol yipppeee...........!alas an update...wil b bck soon...bahut neend aa rahi hain....!!

glad tat ur bck........!!~~~***

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Aimee!

How R U!
I wish u r gud.... Yeah sweetie 😊

woah dearits really a nice one hats of to u i think its best oneso Shashank accept LOL, what was this? he is still holding her & even in dream worldArmaan gaya kaam se Atul-Anji caught him but fir bach ka bhag gaya ye hai, Armaan ki Bhaagam-bhaag, bhaagam-bhaag, bhaagam-bhaag 😆 Atul be careful he is trying to avoid uAnji dimag chale Ridhima ko select kare Lo, mujhse jyada to aap story ko aage dhakka de rahe ho 😃 yea para kyu hai haibaat hi toah kar rahi haiitni jalan aag lag jaye gi Armaan fire brigade ko bulana padaga hai usay apna cabin mein bhi nahi jana deta yeah toah gaya kaam sesadoo itni dard hota hai usay kisi aur sa baat karta dekh ka fir bol dey na I LUV UKya karein, humara Hero thoda, no actually bhot-sara confused jo hai 😃... but its rocking oneplz continue it soonand thanks for the pm

"Shona ko miss kiya toah,

Dil ki dhadkan miss ho gai,
Hum to kuch dene ke kaabil nehi hai,
Dene waala hazaar khushiyaa de aapko.
Hum sirf Dua karta hai ki zindagi har khushi de apko..."


"SBS ka Shona ka ghar jana
Shona ka shao pao se milna
Bada yaad ata hai.....
SBS pe Barish mein Shona ka ,ghar jana,
Shona ka woh rain dance karna,
Bada Yaad ata hai...."



"Jism ko zarorat hai Rooh ki,
Rooh ko zaroorat hai taskeen ki,
taskeen ke liye zaroori hai Dhadkane teri,
Dhadkano ko chahat hai sirf teri Sanwariya...."



"Armaan hai tujhe Pane ka,
Teri Rooh mein uttar jane ka,
Armaan hai teri Sason mein samana ka,
Tera Sajda mein sar jhukane ka,
Armaan hai tera Dil mein basne ka,
Teri Deewani ban jane ka,
Armaan hai teri Preet nibhane ka,
Teri Jogan Ban jana ka,
Armaan hai Bahaon mein simat jane ka,
Tujh mein hi Fanna ho janae ka......"

You know what? this explains Armaan's innermost feelings is such a subtle and nice way. Suit the Armaan's situation in my FF appropriately.




Nidha

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey hun amzing update totally loved it Thanks dear

but ammy ur not being fair to ridzziii.......

i mean the poor girl doesn't even know why her boss is angry with her!!!!!!!!!😆I know, but i think this might also make her more curious about his behavior 😉

awwwwwwww but their bathroom moment was the best u described it sooo welll Thanks again 😳

amzing part hunn

do con't soon, i will. It was good to read your comments, hope you will come back again with some more 😊

-Sanam-

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Toah use kar loah

Originally posted by: janu1610

Aimee really awesome part.

the way u had given words to each nd every emotion was incredible .I was in daze.swear some thing hypnotized me.I was in pool of emotions with them. Aww, thanks for such a lovely comment dear. I am really greatful

His concern ,his sense of humor,his antics to annoy her, his stammering all was written in very composed manner.the last line was best punch line .

'something precious he had lost he was all alone in this world'.

I remember some thread or friendship band was tied to him by some girl.Is this related to Ridz ?? No actually that wasnt a friendship band, but some puja flowers given to him by the little girl at Guruji's Ashram. I think you are talking about that. or some other connection to another girl??

when u r going to disclose this???? It will disclose a little later. For the time, i am busy bringing them together 😛

In my dreams,
I try to see you
and take in
your whole expanse--
from the beauty
of your smile
to the depths
of your soul
where an ocean swells.
I'm rebuilding you
out of pieces of clay,
with some illogical hope
that you'll materialize
out of the darkness.
The heart alone
can perceive these
dimly lit realities,
and trade longing
for patience.
And I'm living
on the hope
borne of these
dreams of you,
that we'll be
together soon.

Nice Poem Ritu 👏

thanks for pm.

love

ritu

Originally posted by: sonakap1

Wow Aimee!!! Things are getting exciting day-by-day. If the update started with a bang with the bathroom scene and the first ever real intimacy shared by Armaan and Ridz, the end was no less with Armaan getting jealous over the unknown caller and making a fool of himself in front of Atul. Wake up man. You are in love. Instead of feeling all alone in the world, why doesn't he just accept that he is in love?
Well, our hero needs someone to knock his head-off so that his neurons work in a proper way ans send signals in right directions. 😆

With the marriage over I am so hoping that the story will now focus on the realisation, at least on Armaan's part as Ridz still has a looooooooooooooong way to go. You are right, the realization of things will start, but i am also trying to keep something else happening simultaneously... you will know soon what i am talking about.

So the wait is on for the next update.

Hugs,


Sona