'Dont Deserve Your Love' {Part XII(Story ends)}pg1

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Kritika

@rajeevskitu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

btw, i just saw that u won father's day contest n mother's day runner up😃.......... congrats dear......... n u too take care.......
byeeeeee❤️

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Dear Bhoomi, U can never lose ur charm. U r still too gud wid ur words n expressions. U portrayed Kailash n Mrinal's state of mind n heart really well. W8ing to knw more abt them n of course the reason behind Kailash's decision. Thnx 4 this lovely part n wonderful ff.

Hi Sumaiya,

Awww it felt nice to be assured that still my ff writing is on ok liness. heeh.. charm aaa😳 i hope everyone has a good time reading it 😊.. SO u liked the feelings the way they came out in the ff abotu Mrinal n Kailash.. yup in the next part a lot of the reasons behind will come out alogn with it the situations where they say it all .. so many things will happen in the first 4-5 parts itself.. the story isnt gogin to be looooong enough.. hope u like the pace of the sotry as well.. will surely try to post parts quite regualrly...

luv ur wonderful kind words.. 😃

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu
haha......... didint realise that u posted the part until i saw ur reply to my post😆...........
hmm....... u kno wot?? i belong to the third grp (office staff😛) ........ i always wonder how can 2 ppl go crazy abt each othr at one pt of time n now end up hating each othr......... gosh! i have seen too many such cases......... now i sort of got used to this🤔😆....... no one can predict wot lovers think........... thankx to their thinking power😉........ weird ppl i mus say......... thank God i'm not in love😆............

Hi Kittu dear,

Oh so u read my reply and got to know i posted the part.. wow!1 heheeh i remember last tiem u use to be the first one to comment.. 😃..ya office staff usually has the knowdlge of all the happenign but stay quite wonderign and observing they judges things faster and sometimes mroe than the situation 😆... yup lovers are weird and when the realtionship is an year old many complex things happen whcih people like us who are not in love cant just feel is normal ..lol... but yup the pain in love is not easy and lovers have the coruage to face it ..as love makes them that stroner to go throguh it...

hope u too fall in love ................................................. first with urself...😉😆..and next someone else let him fall in love with u ...😳😆😉

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu
btw, i just saw that u won father's day contest n mother's day runner up😃.......... congrats dear......... n u too take care.......
byeeeeee❤️

Yup thanks dear .. I was feelgin can win in mothers day contest..but winning in fathers day cotnest was a surprise am glad though.. 😊.. u tc

love u ..

Bhoomi

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Kritika

@rajeevskitu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam
Hi Kittu dear,

Oh so u read my reply and got to know i posted the part.. wow!1 heheeh i remember last tiem u use to be the first one to comment.. 😃..ya office staff usually has the knowdlge of all the happenign but stay quite wonderign and observing they judges things faster and sometimes mroe than the situation 😆... yup lovers are weird and when the realtionship is an year old many complex things happen whcih people like us who are not in love cant just feel is normal ..lol... but yup the pain in love is not easy and lovers have the coruage to face it ..as love makes them that stroner to go throguh it...hmm.... now thats true may b...... this is the other side of coin i guess😉........

hope u too fall in love ................................................. first with urself...😉😆..and next someone else let him fall in love with u ...😳😆😉 r u kidding me????😕.......... don't want to fall in love............ i definitely don't want others to think i'm weird😆.... hehe.........

Yup thanks dear .. I was feelgin can win in mothers day contest..but winning in fathers day cotnest was a surprise am glad though.. 😊.. u tc ur always a 1st in Kitu's awards distribution😉 (don't ask me wot it is😆😃)....................

love u ..

Bhoomi

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

great parts. U expressed kailash and mrinal's feelings really well. Waiting for the next part.

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: golu_1677
great parts. U expressed kailash and mrinal's feelings really well. Waiting for the next part.

Hi Golu,

Glad that u liked the parts... So u felt the emotions Kailash n mrinal were goign through... Hope u like the remainign parts as well.. will be posting them regularly .. luv u

Bhoomi

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Part 2 was also nice. How nicely u portrayed their thoughts, their uncertainities, their desires, their bindings, their confusions everything. Ur each n every description expresses the luv btwn them in a beautiful way. And I'm glad dat Kailash entered the lift n they r having an eye-lock.

Pls continue soon.

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Part 2 was also nice. How nicely u portrayed their thoughts, their uncertainities, their desires, their bindings, their confusions everything. Ur each n every description expresses the luv btwn them in a beautiful way. And I'm glad dat Kailash entered the lift n they r having an eye-lock.

Pls continue soon.

Hi Sumaiya,

So u liked the part II as well... yup they are in love with each toher and finding it hard to go away from each other.. in the comign parts more of their conversations will be out soon.. hope u like that ...

Feels nice u liked the simple format of trying to brign out their inner feelings..

Kailash has entered the lift but will they converse?

will contnue soon... my patience is worst when it comes to postign parts.. lol..tc

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Wow, part 3 is also. I like ur patience dear regarding posting parts. Keep up wid it.....hehe.

And as for the part is concerned it was as usual gr8. Liked it when Kailash started the car 4 her n remembered sum dialogues said by them That was nice. But Mrinal's words wer so emotional n full of pain. I cud clearly understand her position, the pain n anger she is going thru. But is Kailash doing all these just 4 ego?? If yes,then that is wierd. I hope its not the case.

Anyways, thnx 4 the part. N yes, the thing I luv most abt ur writing is the way u express such simple things (that r actually well known to every1) wid so much depth, intensity n beauty.

Luv,

Sumaiya.